SS : Rajveer-Naina Point 1857!*EPILOGUE* Pg 32; A/N Pg38

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

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RNpoint1857

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Lowering her eyes, she turns away from him, unable to bear his scrutinizing look. "Hmm?" he asks again. Taking a deep breath, relaxing her throbbing nerves, she replies, "kya maine aaj tak apki koi baat se inkaar kia hai?" Her reply doesn't satisfy him, rather irks him. "To tum yahan bus isliye aati, kyunki main tumhe kehta? Orders follow karti mere?", his voice reflects how displease he is, hearing her words. But it makes Naina to blush. She relaxes her facial muscles, fully aware that Rajveer is standing behind her and can anytime end up standing in front of her, without any warning, forcing her to look at him.

But to her surprise he doesn't do anything like that. Then she remembers, he is very patient by nature. And it's as if Rajveer has read her mind too well, he says, "Naina main janta hun ki academy mein main kabhi react nahi karta, well tab tak jab tak ki baat bohot serious na ho jaye. But frankly when it comes to personal stuffs, I am not at all a patient man..."

Personal? That means he won't share of having visited this place with Naina, with anyone? Why? That means they are meant to keep this visit a 'secret'? This thought makes her to shiver. Henceforth, apart from the fact that she is Naveen's sister, she has another secret to keep all by herself, well not exactly by herself, Rajveer and Naina are going to share another secret! But why is this thought of having another common secret making her heart to beat faster, at a different pace? After all it's nothing but another secret. Or is this secret precious to her?

"Humein yahan aise nahi aana chahiye tha!", she says, almost like a whisper, shutting her eyes tightly, not at all ready to face his anger.

But angry is what he is right now. Taking a deep breath, he holds her wrist tightly, making her bangles to shift back, in the process, chiming. Briefly he allows himself to accept that he likes to hear the chiming of her bangles. But no, he won't let this feeling overpower his anger.

"Aap please gussa mat hoyiye!" she pleads, creasing her brows, suddenly terrified, thinking what he'll do next. Rajveer halts his proceeding steps, but doesn't let go of her hand, as yet. Turning to look at her, his prior fury relaxed a little, but not completely, "Naina tumhe kya lagta hai, kya mujhey nahi pata ki humein kab kahan hona chahiye, kahan nahi?" he asks and wait for an answer, whereas he somehow knew she won't answer out of shyness and nervousness. Lowering her head, out of sheer shyness, she nods it a little, accepting his words without any question.

Realizing that she wasn't totally against being here with him, Rajveer relaxes and smiles at her innocence. As a gesture of apology for his prior behavior, he grabs her hand and says, "chalo main tumhe ek cheez dikhata hun!", and takes her to a pillar. "Ye kya hai?", she asks innocently, admiring the beauty of the pillar in front of her eyes, with a smile on her face.

"Naina ye hai 'wishing pillar'. Ye bhi ek reason tha cadets ke yahan aane ka", he informs her, gazing at the pillar, admiring it's beauty. Smiling, Naina asks, "kya such mein yahan mangi gayi wish puri hoti hai?" Lowering his eyes, Rajveer smiles too, "Naina main ye nahi janta ki yahan mangi hui wish puri hoti hai ya nahi", then blushing further, he continues, "kyunki main... main yahan pehle kabhi aya nahi so...", he raises his shoulders, as a gesture that he doesn't know if it really turns true or not, what one prays here. Then he looks at her, who is smiling, her eyes twinkling because of him admitting the truth that he hasn't been here before today. It makes her heart to swell.

In an effort to end this awkward conversation, Rajveer clears his throat and asks "tum kuch mangna chahogi?" Naina nods in answer. "Come!" saying this he gets on his knees and folds his hands to pray, expecting her to follow the suit.

(Rajveer-Naina slow guitar tune begins in the background)

But when he notices that she is still standing next to him, Rajveer looks up at her and gestures her to get down on her knees, next to him. The blowing wind messes with her hair and duppatta, meanwhile Rajveer prays.

