Does Dreams Ever Come True FF Epilogue pg 58 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update !!!!!!
Eagerly waiting for next part...
Do update soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annei123

Amazing update !!!!!!

Eagerly waiting for next part...
Do update soon 😃


thanks annei😊
i will try to post it soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written...everything has blended very well...you have a good flair for writing. Keep it up.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugunmanas



No i have never been to Pune. Its that I researched a bit about it
only one common thing is i really have a aunt in Pune.😉 everything is ficticious apart from that😃😃😃
They live in Blue Ridge Township Hinjewadi Pune. i just changed the name to Green valley township
So i know it thats it. I thought of taking Mumbai but it will be so common.
I wanted something natural plesant and away from city traffic location
You may not find Pune so beautiful but its just i imagined😉
thanks Anushka😊


OH OK, Actually i asked you this que. of living in Pune as i live there only and Pune is not that traffic station like Mumbai but is good and you can imagine it beautiful as it is in Real.
My father works in hinjewadi so i have visited that place quite sometimes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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stay tuned all Laksh and Urmi lovers
will post their confession part with in 20 min
Its almost done😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Choclate...


OH OK, Actually i asked you this que. of living in Pune as i live there only and Pune is not that traffic station like Mumbai but is good and you can imagine it beautiful as it is in Real.
My father works in hinjewadi so i have visited that place quite sometimes.


BTW, Read your 5 chapter.
Loved it to core. Dheere Dheere se hi sahi par Maithli aur Ram & Laksh aur Urmi ke beech jo pyaar ho raha hai, Acchi baat hai.
waise i want more of maithli and ram romance...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update...I could visualise everything. Pics adding is cherry on cake
Keep writing


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update yr...i could visualise every scene.
U r describing everything so somewhere I can connect myself vd it

Well done
Keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART SIX

DOES DREAMS EVER COME TRUE

At Lonawala everyone after the waterfall go for trekking. Urmi feels very uncomfortable. Till now she enjoyed the beauty of Lonawala but now she is no mood to talk to anyone. Every one tried to cheer her up but she is battling her own mental tussle. Laksh don't understand the reason for her frustration. She did not talk to him nor shared a eye contact. She is completely avoiding him. Even Laksh got irritated with her behaviour. While trekking Urmi slipped but Laksh saves her from fall. She is now more irritated. What the hell Laksh, why did you help me??? I can take care of myself and don't need you. Why don't you get out of my mind???

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trekking spot:

Urmi runs far away and cries her heart out:

All others are shocked with her behaviour. They ask her why is she over reacting in such a extreme manner. She says sorry and leaves the place. She really felt bad for her behaviour. She is now not able to supress her feeling. Laksh's presence around her makes her heart pound out of her ribcage. After she realised her love for Laksh its even more hard to stay around him. If at any point she blurts out she would loose her best friend forever. There are chances of Laksh loving her back but she is more worried what if he don't feel any thing for her. She ran to a very far distance from all. She never expected the trip will turn out this way. She stand still in the middle of the path alone shedding tears. Urmi never ever cried this way. Why are my tears not stopping???

Laksh is observing her from a distance. What's wrong with Urmi????? If she feels bad why do i care for her??? We have been enemies since childhood may be we are not enemies!!!!!. Today i really feel alone if she don't talk to me. Now i realise the pain if she avoids me. What if she don't talk to me anymore. No i can't even think of it in my dreams. Because...because...i really really...love her. Laksh now understand his feelings.he smiles widely. I love Urmi. Laksh loves Urmi.

How dumb was I these many years we were together but i never realised what i feel for her my dearest enemy, my love and now my life.He thanks Urmi in his mind because i would never ever understand her importance in my life if she does not behave with him as she did now. Urmi unaware of Laksh's realisation decides that she will never ever tell Laksh that she loves him.

A beautiful sunset of Lonawala go unnoticed by everyone.

