Phir Milenge (RajivAmna ff) last prt uptd - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
nice part Faru ...Pls try to send it next part Soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
thanks rabi 😊
yes, next part will be posted shortly...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
Thank u Faru yes we are waiting 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
very good going faru dear....totally super coolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll...
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tho next part mein rahul going to meet rhea... veryy goodd...this is very nice..ab rhea aur rahul ki dosti badegi.... 😉
please continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
thank u so much surya 😊
lets see ki dosti badhegi ya .... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part-4

Recap: Rhea aur Rahul ek bar phir milkar bhi nahi milte... Sarans ke ghar thoda ghum ka mahol hai to Raichands ke ghar khushi ka
jismein shaamil hone ke liye Dev aur Rahul Sarans ko invite karne unke ghar jaate hai


ab aage.......
Rahul aur Dev Sarans ke ghar ate hai...
Nandini: are Dev, aao ....kaise ho beta?
Dev: Ji main thik thik hu dadi, namaste uncle
Yash: namaste beta, aao baitho
Dev: ji, uncle yeh Rahul hai, mera chota bhai
Rahuk:namaste uncle [ smiles]
Yas: namaste
Dev: dadi, Hiten kaha hai? office gaya hai kya?
Nandini: nahi aaj office nahi gaya..uski behen aayi hai bas uski saath hai..main use bulati hu
[dadi asks the servant to call Hiten and Rhea, just then Rahul's cell rings]
Rahul: bhaiya i'm sorry mujhe abhi jana hoga
Dev: per baat kya hai?
Rahul: Sur ka phone tha mujhe abhi janaa hoga, im sorry dadi, uncle i'll have to leave
Dadi: koi baat nahi beta
Rahul: thanks ...mian chalta hu...ok uncle phir milenge
[saying this Rahul turns around and just steps out of the house then Rhea & Hiten Comes downstairs]
Hiten: hi Dev.... Dev inse milo, yeh hamari sweet lil sister Rhea, Rhea he's Dev
Rhea [smiles] hi dev.
Dev: hello...
Hiten: so how come here today?
Dev: main yaha aap sabhi ko invite karne aaya hu, aaj mama ka birthday hai,isiliye humne ek party rakhi hai.
isiliye main khud personally aap sabhi ko invite karne aaya hu
Hiten: thanks for the invitation Dev, per aaj hum nahi aa payenge, aaj mama ki barsi hai to...
Yash:Its ok Hiten ...hum sab aayenge Dev...
Dev: i'm sorry uncle,mujhe pata nahi tha ki aaj...
Yash: it's ok beta..aap khud yaha personally invite karne aaye ho aur hume kal hi Lalit ne invite kar diya tha.... hum sab zaroor aayenge
Dev: thanks uncle
Nandini: achcha yeh batao Dev, ghar mein sab kaise hai...aur shaadi ki tayyariya kaisi chal rahi hai?
Dev: ji sab thik hai, aur baaki sab bhi chal raha hai, aap to mama ko jaante hi ho..shopping aur sab to roz chal raha hai...
achcha to ab main bhi chalta hu
Yash: are beta kam se kam chai to lete jao...
dev: ji nahi uncle, phir kabhi..abhi shaam ke liye kuch tayyariya chek karni hai..mian chalta hu.. ok hiten bye..
Hiten: ok then,shaam mein milte hai..
Dev: ok uncle, bye...bye Rhea..
Rhea [smiles] bye...
[dev leaves]
Rhea: papa, yeh Dev hai kaun?
Yash: beta yeh Lalit Raichand ke bete hai...professionally to Lalit aur main business competitors hai per personally achche dost hai..
Rhea: achcha..
Nandini: Ha beta, bahot hi achche log hai...aaj shaam ko to hum waha jaa hi rahe hai to tum bhi mil lena..
Rhea: papa mujhe hospital jana hai...
Yash: per beta itni jaldi kya hai, phir kabhi chale jana..
Rhea: nahi papa, mujhe abhi hi jana hai..
Hiten: thik hai , chalo.. ready ho jao hum chalte hai..
Yash: per beta..
Hiten: papa mujhe wahi jana hai, doctor uncle ka phone tha, aur jabse unhe bataya hai ki Rhea aa gayi hai
woh bhi isse milna chahte hai..
Yash: thik hai, ab aap dono ke aage main kya kahu...
Rhea: thx papa, bhaiya main bas aabhi aati hu..
[Rhea aur Hiten hospital jate hai...]
Rhea: bhaiya yeh hospital to abhi bhi waisa hi hai... kuch bhi nahi badla..
Hiten: ha.. chalo ander chalte hai, doctor uncle tumse milkar bahot khush honge...
[wo ander jate hai aur doctor Balraj unhe aakar milte hai]
doctor Balraj: are Rhea beta, it is so gud to see u... how are u my child
Rhea: main bilkul thik hu uncle, aap kaise ho?
doctor Balraj: man bhi thik hu... aao ander cabin mein chalkar baat karte hai...
Rhea: are yeh hospital to bilkul bhi nahi badla....bilkul waise ka waisa hi hai...
Hiten: kya bat hai uncle aap kuch pareshan lag rahe ho?
doctor Balraj: kuch nahi beta, tum to jante ho woh mrs.sharma ... unke reports aa gaye hai..
Rhea: kyun? kya hua?
doctor Balraj: beta unhe cancer hai..last stage.... unke paas bahot kam waqt hai...
Rhea: kya kuch ho nahi sakta...
doctor Balraj: nahi beta, agar wo thoda jaldi yaha ate to shayad kuch ho pata per ab...
[hiten ko doctor Balraj ki baatein sunkar apni mama ki yaad aati hai]
Rhea: thik waise jaise mama ke saath hua tha...
Hiten: Rheaa... dekho jo hona tha so ho gaya... hum uske bare mein kuch nahi kar sakte..
doctor Balraj: per beta Mrs.Saran ki yaad mein aapne jo yeh charitable hospital khola hai yeh bahot badi baat hai..
Hiten: ji uncle... anyways, beeti baato ko yaad karne se bas takleef hogi.. achcha ab hum chalte hai..
doctor Balraj: thik hai beta, Rhea yaha bhi aya karna.. tumhe yaha dekhkar achcha lagta hai...
Rhea: ji doctor..main yaha aati rahungi..ab hum chalte hai..
doctor Balraj: ok beta..bye..
Hiten: bye uncle...
[Hiten and Rhea leaves]