As he ends up praying, he realizes that Naina is still standing next to him and staring him. He looks up at her, her eyes glued to him, smile on her lips. She asks innocently, "kya manga?" "Naina wish humesha mangne wale aur dene wale ke beech mein rehni chahiye!" Then creasing his brows out of surprise, he asks, "tumne kuch nahi manga?" Listening to him, Naina turns her face towards the pillar, folding her hands and closing her eyes, she takes her own sweet time to pray.

(Rajveer-Naina slow guitar tune continues in the background)

Meanwhile Rajveer keeps staring her for sometime with a smile on his lips. Then getting up silently, he walks towards a nearby pillar. Resting his right forearm on the pillar, and his left hand tucked inside his jeans' pocket, Rajveer turns to stare her praying, his expressions all serious.

He admires her features silently, her beautiful long hair, in the current messed-up state is making her look even more beautiful. The space between her eyebrows, where he most of the time sees creases, are crease less today. Seeing it that way, he feels relaxed and joyful. Happy, on realizing that it's on his account.

Her closed eyes, he imagines what's hidden there - her beautiful eyes, which he somehow knows always search him when he is not around. Her eyes which shy to meet his eyes, even though he waits for the situation to occur each day, at least for once. She knows it, she understands it very well, yet she tries to avoid it. She tries to show that she is oblivious to what he wants.

Smiling at his thought, Rajveer thinks further, how can he make her understand, how much he craves for it! Is he asking so much? Is it that difficult for her to give him satisfaction of a simple and innocent eye lock?

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago

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RNlove4life

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

why do you have to do this, di???

Rajveer cannot be so much angry on his naina, atleast not so many times in one night! and that too on point 1857...

anyway i love reading your story always, please continue soon!😆

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: RNlove4life
why do you have to do this, di???
Rajveer cannot be so much angry on his naina, atleast not so many times in one night! and that too on point 1857...
anyway i love reading your story always, please continue soon!😆

Ohoo ye konsa 'wo' wala gussa hai ye to 'WO' wala gussa hai, samjho! 😉 Aur waise bhi raat abhi khatam kahan hui hai? 😉 Raat abhi baki hai mere dost! 😛 Raat baki, baat baki hona hai jo ho janey do! 😆😛 Glad you are liking the story, will update soon. 😊

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Sorry to intrude in your conversation, but I like all the shows done by Rajeev Khandelwal. Whether as Sujal, Rajveer or Kabir. And I love the justice he did to all the roles. But, still I love the jodi of Sujal-Kashish the best. ( pls no offence to RN and kaya lovers). The love sujal had for kashish through out the show was amazing!!. How he couldn't bear tears in her eyes and loved her selflessly was something that made me fan of him as sujal and also his jodi. I think that rajeev and aamna's on-screen chemistry was great because of their off-screen chemistry at some point of time. ( if rumours are to be beleived)

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Acad10
Sorry to intrude in your conversation, but I like all the shows done by Rajeev Khandelwal. Whether as Sujal, Rajveer or Kabir. And I love the justice he did to all the roles. But, still I love the jodi of Sujal-Kashish the best. ( pls no offence to RN and kaya lovers). The love sujal had for kashish through out the show was amazing!!. How he couldn't bear tears in her eyes and loved her selflessly was something that made me fan of him as sujal and also his jodi. I think that rajeev and aamna's on-screen chemistry was great because of their off-screen chemistry at some point of time. ( if rumours are to be beleived)

Frankly you don't know how much I love Rajeev-Aamna together. That's the reason I never use Rajeev's name with his other co-stars instead I use the character names like Rajveer-Naina rather than Rajeev-Priyanka. I don't even like it when they say Rajeev-Priyanka look so good together or Rajeev-Kritika what so ever. No, it's not Rajeev-Priyanka it's Rajveer-Naina who look good together 😊 or Kabeer-Ananya who look good together!

