Phir Milenge (RajivAmna ff) last prt uptd - Page 11

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Rabi

thanks rabi.. 😊

will try to post the next part as soon as possible...

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hey frnds, sorry for the delay.. next part will be posted very soon... 😊

Part 9

Recap:
Naina ko hospital se discharge kiya jata hai... Rhea, Nandini,Yash aur Hiten unse milne Raichand mansion aate hai..jaha Rhea Rahul se Kunal ki meeting ke baare mein kehti hai... Rahul aur Kunal ek hi project pe saath kaam karte hai..Kunal Rhea ko Kapoor's business join kar ne ke liye offer karta hai....

ab aage.........
its a bright new day aur aaj Dev aur Aarti ka sangeet hai...
Pura Raichand mansion roshni aur phoolo se sajaya gaya hai... maano lag raha hai jaise khushiya iss ghar ke har kone (corner) mein basi hai...
ghar mein mehmano ka aana laga hai.., aur Lalit aur Naina unhe attend karne mein busy hai...
Ek taraf Dev ki sangeet ki tayyariya chal rahi hai aur yaha Dev apne kamre mein kuch files aur papers ke beech uljha hua hai.. usi waqt Surveen waha aati
hai aur apne bade bhai ko aise dekhkar has padti hai...
Surveen: oh god! bhaiya aapko dekhkar bilkul bhi nahi lagta ki aaj aapka sangeet hai aur parso shaadi..yeh kya aap in files mien uljhe hue ho? agar mama ne dekha to aaj phir daat padegi..
Dev: Surr.. sangeet abhi nahi shaam mein hai..aur waise bhi mama mujhe office jaane dete hai nahi, aur main yaha uhi baithe baithe bore ho raha hu,
isiliye socha yeh kaam khatm karlu...
[Rahul comes with a very naughty smile.. as if he is upto sumthing]
Rahul: oh to dulhe raja bore ho rahe hai.., Surr.. chalo kuch karte hai..
Surveen: are wah bro., kya baat hai aj aap bhi bahot khush lag rahe ho...
Rahul: bas u hi..Aarti bhabhi se milkar aa raha hu..
[Dev blushes]
Surveen: oh...
Dev: per tum ab tak kaha the?
Rahul: meri chodiye yeh batayiye ki ... [teasingly] bhabhi se milna hai? ha....
Dev: ayee.. marvayega ka?
Rahul: acha kam se kam unhe call to kar sakte ho na? kyun sur..
Surveen: ah! kyun nahi..Dev bhaiya kahiye.. lagaye phone?
[Dev sharm se bas muskurate hai..]
Rahul: well.. sur.. mujhe nahi lagta ki bhaiya ko unse baat bhi karni hai..chodo rehne do.. [and was about to leave the room, just then dev stops him]
Dev: are per maine mana to nahi kiya na..
Surveen: there...!!!! caught u!!!
[surveen and rahul laughs]
Rahul: oh.. dekha Sur.. hamare naughty Dev bhaiya....chaliye bhabhi se baat karte hai..[wo cell uthata hai number dial karte hue surveen ki taraf ishara karta hai aur surveen room se bahar chali jati hai]
Rahul: hello..aarti bhabhi.. hi..kaise hai aap?
Aarti: hi rahul, ji hum to bilkul thik hai..
Rahul: aur sab tayyari kaisi chal rahi hai?
[aarti kaafi confused hoti hai..aur sochti hai ki achanak rahul aise kyun keh raha hai..aur wo rahul ki baat ka jawaab nahi deti]
Rahul: bhabhii.. ho ki gaye?
Aarti: ji..yehi to hai..waise Rahul aapko kuch kaam tha kya?
Rahul: nahi to... wo kya hai na bhabhi bas aapki yaad aa rahi thi.. [looks at dev] to bas.. phone kar diye...
Aarti: oh..
Rahul: acha bhabhi agar aapka Dev bhaiya se baat karneka mood ho to kahiyega..wo yehi hai..
Aarti: [laughs] oh..to yeh baat hai...
Rahul: baat? kaisi baat? main kuch samjha nahi..
Aarti: Rahull...
Rahul: [laughs] acha acha..ek minute ...
[hands over the phone to Dev]
Rahul: lijiye..baat kijye..per zara sambhalkar...
Dev: tum bhi na rahul...
Rahul: are baat to kijiye... aur jaldi ha.. main tab tak yeh yeh..[finds sumthing] ha yeh files dekhta hu..khade khade bore ho jaunga...u please continue...
Dev: hi aarti..
[dev aarti se baat karne mein itna masroof {busy} ho jata hai.., aur tabhi surveen aur naina darvaze per aakar rukte hai... Naina Dev ko bulane hi wali hoti hai ki Rahul stops her]
Rahul: mama shhhhhhhhh!!!!!!
[goes closer to her and speaks to her in a very low tone]
Rahul: zara ahista boliye mama, bhaiya zara busy hai..
Naina: kya?
[aur wo dev ke bilkul peeche khadi hoti hai.. Dev iss baat se anjaan aarti se baat kar raha hota hai..aur kuch der baad palat ta hai]
Dev: aapp..i mean mama..aaapp.. yaha...[drops down the phone]
Surveen: are are..zara sambhalke bhaiya..
Naina: yeh kya hai Dev? mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thi.. ab kya har choti baat mujhe tumhe samjhani hogi?
Dev: mama..main to bas wo..
Naina: are bas 2 hi din to shaadi ke liye bache hai na.. phir to..
Rahul: per mama aap ek baar bhaiya ki baat to sun lijiye.. [laughs]
Naina: tum chup raho.., tumhe to ise samjhana chahiye tha na. ghar mein itne mehmaan aaye hai, ab main unhe dekhu, sangeet ki tayyariya karu ya ise [holds Dev's ears] dekhu?
Dev: mama..per main to bas woh phone...
Naina: kya phone ha? Dev... aaj ke din bhi tumhe yeh phone calls aur yeh office ke kaam se fursat nahi hai? aaj bhi yeh sab files ko lekar baithe ho?
Dev: [surprisigly] files???? ... aap in files ki baat kar rahe ho..
Naina: ha.. yeh sab kya hai Dev?
Rahul: kyun bhaiya aap ko kya laga? mama kis bare mein baat kar rahe hai?
Surveen: ha bhaiya..kahi aap kuch aur to nahi samajh rahe the na...?
[surveen and rahul laughs]
Dev: kuch nahi...
Naina: tum dono hasna bandh karo..aur Dev abhi isi waqt yeh sab files uthakar rakho.. aur neeche aao.. Surveen tum mere saath chalo... Rahul tum Dev ko lekar
neeche aao..
Dev: ji mama... [aur wo files uthane lagta hai]
Naina: jaldi aa jana.. Surveen chalo...
[naina takes surveen along]
Dev: thank god mama ne kuch nahi suna..per Rahul jab mama yehi the to kya tum mujhe bata nahi sakte the?
Rahul: ab aap bhabhi se baat karne mein itne busy the, to aapko disturb karna mujhe acha nahi laga.. maine socha kyun khamakha love birds ko disturb kare?
Dev: tum bhi na...
Rahul: acha ab wo sab chodiye aur ab neeche chaliye warna mama phir daatne lagenge....
Dev: ha....

