AASHIQUI.......RTMC FF Part 29 updated 25/11/2017 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Great.
Veer is engaged to tara...
Why why why???

But i know veer and neha are gonna together..

Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
loved reading it. do Veer and Neha both are in Singapore right now. interesting. but why is veer engaged to Tara? uff !!!!!
update soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

loved reading it. do Veer and Neha both are in Singapore right now. interesting. but why is veer engaged to Tara? uff !!!!!

update soon!!!

thanks for ur comment dear...u will find out in next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Great.
Veer is engaged to tara...
Why why why???

But i know veer and neha are gonna together..

Plz update soon
Thanks 4 d pm

thanks for comment
will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Part2-page3


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art 3

"where were u...im waiting for u"...tara asked him while reaching the entrance

veer-''come on lets go''he said in low tone

tara-''but why come on veer abhi toh aye h thoda rukte h na pls''

veer-''ok fine tumhe rukna h to ruko im leaving''he turned towards the entrance when she grasped his arm-''ok fine im coming''

next day


''this is nice i mean amazing''veer said excitedly...

vinod smiled at him-''yeah i know veer this is my dream project for Darjeeling ..i just want ur support''

veer-''yeah of course uncle im with u''

vinod-''veer i have full confidence in u ...if want any change in this model then tell me...i'll try to make it ''

veer was confused-''no i don't want any change...but why are u asking me..this is ur project ''

vinod-''veer ...yeh ab tumhara hi h mere baad...tum to jaante ho tara ke siwa koi nhi h mera ..shaadi ke baad sab tumhara hi ho jayega''

veer smiled forcefully-''why are u saying all this...''

vinod hugged him-''bs yeh shaadi jaldi se ho jaye...''veer hugged him back but he was not happy

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''tara kaisi h''piya asked him while getting excited...veer grinned on phone-''she is fine...'
piya-''bhai i just wanted to meet her...''


veer-''u will going to meet her soon''

piya-''really?? when?

veer-''she is coming with me ''

piya-''wow bhai come soon''

veer smiled again-''yeah...ok bye''as he disconnect the phone he sense her arms around his chest...she hugged him from behind...he removed her hands-''what are u doing''

tara-''what do u think...i want to hug u''

veer -''tara abhi mujhe thoda kaam h ''

tara-''tumhe kaam kab nhi hota...kabhi to romantic ho jaya karo veer...6 month ho gye h hmari engagement ko...kabhi koi call nhi msg nhi why??

veer looked at her questioning face but didn't reply anything...she came nearer to him...''veer do u love me''

veer -''yeah but why are u asking such questions''he added hesitatingly

tara-''then kiss me'

he frowned-''what??''

tara-''kiss me''while moving closer to him...he stepped back-''what are doing''

she grasped his collar-''u have never kiss me...so kiss me then only i will believe that u love me''

veer closed his eyes for a second-''oh god''

she loosened his collar-''so u don't''she walked outside the room irately...he closed his fist...why he didn't kiss her.. she love her alot...his parents also like her...but why he didn't like all this...he has to do it...after all she is waiting for him from last six months and here he behave like an idiot...


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''actually we have to go somewhere ...some romantic place''he said softly in her ear...she turned her face which was fuming with anger-''i don't want to go with u''

veer-''then i will pick u up in my arms''

she refused to look at him...he sat more nearer but maintained a gap between them-''ok then me kal hi chala jayunga''she looked at him quickly-''u r not going anywhere...''he smiled at her...to saw his smiling face she too smile

after sometime

''this place is not for me''neha said while gulping energy drink-''this is a lover's point...''

nisha-''neha kya pata tumhe apna life partner yahi mil jaye''

she giggled-''yeah he is waiting here only for me''they both giggled when she sensed something...she turned around and spotted him...he was walking with a girl...she ignored him and walked towards her friend...

''this is a lover's point"tara said while clutching his arm...he looked all around...that was beautiful place...couples were moving around ...they were kissing..hugging...chatting with each other...he looked at tara and raised his brow...she blushed

they were looking at the beauty of that place when she remember something-''im coming''

she walked towards shop near the spot...

he was waiting for her when he hear-''i want cotton candy''he turned ..then he saw neha...she was in her shorts looking beautiful...he turned his face immediately...tara came with two ice creams-''kayo lo tee..this is very famous ice cream of Singapore''

she handed him one ...he took it and smiled at her...she looked too cute while licking the ice cream...her innocent face was glowing even more...actually she was right...there was no love between them ...he has to take one step forward for her ...and for his relationship...he moved little nearer...and lifted her face upward...he went closer to her wet lips...she blushed and closed her eyes

-''leave my hand''neha yelled at a man who has holding her wrist tightly...veer and tara looked at the sight of disturbance...

"come on baby...''he went nearer her...she tried to push him..but she failed...

''leave her''man turned to look around...veer was standing behind him

''and who are u to order me?''veer moved forward and punch him on his face...he fell on ground ...

he looked at her who was caressing her wrist...for a second their gaze met ...and in another second he felt a kick on his back and fell on her ...as they fell on ground their lips met with each other...his lips on hers...


