FF: Rajveer-Naina: TMB Thread Two *Epilogue* Pg 43 A/N Pg 44

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Kool11
Great story. Keep it up buddy.waiting egarly for next part.

Thank you so much! Updating 😊

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Akanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Raj felt bad dat naina thinks he got her to point 1857 because dey r married

He was kind of offended too. He wants her to understand that it's a lovers point nd they r not exactly lovers

Naina made fun of d NOT EXACTLY LOVERS by raj but seeing him still angry she tries to console him

She makes him realise dat she wud never have disagreed fir anything raj told her to do

Raj is really happy dat naina wore d hearings raj gave her as a gift

He is even scared of d thought dat naina wud live someone else nd this marriage is a compromise for her

He is too scared to even ask

Naina tries to coax him to speak up although she is slightly hurt dat raj wid think so about her

Great going dii

Finally dey r able to talk to each other normall h after d drastic change in their relationship

Hope this TALK makes dem all d more comfortable wid each other

Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Firstly sorry for late comment...was busy with the exams... Point 1857 was very beautifully shot in lrl...but I m more in love with ur point 1857 version 😊 ...beautifully written by u 😊 ...Raj n Naina both r attracted towards each other but not able to voice their feelings...luv the romantic tension b/w them 😉...Raj wants Naina to open with him n tell him how she feels...but she is too shy n naive in these matters..after all she is feeling these types of emotions for the first time...lets see more of point 1857 n how this lover point brings two lovers together 😊

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Vtak123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Jus luvd d way u write. U make d scene so realistic that it makes us imagine the whole scenario .u r an awsm writer to be honest i was urs silent reader but today when i read ur update i jus cant able stop myself to appreciate u. U r an amazing writer. Love d way u write '''''' hats off to u... M ur fan seriouslyyy yrr . Keep on updatingg and thanks for the pm 😊

Edited by Vtak123 - 9 years ago

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yoginisahakari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Mind blowing read last three parts in one go
Fantastic
Pl cont soon
Do pm me.
Love and prayer
Yogini

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Mrumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

Yeah at last... 😆
Thank you so much. Glad you are enjoying the mixture. 😳 More to come! 😳

Guilt nahi she is just trying to check - is he happy with their new relation or is he forced to accept it! 🤔

I really hope the same! 😳 And of course they need to realize that it is in no ways ANCHAHA relationship! 😊

Thank you so much! Will update soon 😊
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HE FORCED ??? 😆😆😆 seriously..? or she forced... ?? actually no one is forced.. i think both are equally happy in their mind...😳😳 and Ya.. they will soon realize that it is not anchaha rishta... as naina said.. bus kuch dino ki baat hai, dheere dheere sab thik ho jayega..😉

latest update is super.. he thinks ke there is might be someone in her life.. kaise captain sir? aapane kabhi apni cadet ko akela bhi choda hai..?😆😆

eagerly waiting update... Point 1857 aur kya jadoo karnewala hai??😊

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Sanchari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Great going.. Eagerly waiting for the next installment ! :)

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: agm1998
Raj felt bad dat naina thinks he got her to point 1857 because dey r married
He was kind of offended too. He wants her to understand that it's a lovers point nd they r not exactly lovers
Naina made fun of d NOT EXACTLY LOVERS by raj but seeing him still angry she tries to console him
She makes him realise dat she wud never have disagreed fir anything raj told her to do
Raj is really happy dat naina wore d hearings raj gave her as a gift
He is even scared of d thought dat naina wud live someone else nd this marriage is a compromise for her
He is too scared to even ask
Naina tries to coax him to speak up although she is slightly hurt dat raj wid think so about her
Great going dii
Finally dey r able to talk to each other normall h after d drastic change in their relationship
Hope this TALK makes dem all d more comfortable wid each other
Continue soon

Thank you sooo much 😳

Yeah at last they are talking 👏

They will surely get comfortable gradually 😳

Thank you so much for liking it!

Will continue soon. 😊

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias
Firstly sorry for late comment...was busy with the exams... Point 1857 was very beautifully shot in lrl...but I m more in love with ur point 1857 version 😊 ...beautifully written by u 😊 ...Raj n Naina both r attracted towards each other but not able to voice their feelings...luv the romantic tension b/w them 😉...Raj wants Naina to open with him n tell him how she feels...but she is too shy n naive in these matters..after all she is feeling these types of emotions for the first time...lets see more of point 1857 n how this lover point brings two lovers together 😊

No problem about the late comment. 😊

Hope your exams went good. 😊

Indeed it was an awesome shot of LRL! 👏

Thank you so much for liking it. 🤗

Yes they are proceeding gradually 😛

Glad you are loving the romantic tension 😳❤️

This feeling is new for her, she is adjusting. She still isn't used to the truth that she is his wife. 😳

And of course there is no one to tell her how she should act like a wife. She is so naive. 😳

Of course Rajveer is trying to help her to get accustomed to this new relationship although he himself is nervous about how to act in front of her. But come on being a man he needs to be bold at least when they are all alone. He needs to hear what she feels about the new change in their relationship 😳

You'll definitely witness more! 😳❤️

Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Vtak123
Jus luvd d way u write. U make d scene so realistic that it makes us imagine the whole scenario .u r an awsm writer to be honest i was urs silent reader but today when i read ur update i jus cant able stop myself to appreciate u. U r an amazing writer. Love d way u write '''''' hats off to u... M ur fan seriouslyyy yrr . Keep on updatingg and thanks for the pm 😊

Thank you so much for the compliment. 😳

I am glad to know that my scenes look realistic. Again thanks for the compliment 😳

Really? Now that's a surprise! I didn't know I have silent readers as well. Thank you for letting me know.👍🏼

Hahaha! Now your move describes perfectly of how much you liked the update! 😳❤️

Again thank you for the compliment! 😳❤️ It means a lot! 😊

A fan of mine? hahaha! I AM *BLUSHING* 😳 Thank you so much. 🤗

Will update soon! And PM you 😳

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