Saran house.........
Hiten's room....
[yaha hiten aur rhea kuch discuss kar rahe hai]
Rhea: bhaiya mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai..infact ghar mein sabhi se..per socha ki pehle aapse hi baat karlu..
Hiten: baat kya Rhea? koi problem hai kya?
Rhea: nahi nahi bhaiya koi problem nahi hai... bas ek baat hai, jisme aapka opinion chahiye...
Hiten: hmm... bolo..
Rhea: actually bhaiya kunal ne mujhe apne saath kaam karne ke liye offer diya hai..woh chahta hai ki main use join karu..
Hiten: oh.. kunal ke saath! to tumne kya faisla kiya hai?
Rhea: [looks at hiten in amazement and smiles] kaisa faisla bhaiya..main to ab kuch samajh hi nahi paa rahi hu...
Hiten: kya matlab? if u think u can then u should difinitely go for it..
Rhea: actually bhaiya baat yeh hai ki main nahi chahti ki mere kapoors ko join karne se Saran empire ke liye koi problem ho.... i mean.... Sarans aur Raichands business competitors hai..aur Kapoors ko join karne ke baad mujhe Raichands ke saath kaam karna hoga..jabki..
Hiten: hmm.. main samajh raha hu tum kya soch rahi hu... per Rhea.. agar tum Raichands ke saath kaam karogi to kya isse hamare rishte mien koi fark padega? aur rahi baat unka hamara competitors hone ka... to yeh to business mein chalta hai.. its just healty competition and nothing personal.. aur tumhe apni zindagi mien kya karna hai iska faisla lene ka haq tumhara hai.. agar tumhe lagta hai ki tum kunal ka business join karna chahti ho, to yehi sahi... aur Saran empire to tumhara hi hai.. jab chaho waha join karo.. bas meri ek baat yaad rakhna ki just be loyal to your work..phir chahe wo Raichands ke saath ho ya Kapoors ke saath ya phir Sarans ke saath.. aur hamesha apni personal aur apni professional life ko alag rakhna..tum jo bhi decession logi..i'll always be with you..
Rhea: per bhaiya papa...
Hiten: rheaaa... kya aaj tak kabhi bhi papa ne tumhe kisi bhi cheez ka reason pucha hai ya kabhi bhi tumhe koi bhi cheez karne se mana ki hai?
wo bhi tumse yehi kahenge ki tum jo bhi faisla logi hume manzur hoga.. hume tum per pura bharosa hai... agar tum kapoors ko join karna chahti ho to isse
hume koi aitraaz nahi hai...
Rhea: thank u so much bhaiya.. pata hai yeh baat lekar main itni confused thi..samajh nahi aa raha tha ki papa se bhi kya baat karu jab main khud hi kuch decide nahi kar paa rahi thi..per abhi aapse baat karne ke baad i'm feeling much releived.. thanks a lot bhaiya..
Hiten: pagli..are itni se baat lekar pareshan ho rahi thi.. pehle hi aakar mujhse kehti to.. anyways..tum jo bhi faisla logi hume manzoor hai..so just relax,
aur wahi karna jo tumhe thik kage.. acha ab main office jaa raha hu.. shaam ko baat karenge..ok?
Rhea: ji..acha.. mujhe bhi abhi Aarti ke ghar jana hai..
Hiten: to chalo main tumhe chod deta hu..
Rhea: oh bhaiya..aapne itne sweet ho na..[hugs him]
Hiten: wo to main hu... acha ab chale?
Rhea: ji chaliye...