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Urmi retuns to the staring point of their treck. Her eyes are red like amber it is so clear that she cried. No one questioned anything. Urmi gives the car keys to Barat and ask him to drive the car. Its 7.30 pm when they reach home. Urmi quitely walks home. Remembering the bitter sweet moments of the trip. Laksh decides to talk to her the next morning.

Everyone reach their respective home. Now even Manvi and Keerthi feel something is wrong and ask Urmi. She brokes down and tell them every thing. They try to console her. After crying for so long Urmi finally wipes her eyes. Manvi and Keerthi advice her to tell everything to Laksh. Urmi ask them if you guys fall in love with Bharat or Shatrugan then what will you do. They both are shocked. Urmi takes a promise from them that they won't talk on this matter again.

At Ram's home he constantly think of how Maithili saved him form the enraged crowd. How she took his side infront of everyone. How she took the slap. And the way he carried her. He could not sleep. There Maithili suffers from high fever. Un fortunately she doeSn't remember any thing nor she feels the way Ram feels for her. She after taking her medicine goes into deep sleep. Laksh share his new found love with every one. He immediately comes out on a walk to meet Ram.

Ram who is sleep deprived too come out on a walk. Ram now just started liking her love is not in his mind. He really admires her character. Laksh comes running towards him and hugs him. Ram is surprised at his gesture. Laksh shares everything with Ram. He smiles and tell Laksh that i already knew you both loved each other it is you people never gave any importance your feelings. I am really happy for you Laksh. Urmi is really perfect for you .I am damn sure she loves you but you tell her what you feel. Laksh decides to propose her the next day.

After two days...

Two days passed Urmi neither Urmi came out for the jog nor their casual meeting at CCD. Manvi and Keerthi kept mum when everyone questioned about Urmi. Ram advices Laksh to go to her house. At Urmis house, Urmi wore a threefouth jeans and a cream colour top she really did not bother about her attire. She did not even comb her hair its all ruffled but even though she looked stunningly beautiful the way she is. She feels suffocated even in her air conditioned room.

Urmi goes to the terrace to have some fresh air. Urmi is used to sit on the big cement overhead tank seems like a room over the terrace. Laksh reach the main gate of Urmi's place and parks his bike urmi climbs the iron ladder of the over head tank. She walks in trance as the place reminDed her of the time spent with Laksh over there. Over head tank has no railing. Laksh lifts his head to see Urmi standing at the edge of the tank. He calls out loudly but in vain. He literally runs up the seven storied building reach the terrace gasping. He then climbs the iron ladder and calls out her name. She is not in senses. She is about to put a step forward Laksh pulls her back. He shouts at her what is she doing?. Urmi is still in trance. She tell him 'I don't love you Laksh.'He takes her into a bone crashing hug. She now realises that Laksh is really there. Laksh ask her 'you really don't love me?' Urmi cannot resist herself she starts crying badly. Laksh wiping her tears tell her 'you fool. why are you resisting yourself? This is what you think of me? Now answer me. He commands. Urmi hugs him crying her heart out and tell him 'i didn't want to loose you, our friendship at the cost of my love.' Laksh smiles. You know if any thing happens to you Laksh will not live. She is shocked. You really don't understand what I feel for you...I love you. Urmila smiling over her tears hugs back Laksh the love of her life contently.

Later Laksh kneels down in front of her and ask her if she loves him. Urmi smiles and jut nods her head. Then accept me as your slave my highness. Urmi hits him hard for his over action, Kneels down saying I love you hugs him. This way ending their hatred of their love-hate relationship Laksh and Urmi

accept each other as life partners for ever and ever.

To be continued...

Next part: Urmi and Laksh declare everyone about their love.

Maithili slowly starts walking with a walking stick.

She sees the positive side of Ram...

Maithili and Ram become friends...

Hope you guys liked it

Share your comments😊

manas😊


Edited by sugunmanas - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oops by mistake cmntd twice. Anyways m going to sleep. Plz tell if u r updating it today.

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