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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Mysticaldivine

muahhh my pestering stalker 🤗

and thnx for not scolding at me...

some of my loved ones have already yelling and threatening and screaming and being so angry through PMs, scraps and all and I am deleting those scraps making sure others don't get scared by those ppl...😆 u know one ...coughing Zoya...hehe

Yeah faiqa! ! I remember you saying that its a real story...

And I'll wait for the answers 😆

I was wondering where zoya is??? Anyway will meet her as this is another long journey for all of us 😛

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Shilpi

@shils28

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Very interesting! Loved it! 👍🏼

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Awesome prologue
Loved the start
Well written
Plz continue soon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

the prologue was simply brilliant...interesting and intriguing...👏

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

OMG! OMG! OMG!

Di, you dedicated it to me and you remembered.
It's been two years after - A silent Roar...🤗 🤗 🤗 love you so so much

I m in tears

Aww and you did bring his Golfing gif ., Arshi Di ,you are a true elder sister of mine.Thank you so much for keeping me in your thoughts .❤️ you.

Now the prologue is gangster👏👏⭐️

Him as MORCOS commando , uff uff uff uff

just imagine di.

Now Khushi is already married? NO,please NO.
Is Abhi or Niti one of them who Arnav is looking for with Rathor?

Her dupatta hugged him 😊😊😊 calling him only for help, so romantic.
can't wait for next update.Plz update sooonnn.

Edited by RSanaya71 - 9 years ago

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Excellent i really liked the concept of your story n also for a change it's cammando arnav n i would love to read how this sexy commando solve the mystery n he knows khusi before maybe they were lovers n khusi left him for some reasons.

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lechuarshi

@lechuarshi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

hello😉😉..i am here...(next xam is aftr 5 days..😃.)..so..urmm u know...

I loved the prologue.. always dreamed about ASR as a super HOT cop..i already love this one...

Bromance , friendship and respect...these guys r awesome...

Who the hell was that leach??? who slap and torture khushi??/some one like Dhaiyya ho or more dangerous than dhaiyya ho???😡😡

They both knew each other??// Haila..

Edited by lechuarshi - 9 years ago

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Drooling on Commando ASR..

So he knew Khushi? Is she the one who called him Arnie? Very interesting start.. Loved it!!

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

You think that we poor souls are so bad that we'll bash you for not updating on time?
Come on we're not that bad you know 🤗
Wow!!! What a start
It's awesome, can't wait to read more of this amazing story
So Arnav knows khushi
Very intriguing story
Pls do continue soon
Hope you didn't hurt yourself in the small accident
Take care

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Arshi Di, There is no Anjali ?

So Sabi is his sister her or you still are revealing the characters?

Daadi, seems like this one character is going to be hilarious because Arnav and Niti mentioned that in Abhi's absence they will take care of her meaning they have such a sweet bond.