Raichand mansion........
[after completing all his work Dev returns back home,& is surprised to see Rahul & Surveen arguing on something]
Surveen: per bro, main aapse keh rahi hu na,bhaiya ke liye woh bilkul thik hai, aur bhaiya ne khud iss rishte ke liye manzuri di hai
Rahul: oh ha..sur, kya tum bhaiya ko nahi jaanti ha!!!!!
Dev: Hello??? yeh kis baat pe behes ho rahi hai? aur tum dono yaha?
Rahul: kuch nahi bhaiya,hum to bas aise hi bat kar rahe the..aur uss waqt Surr mama ke liye gift le rahi thi isiliye usne mujhe waha bula liya..
Surveen: wo sab to thik hai, per bhaiya ab aap hi bro se kahiye ki aapne iss shaadi ke liye khud manzuri di hai , yaa papa ke kehne per aap yeh shaadi kar rahe ho..
Dev: oh to yeh baat hai..
Rahul: sur, ab rehne bhi do, chodo inn baato ko..
Surven: nahi bro.. lets clear it out now ...
[just then naina calls surveen to her room]
Surveen: main bas abhi aati hu... [& she leaves]
Dev: Rahulll ....
Rahul: bhaiya aap to sur ko jaante ho..hum dono to bas u hi baat kar rahe the..
Dev: hmm, kya janna chahte ho tum? yehi na ki meri shaadi ka faisla mera apna hai ya papa ka?
Rahul [smiles] is mein janna kya hai..mujhe pata hai..papa ne kaha hoga aur aapne hamesha ki tarha unka
yeh faisla bhi maan liya hoga...
Dev: ha to ismein galat kya hai? papa jo bhi faisla lete hai, hamari bhalayi ke liye hi lete hai..Woh jo bhi
karte hai soch samajhkar hi karte hai..agar unhone aarti ko chuna hai to kuch soch samamjh kar hi
chuna hoga
Rahul: exactly, main yehi kehna chahta hu..aarti ko unhone apke liye chuna hai..
Dev: ha to ismein galat kya hai?[puts his hand on rahul's shoulder].Rahul main samajh raha hu ki tum
kya kehna chahte ho.. dekho hamari zindagi ka har chota bada faisla papa hi karte aaye hai aur inka haq bhi hai..
woh bas hume khush dekhna chahte hai..to isme woh kuch galat to nahi kar rahe hai na... unke iss faisle se
hum sab bahot khush hai..
Rahul: kya aap is rishte se khush hai?
Dev: ha, main is rishte se khush hu, aur ab tum yeh sab baate chodo aur shaam ki party ke liye tayyar ho jao
[smiles] ok..main bas aabhi aaya...
Rahul to himself: kaash hamari zindagi pe hamara bhi thoda haq hota ....

........ end of part-4 ..............
hope u enjoyed reading it!!!
comments awaited...



.Rabi. thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
Hi Faru !!

Dear Great part really interesting stry try to send it next part Soon As possible 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
bohat achche faru dear.... me liking the way you are potraying each & every emotion..all are just outstanding....keep up the good work.... 👏
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ab please continue soon..aur next part mein rhea aur rahul ko dubara milwana.... 😉
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_rabi

Hi Faru !!

Dear Great part really interesting stry try to send it next part Soon As possible 😊

thanks rabi 😊

will try to post the next part as soon as possible...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks, hope u enjoy reading it further too 😊

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