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Edited by tejjo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Veer is not comfortable with tara..
He is only for neha..

Lover's point ..nice
And then the kiss..
Wowww
Lovely
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
omg...veer and neha kissed accidently...but m so curious about their past and relationship.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Veer is not comfortable with tara..
He is only for neha..

Lover's point ..nice
And then the kiss..
Wowww
Lovely
Thanks

thank u for ur comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Asyalover

omg...veer and neha kissed accidently...but m so curious about their past and relationship.

thank u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Part3-Page 4

Part 4

tara baffled at the scenario in front of her eyes...she closed her fist with gritted teeth..

on the other hand...

neha sensed his captivated lips on hers...which was creating havoc in her stomach...this was first time for her..a boy was kissing her ...and that too like that...her eyes continuously staring at the pair of eyes...veer too felt something different..her eyes were making him weak...but why he losing his control..he looking at her beautiful eyes..he hated her more than anything then why everything seems to be perfect...complete and lovely...he had never experienced this in his life...kissing a girl...in this situation...and kissing that girl which he hated the most...

''veer'' tara shouted at him...he instantly looked at her...veer came to his sense and stood up leaving the source of his disturbance on ground...he looked at the chaos staring at him interestingly...

the man who had kicked him came forward-''so she is ur girlfriend huh! ''

veer punched him on his face again...and fell on ground near neha...she shivered and stood up quickly nisha came forward who had missed the moment between neha and veer..she came forward-''what happened??''

neha glared at veer and moved towards him-''how dare u to kiss me??''

veer barked at her-''just shut up...i didn't do intentionally its just an accident''

nisha's eyes widened-''what?? he kissed u...really??she exclaimed with joy

neha glared at her friend-''this is not funny''

tara looked at veer and left him irately

'tara..listen to me''he moved behind her...but made her way toward car and left him alone he patted his forehead-''oh god''

he looked at irritating girl fuming behind her-''yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua h''

''or jo tumne kiya wo kya tha''neha replied him angrily

veer looked at her friend-''she is mad or what??wo accidently hua samajh nhi aata ise...don't u have any brains..mein tumhe kiss karunga...agar tum duniya me last bhi hui to bhi i will never kiss u''

nisha grasped her friend's hand and made her way out from that place...neha looked at him furiously

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''tara listen to me na..meine yeh sab intentionally nahi kiya h..i hate her''she glared at him

''u know her ..right??''she asked

''yeah ''he answered

''how??''she put another question

''she is the daughter of our biggest rival''he replied angrily

'' u like her?''she asked eagerly

''no''he replied quickly-''are u mad..i don't like her''

tara felt content..she came closer and hugged him veer too respond and hugged her back

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she rubbed her lips with water again and again...nisha came forward-''come on neha...ab bas bhi karo''

neha put the towel and wiped her face-''disgusting..i hate that man''she sat on nearby couch furiously

''but why u hated him so much neha''she asked''just because his parents n ur parents have enmity''

neha replied-''yes...''

''but usne tumahre saath kuch nhi kiya''she added softly

neha looked at her friend-''he always insulted my father in front of everyone how could he??''

nisha put her hand on her shoulder-''but that's ur father fault na..aaj agar tum dono families me problem h to wo sirf tumhare dad ki wajah se...u always supported ur father even knowing that ur father is always wrong''neha stood up angrily-''what do u mean??...u are insulting my father''

nisha smiled at her-''tumhe itna bura laga mene to sirf tumhare dad ki sacchai btayi h to socho veer ko kitna bura laga hoga jab tumhare dad ne uski family ke saath yeh sab kiya hoga''

neha -''just shut up nisha''

nisha came forward-''this is reality neha..tumhare dad and brother kuch bhi kar sakte h kisi ki jaan bhi le sakte h''

neha stared at her angrily-''i said just shut up nisha''

but nisha didn't stop-''neha ...agar tum apne father ko support krti ho to wo bhi apne father ko support karta h isme galat kiya h...the only difference is that ur father uses tactics to insult them..but they don't''

neha gulped every word of hers..because she know that's the reality...she had tears in her eyes...nisha came closer and wiped her tears-''neha don't cry i didn't want to insult you..he saved u from that man...knowing that u hated him...he never did anything wrong with u''neha removed her hand from her face and made her way out of the hotel room

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she was sitting on the stairs around the park some distance away from the hotel...there was little crowd...she had tears in her eyes...she knew her father is wrong..still she always supported him...why?? she knew he loved her than anything in the world..and she also loved her family...her friend was right he saved her and didn't do anything wrong with her...she was lost in thought when she sensed something behind she whispered-''veer''


she turned to saw ...and he was there with the same girl ...he was busy in smiling when the girl hit him on his upper arm...she looked at him...first time he looked handsome..his lips curved again and a cute smile spread on his face...for a second she forgot that she was gazing him..she turned her face and shocked to saw two man moving towards her lustfully-''beautiful''

she crawled backward-''don't move''

she was about to shout when one of them closed her mouth..they picked her in arms and left that place...

