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Lazyblazy

@Lazyblazy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

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akai

@akai

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Wonderful dear...

It was very great moment to read Arnav as a commander.

Three friends...

I know it's very difficult to predict the villan of the story but I feel Abhi is connected or maybe he may joint hand against Arnav to win him. .

Is Arnav was disturbed towards khushi?

Maybe khushi would have called him arnie in childhood?

But it's sure that Arnav know khushi and Arnav is in undercover.

Is khushi linked to the ppl who Arnav chases?

Lot of questions. .

Waiting for the mystery to solve ..

Good job dear...

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Lazyblazy

@Lazyblazy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#153

I wish this world could be free of traitors

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

really fantastic we are going to see adventure heoric stunts and romance with a back drop of commandos something new and refreshing

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SAM

@kkyajo

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

oh my God! m so much excited abt this story...

seems very griping n awww arnav is commando...

m loving it cant wait to read more about this...

plz plz update soon, eagerly waiting

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Roop_P

@Roop_P

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

This is reminding me off Killer secrets of Lora Leigh ,one of her Tempting SEALS

No one knew whose side Ian Richards was fighting for.

The starting scene is gripping hearts here and you are so good to visualize it for us, so much detail in there and Commandos in action.Three brothers , three friends, love the word musketeers ,YES! fits on them.

Now my question is

Is Khushi involved in this selling secrets mission?Is the group using her to get Arnav?

At this point it is hard to pinpoint who is the bad guy as arrows are pointing at many .Niti is closer to Arnav and a little too close to Sabi, his sister.But the thing is he wants to comfort him ,while Abhi seems less caring,but still three of them are friends .Love the bonding.👏

So Arnav is still in and only Rathor knows.Rambo style.😊

Khushi's appearance and his stunned moment is freezing many thoughts.I will reserve for the chapter 1.

Love both of the visuals👏👏👏

Edited by Roop_P - 9 years ago

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dair10arshi

@dair10arshi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

This story seems Interesting. Thanks for the pm. Hope it wasn't a serious accident. Take care and you will still find us here eagerly waiting for your update.

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#158

🤣 🤣 🤣

Roop di this is epic

Edited by RSanaya71 - 9 years ago

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chinnulu

@chinnulu

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Loved the Prologue

Loved the bond and good rapo between three friends mainly Niti.Arnav's introduction, he playing golf was superb. So Arnav knew Khushi before itself. Is she is the reason why Arnav doesn't want anyone to call him Arnie. Poor girls looks like she faced hell of torture from the person who kidnapped her. Can we expect Mojo or Molly in this FF to have some light situation as the story goes on.

U mentioned about ur accident. Are u OK now? Hope nothing serious. How are ur headaches? Give us updates whenever u can and we will stalk whenever we can. So no worries about not keeping up ur promise on posting the updates. Take care

Advance Thanks for the PM