[waqt beetta hai.. aur ab shaam hoti hai, aur Raichand Mansion pura mehmaano se bhara hua hai.. Sangeet ka waqt ho raha hai
..Surveen aur Rahul Dev ke room mein shayad uski help karne ki koshish kar rahe hai...]
Surveen: bhaiya aap aaj yeh maroon wali sherwani peheniye.. u'll look just awesome....
Rahul: surrr.., maroon nahi.. bhaiya aap yeh cream wali peheniye..
Surveen: kyun..maroon wali mien kya kharaabi hai.., aur yeh kya aap to ab tak tayyar nahi hue ho... come on get ready.. sab log aa chuke hai..aur.. [teasingly]
Rhea bhi aane hi wali hai...i mean Rhea, Hiten, Dadi bhi aane hi wale hai..so please go and get ready...
Rahul: [gets up and goes] ha ha.. jaa raha hu...
[Rahul goes to his room & gets ready for the function...he wears a light blue sherwani..aur wo itna cute lag raha hai ki kya kahe....
and now its Sangeet time...sabhi mehmaan aa chuke hai..per Rahul ki nazar to ab tak kisi ko dhund rahi hai]
Surveen: hayee..bro..blue sherwani mien to aap gazab dhaa rahe ho...
Rahul: oh surr... tell me sumthing new...[laughs] acha yeh sab chodo yeh batao ki kya saare mehmaan aa gaye..
Surveen: ha saare aa gaye.. bas Aarti bhabhi ka intezar ho raha hai... aur..
Rahul: aur???
Surveen: aur... are lijiye bhabhi bhi aa gaye..
[rahul ekdum se daravaze ki taraf palatta hai... ]
Surveen: dont worry Rhea bhi aayi hogi... main zara dekhkar aati hu...
[and she walks away teasing him]
[ab rahul bas darwaze ki taraf dekh raha hai.. Pehle Aarti ke parents aate hai, phir Aarti aati hai, phir Yash aur Nandini aate hai..bas Rhea kahi dikhayi nahi deti..jiski wajah se
shayad rahul thoda confused sa khada hai..]
Dev: hey Rahul..yaha aao..
Rahul: ji bhaiya...
Nandini: are Rahul bete.., kaise ho?
Rahul: ji main thik hu., aap kaise ho?
Nandini: hum bhi bilkul thik hai...
Dev: dadi..Hiten kaha hai?
Nandini: Hiten aur Rhea bas aate hi honge..
Surveen: aate honge nahi Dadi..wo log aa chuke hai...
[yeh sunte hi rahul palatta hai..aur Rhea aur Hiten ko aate dekhta hai...Rhea ko dekhte hi uske chehre per ek ajib si chamak hoti hai..hoto pe ek sweet si smile aati hai...Rhea is wearing a pink and blue color chudidaar..aur wo bahot hi pyaari lag rahi hai..]
Surveen: Rahul bhaiya..zara sambhalke..
Rhea: hi Surveen.. hi Rahul...
Surveen: hi Rhea..u're looking very pretty...
Rhea: thanks..
Rahul: hi Rhea...
Nandini: are bhai ab tum sab bas baate hi karoge ya sangeet ka programme bhi start karoge?
Surveen: ji Dadi..ab to rang khub jamega..kyun bhaiya...? main bas abhi music on karvati hu....
Rahul to himself: aaj to wakaaye mein rang jamega...
Rhea: hey Rahul, kaha kho gaye?
Rahul: nahi kuch nahi...bas...
Rhea: sach mein koi baat nahi hai ya kuch khaas baat hai ha..!
Rahul: [smiles] nahi baba, aisi koi baat nahi hai...
Rhea: are hum to bas mazaak kar rahe the...
[tabhi surveen waha aati hai aur Rahul ko le jati hai..]
Surveen: come on bhaiya aaj to aapko dance karna hi hoga... Rhea aap bhi...aayiye..chalo...
[rahul goes with surveen ..and they all were dancing...Hiten, Dev, Aarti, Lalit, Naina, Surveen all of them were dancing ..phir Rahul Rhea ke paas jata hai and asks hers to join them...and she smiles and joins them..and now Rhea and Rahul were dancing
together....after a while they all sit for dinner..
