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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

lovely & awesome update
raj-naina convo is so sweet
i think something illegal activities are happening in the hospital
dr. asthana kahin human organs trafficking trade se to nahi juda hai?
i just enjoy the raj-alekh convo
ye raj ko kab buddhi aayegi & naveen pata nahi ab ye kya karega? just hope woh sach me gussa na ho waise bhi naina ke liye raj se better ladka nahi milega
plz update soon egerly waiting for next update
yaar update kiya but mujhe pm nahi kiya plz next time do pm me too
keep smiling keep writing




Thnx dear, bt believe me maine update,krte hi apko pm kiya tha, don't know wo,send nhi hua, ya phir maine hi kuch gadbad kr di,next time se asi,mistake nhi krungi,.



Bt thnx dear, for ur lovely comments, and,i,must say nice guess,
I,ll update soon,and definitely pm u first.


May i know ur name dear,




Love and best wishes to u.

Shweta
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shweta!! when will you update next part? Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Shweta!! when will you update next part? Plz update soon




Yes dear, will try to update soon just stuck with. Admission process for third semester,
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hy dea... awesome update...Raj Naina are so in love... aalekh was as usual hilarious... becharey Raj ki toh band baj gayi... wondering what will he do to appease naveen n family...
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THE INCOMPLETE PAGES OF HER DIARY }
RAJVEER POV-----------------------;:;:;;
Life has so many twist and turns.hmara apni khud ki life pr koi control nhi hota.
Hme khud ko nhi pta hota ki,kb kha kaise, destiny hmare sath kya game khelegi.
Aaj jo hua, uska bhi kaha pta tha mujhe,ek pal sb kuch thik or dusre hi pal sb kuch badal gya, naveen or mera rishta,shayad wo bhi,uski ankho mein mere liye gussa shayad is bat ka saboot tha.ye sb kuch ase hoga,iska to andaza bhi nhi tha mujhe.
ya phir shayad tha,jb naina se pyar kiya tha us din se kahi na kahi janta tha main ek na ek din to ye hoga, ek din to mujhe uski family ke samne jana hoga,naveen ke samne jana hoga,pr ase ye nhi socha tha, shayd tb naina mere sath hoti,pr aaj to wo bhi yha nhi hai or main ye bhi nhi janta ki kya usey ye sb pta hai bhi ya nhi.
life mein bhot se ase mauke aye, jb lga ki aane wala waqt, mere liye kya lekar aayega.
pehli bar, tb jb mom dad chle gye,or dusri bar tb jb us accident meri puri jindagi badal di thi.or aaj phir se ek bar aane wala kl, kya lekar ayega nhi pta mujhe.kya wo mujhe accept krenge,khi mera ateet mere aaj pr asar to nhi dalega.
Aaj lg rha hai ki kbhi kbhi,famous hona logo, ke beech ki ek alag pehchan bhi mushkile badha deti hai,log apko apki life ko itna jan lete hai jitna shayad aap nhi chahte,jitna shayad aap sirf kisi bhot apne ko hi btana chahte ho.
Asa nhi hai ki main apna past sbse chupana chahta hu, nhi main khud btata unhe,mera ritu se rishta, mera behaviour mera sb kuch main khud btata pr sawal ye hai ki kya wo mujhe accept krenge,kya naveen mujhe accept krega,kya wo apni behan ka hath mere hath mein dega.
Or naina,wo kya kregi agar uski family ne hmare rishte ko nhi apnaya to,kya wo mujhse rishta tod degi,chli jayegi meri jindagi se,mujhe akela
at this moment only one flash of memory came to his mind.
