SS : Rajveer-Naina Point 1857!*EPILOGUE* Pg 32; A/N Pg38

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Misha (Sumitra)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Rajveer's confusion is so clear, and legit.

I honest feel for him.

Anyways i loved the ud

Do PM me

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Wowooo awesome superb update plz cont soon thanks for pm😃😃😃

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Mrumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

POINT 1857.. I just love that place.. really don't know that is any point 1857 exists on earth or not but for me it is... and for me.. they did much injustice with that place and of course with our lovely pair.. they can do a lot more in that particular sequence.. but i guess they already had preferred to edit and delete some scenes...😡😡

Let it be... now its almost 9 years i guess... but today also this scene is as fresh and as lovely and as adorable as then... thanks for writing SS on that particular scene..

Thanks for PM..

Update soon..😊😊

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Turning to look at her, with a smile on his face, his hands tucked inside his jeans' pockets, he says, "Naina, main kon hun?" Surprised to hear his sudden question, Naina keeps staring him for sometime, then asks, "kon hain matlab? Aap mere mentor hain!" she answers her own question, while Rajveer keeps looking at her.

Realizing that she won't understand, or will pretend to be not understanding, he shakes his head and says, "rehne do, kuch aur baat karte hain".

He keeps walking along with her, turning to the left and entering a narrow lane, covered with trees from either side. As they cover a little distance, suddenly Naina starts to feel cold. She gets a bit closer to Rajveer and keeps rubbing her hands together, which makes her bangles to chime.

Realizing that she is feeling cold, Rajveer tries to get more closer to her as a gesture to indicate her that she can hold him, it can help her to make her feel cozy and comfortable.

Realizing what he is indicating towards silently, Naina entangles her arms with his, in the process, pulling him a little closer to her.

Walking silently for another few minutes, enjoying each other's presence and touch, Naina says, almost like a whisper, as if not sure whether he would like to listen to her or not, scared that he might get angry, "Aap jante hain na main apki kitni respect karti hun? Aap Bhaiya ke friend hain, mere mentor hain..." Unable to bear it anymore, he raises his voice, "Naina...", shutting his eyes during the process.

Realizing that he is angry, understanding exactly why, Naina tightens the hold on his arm, as a gesture of seeking apologies. Realizing that she has tightened the hold, Rajveer looks at her, they both keep staring each other.

(Rajveer-Naina tune begins in the background)

Soon they reach 'Point 1857'. As soon as Naina witnesses her surrounding, the only thing that comes out of her mouth is, "Wow!" followed by, "to ye hai Point 1857!" She starts breathing in and out, in quick succession. Her face brightens with joy. She fails to say anything further out of too much happiness. "This is just beautiful!", as soon as she says this, Rajveer exhales the air he had been holding in his lungs all this time, realizing the fact just now. Sighing, he smiles. Feeling something beyond happiness at realizing that she liked the place. As if he was nervous, how she'll like it?

Leaving his hand, she moves ahead enjoying, witnessing the scenario. An empty land, stretched to almost an infinite length. A very calm and serene place. Nothing catchy except the innumerable white flags standing erect on the either side of this lonely land, but this is what is the beauty of this place. Away from all hustle-bustle of the life, one can spend few moments of calmness here. A simple yet beautiful place.

Walking leisurely towards her, while she is standing ahead of him, at a distance taking in and feeling the scenario in front of her eyes. Her eyes and the grand smile on her lips reflecting her happiness. He reaches her, "Haan! Lo, jis cheez ke liye tum itne dino se mujhey...", then eying her, mischievously, he continues, emphasizing on his next word, "pareshaan, kar rahi thi, aa gaye hum uss jagah", then smiles a little.

He waits for her to reply, when she doesn't say anything and keeps enjoying the scenario in front of her eyes, Rajveer pokes her by saying in a low tone, "kuch bologi nahi?"

"Samjh nahi aa raha" she replies, slowly, not rushing her words. "Kya?" asks Rajveer, almost like a whisper, unable to understand what does she mean. She takes time to reply, mesmerized by the view, "aap pe gussa hun, ya apko thank you kahun!" Smiling, he replies, "Gussa? Thank you? Kis liye?" Turning to look at him, faking her anger she answers him, "Gussa isliye, kyunki aap itne time se avoid kar rahe the, mujhey yahan lana". Then smiling she says, "Thank you isliye ki zabardasti ya majburi mein hi sahi, aap at last mujhey yahan le aaye". They both keep staring each other.

