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Posted: 9 years ago
***Ek Ajnabi Rishta****



Part 2




Brig ke cabin se nikal ke jab wo wapas shalini ke pas ja rahe the tab Naveen ko apni jeep me kiye hua galat behavior yaad aata h ...



Naveen : (with guilty) wo m..guys sorry jis tarah maine tum dono se baat kiya mujhe nahi karna chaheye tha ...pata nahi kya ho gaya tha mujhe uss waqt...



Raj : its ok Naveen... Hum samjhte hai.. hume tere baat ka bura nahi laga yaar ...


Naveen : (smiling) thanks yaar




Abhimanyu : par apko hua kya tha humne phele kabhi apko ase nahi dekha



Naveen : pata nahi yaar ki mujhe kya hua tha bas uss ladki ko dekh kar mjhe mere gudiya yaad aa gayi...aaj agar wo mere pas hoti toh shayad iss ladki ki umar ki he hoti...pata nahi kyu ek khichaw sa mehsoos ho raha hai mujhe iss ladki ki taraf ...



Raj abhimanyu dono he Naveen ki dil ki uljhan ko samjhne ki koshish kar rahe the


Raj : (Naveen ke kandhe pe haath rakhte hue) par wo tere gudiya nahi hai Naveen samhal khud ko



Naveen : janta hu par mujhe wo apni gudiya se he lagi...



Abhimanyu : Naveen aap toh yeh bhi nahi jante ki wo zinda hai bhi ya nhi ...hume lagta hai shayad ab wo nahi rahi



Naveen : (angrily) aaj bol diya phir kabhi yeh baat mat kahna mere gudiya jaha bhi hogi thik hogi...



Raj : (baat samhalte hue) chalo chal kar phele uss ladki ko dekhte hai ...




Jab wo teeno wapas shalini ke pas jate hai ...shalini tab tak uss ladki ka treatment karke bahar aa chuki thi




Naveen : shalini wo ladki kasi hai... thik toh hai na wo ...



Shalini : (upset ) haa ab khatre se bahar hai ...khoon kafi bah gaya tha ...kal shubha tak usse hosh aa jayega



Abhimanyu : kya baat h shalini aap upset lag rahi hai



Shalini kuch bolti usse phele he pooja bol padi


Pooja : (angrily) sir wo ladki apko kaha mili ...us bechari ka yeh hal kisne kiya ...ek bar mujhe wo mil jaye na toh m unsab ke mobile me asa virus dalugi ki kabhi kuch karne ke layak nahi rahega...



Raj : cadet ghai aap please shant ho jayeyi ...hum kal baat kare gay iss bare me



Huda : par sir hume abhi jaana hai ...warna raat bhar iss jaat ko neend nahi aayegi




Naveen : thik hai chalo m btata hu sabko par yaha baat karna safe nahi hai agar major nair ne dekh liya toh problem ho jayegi tum sabko ...


Shalini : thik hai phir hum tumhare kamre me chalte hai...



Raj : par uss ladki ko yuh akela chodna thik hoga kya


Shalini : don't worry raj maine usse neend ka injection diya hai kal se phele wo nahi uthne wala



Phir sab naveen ke room me chale jate hai
Sab room me bathe hote hai aur pooja aur shalini sabke liye coffee bana kar late hai


Alekh : (making face ) apun ko yeh coffee nahi jamti... apun ke pas apun ki dawa hai


Naveen alekh ko ek sharp look deta hai aur wo chup chap coffee pene lagta h kyuki pure kma me alekh agar thoda bohat bhi kisi se darta hai toh wo sirf naveen hai ...



Alekh : (coffee pete hue) par ab apun ko yeh toh btao ki wo ladki kon hai



Abhimanyu : yeh toh hum bhi nahi jante ki wo kon hai kaha se aayi hai ...naam kya hai unka kuch bhi nahi ...



Yudi : what do u mean sir...apko kuch nahi pata uske bare me


Naveen : nahi kuch nahi jante hum uske bare me ...


Phir Naveen sabko us ladki ke bare me sab batata hai ki wo unhe kase mili...



Ali : yah allha...un bechari ke saath pata nahi kasa suluk kiya hoga un logo ne



Pooja : suluk ??? Wo log janwar the maine dekha h uss ladki ko bechari ka pura body zakhmo se bhari hue hai ...




Raj : shalini wo ladki thik toh hai na ...i mean kuch galat toh nahi hua hai na iske saath ...tum samjh rahi ho na m kya kah raha hu...



Shalini : haa raj m samjh rahi hu ki tum kya kah rahe ho... (Taking a deep breathe) galat nahi bohat zada galat hua hai uss bechari ke saath ...pata nahi usne ab tak survive kase kiya




Naveen : kya mtlab h tumhara shalini saaf saaf bolo...



