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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: ArshiSP

But whooo???

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@Sujz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: ColorDreams

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You mean this thread????

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not.here

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Hiya

I'm trying to edit my work and rewrote the summary / synopsis. I would be very grateful if anyone could give me some feedback on what I have so far. I felt that a second one is in order as I begin my editing process and needed something more detailed than I had before.

Thank you very much!

Arya

Oh and here it is below

Blood is thicker than water right? So how are Preeti, Gauri and Meera Chauhan even a family?

Family always comes first no? Then why is Jai Mehta waging a war against his own father?

And if love conquers all, will it stop Arun's vengeful crusade or destroy all that is in his way?

Amidst a modern society lies powerful immutable emotions wielded by strong but scarred souls. Each in search of what their heart desires. Each entangled in another's game. Unconditional love, unbreakable friendship and unlikely families stand against ruthless vengeance , deep seated prejudice and relentless megalomania.

Three adopted sisters, several quirky families and one unusual extra credit projects sees Diwali approaching , past demons rising and bonds being tested. With the blossom of first love, the fervour of kindled passions and the threat of nocuous obsessions ; one question remains. What really bonds hearts together and what will tear them apart?

Edited by Cortana - 8 years ago

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JungleeBilli

@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: Cortana
Hiya

I'm trying to edit my work and rewrote the summary / synopsis. I would be very grateful if anyone could give me some feedback on what I have so far. I felt that a second one is in order as I begin my editing process and needed something more detailed than I had before.

Thank you very much!

Arya

Oh and here it is below

Blood is thicker than water right? So how are Preeti, Gauri and Meera Chauhan even a family?
Family always comes first no? Then why is Jai Mehta waging a war against his own father?
And if love conquers all, will it stop Arun's vengeful crusade or destroy all that is in his way?

Amidst a modern society lies powerful immutable emotions wielded by strong but scarred souls. Each in search of what their heart desires. Each entangled in another's game. Unconditional love, unbreakable friendship and unlikely families stand against ruthless vengeance , deep seated prejudice and relentless megalomania.

Three adopted sisters, several quirky families and one unusual extra credit projects sees Diwali approaching , past demons rising and bonds being tested. With the blossom of first love, the fervour of kindled passions and the threat of nocuous obsessions ; one question remains. What really bonds hearts together and what will tear them apart?

As a reader the summary is enough to make me curious and read it😛 probably Chuck out the second paragraph "amidst a modern society" or keep the first line and then add the last paragraph after this.

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not.here

@not.here

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: .Avengers.
As a reader the summary is enough to make me curious and read it😛 probably Chuck out the second paragraph "amidst a modern society" or keep the first line and then add the last paragraph after this.

Thank you 😃

I really appreciate the feedback and I feel the same about that part. They didn't go together as well as intentioned.

You're always welcome to read. Would love to hear what you think.

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@Sujz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

I want to promote my FF Toota Dil (Arnav & Khushi) !!! Can anyone help me?

TOOTA DIL

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: ColorDreams
What is "just engaged" date?

please help me I have to write an OS on this theme

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not.here

@not.here

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: ColorDreams

please help me I have to write an OS on this theme

To me is sounds like a date for two engaged people. So a woman and her fiance who go on a date after being engaged.

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not.here

@not.here

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: ArshiSP
I want to promote my FF Toota Dil (Arnav & Khushi) !!! Can anyone help me?
TOOTA DIL

ArShi fictions have a lot of active readers so it will take time but you'll find them. Try to post it in the ipkknd forum as well so ArShi readers know about it. If you have any writer friends here see if they can send a pm to their readers to check out yours. Also put this link in your signature box with an indication it is an ArShi fiction. Keep it updated regularly and make sure you complete it too. You could also connect with other writers and readers on social media and other forums so that it gets more recognition. I don't have many readers otherwise I would suggest to them.

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@Sujz

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: Cortana

ArShi fictions have a lot of active readers so it will take time but you'll find them. Try to post it in the ipkknd forum as well so ArShi readers know about it. If you have any writer friends here see if they can send a pm to their readers to check out yours. Also put this link in your signature box with an indication it is an ArShi fiction. Keep it updated regularly and make sure you complete it too. You could also connect with other writers and readers on social media and other forums so that it gets more recognition. I don't have many readers otherwise I would suggest to them.

i do not have any IF buddies like that!

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