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Posted: 18 years ago

#121

hi frnds,
i wont be able to post the next part of my story atlest for a month now. Actually im undergoing a minor stomach operation & so i wont be active on the forum too atlest for a month.

luv u all,
farheen

Edited by starbellz_21 - 18 years ago

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Hana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#122

farheen its okay dear we'll be waiting till then..and sorry about that

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ruksaar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#123

its ok dii.., we'll w8.. n u get well soon 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

#124

no probs farheen...health iz more imp....so gt well soon... 😊...n evrythng will be f9 Inshallah... 😊

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rajeevlicious

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Posted: 18 years ago

#125

hey frnds...thanks for all ur wishes..
im fine now.., but will need sum time to recover.. so as soon as im fine i'll update the story..

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#126

welcome back faru....it's so good to have you back... take ur ouwn time to post the story..pehle u recover fully..... love u.. 🤗

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ruksaar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: starbellz_21
hey frnds...thanks for all ur wishes..
im fine now.., but will need sum time to recover.. so as soon as im fine i'll update the story..

hey dii welcome bak ..im soo happy to know that u r fine now... its ok..pehle aap puri tarha se thik ho jayiye...we will w8 for u to update 😊

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ruksaar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#128

dii.., im waiting for the next part..
pls continue soon...

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Hana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: starbellz_21
hey frnds...thanks for all ur wishes..
im fine now.., but will need sum time to recover.. so as soon as im fine i'll update the story..

wow faru goood to see you back ohh good t hear that you are fine now inshallah you will recover soon .... and we wll wait for the next part

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rajeevlicious

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Posted: 18 years ago

#130

part-11

Recap-
Dev aur Aarti ki mehendi ki rasm hoti hai...Rhea Kunal se kehti hai ki wo uske saath uska business join karna chahegi... aur party mein Rhea Rahul se kisi surprise ke bare mien baat karti hai...

ab aage.............
[Rhea aur Hiten chale jate hai aur achanak peeche se ek ladki ki awaaz aati hai]
Girl: aur aunty meri gift kaha hai?
[sabhi yeh sunkar palatte hai]
Naina: yeh..yeh kaun tha..
Rahul: tha nahi..mama..thi.. wo dekhiye..
[aur saamne se ek ladki aati hai]
Naina: Tamannaaaa.......
[Tamanna is none other Anita {Anjali of Kavyanjali}]
Lalit: what a pleasant surprise!
[Tamanna comes and hugs Naina]
Tamanna: yes uncle...oh aunty... its so nice to be back... hi Rahul..kaise hai aap sab?
Rahul: [smiles] hi..
Naina: hum to bilkul thik hai.. per yeh kya tum akele aayi ho?
Tamanna: kyun aunty kya main akele nahi aa sakti?
Rahul: ha mama..aakhir yeh ab badi jo ho gayi hai....
Tamanna: ha ha ha..that was really funny... Uncle kahiye na isse ..
Lalit: Uff ho..Rahul.. acha Tamanna bete Vishal aur Shaila kaha hai?
Mr.Mehra: hum to yehi hai...
Lalit: ah..there you are!
Mr.Mehra: bhai hamare bete ki shaadi hai to hum kaise nahi aate..
Mrs.Mehra: aur kya...aur Naina..aap to bilkul nahi badle..
Tamanna: ha mama.. ab to aunty saasu maa banne ja rahe hai...
Mrs.Mehra: ha...
[and all of them laugh]
Mr.Mehra: hey Rahul... after a long time ... so how are you?
Rahul: im fine uncle... aayiye na ander chalte hai..
[sabhi ander jaate hai..]
Surveen: hey Tamanna... how are you?
Tamanna: mm... kaisi lag rahi hu?
Rahul: jaisi pehli thi... bilkul nakchadi aur pagal...
Tamanna: tum..tum to bas ruko... abhi dekhti hu... [wo Rahul ke paas jaa hi rahi hoti hai ki Dev beechmein aata hai]
Dev: tum dono ladte hi rahoge ki do minute shaanti se baithkar baat bhi karonge?
Surveen: bhaiya..Tamanna aur Rahul bhaiya...wo bhi ek saath..aur shaanti se????
Dev: oh ha..jab yeh dono saath ho to shanti kaisi?
Tamanna: are wo sab chodo.. and Mr.Dev Raichand...congratulations to you..
Dev: thank you...
Tamanna: aye haye..zara dulhe miya ke chehre ki chamak to dekho... i'm sure dulhan bahot khubsoorat hogi..
Rahul: ha wo to hai... aakhir Dev bhaiya ki pasand hai...
Tamanna: ha phir thik hogi... waise dulhan ka naam kya hai?
Surveen: Aarti
Tamanna: wow! Dev ki Aarti... that's sounds so sweet!
Naina: are ab kya tum logo ka bas yehi baatein karne ka programme hai?
Mrs.Mehra: ab itne dino baad jo mile hai..
Surveen: din? saalo baad kahiye aunty...
Lalit: tumlogo ki baate to chalti hi rahegi..aao Vishal main tumhe tumhara kamra dikhata hu..fresh ho jao..phir aaram se baat karenge..
Rahul: its ok papa.. main uncle aur aunty ko room tak chod aata hu...
Mr.Mehra: ah... that's like my son..chalo beta..
Rahul: come aunty..
Mrs.Mehra: ha chalo..Naina hum bas abhi aate hai...
Tamanna: aur koi mujhe bhi apna kamra dikha sakta hai?
Rahul: oh ha..main to bhool hi gaya tha..Tamanna... store room waha hai.. [and he runs upstairs]
Tamanna: ab to main ise bilkul nahi chodungi.. mera kamra store room.. abhi dekhti hu.. [and she runs after Rahul]
Dev: yeh dono bhi na.. kabhi nahi sudhrenge... anyways..Sur..zara ek minute kamre mein aana..
Surveen: ji..
Lalit: [laughs] Tamanna ke aane se ghar mein ek alagh hi ronak chaa jaati hai..
Naina: [smiles] hmmm... main samajh rahi hu.. Tamanna to pehle se hi aapki laadli rahi hai..
Lalit: ha..
Naina: kya hua aap itna muskura kyun rahe hai?
Lalit: nahi.. bas soch rahe the ki ab Dev ki shaadi ke baad Rahul ki shaadi ke baare mien bhi hume sochna chahiye..
Naina: haa.. wo to hai per Rahul ne to bas abhi abhi business join kiya hai..mera matlab hai ki pehle use achi tarha se settle to hone dijiye..
Lalit: of course Naina.. hum koi jaldbaazi mein Rahul ki shaadi nahi karne wale hai..
Naina: thik hai..per shaadi ke liye ladki ki bhi zaroorat hai... pehle ladki to dekhle..,
Lalit: ha.. dekh rakhi hai.. acha ab baatein hi karte rahenge ya mehmaano ki khaatirdaari bhi karenge?
Naina: [laughs] ji chaliye....

