AASHIQUI.......RTMC FF Part 29 updated 25/11/2017 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: geetap

wow a new ff ...nice concept plz update soon and thanks for pm

im happy to see ur comment after long time...thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Really nice cs
Update soon
Thanks 4 d pm

thank u for liking it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

nice characters dear...loved it

thank u for ur comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Hi nice concept ... Love the character ...
Update soon & at the same time give ud of kaisa ye pyar h &
I m all yours .. Both r nice story I love them too ..I m new reader so plzzz fulfill my wish
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: murataru

Hi nice concept ... Love the character ...

Update soon & at the same time give ud of kaisa ye pyar h &
I m all yours .. Both r nice story I love them too ..I m new reader so plzzz fulfill my wish

hi dear...thank u for comment...i will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: tejjo

hi dear...thank u for comment...i will update soon


ok thank u ...
bt update jaldi do 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: murataru


ok thank u ...
bt update jaldi do 😃

yeah i will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
A beautiful concept!!
I loved it completely.
Do cont soon...
Waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Ohhh welcome back di...

hiii di...itne dino bad finally aapne update diya and first part awesome tha dono ki fight...veer and neha i luv there fight and vo car accident seen so funny...after very long time i read rt mc ff...pta ni ab ye pyar kaise possible hoga...plzzz update soon di...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 2

veer greeted his teeth angrily..."i'll kill her one day''then vicky arrived-''ok ok cool down veer come lets go..ab yaha rukne ka koi fayada nhi h hmara project kisi or ko mil gya h ''

veer-''i know but this is not right bhai...ashok sharma ne wo chawl ki jagah in mr bansal ko de di h wo log kaha jayenge''

vicky put his hand on his shoulder.-'' veer ab yeh problem chawl ke logo ki h or ashok sharma ki h''

veer was not convinced but he nodded

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piya entered in the malhotra mansion and smiled at anjali(veer's mom)-''hi mom''

anjali looked at her-''oh my god piya tum kab ayi?''

piya-''jab aap apne kitchen me busy thi...come on mom dad ne itne servants rakhe hue h or aap ho ki saara khaana apne aap hi bnate ho''

anjali pulled her cheek-''ha toh apne baccho ke liye to mein hi khana bnaungi na..sit i'll bring something for u''

piya nodded while looking at her mansion...so many years she had missed ...she had missed her house..her parents and ofcourse her beloved brothers...her hostel was so boring...and most bring thing in the world is books which she didn't like...but now she has completed her basics n now she further continue her study in india...but but where are her brothers...

she looked at her family photograph and a smile curved on her lips-''i miss u bhai''

''really''a male voice came to her ears...she turned to saw her brothers...she grinned n rushed towards them..they both hugged her tightly...

veer touched her cheek-''so how are u??

she made her face-''bhai apne mujhe bilkul miss nhi kiya na ''

anjali came with the tray of snacks-''tumhare dono bhaiyo ne tumhe bhot miss kiya''

vicky smiled at her-''or nhi to kya dekho kitna weak ho gya hun mein tumari yaad me''n chuckled

piya punched him on his shoulder while veer and his father smiled at her childish act...

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next day

neha was sitting in the garden when her brother came nearer-''u met him yesterday''

neha turned her brows upward-''yes''

nitish(neha's brother-''why??'' u know i don't like him'' he completed his sentence angrily''

neha-''neither i like him...actually my car crushed with his so...but wait a minute...how did u know''

nitish-''my men saw u with him..i'll kill him if i see him with u again''

neha smiled softly-''ok mr sharma i'll keep it in my mind'

nitish-''u just concentrate on ur studies''

she nodded while smiling


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neha smiled while reading her college letter...wow ''

her mother came nearer (asha)'' what happened why are u smiling''

she turned to looked at her mother-''mom colg se 1 week ka tour ja rha h singapore and i really want to go there with my friends''

asha-''ok then go...''neha hugged her mother happily-''thank u mom''

malhotra mansion

vishal-''vicky vinod has called me to visit his place''

vicky-''but why he want so''

vishal -''he want to talk about our Darjeeling project''

vicky-''but dad we have to attend tomorrow's presentation thats very important...

vishal-''yes i know''he thought for a while and called veer

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after 2 days

vinod raheja(vishal's friend)-''hello veer come sit''he welcomed him with a smile

veer too smile at him whe she saw a girl in shorts and blue top came nearer and sat beside her father-''who is he dad""

vinod-''he is veer''

she looked at him-''really are u veer malhotra ''

veer looked at her smilingly -''yes''

tara frowned -''time mil gya tumhe yaha aane ka...veer
'

veer -''actually bhot kaam tha to''she put the pillow from the table n throw on his face''u idiot im waiting for u from last 6 months n u r coming now''

vinod laughed at his daughter-''tara he is tired beta go and make something for him''

she furiously made her way towards kitchen...veer smiled and looked at vinod-''engagement ke baad ladkiyan pagal ho jaati h kya''

and both chuckled loudly

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------in the evening

tara-''come on''

veer-''but where are we going''
tara-''clarke quay''

veer-''ok then ''

they soon reached to clarke quay ...that is the place for party animals ...there is may bars..resturant..night clubs...shopping malls etc..but she choose pub to entertain herself..she gripped his arm tightly-''don't look at girls u r mine now''

he smiled at her-''but agar koi acchi lagi or control nhi hua to''


she pinched his arm hard-''what are u doing''

tara-''then i'll kill u'' then they entered in the pub..as they entered he saw her...she was sitting on the table with her friends glaring at the man-''this is a drink"n drain it on his face...

veer angrily looked at her..tara looked at his fist-''what happened

veer-''nothing ''n went to other side of pub...

she felt something and turned to look the source of uneasiness but she found nothing...
she put the another glass of plane tequila and gulped it in one go

tara offered him wine but he refused it tara smiled at him-''don't tell me that u don't drink''

veer-''yes''
she smiled -''veer come on ek me kuvh nhi hoga''

he refused it..she ignored his expressions and gulped it...he didn't like it and moved towards entrance...she was sitting on stairs with bottle in hand and looking at vehicles passing through..she stood up and tried to cross the road..her feet stumbled when he grasped her through waist ..she looked at him with sleepy eyes and soon widened them-''hey leave me alone..don't touch me'' he pulled her arms and pushed her towards stairs-''want to suicide''

she smiled-''oh god ...my savior saved me...how will i pay for it''and chuckled at him...

veer frowned at her and about to leave when she stood up from the ground-''what are u doing here...are u following me''

veer-''yeah actually u r very beautiful and last girl on the earth so i following u''

she grinned-''thank u very much...but i want someone better..not a loser''

he came nearer-''actually mujhe fraud karna aata nhi h wo tum log hi kar sakte h isliye mein loser hi sahi hun''

she glared at him and grabbed his collar-''u ''he throw her hands away...she could her balanced her self and fell on ground

he moved inside irately


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Edited by tejjo - 8 years ago

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