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It's amazing di!!!! I loved it!!!!!

faru dear going very damn interesting..... keep up the good work.... going tooooo coollllllllllllllllllllllll... me loving every bit of it.... totally amazing , awesome..... everything is very damn nice..... the promo is also tooo good....... 👏 please post the next part soon.. me waiting for the next part very eagerly....... 😃

gr8 promo dear 👏 ....jus luved it...continue soon... 😊

i luved da new promo....it was jus sooo sweet...gud job.....totally awesome.....keep it up...i jus read ur whole story rite now.....n i must say itz totally superb...keep up da gud work n well done.....

rocking promo. waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: group_1223

i luved da new promo....it was jus sooo sweet...gud job.....totally awesome.....keep it up...i jus read ur whole story rite now.....n i must say itz totally superb...keep up da gud work n well done.....

thanks a lot for all ur comments 😊

Starbellz....Just caught up with your fan-fic and i must say i have truely become your fan!!!...i love reading your fan-fic and the promos rock- very professional!👏👏

I hope you keep up with your high standards and keep writing and keep writing😃..You really have an excellant hidden talent in you😃

~~~~* PART-8*~~~~

Recap:-
Dev ke birthday ki surprise party ke liye Rahul, Hiten aur Rhea ko bhi invite karta hai.., Kunal australia se lautta hai.., aur Rhea uski wajah se Dev ki party se ekdum si chali jaati hai..,Kunal,Hiten aur Rhea bahar jaate hai n waha unki mulaqat ek baar phir Dev, Surveen aur Rahul se hoti hai... Naina ki tabiyat kharab hoti hai use hospital admit kiya jata hai...

ab aage...........
Rahul: bhaiya , sur.. we'll have to rush home.. mama ki tabiyat kharab hai , aur papa unhe city hospital le gaye hai....
Dev: what?
[surveen bilkul ghabra jaati hai..]
Surveen; what..mama??...
Rahul: relax surr.. nothingz serious.. chalo..hiten , rhea catch u later...kunal..bye..
Hiten: kya hum bhi saath chale?
Dev: no its ok..
Hiten: kunal, tum aur rhea ghar chale jao,main inke saath hospital jaa raha hu..papa aur dadi ko bata dena..
Rhea: ok bhaiya..
[hiten, dev, rahul, surr heads towards the hospital...]
Rhea: i hope sab thik ho...
Kunal: dont worry sab thik hi hoga..chalo ghar chalte hai..
Rhea: ha....
[aur wo dono bhi ghar chale jaate hai]

hospital............
Rahul: papa..mama kaha hai.., kaise ho wo?
Lalit: she is fine now..bas thoda blood pressure high ho gaya tha...
Surveen: papa, mujhe unse milna hai...
Lalit: nahi beta, doctor ne unhe abhi abhi injection diya hai.. let her rest..,abhi unhe disturb karna thik nahi hoga..
Dev: mama bhi na..khamakha itne excite ho jate hai...
Hiten: its ok Dev, aunty ab bilkul thik hai... so dont worry..
Lalit: ha bete, waise bhi kal savere doctor unhe chod denge... bas aaj raat ke liye hi unhe yaha rakha hai...
Rahul: papa, aap ghar jayiye.., main yehi rukta hu..
Surveen: main bhi yehi rahungi..
Dev: nahi sur.. tum bhi ghar chalo..Rahul aur main yaha hai na..
Surveen: nahi bhaiya, main ghar nahi jaa rahi hu..
Lalit: surveen..Dev thik keh raha hai..hum ghar chalte hai, kal savere naina ko lene aa jayenge...
Surveen: ji papa..
Hiten: aayiye uncle main aapko ghar drop karta hu...
Lalit: thank u so much beta... chalo surveen.. Dev hume naina ke baare mien batate rehna...
Dev: ji papa...
[hiten drops lalit and surveen at the Raichand mansion aur phir wo ghar pohochta hai..where Rhea and Kunal are still awake, waiting