(Slow Rajveer-Naina flute tune begins in the background)

"Naina..."starts Rajveer, only to be interrupted by Naina, "Waise I was just wondering, since main apka nature thoda-bohot janti hun..." then she looks straight into his eyes, with a naughty smile on her lips, "And then I can see this place indeed has some specialty. Now I guess I can understand ki aap mujhey yahan kyun nahi lana chahte the!", they keep staring each other. (Rajveer-Naina tune begins in the background)

Listening to her comment, Rajveer continues to look straight to look straight into her eyes, all serious, with no humor in his voice, his voice - earnest, "agar main tumhe such bata deta, to kya tum aati mere saath yahan?" He needs an answer today, he won't let her drop this conversation just like that.

It's happening at last and he is able to feel it, able to understand it, it's happening, what he had been avoiding, the reason why he didn't want to visit Point 1857 with her. He is losing it, his strength to hide his feelings from her. He knows it, but he can't do it anymore, he can't hide his feelings anymore. He somehow knows that she feels the same for him. But this can't go long, she needs to word her feelings in front of him. He knows this is the right moment.

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago

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Sakhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Good OS.

Liked it... Really in the serial also Rajveer should have said his feelings to Naina when he visited point 1857... I hope in your OS this thing will happen... Liked your this new story...

A thought for all RN fans: Don't you think that Sony should start with season 3 for LRL having a good love story of our RN...

I already wrote a mail to sony feedback mail... why don't you guys also write such mail to sony tv...

Sakhi

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sakha_sakhi
Good OS.
Liked it... Really in the serial also Rajveer should have said his feelings to Naina when he visited point 1857... I hope in your OS this thing will happen... Liked your this new story...

A thought for all RN fans: Don't you think that Sony should start with season 3 for LRL having a good love story of our RN...

I already wrote a mail to sony feedback mail... why don't you guys also write such mail to sony tv...

Sakhi

Don't even start with this topic or else I'll get emotional all over again 😭 you should checkout my Instagram account, my comments there then you'll come to know how mad I am after LRL, can't even begin to describe my feelings on RAJVEER-NAINA n how much I want a new season of LRL with Rajveer-Naina storyline, continuing from where they left! 😭

P.S. thank you so much for liking the story! 😳

Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago

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Mrumi

@Mrumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

Don't even start with this topic or else I'll get emotional all over again 😭 you should checkout my Instagram account, my comments there then you'll come to know how mad I am after LRL, can't even begin to describe my feelings on RAJVEER-NAINA n how much I want a new season of LRL with Rajveer-Naina storyline, continuing from where they left! 😭

P.S. thank you so much for liking the story! 😳
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It turns in like big movement now and everyone want #lrl season 3 with original cast... many groups on facebook and twitter like lrl fan club are trying for that.. they are writing mails, twits..many polls also there.. but no reply.. *sigh*.. they are not ready to start rerun also on sony pal which they abruptly stop running... when sony pal started vote session for lrl rerun there were only 14 people who actually vote so they dropped the idea again...😭😭 even fans are writing and requesting to Rajeev also on his personal blog.. but i guess its our bad luck only.. 😭😭😭

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Mrumi

Frankly I don't want a rerun. I know they were telecasting it on Sony Pal. I want a new season I don't know why is it that difficult or impossible for them to do it? Can't they see I mean the producers n Rajeev as well that how desperate we all are? I believe suddenly after all these years everyone is again hoping for a new season of LRL. I just wish our wish turns true soon! People on twitter can also ask him to return back on Rajeev's personal account!

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Mrumi

@Mrumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

We all want same thing.. we all have already asked him but he never replied about it... we also have asked for finite series only to complete RN story or the same festive series like Iss pyar ko kya nam doon season 1... but no answer from SONY.. you should visit all LRL group especially closed one so you come to know how harder we are trying for sequel with original cast.. but nothing worked out yet and sorry to say but now i don't have any hope...😭😭😭