Tamanna's room.......
Rahul: so madam..kaisa laga kamra?
Tamanna: hmm..thik hi hai..acha wo sab chodo..ek baat to batao Rahul... jab se main aayi hu..maine kuch notice kiya hai?
Rahul: [looks at in amazement] kis baare mein?
Tamanna: tumhare baare mein..
Rahul: aur aapne kya notice kiya?
Tamanna: yehi ki tum kuch badle badle nazar aa rahe ho..
Rahul : [smiles] hmm... aur tumhe aisa kyun lag raha hai?
Tamanna: pata nahi...
Rahul: acha wo sab chodo... aur yeh batao kii ab tum yehi rahogi na?
Tamanna: kyun? mujhe yaha se bhagana ka irada hai kya?
Rahul: kaasshhh!!!
Tamanna: what do u mean?
Surveen: oh god!!!! kya aap dono yaha bhi shuru ho gaye? anyways.. Rahul bhaiya yeh lijiye aapka phone.. apke kamre mein pada tha..
Rahul: oh..thanks a lot sur..
Surveen: are baat to kijiye..Kunal is on line..
Rahul: oh..pehle nahi bata sakti thi kya... [and he leaves the room]
Surveen: lo..bhalayi ka to zamana hi nahi raha..
Tamanna: that's Rahul my dear...
[and both laugh]
[kuch der baad Rahul phir aata hai]
Tamanna: kya baat hai? itne confuse se kyun lag rahe ho?
Rahul: pata nahi.., aaj kal sabhi surprises ki hi baatein kar rahe hai..anyways... tum fresh hokar neeche aa jana..main tab tak aata hu
Surveen: per bhaiya aap jaa kaha rahe ho?
Rahul: bas aaya abhi..
[and he leaves]
Tamanna: ise kya hua?
Surveen: pata nahi, per lagta hai ab pata karna hi hoga...
Tamanna: ha.., kya? kya matlab?
Surveen: kuch nahi, bas tum fresh hokar neeche aao
Tamanna: thik hai.....
Rahul's room............
(Rahul apne kamre mien akele u hi khaamosh sa kisi soch mien duba hua hai..., phir achanak muskurata hai.. tabhi Dev waha aata hai,
rahul ko u muskurata dekh wo bhi muskurata hai..)
Dev: kya baat hai Rahul...
Rahul: bhaiya aap... kuch kaam tha to mujhe bula liya hota..
Dev: nahi kaam to nahi...., bas u hi..
Rahul: u hi...(and he's still smiling)
Dev: itna muskura rahe ho.., kuch to baat hai...
Rahul: kuch bhi to nahi bhaiya... (while saying this he turns in the opposite direction) bas..aise hi..
Dev: nahi..aise hi to nahi...
Rahul: [turns towards him] wo sab chodo.. yeh batao ki aapki shaadi to love marriage hai na?
Dev: arranged love marriage..
Rahul: [confused] arranged love????
Dev: actually main aur Aarti pehle se hi ek dusre ko pasand karte the.., aur phir jab Papa ne pucha ki kya tum Aarti se shaadi karoge to maine
ha keh diya..
Rahul: oh..lucky you..
Dev: per aaj u ho kya gaya hai tumhe.., akele mein muskurate ho,yeh shaadi ki baat... kahi kuch.....
Rahul: oh..come on bhaiya...., main to bas aise hi puch raha hu.... waise bhi Papa ki permission ke bina iss ghar mien koi chote se chota kaam bhi nahi hota hai
to phir meri shaadi, wo bhi apni marzi se....... agar aisa hua to it'll be like a dream come true...
Surveen: to kya iska yeh matlab hua ki aapne pehle se hi koi ladki pasand ki hai?
Rahul: tum? tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?
Surveen: yeh mere sawaal ka jawab nahi tha bro..
Rahul: Surr.. hum to bas u hi baat kar rahe the,
Surveen: matlab pasand ki hai...
Rahul: Sur..
Surveen: Rahul bhaiya..
Rahul: Surr...
Surveen: Rahul bhaiya... ...
Dev: will u both please stop that now.... Sur chalo neeche, Rahul tum bhi aa jana..
Surveen: per bhaiya Rahul bhaiya ko jawaab to dene do...
Dev: Sur..chalo.. {he just pulls her out of the room}