for hiten]
Hiten: are, tum dono soye nahi.?
Rhea: nahi..aunty kaise hai? nothing serious na?
Hiten: nahi nahi..she is fine..bas unka blood pressure high ho gaya tha.. kal tak unhe discharge kar diya jayega..
Kunal: thank god..she is fine.!
Hiten: ha..per ab tum dono bhi so jayo..kafi raat ho chuki hai..
Rhea: ji bhaiya..ok kunal kal savere main rahul se baat karungi..dont worry..
Kunal: hmm.. gudnite.
Rhea: [smlies] gudnite..

Next morning....
[nandini and yash are waiting at the dinning table]
Yash: kya baat hai ma, aaj bachcho ne badi der laga di..
Nandini: ha..lagta hai kal raat kaafi der se laute honge...
[hiten and kunal comes downstairs]
Kunal: gud morning uncle, gud morning dadi..
Nandini: gudmorning beta..
Yash: gudmorning.. kya baat hai aaj aap logo ne kaafi deri laga di..Rhea bhi ab tak neeche nahi aayi..
[tabhi rhea comes running]
Yash: here comes my doll..
Rhea:gud morning evryone.. [sits next to kunal]
Dadi: gudmorning..
Yash: gud morning beta..
Dadi: to..kal raat to aap logo ne khub enjoy kiya hoga..,
Rhea: nahi dadi.. actually kal hume dev aur rahul mil gaye the aur hum bas baithe hi the ki unhe hospital jana pada..,
Yash [looks at rhea in amazement and smiles] bete yeh aap kya keh rahe ho?
Hiten: papa.., naina aunty ka blood pressure high ho gaya tha isiliye kal raat unhe hospital mein admit kiya gaya tha..
Dadi: oh.. ab kaise hai wo?
Hiten: wo thik hai..infact aaj hi unhe discharge karne wale the..
Yash: oh phir to hume unse milne jana chahiye ... maa aap chalenge?
Dadi: ha.. hume abhi hi chalna chaiye..
Rhea: papa, main bhi aapke saath aaungi..
kunal: thik hai.., tab tak main bhi apna kaam khatm kar aata hu..
Rhea: thik hai.., if possible main rahul se aj hi baat karlungi..
Kunal: ya please.. chalo main ab nikalta hu..bye evryone...
[Kunal apne kaam se bahar jata hai, Rhea, Yash, Nandini aur Hiten Raichand mansion jate hai]

Raichand Mansion........
Dev: are Dadi, Yash uncle ..ayiye na..hi Rhea..
Rhea: hi..
Nandini: dev, ab naina kaisi hai?
Dev: ji mama thik hai..abhi abhi unhe hospital se discharge mila hai.. wo apne kamre mein hai..
Nandini: kya main use mil sakti hu..
Dev: ofcourse dadi.. ek minute..Sur.. zara yaha to aana..
Surveen: ji bhaiya..
Dev: zara Dadi ko mama ke room le jana...
Surveen: ji.., aayiye dadi.. Rhea..please come..
[tabhi lalit comes downstairs..]
Lalit; are Yash.. achcha hua aap log aa gaye...
Yash; ab Nainaji kaisi hai..
Lalit: she is fine....

Naina's room....
[waha rahul naina ko dawayi de raha hota hai]
Surveen: bhaiya..
[Rahul palatta hai.., aur achanak rhea ko dekhkar ekdum hairaan hota bhi]
Nandini: naina ab kaisi tabiyat hai?
Naina: thik hu..bas thoda..
Nandini: are bhai ab itna bhi tension lene ki kya zaroorat thi..kuch kaam hota to humse keh diya hota..
Surveen: ab dadi aap hi inhe kuch samjhayiyega.. hamari baat to yeh manege nahi..
Naina: sur..kuch nahi dadi..aap to jaante ho ki shaadi ke ghar mien kitna kaam hota hai.. per abhi main bilkul thik hu..
Dadi: [smiles] per apni sehat ka bhi to khyaal rakhna chaiye na..
Rahul: aap log batein kijiye main chalta hu..
Surveen: thik hai bhaiya..main yehi hu..
[rahul was just about to leave then Rhea stops him]
Rhea: ah..Rahul..ek minute..
Rahul: ha kahiye..waise aap mujhse kuch kehne wale the kal...
Rhea: ha.. waise kya tum office ja rahe ho?
Rahul: office..? nahi to..
Rhea: oh...
Rahul: per baat kya hai?
Rhea: actually kaam mera nahi kunal ka hai...