shaadi ke is pyar bhare maahol mein Rhea aur Rahul ki bahot achi dosti hoti hai..]
[Surveen, Rahul, Rhea, Aarti, Dev aur Hiten sabhi saath baithe hote hai..aur unka hasi mazak chal raha hota hai..]
Hiten: chalo dev ab tumhara number to lag gaya..ab Rahul its your turn next.. koi ladki dekhi hai ya nahi?
Rahul: ab tak to nahi... per shayad koi yehi mil jaye...
Dev: hey koi dikhi hai kya?
Surveen: ha bro.., agar koi dikh gayi ho to abhi hi keh dijiye.. Dev bhaiya ke saath hi aapka bhi band bajwa denge....
[they all laugh while Rahul just looks at Rhea]
Hiten: ha ha..phir Surveen ke line clear ho jayegi na... kyun?
[Lalit and Yash comes]
Lalit: kyun bhai kya baatein ho rahi hai?
Dev: kuch nahi papa.., hum to bas aise hi...
Lalit: u know Yash.., muhe bahot khushi hai ki humare bacho ke beech bhi itni achi dosti ho gayi hai..
Yash: ha.., thik waise hi jaise saalo se hamare beech hai...
Lalit: ha..bilkul sahi kaha...
Yash: well..mujhe lagta hai ki abhi hume chalna chahiye..kaafi raat ho chuki hai...
Lalit: per..
Nandini: ha.. abhi hume nikalna chahiye.. chale Hiten, Rhea..
Hiten: ji dadi...
Naina: are aap bhi abhi nikal rahe ho?
Nandini: ha.. aur ab tum bhi thoda aaraam kar lo..
Naina: ji dadi..
Yash: ok..to hum chalte hai ab..
[Rhea comes to Rahul]
Rhea: ok Rahul, kal milte hai.. waise aapse ek baat kehni thi..
Rahul: please go ahead..
Rhea: [smiles] thank you
Rahul: for?
Rhea: for being such a wonderful friend...
[Rahul goes completely blank and just looks at her in amazement..while she just smiles and walk away...]
[tabhi surveen rahul ko aise dekhti hai and comes to him]
Surveen: kya kare hayee kuch kuch hota hai...
Rahul: wattttt?
Surveen: ah..samjho ho hi gaya...
Rahul: surrr....
Surveen: oh bro dekhiye Aarti bhabhi bhi jaa rahe hai... ab Rhea to chali gayi..so..
Rahul: oh god! chalo...
[function khatm hota hai.... almost sabhi mehmaan chale jate hai.... its late night now .., ghar mien sabhi so chuke hai per
lagta hai ki aaj Rahul ki aankho se neend hi gayab hai]
Rahul's room.....
[Rahul apni soch mein khoya hua, khidki {window} se uss chand ko dekhta hai..phir achanak uski aankho ke saamne Rhea ka chehra aata hai..aur wo muskurata hai]
Rahul to himself: oh god! pata nahi yeh sab ho kya raha hai? kahi main Rhea se... nahi nahi...main bhi na! lagta hai Sur ki baatein mujh per kuch jyada hi asar karne lagi hai... jo bhi ho.. Rhea is a nice girl..
[aur phir use rhea se apni saari mulaqatein yaad aati hai... and he smiles]
Rahul to himself: lagta hai main kuch jyada hi soch raha hu.., Mr Rahul Raichand.. aap kaha jaa rahe ho? [laughs..aur phir apne isi khubsoorat
aur haseen soch ke saath Rahul sone {sleep} ki koshish karta hai...]

.... end of part 9.....

hope u enjoyed reading this part..!!!

Ab Rahul aur Rhea ki dosti aage kaha jayegi... kya Rahul wakaye mein Rhea se pyar karne laga hai..? agar ha to kya wo iss baat ko accept karega? Shaadi mein aage kya hoga?
to know all this and more keep reading...
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👏 awesome part dear me loved i toooo gooooood continue soon 👏

faru yaar ur story is simply going great... me loving it totally...... you are just too good... keep up the good work going.... going too bindaas , raapchik , totally jhakkas....👏
please continue soon... 😛