Shalini : naveen bohat bura hua hai uske saath ...(taking deep breath)uska rape hua hai ...



Yeh baat sunn kar sab shocked ho jate hai ...

Naveen : (shocked) rape???...



Yeh word bolte hue bhi Naveen apne andar ek ajeeb sa dard mahsoos kar raha tha ...



Shalini : haa Naveen aur toh aur mjhe lagta hai ki jab wo ladki tum logo ko mile usse phele he uska rape hua hai ...may be aaj ... (kuch sochte hue)maine kuch test kare hai uske kal report aane ke baad he m kuch saaf saaf baata sakti hu ...abhi toh bas itna he kahugi bohat buri halat me hai wo ladki...



Abhimanyu : ho sakta hai asa hua ho ...apko yaad nahi raj kase wo gunde hume offer kar karhe the ...un logo ne kaha tha ki unhone uss ladki ko kharida hai ...


Naveen gusse me coffee ka cup zameen pe gusse se fakte hue ...


Naveen : (angrily) i don't believe this ...log kase itna ghatiya kaam kar sakte hai ...wo bechari bachi...i just hate this kind of peoples...


Yeh kah kar Naveen gusse me apne bed room me chala jata hai ...sab badi he harane se usse jate dekh rahe the


Shalini : Naveen ko kya hua...achanak se yuh..


Abhimanyu : achanak se nahi balki jab se hume wo ladki mili h tab se yeh asa he behave kar rahe hai ...



Alekh : kaiko ...sir jante hai kya usko...



Raj : nahi alekh Naveen usse janta nahi par ek lagaw sa mehsoos kar raha hai wo uss ladki ke saath ...usse apni gudiya dekhai de rahi hai uss ladki me...


Shalini : (shocked) gudiya ??? Naveen ko ladki uski gudiya lag rahi hai ...



Abhimanyu : lag nahi rahi bas unhe asa lag raha h ki agar aaj wo hoti toh us ladki ki umar ki he hoti...aap toh janti h na Naveen apni gudiya ko le kar kitne pareshan rahte hai...



Pooja : gudiya kon gudiya sir ...



Raj shalini aur abhimanyu teeno ek dosre ko dekh rahi the ki wo cadets ko Naveen ka beeta hua kal bataye ya nahi



Tabhi koi bolta hai


Gudiya mere behan...


Sab dekhte hai ki Naveen apne room se nikal ke wapas apni jagah aa kar bathta hai



Naveen : sorry shalini mujhe ase react nahi karna chaheyi tha...



Shalini : (smiling) koi baat nahi naveen i know tum kitne pareshan rahte ho apne gudiya ke bare me soch kar...



Yudi : sir apki koi behan bhi hai ...i mean mujhe jaha tak pata hai aapki family me koi nahi hai ...


Naveen apne dosto ki taraf dekhta hai ki wo apne cadets ko sach bataye ya nahi


Raj usse aakho he aakho me batane ka ishara karta hai ...



Naveen : (with tears) haa yeh sach hai ki mere family me koi nahi h maa papa ab rahe nahi aur behan wo hai ki nahi... pata nahi


Sab Naveen ko ek questionly look ke saath dekh rahe hote hai ...


Huda : mtlab hum kuch samjhe nahi sir...



Naveen : kya batau kaha se batana shuru karu kuch samjh he nahi aa raha ...



Alekh : aagar aapko sahi na lage toh rahne do sir apun log apko jor nahi de gay sach batane ke vaste


Naveen : nahi alekh asa baat nahi hai ...ab tum sab mere liye mere family ka hissa ho...tumhe pata hai alekh mere ek family thi choti se ...m bohat khush tha apni life me ...par kahte hai na jada khushiyo ko bhi kisi ki nazar lag jati hai humare saath bhi kuch asa he hua Baat tab ki hai jab m kareeb 12 saal ka tha ...mere behan mere gudiya 8 saal ki ...maa housewife thi aur papa jasa ki tum sab jante he ho wo bhi army me the major harsh singh ahluwaliya ...
Hum sab ki jaan basti thi mere gudiya me ghar me sabse choti aur sabse jada shatain ...pure ghar me bas uski aawaz gunzti rahti thi...(with smile) .papa unki toh jaan bas thi gudiya me ...aur shayad issi baat ka fayada uthaya un logone ...

papa bohat he imadar officer the ...papa kisi secret mission me kaam kar rahe the ...dusmano ko iss baat ki khabar lag gayi thi un logo ne papa se wo information nikalwane ke liye mere behan ko kidnap kar liya par papa apne farz ke aage apne rishto ko nahi aane diya aur kisi bhi tarah ka sauda karne se mana kar diya...agle he din mere behan ke kapde khoon me dube hue aaye.. ...(naveen yeh kah kar rone laga)



Sare cadets shocked ho kar Naveen ko dekh rahe the



Alekh : (with tears) phir kya hua sir...