Rahul: kunal?
Rhea: ha.., actually kunal jis project ke silsilay mien aaya hai wo Raichand Imporials ka hi hai..
Rahul: oh ..ha..koi Mr.Kapoor se meeting to thi..per maine use postpone karva di hai..
Rhea: [smiles] wo koi mr.kapoor nahi balki kunal hi hai..jo australia se bas tumhi se milne aaya hai, uss project ke liye..
Rahul: oh.. actually maine bas abhi abhi office join kiya hai..to., anyways to problem kya hai?
Rhea: actually baat yeh hai ki Kunal ke father ki tabiyat thik nahi hai..aur use jald se jald australia lautna hai..per jab tak
tumhari aur uski meeting nahi ho jati wo jaa nahi payega..aur phir baar baar india aana uske liye possible nahi hai..
Rahul: achcha..to itni si baat hai.. mujhe laga.. [smiles] khair.. koi baat nahi..kunal se kaho ki hum wo meeting aaj hi kar lenge,
Rhea: thank u so much Rahul.. u know kunal kitna pareshan tha....yeh uska dream project hai..
Rahul: dream project?
Rhea: ha...wo bahot lambi kahani hai.. phir kabhi sunayenge..
Rahul: thik hai..filhaal mujhe abhi kahi aur jana hai.. kunal se keh dena ki 2 ghante bad mujhe office aake mil le..
kyunki kal sangeet hai.. uske baad mama office jane bhi denge nahi.. u know na..[smiles naughtily]
Rhea: [smiles] ok..thanks once again..
Rahul: Rhea... dekho do cheeze hai jo main apne dosto se kabhi nahi leta.. ek to sorry..aur ek thanks.. ok?
Rhea [smiles] ok baba.. i take back my words..
Rahul: gud... ab main chalta hu.. kal milenge..
Rhea: ya.. bye..
Rahul: byee...

[after 2 hours.. at Raichand's Office]
Rahul's cabin...........
[Rahul is busy cheking sum file....tabhi therez a knock at the door]
Rahul: come in..
Kunal: hi rahul...
Rahul: oh hi kunal... have a seat.. main tumhara hi intezar kar raha tha..
Kunal: i'm sorry rahul, main jaanta hu ki tumhare bhai ki shaadi hai aur bas meri wajah se tumhe yaha office aana pada..
Rahul: no ..no its absolutely ok.. waise bhi proffession apni jagah pe hai aur personal life apni jagah pe.. anyways lets get to work..
Kunal: yeah....
[rahul aur kunal uss naye project ke baare mien discuss karte hai..and after a long discussion they finish with their meeting]
Kunal: so finally we are done with it..
Rahul: ha.. and i'm sure ki iss project se hume kaafi fayda hoga..
Kunal: yeah... ok then.. ab mujhe chalna hoga..
Rahul: kunal.. kya tum abhi hi australia ke liye nikal rahe ho..
Kunal: ha.. aaj raat hi ki flight hai..
Rahul: per tumhe agle hafte phir aana hoga na..
Kunal: ha..per waha bhi mere kuch important kaam ruke hue hai.. aur papa ki tabiyat bhi thik nahi rehti hai ..to muhe jana hi hoga..
Rahul: ok... then..mujhe bhi ghar jana hai..
Kunal: yeah..
[dono saath hi bahar aate hai..Rahul apni car start kar raha hota hai per car start hi nahi hoti hai]
Kunal: hey rahul, kya hua?
Rahul: pata nahi..start hi nahi ho rahi hai...
Kunal: kaho to main chod du?
Rahul: [looks at his watch] hmm.. ok per tumhe kahi aur to nahi jana hai na?
Kunal: nahi bas ghar hi jana hai phir waha se airport..
Rahul: ok..
[rahul sits in kunal's car..aur wo Raichand mansion jaa rahe hote hai]
Rahul: waise kunal tum australia mein kabse ho?
Kunal: yehi kuch 6 saalo se...
[kunal's cell rings]
Kunal: ha rhea.. ha ho gaya...ha bas kuch hi der mein i'll be there... ok ..ok byee..[hangs down] yeh rhea bhi na..
Rahul:[smiles] hmm..acha kya tum aur rhea childhood friends ho?
Kunal: [smiles] ha.. hum neighbours hua karte the..infact yash uncle aur papa ki bhi bahot achchi dosti hai..we are just like one family..