Rahul: [to himself] yeh Sur bhi na... {looks into the mirror} kya wakaye mien pasand karli hai?
Tamanna: ahem ahem!!!
Rahul: are Tamanna... ander aao na..
Tamanna: kise pasand karli hai?
Rahul: kuch nahi main bas u hi...
Tamanna: Rahul tumhe apne aapse baat karne ki adat kabse hone lagi? tum pehle to aise naa the...
Rahul: zindagi mein bahot si cheeze pehli pehli baar hi hoti hai...
Tamanna: wow... well said ha.. kaha padha?
Rahul: padha nahi, yeh mera manna hai
Tamanna: Rahul tumhari tabiyat wakaye mien thik nahi hai... tum itni achi achi baatein kaise karne lage ho?
Rahul: [laughs] aur batao, sab kaise chal raha hai?
Tamanna: sab thik, waise main tumhare liye kuch gift layi hu...
Rahul: gift??? kis khushi mien?
Tamanna: Rahulll... maana ki tum hamesha mujhe tang karte ho, mere har kaam ko ulta karte ho, mujhse jhagadte rehte ho, per phir
bhi tum mere thooooode ache dost ho....
Rahul: [smiles] tarif ke liye shukriya madam...
Tamanna: tum kabhi nahi sudhronge na?
Rahul: Tamanna ...yaad hai na? Rahul kabhi nahi badalta..
Tamanna: [interrupts] ha ha..yaad hai... Rahul kabhi nahi badalta, log Rahul ke liye badal jaate hai... main bhi kaha tumhari baato mien ulajh gayi... yeh raha tumhara gift...
{hands him a small box}
Rahul: ismein kya hai?
Tamanna: time bomb
Rahul: oh wow! i just love time bombs! bas ek hi layi ho...?
Tamanna: Rahullll... kya tum ise normal insaan ki tarha kholke dekh nahi sakte?
Rahul: wo kya hai na jab hhi tumhare saath hota hu, to bas tumhara asar ho jata hai..
Tamanna: what do u mean main normal nahi hu?
Rahul: maine aisa kab kaha.., lekin agar tumhara aisa manna hai to aisa hi sahi....
Tamanna: fine then..tumhe dekhna hai to dekho.., warna ise phek do i dont care..main yaha se jaa rahi hu...
[Tamanna bas jane hi wali hoti hai ki Rahul uska haath pakad leta hai]
Rahul: i'm sorry.. main to bas mazak kar raha tha.. come on Tamanna.... acha kam se kam yeh gift to dekhne do...
[Tamanna ruk jaati hai per Rahul ki taraf dekhti nahi..., Rahul box open karta hai... ]
Rahul: wow, cool watch... waise tumhari taste kaafi achi hai..
[Tamanna just looks at him]
Rahul: sach... i really like it..
Tamanna: Rahul...you are most welcome...
Rahul: oh thanks!
Tamanna: mujhe laga ki kam se kam seedhe seedhe normal logo ki tarha tum mujhe thanks kahoge... per.. why do i always expect anything from you...
Rahul: ok ok ..th..thank...thank... nahi hota ... kal bol du?
Tamanna: god save me!
{saying this she just walks out of the room]
Rahul: are Tamanna suno to.... itne raat tum u akele kaha jaogi? kam se kam dinner karti jana...
[Tamanna gusse mein neeche jaati hai...]
Dev: kya hua? gusse mein kyun ho?
Surveen: Dev bhaiya.., Tamanna Rahul ke room se aa rahi hai to......
Tamanna: naam mat lo uska mere samne....
Lalit: are..yeh kya hamari beti naraz hai? [puts his hands on her shoulder]
Tamanna: dekho na uncle wo Rahul hamesha mujhe tang karta hai..
[Rahul comes downstairs]
Lalit: Rahul.... yeh hum kya sun rahe hai? aap hamari beti ko pareshan kar rahe hai....
Rahul: nahi..papa, wo bas... (looks at Tamanna)
Surveen: (interrupts) papa, ab aapko bhaiya se jo bhi kehna hai please dinner ke baad..,
Naina: ha, waise bhi kaafi raat ho chuki hai.., chaliye sab dinner tayyar hai...
(evryone have dinner and heads of to their respectives rooms)

