Phir Milenge (RajivAmna ff) last prt uptd - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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part-3

Recap - Rhea aur rahul apne apne ghar laut aate hai.Jaha ek taraf Raichands ke ghar Dev ki shaadi ko lekar khushiyo
ka mahol hai,wahi dusri taraf Sarans ke ghar Rhea ki maa ki barsi ka gham...


ab aagee
Its a bright new day...early in the morning Hiten is up n ready waiting for Rhea..
Nandini : baaki sab tayyariya ho gayi na beta
Hiten: ji Dadi, sab kuch thik waisa hi kiya hai jaisa aapne kaha hai, bas Rhea aa jaye to hum nikalte hai
Yash:Thik hai beta, tum dono aashram se mandir aa jana, main aur maa wahi jaa rahe hai
Hiten: ji papa
Rhea comes rushing, she is wearing a white chudidaar looking very simple and sweet...
Hiten: Rhea, Dadi aur papa mandir chale gaye hai, hum aashram hote hue mandir jayenge..
Rhea: ji bhaiya

Raichand Mansion.........
Dev is all set to leave sumwhere, waiting eagerly for Rahul
Naina: Dev, Rahul ab tak neeche nahi aaya..tumhare papa bas aate hi honge, aur yeh surveen kaha reh gayi..
Dev: li jiye , aa gaye aapke shezaade
[rahul comes and hugs naina from behind]
Naina: aa gaye aap..
Rahul: happy birthday mama
Naina: thank u beta... mujhe laga ki tum bhool gaye ho..
Rahul: bhala duniya mein itni pyari mama ka birthday bhi koi bhool sakta hai...
[naina kisses rahul on his forehead]
Naina: thank u beta
Surveen: happy birthday mama, yeh lijiye..hamari pyari mama ke liye ek pyara sa bouquet
Naina: thank u beta... [hugs her]
[just then lalit comes n therz complete silence]
Lalit: well....agar tum sab ready ho to chale?
Naina: ji chaliye
[Coincidently Raichands bhi usi mandir jaate hai,jaha Sarans bhi jaate hai.........
woh mandir pohocte hai..Lalit, Naina aur Dev aage chalte hai aur Rahul aur Surveen peeche hote hai..
mandir ki sidiyo per Rahul ko kuch yaad aata hai]
Rahul: Oh God! lagta hai main apna phone car mein hi bhool aaya..Sur tum chalo, main bas abhi lekar aata hu
Surveen: Oh bro, ok per quickly ha
[rahul runs down towards his car, opens the door of the car & gets his cell,& he just turns around & see Rhea
getting down from a car]
Rahul to himself: are yeh to...woh... kahi yeh..ha
{rahul was about to call Rhea, then surveen calls him]
Rahul: yeah sur
Surveen: bro kaha ho aap? papa puch rahe hai..
Rahul: ha ha bas abhi aaya..
[rahul quickly runs upstairs to the mandir..and in all this he forgets about Rhea]
Naina: Rahulll... kaha reh gaye the beta, chalo aarti karlo
Rahul: ji mama
[after finishing the aarti Raichands were about to leave just then Rahul realises that minutes ago he had seen Rhea so he starts looking out for her,here n there]
Surveen: bro..kya hua? kise dhund rahe ho aap?
Rahul: nahi, kuch nahi
Surveen: are u sure?
Rahul: yes sur..[gives an irritated look]
Dev: oh ho..ab tum dono chalo bhi, shaam ke liye tayyari karni hai ya nahi
[Raichands leaves]

Raichand mansion........
Lalit:Dev, shaam ki saari tayyari ho gayi?
Dev: ji papa, sab kuch laghbagh ho chuka hai
Lalit: invitation list phirse chek karlo, kahi koi reh naa gaya ho
Naina: per itni badi party rakhne ki kya zaroorat hai, ab meri umr aise birthdays manane ki to hai nahi
phir yeh sab...
Surveen: oh mama, kisne kaha aapse ki aapki umr ho gayi hai? aap to ab bhi kitne young lagte ho, kyun papa?
lalit [smiles] ya, per yeh party sirf tumhari birthday ke liye hi nahi naina, Rahul ke lautne ki khushi mien bhi hai
[all this while Rahul is just quietly sitting... whose least interested to watever is happening around him]
Surveen: kya baat hai bro, aap itne khamosh kyun baithe ho? arent you excited bout the party? after all this party is
in your honour too!
Rahul [pretends to smile] whats so exciting about the party sur? u know how these parties are!!!
Dev: Rahul...aaj iss party mien papa apne sabhi collegues aur business world ke sabhi logo se tumhe milwane wale hai.
Surveen: yes bro, aaj ke baad aap sirf Rahul nahi balki business tycoon Lalit Raichand ke bete Rahul Raichand keh laoge
Rahul:per bhaiya, kya main sirf Rahul nahi reh sakta!!!
Dev: ok baba [smiles] ab yeh sab chodo aur mere saath chalo
Rahul: kaha?
Dev: Actually hume Sarans ke ghar jana hai unhe invite karne ke liye... tum yaha baithe bore honge to saath chalo...
Rahul: per bhaiya....
Lalit: ha beta Dev bilkul thik keh raha hai,isi bahane tumhari Sarans se mulaqat bhi ho jayegi
Rahul: ji papa, sur tum bhi chalo..
Surveen: noways bro !!!! mujhe abhi bahar jana hai..so u both enjoy.......i'm leaving byeeee
Dev [smiles] So chale Mr.Raichand
Rahul: [unwillingly] ji chaliya...

... end of part - 3 ......
hope u enjoyed reading it...
will be waiting for your comments...





Edited by starbellz_21 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
interesting part. Wonderful great cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: golu_1677

interesting part. Wonderful great cont soon

thx 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
wat happened guys??? kya yeh part itna bura tha??? 😕
just 1 comment???
do i continue or no??? pls tell me guys!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
nice part... 👏 par when will both meet again...wanna see both meetng...continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
do cont soon...olove ur ffs... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
pls cont soon. ur FF is really good 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

nice part... 👏 par when will both meet again...wanna see both meetng...continue soon... 😊

thx for ur comments 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: nm16

pls cont soon. ur FF is really good 👏

thx a lot... 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
Faru Really Nice part Dear Pls try to send it next part Soon As possible..

Rabi

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