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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

This is simply SUPERB wala SUPERB 👏👏

WOW!

A unique concept , very fresh and ek dum alag😊 me lub it.

Arnav , a dashing Hunk and commando...yaar mujhe ais akyuon nahin khabi mila. hain...Taqdeer main ek Boring Doctor likha tha uhhh.

I am so loving Abhi-Niti-Arnav trisome.

There is an attachment in between them despite three of them are so different.

Sada kukad is just too Kamaal.

Niti is interested in his sister so he is off the hook from this mission...Isn't he or he is a decoy element?

Abhilash Sachit is carefree, flirty ,but at the same time kind a sneak that is what it seemed to me.He left early too .Is he the one?

No! That is too obvious.

I don't think any one them , I think it is someone else.

Then who died? God dammit!
Faiqa ki Bachi daal daal kachi, tere dimagh main aiise ideas atey kahan se hain...

Ok so Sabina , I like this name😊 she is his sister and mine too.She is becoming Doctor and she has ASRish attitude.

I love when Arnav said "Hey" 😆 to poor Niti, but love seeing Niti so concerned for him.

Is Khsuhi the reason for his emptiness? and Is she the reason behind his hate of this Arnie ?

My mind is gobble jobble with many questions now.

But the thing which I liked is her duppata made him blind...

They know each other.If they do then how come he doesn't know about her kidnapping.

It seems like he does love her?

So waiting for your next update..

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: RSanaya71
Arshi Di, There is no Anjali ?

So Sabi is his sister her or you still are revealing the characters?

Daadi, seems like this one character is going to be hilarious because Arnav and Niti mentioned that in Abhi's absence they will take care of her meaning they have such a sweet bond.

oh yea , I forgot to ask this question.No Anji😊 👍🏼 Already loving it more then.

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Loved the prologue 👏
Eager for the first part 😃

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muffin1996

@muffin1996

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Arnav knows khushi already! Hmmm wonder what happened

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

congratulations on your new story, faiqa... 😃 👏 👏

looking forward to another journey with asr and khushi and whoever else you decide will join them this time.

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

dramatic, exciting prologue...

dildara? hmmm, may i call him that?

the meeting with khushi absolutely high on emotion, mystery, action, and perfect. see you soon.

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NPKN

@NPKN

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Awesome start
Interesting prologue
continue soon

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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

So so amazing start up di, totally wonderful prologue.

So unique, new and thrilling concept. Its gonna excited to see arnav as Commando, working secretly and handling raizada Empire at same time.

The entire scenario of golf competition was so visible, its just like we r watching it live.

Love the friendship between trio, three different people are in friendship from that long, understand each other like mirror, its so beautiful to read.

What?? Khushi had suffered this much that to start of ff, di mere khushi ko itna bhi torture mat karo 😭. But i think her torture ended or it started some more 😲

Arnav n khushi know each other, but how? Did he hate her? Or love her?

Every scene is just increase curiosity for next scene, couldn't stop reading it in one go without any pause. Just wish it never end.

Fabulous starting👏

Ps: 🤗loads of thank u and hugs di for dedication, u made my day. Love u❤️

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

first of all

so much dilse apna samjhney k lye...

I know how good u r..

I don't need any proof bs har tym mjhey achey achey updates ka bribe detey jaawo jaani :p wrna

ur Jaanu loves u seriously dilse bt most imp repects u alot.. U r a vision for me..

An Inspiration and a guide in my banjar life..

Ok back to prologue.. I m still in shock.. Arnav Army officer

bt Khushi

Uski haalat aesi.. Why Arnav said Khushi.. They knw each other ryt?

Is Navi d person for me u was talking abt?

Sabi is missing? Means by face... Want to see her? Who is in ur mind for her character? 🤢🤢

who was the psycho jisney Khushi ko kidnap kr diya.. 😡😡😡

And Last U R MY MOTIVATOR..

I m js ur Jaanu hehehehe lots of love daer saaraa..

And tk cr of urself.. U r imp.. Wrna mere updates ka kya hoga :p Thanx for everything

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pmohan89

@pmohan89

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#150

This is what you call a big SUSPENSE👏👏⭐️

Must say ,a totally rocking and way fresh idea.👏Too excited for this journey.😊

The golf scene is a visual , Par4, 254 yards, making putt over the water.My husband is a golfer and you had described it so well.Bravo to you👍🏼

The scene of three friends is telling their characters very well and setting of those in ASR's life that is how I am seeing it.He seems the main and way important character this time.ASR commando is the one we will follow.

Khuhsi's pain with few words is making my heart aching.Who did that to her.He can't be dead so definitely that character is hidden and will be doing more damage.

They know each other and that is a mystery itself.😊

I wil be so stalking this thread from now on.