You know I was never mad after movie pairs like SRK-Kajol. Well I do like them together in any movie but I was never mad after them, but Rajeev-Aamna, the moment I saw them together for the first time I fell in love with them so easily. I have read almost all articles regarding Rajeev-Aamna. 😳 If I had been this active on IF during the days of KTH you would have known how much I love them together.

Just to share a secret, I wrote more than 100 lyrics on the song 'thodasa pyar hua hai' imagining scenes between Sujal-Kashish, during the days of KTH. in fact KTH is the sole reason that I ever started creating stories. If not penning it down but I certainly used to make stories in my mind n used to entact too! 😳 It's such a relief having shared it at last with you all after so so so many years. 😳

Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

Frankly you don't know how much I love Rajeev-Aamna together. That's the reason I never use Rajeev's name with his other co-stars instead I use the character names like Rajveer-Naina rather than Rajeev-Priyanka. I don't even like it when they say Rajeev-Priyanka look so good together or Rajeev-Kritika what so ever. No, it's not Rajeev-Priyanka it's Rajveer-Naina who look good together 😊 or Kabeer-Ananya who look good together!

You know I was never mad after movie pairs like SRK-Kajol. Well I do like them together in any movie but I was never mad after them, but Rajeev-Aamna, the moment I saw them together for the first time I fell in love with them so easily. I have read almost all articles regarding Rajeev-Aamna. 😳 If I had been this active on IF during the days of KTH you would have known how much I love them together.

Just to share a secret, I wrote more than 100 lyrics on the song 'thodasa pyar hua hai' imagining scenes between Sujal-Kashish, during the days of KTH. in fact KTH is the sole reason that I ever started creating stories. If not penning it down but I certainly used to make stories in my mind n used to entact too! 😳 It's such a relief having shared it at last with you all after so so so many years. 😳

Thank you, for considering me, for sharing your thoughts on Rajeev-Aamna. I too wish that i were a member on IF during the days of kth. But unfotunately, I was a child then. Only 4 or 5 years old and didn't even know to start a computer😆😆😆 and now kth forum is closed. People hardly discuss about SK evergreen jodi.😭😭.This actually saddens me a lot.😕😕

I used to watch kth with my mother and literally had cried when sujal had died.( as told by my mother)

Last year, i watched all the episodes of kth on youtube as I couldn't remember everything in detail. Thanks to the fanfictions, which actually help crazy SK lovers like me and you to relive those moments...

Edited by Acad10 - 9 years ago

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Acad10

Thank you, for considering me, for sharing your thoughts on Rajeev-Aamna. I too wish that i were a member on IF during the days of kth. But unfotunately, I was a child then. Only 4 or 5 years old and didn't even know to start a computer😆😆😆 and now kth forum is closed. People hardly discuss about SK evergreen jodi.😭😭.This actually saddens me a lot.😕😕
I used to watch kth with my mother and literally had cried when sujal had died.( as told by my mother)
Last year, i watched all the episodes of kth on youtube as I couldn't remember everything in detail. Thanks to the fanfictions, which actually help crazy SK lovers like me and you to relive those moments...

If you are on Instagram search 'rajeevakarajveer' you'll get a glimpse of my madness 😆 Well frankly I was also a child during the days of KTH 😆 Yet till date no one could shake my feelings for Rajeev-Aamna, it's still intact! 😊

P.S. I guess I watched KTH all over again last to last year 😳

Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

If you are on Instagram search 'rajeevakarajveer' you'll get a glimpse of my madness 😆 Well frankly I was also a child during the days of KTH 😆 Yet till date no one could shake my feelings for Rajeev-Aamna, it's still intact! 😊

P.S. I guess I watched KTH all over again last to last year 😳

Again unfortunately, I am not on Instagram. And I am pretty sure that there are many hidden SK lovers among us but they aren't visible. The magic SK created is so strong that it would take long long long years for us to come out of the spell. Have you written any fanfic on SK, just as you write on RN? If yes, please tell me the name of your fanfic, I would love to read it.