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''what place is that''he asked

tara replied softly-''this is a temple.''

''oh''he smiled

tara grasped his hand-''come''

he entered in the temple ...that was beautiful temple...he looked at temple interestingly..when she looked at wall of temple ..there was lots of coin stick to the wall


''what is this??''she asked curiously

''that's very interesting..come with me''

they went nearer ..there were many coins stick there...she put one coin and closed her eyes for a second...after a while she opened her eyes and stick the coin on wall...he looked at her and smiled-''what was that??""

she grinned and gave him a coin...''took my name and stick this on wall..this will show u love me or not''

he grinned at her-''what??''

she added -''veer if u love me then this coin will stick to the wall and if u not then it will fall off..it is a love test..come on''she laughed

veer-''come on tara aisa kuch nhi hota''

she glared at him-''veer''

he took the coin from her-''ok ''

she smiled and excitedly looked at him...he took her name and stick the coin on wall...but coin fell off...he looked at her..she was sad-''this mean he don't love me''she thought..when he pat her shoulder-''i have told u aisa kuch nhi hota''he moved forward to look the temple..she was not convinced...if he don't love her...he can deny to marry her..she has to do something...he looked at her lost face-''tara??'

she looked at him-''yeah''

veer-''chale''

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neha punched him with all her force...but he didn't budge an inch..he moved forward with lustful eyes while the other one was staring at the nervous girl with wicked smile..he cupped her face-''u should not walk around with that sexy body''she was more fearful with every passing moment...she wants to screech but her mouth was tied with a cloth...she pushed him back while the other came nearer and moved to her shoulder..he turned her strip of top down and went nearer...she cried and pulled him back...they both laughed at her-''no one will save u darling come on'

she crawled backward with fear as they move forward...she stood up and tried to rush when one of them hold her top...which tore from behind showing the strips of bra...she put the hand on back...she was nervous...she was trying hard to free herself from his grip..but all gone in vain...he tore her top from shoulder and laughed..she punched him on his face...as she moved the other one envelop in her arms and touch her exposed skin of shoulder with fingers...she screech with all her force


veer hold her hand-''tara what happened??''

she replied sadly-''nothing''

veer about to hug her when he winced to heard a screech of a girl...he looked all around..that was isolated area...he moved forward and backward...tara looked at him confusingly-''what happened??''

''did u heard a screech''he asked her

tara-''no''

veer-''ok''

on the other hand..

she was weeping like hell while trying to free herself...but she was losing her force in front of them...still she was trying..they went nearer and pushed her on ground..they looked at her legs..which were exposed in short skirt...she crawled backwards...one of them hold her leg and another one went nearer to touch them with his wet mouth...she sobbed and tried to free his grasp but she failed she closed her eyes fearfully...he went more nearer and more when he found a kick on his face...he fell on ground with a thud sound..other came nearer and he too joined his friend..both of them stood up and looked at his red furious eyes

tara-''veer come on lets go..''

veer looked at her-''she needs help look at her...''neha cried hard to saw him...

the two men came nearer and kicked him...he fell on ground...tara went nearer-''veer ''

she help him''veer come lets go...iske saath aisa hi hona chahiye tumhe iski help karne ki koi jarurat nhi h''

veer removed her hand-''are u mad??''he moved forward and grasped their collar...they tried to hit him before that veer collapse them with each others head..both of them stepped back painfully..they looked at him again..and rushed out quickly...

he went nearer to her and opened her mouth-''are u ok''for a moment she chocked...she cried again loudly...he tried to console her ..but tara stopped him-''veer..she is not ur girlfriend...u hate her right so come on leave her alone''

veer looked at her angrily-''are u out of ur mind..can't u see her condition..i can't leave her like that..if u want to go then leave''he shouted at her

she was sad but now she was angry with his behavior..he said ...he hated her and now he was saving her..she angrily left them alone...

neha closed her eyes and wept...veer looked at her tore clothes-''don't cry.''he put his hand on her shoulder..she moved forward and hugged him..he jerked with her embrace ...he tried to embrace her but removed his hand backward...

after sometime...

she moved backward ...her cheeks were dry with continuous crying...he gave her his blazer-''wear it''

she hesitatingly took and wore it...they walked together on the road-''are u fine now??''

she nodded while lower her eyes...-''thanks''

veer-''its ok''

she looked at him-''agar tum nhi aate to mein..''and her throat chocked again

he looked at her-''its ok...''

neha-'i know u hated me still u saved me..thank u''

veer didn't reply back but kept on walking...she looked at his face...for a second she lost her senses...and stumbled with a rock...he grasped her quickly...she clasped her collar quickly with closed eyes...he looked at his collar waiting to loose it..she quickly loosened her grip and stood up straight

soon she reached to her hotel...he looked at her one last time -''take care''and went away..she kept looking at him...soon he vanished in the darkness on road...

at night

she looked outside through window and saw him..she smiled at him and came outside to saw him but there was no one...she came inside the room and found him sitting on couch...she smiled -''veer''

nisha came forward-''neha its me not veer''her smiled vanished..






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Edited by tejjo - 8 years ago

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