Next day-
Raichand Mansion...........
(Rahul's room...., yaha Rahul kuch dhund raha hota hai, tabhi Surveen daudte hue ati hai)
Surveen: i knew it!
Rahul: what????
Surveen: bhaiya get ready fast, hume Aarti bhabhi ke ghar jana hai, abhi isi waqt
Rahul: abhi, per kyun?
Surveen: oh please bro ab yeh kyun, kaha , kisiliye jaise sawaal karna band kijiye.. aur mere sath chaliye..., kya pata raah mein koi
takra jaye.... ya kisi se mulaqat hi ho jaye....
Rahul: kya matlab? (but is still busy in his work)
Surveen: ufff!!!!!!! my sweet cute innocent brother, badi dadi abhi aaye aur unhone kuch gehne(jewellery) laye hai, Aarti bhabhi ke liye... aur wo chahte hai
ki unki hone wali bahu shaadi ke din yehi pehne... to mama ne mujhse kaha hai ki main yeh Aarti bhabhi ko de aao...
Rahul: oh... to thik hai , tum ho aao, mujhe kuch kaam hai
Surveen: well..., thik hai, phir main khud hi chali jaungi.... waise bhi waha Aarti bhabhi ke alawa unki kuch friends, Hiten aur......
anyways, aap busy ho to main Tamanna se puchti hu, uski bhabhi se bhi mulaqat ho jayegi.... u carry on with your work, main chalti u....
(Rahul is still busy with some file)
Rahul: hmm...
Surveen: waise waha bhabhi ke khass dost bhi honge.... anyways, byee....
(saying this Surveen walks out of the room.., & Rahul suddenly realises wat Surveen just said...)
Rahul: [to himself] bhabhi ke ghar, khass dost...iska matlab waha Rhea bhi..... hey Sur..., zara rukna main...abhi aaya...
(he quickly rushes out, whereas all this while Surveen was standing outside his room)
Surveen: ha main to yehi hu... per aap to busy hai na..
Rahul: ha, per .... maine mana bhi to nahi kiya na, kaam to baad mein bhi ho sakta hai.... Badi dadi apni hone wali bahu ke liye kuch lekar aaye hai, ise dene mein hume deri nahi karni chahiye..., chalo abhi chalte hai.....
Surveen: [laughs] u truely are my sweet cute innocent brother....
Rahul: so to main hu, ab chale.....
(both of them laugh and leave)

....... end of part 11..........
Comments awaited eagerly 😊

Coming up in next part- The grand wedding of Dev & Aarti... & much more 😉

Edited by starbellz_21 - 18 years ago

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