Naveen : (controlling his emotions) hume laga ki ab gudiya nahi rahi aur papa ne pata karne ki bohat koshish ki par kuch pata nahi chala ...hume yeh sach maan liya ki ab wo zinda nahi hai ...par aj bhi mera dil kahta hai wo hai ...wo haa... Gudiya ke jane ka sadma maa bardash nahi kar saki wo papa se kuch kahti toh nahi thi par kahi na kahi wo papa ko doshi mane lagi thi ...sadme ki wazah se kuch he mahine baad maa bhi hum humesha ke liye chod kar chali gayi ...

Papa puri tarah tut gaye the wo mere behan aur maa ki maut ka zimedar khud ko thahrane lage...papa ne mujhe khud se dur kar diya yeh souch kar ke kahi mjhe bhi kuch hona jaye unki wazah se...m military boarding school me padne laga ...

Ase he waqt beetne laga 3 saal ho gay the uss hadse ko ab m 15 saal ka ho gaya tha par in 3 saalo me maine apne papa ko bas 3 bar he dekha wo bhi sirf isliye kyuki mere school ki chutiya hoti thi...warna papa shayad mjhse kabhi nahi milte...


Unhe apni zindagi bojh lagne lagi thi aur m chah kar bhi kuch nahi kar pa raha tha apne papa ke liye ...kash kash maine kuch kiya hota ...toh shayad papa aaj hote mere saath...



Phir ek din mjhe hostel me call aaya yeh batane ke liye ki ab m puri tarah akela ho chuka ho iss duniya me ...mere papa ek mission ke doran shahed ho gaye ...maine apne ek akhri sahara bhi kho diya


Yeh kah kar Naveen apne haatho me apna chahra chupa kar rone laga ...


Sabki aakho me aasu the Naveen ki kahani sunn kar itni kaam umar me itna kuch khoya tha usne ...



Shalini raj abhimanyu mil kar naveen ko samhalne ki koshish kar rahi the ...



Shalini : (crying) please naveen khud ko samhalo ...tum ase nahi tut sakte ...



Raj : (with tears) please Naveen hum sab tere saath hai tu akela nahi hai yaar ...agar tu ase tut jayega toh kase chalega ...



Abhimanyu : bilkul sahi kaha raj ne Naveen... Aap ase tut ke apne maa papa ki qurbani ko zaya nahi kar aakte ...yeh unke balidan ki bezzati hoti ...please dost chup ho jaeyi...



Naveen : (with determination) sahi kaha tune m mere maa papa ko yuh nirash nahi kar sakta ...m ab nahi royuga ...


Phir sab thori der baad aapne aapne kamro me chale jate hai...


Next morning ...



End of part 3


happy holi everyone
...i knw i knw thoda boring part hai but story line ki jarurat h yeh hope u guys understand


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Edited by RNforever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
👍🏼 lovelyyy update.. Love the concept specially the way emotionssa have been describee. Waoo yr idea kha sai aata h tumhe. Really nyc oneee 🤗 ... Amazinggg writer yrrr i wish dubara khuch aisa concept jisme raj-naina ka character ho . U hv made my day from ur update tganksss yr nd thanks for d pm. Plz update the next part soon reaally cant wait ...
Edited by Vtak123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved the part
Very emotional and touchy
Oh god Naina has been raped
I am feeling really bad for naveen and naina
They have gone through so much
I hope the happiness in their life will come soon
Awesome update
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesum n emotional update
plz cont soin
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
feeling so sad..
Mjhey Rape naam se ajeeb si bechaini hojati hai.. Allah reham..
Bt ye hmarey samaj ki sachai hai jisey hum jutla nahi saktey..
Hoping wo ladki Naveen ki behen na ho... If ho.. Toh Naina na ho.. Mai bardasht nahi kr pawongi phir..

Navin's past horrible.. Bt his faher true patriotic.. Bas Maa ki sonh ne sbki zindagi khtm kr di..

Tk cr..
Lots of Love..

Update next asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...feeling so sad for Naveen n Naina...n especially Naina...she has to go through lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb
Naveen went through a lot
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update...,the girl was raped now i dont want her to be naina plz plz dont let her be naina
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kya story write ki hai buddy.its different.waiting for next part is not possible.update soon.please hope this raped girl is not naina
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was such an emotional update 😭
Naina was raped😲😭
Naveen had such a sad past😭
Plz put romance in it soon😊
I really like d way u shaped the story

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