***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread

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KnowItAllSwot

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

amazing part..!
just loved it...
got emotional while reading this..!!
plz continue soon & thanks for the PM..!

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kajalkalwani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Amazing update. Felt bad for naveen

Naina is gone thru soo much

Alekh scared of naveen hahaha

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Arti Bhardwaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Very sad and emotional update...

Rape, it's horrible... I can't imagine day girl to be Naina now, but however how much difficult it is to accept, somewhere I know she is Naina only, Naveen's gudiya...

Kitna saha hai bechari ne...

And Naveen to suffered... He lost his family...😭

Day Abhimanyu is mad, don't know what to say and when... I never liked his character, in ur fic also I don't like him...

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yoginisahakari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Amazing update

No words to express

Pl cont soon

Do PM me

Love and prayer
Yogini

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

First of all,Happy Holi..Dear.🥳

It was so sad and Emotional Part.😭

It was so sad to hear about Naina...😭

The Whole and Situation is Heart-touching..😭 .

I hope everything will be fine soon..😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

Edited by PriyaCherry - 9 years ago

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kiran

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

oye itna chotu part ...not fair yrrr ...aur abhi suspence khatam bhi kr do ...i think vo ladki naina hi hai ...meri naina ke sath rape ...god aisa mat krna ..jldi update kro abhi

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anjali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Soo sensitive update .. filled with emotion.. U express each and every word soo well .. Loved it.. plzz update next part soon

And Happy holi.

Anjali

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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Vtak123
👍🏼 lovelyyy update.. Love the concept specially the way emotionssa have been describee. Waoo yr idea kha sai aata h tumhe. Really nyc oneee 🤗 ... Amazinggg writer yrrr i wish dubara khuch aisa concept jisme raj-naina ka character ho . U hv made my day from ur update tganksss yr nd thanks for d pm. Plz update the next part soon reaally cant wait ...

thanks dear 😃
i was sacred mjhe laga pasand nhi aauega but u liked it thank u
if u want ..i can give u the link of my other fic ..wo bhi raj naina pe he based h

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1069050

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

oh no..this girl has been raped😭

naveen's past is so horrible..senti kr diya yar😔

i wish rape na hua ho..bs koshish hui ho rape ki bcs naveen bardasht ni kr payega ye sb agr wo uski gudiya hui to..naveen ne waise hi itna kuch dekha h life me..

pls update soon..is bar jyada wait mat krwana

Edited by anju_panghal - 9 years ago

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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: vssdp
I loved the part
Very emotional and touchy
Oh god Naina has been raped
I am feeling really bad for naveen and naina
They have gone through so much
I hope the happiness in their life will come soon
Awesome update
Continue soon and thanks for the pm

thanks buddy 😃
well don't worry abhi yeh conform nhi h ki wo naina h bhi ya nhi ...so tension mat lo abhi
jab dard had se aage badh jata h samjhlo khushiya darwaze pe dastak dene wali h..