Rahul: oh.. lucky u..
Kunal: kya matlab?
Rahul: kuch nahi..ah mera ghar aa gaya.. ander to chalo..
Kunal: nahi.., wo rhea mera wait kar rahi hai..phir mujhe airport ke liye bhi nikalna hai..so may be next time..
Rahul: ok... but it was nice meeting you..and thanks for the lift..
Kunal: same here... aur ha..Dev ko meri taraf se congratulate kar dena..
Rahul: ok..
Kunal: ok then..byee..
Rahul: byeee..
[kunal saran house pohochta hai..waha aarti aur rhea baithe hote hai]
Kunal: hello..beautiful people..
Aarti: hi kunal..
Rhea: so how was your meeting?
Kunal: [smiles] bahot achchi thi.. Rahul is a very warm person...
Aarti: wo to hai... per yeh Rhea hai ki unhe kuch bhi kehti rehti hai..
Rhea: hello..??? kuch bhi ??? ha uss din mall mien wo mujhe kuch jyada hi wierd laga..
Kunal: [laughs] no rhea, aarti is right.. rahul ek bahot achcha insaan hai.. actually pehle mujhe bhi laga ki he mite be one of those attitude
& arrogant types.. but i was completely surprised...
Rhea: ok ok.. Rahul is sweet he's very great.. bas khush...
Aarti: [smiles] acha to isi baat pe kal jaldi aana, phir hum rahul se baat karenge... ab hum chalte hai..
Kunal: ok aarti, waise main bhi aaj hi ja raha hu..
Aarti: per kunal kal to sangeet hai, shaadi na sahi sangeet to attend karte jao..
Kunal: i wish i cud, but i'm sorry aarti, tumhe to pata hai na..
Aarti: hmm,... per ho sake to shaadi pe aa jana..
Kunal: will try..
Aarti: acha hum chalte hai,byee
Rhea: ha thik hai..byee, kuch ho to phone karna..
Aarti: ya ok..byee
[aarti leaves]
Rhea: so kunal, kya hua, kya soch rahe ho?
Kunal: kuch nahi..bas u hi..
Rhea: khair yeh batao ki ab aage ka kya plan hai?
Kunal:kuch nahi, bas abhi jana hai, per agle hafte mujhe dobara aana padega..
Rhea: oh... per kunal jab ki yeh project almost ho hi chuka hai tumhe to ab yaha baar baar ana hoga na..
Kunal: hmm.. wahi to soch raha hu..but anyways, i'll have to manage,after all work is work..
Rhea: wo to hai.., waise aarti ki shaadi ke baad main bhi business join kar rahi hu..
Kunal: hmm,,that's gud.. rhheeaaa... u can help me yaar..
Rhea: wo kaise?
Kunal; well..Miss Rhea Saran i have an offer for you.. wud you like to join my office?
Rhea: what? kunal u think ki my ab australia shift ho jao..
Kunal: [mutters] kaash aisa hota..
Rhea: kya? kunaallll.......
Kunal: are mera matlab hai ki .., dekho waise bhi tum uncle ka business join karne wali ho to why dont u join me instead.. australia wala nahi baba, balki hamara india mein jo business hai wo.. and if u have no problem in this..than u can start with this project itself.. lucky u ha..tumhara pehla hi project Raichands ke saath hoga..
Rhea: per kunal... yeh project to tumhara dream project hai na?
Kunal: to kya hua? dekho agar tum mujhe join karti ho to yeh project tum karo ya main karu kya fark padta hai?
Rhea: hmm...
Kunal: acha tum iss bare mien sochna, chaho to uncle, dadi aur hiten se baat karna aur phir apna faisla mujhe batana..
Rhea: ha yeh thik rahega..
[tabhi nandini aur yash ghar aate hai]
Kunal: are lo dadi aur uncle bhi aa gaye.. acha uncle ab main chalta hu..
Yash: abhi iss waqt?
Kunal; ji uncle, waise bhi airport pohochne tak waqt ho hi jayega..
Nandini: ha,, thik hai beta..
Kunal: ok rhea, main chalta hu... hiten se keh dena..
Rhea: ha.. apna khyaal rakhna..
Kunal: tum bhi.. bye.. dadi... bye uncle.. [touches thier feet and then he leaves]


...~~~~~~~** end of part-8 **~~~~~~~...

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