AN ARSHI OS ||A MENDED PROMISE|| - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really liked it... You should turn this into an SS or something, you know... A little complexity to this tale will make it a mind blowing.. But I loved the fact that instead of sitting and grovelling, Khushi moved to Mumbai and made a life of her own... Even tried a relationship.. But she really should have punished Arnav hm
It kind of reminded me of something I'm currently writing... The part where they loose touch when Arnav leaves for Harvard... But it's very different from this story...
I like the title.. I usually have trouble with titles.. 😆
And even I'm new here... Some things are really confusing about IF, aren't they?? Hehe.. We're sailing in the same boat..😉
I'd love to read more of yours..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: PhoenixKhushi

Really liked it... You should turn this into an SS or something, you know... A little complexity to this tale will make it a mind blowing.. But I loved the fact that instead of sitting and grovelling, Khushi moved to Mumbai and made a life of her own... Even tried a relationship.. But she really should have punished Arnav hm

It kind of reminded me of something I'm currently writing... The part where they loose touch when Arnav leaves for Harvard... But it's very different from this story...
I like the title.. I usually have trouble with titles.. 😆
And even I'm new here... Some things are really confusing about IF, aren't they?? Hehe.. We're sailing in the same boat..😉
I'd love to read more of yours..

Thank you for such a lovely comment!
And i am yet to learn.somethings About I.F😆
Thanks for loving the title as well😃
PM me when you update!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Avidreader1997

Thank you for such a lovely comment!

And i am yet to learn.somethings About I.F😆
Thanks for loving the title as well😃
PM me when you update!!


Update.. Hehe.. I'll have to decide on the title first...😵
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Nice update
Looking forward from u for more work on arshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: PhoenixKhushi


Update.. Hehe.. I'll have to decide on the title first...😵

Ohh😆The moment you decide ,send me!would love to read your thoughts😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: EchTee

Nice update
Looking forward from u for more work on arshi

Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
One of the most awesome os i have read!It's heart touching,definitely arnav should have struggled more,but since its an os i will forgive you😆
Please continue writing😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Avidreader1997

Ohh😆The moment you decide ,send me!would love to read your thoughts😃

Oh, you bet I'll send you...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: PhoenixKhushi

Oh, you bet I'll send you...😉

😃

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