I LOVE MY FAMILY RAJ,MAIN UNHE KBHI DUKH NHI PAHOCHA SKTI.
I LOVE MY FAMILY RAJ.
I LOVE MY FAMILY.
bt next moment usey naina ki kahi hue ek bat yad ati hai.
raj,main hmesha apke sath rahungi pass rahu ya na rahu,apka sath hmesha dungi.
,a smile came to his lips.
aage kuch sochta uske pehle hi.
Joseph and alekh enters.
alekh -hmmm dil ke arman aanshuo mein beh gye,tana na,
next he looks toward joseph.
alekh-hm wafa krke bhi tanha (and here he forgot the lines)
alekh-(wo joseph ko song pura krne ka ishara krta hai)
joseph-hm wafa krke bhi tanha reh gye
and both together with false tears,-dil ke armann aanshuo mein beh gye...
raj bs undonko ko blankly dekh rha hota hai,na to gusse ke expressions the na hi hasi ke.or.
joseph and alekh pehle ek dusre ko dekhte hai phir,raj ko phir ek dusre ko.phir raj.
alekh -bole to aaj apun ko ek bat samajh mein aayi
joseph-kya.bat
alekh -yhi ki ye aede singer logo ne gazale kyu bnayi hai.
joseph-hmmm, kyu bnayi hai waise.
alekh -are, taki hmare jaise,nhi nhi correction,hmare dost jaise aashiq log apne dil ka haal bta ske.
and both give a high five to each other and then,raj.
raj-aap log, khud se jaoge, yha se ya dhakke marke nikalu.
Joseph look towards alekh, and says loudly. -ahh main, main khana lgata hu aap dono ke liye.
or jldi se wha se nikal leta hai.
bt alekh whi khda rehta hai or raj ko dekhe ja rha hota hai.
raj-kya, tu bhi jayega ya invitation du.
bt alekh to alekh hai jo raj bolega uska to ulta hi krega to wo aaram se bed pr baith gya.
raj-tujhe nhi lgta,ki maine tujhe jane ko kaha baithne ko nhi.
alekh -or tujhe nhi lgta ki tu bat ko kuch jyada hi, serious le rha hai.
at this dialogue of alekh raj give him a, is this kind of a joke wala look.
raj-to kya kru,tujhse to koi umeed rkh nhi skta,.
alekh -kya mtlb hai tera.
raj-mtlb ye hai ki, jb tera time tha tb to tu aaram se baitha tha or mujhe aage kr diya,pr main asa nhi kr skta na kyuki tere gusse ka koi bharosa nhi.
like raj, alekh give the same, r u kidding with me, raj wala look.
raj-kya ab has kya rha hai.
alekh -has,nhi raha hu kuch yad,aa gya tha.
raj-(seriously) kyaa
alekh-kisine shi hi kaha hai,ishq ne nikkamma kr dia,wrna hm bhi aadmi kam ke the.
raj-tu to pehle se hi nikamma tha,ab dusro pe apna dosh dalna band kr.
alekh -tere samne kuch bhi bolne se pehle dus bar sochna padega,tu kaisa dost hai har wqt bezzati ke liye taiyar rehta hai.
raj-ha wo, wo main to ye keh rha tha.
alekh-ab rehne de tu,waise bhi yha teri bat sunta kaun hai.,
alekh-or shayad tu bhul gya hai to main yad dila du,ki gusse ki problem tujhe hai mujhe nhi,yad hai wo tu tha jisne,neelu ke bap ko dhmki di ki agar, unhone neelu or mere liye ha nhi ki to tu unki company ko sadak pr la dega.yad aya kuch,
raj-ha to isme meri kya galti thi,itna manaya hmne pr wo manne ko hi taiayar nhi the,
alekh -ha, lekin teri dhmki se to, sidha line pe aa gye mere sasur ji.bole to hone wale sasurji.
and both laugh.
alekh-pr raj yha, bat alag hai,kyuki jinlogo se kl tu milega,wo koi ase waise log nhi hai,apne usul, apne adarsho ke liye jane wale log hai,
raj-ha alekh main janta hu.
alekh -to tu ye bhi janta hai na raj ki naina ke liye unka pyar,kaisa hai.
raj-tu kehna kya chahta hai alekh.
alekh -dekh raj ho skta, hai ki kl wo tujhe kuch asa bol de jo shayad tujhse bardasht na ho,pr raj whi wqt hoga,jis wqt tujhe apne gusse pr control rkhna hoga,kyuki tera ek galat kadam, ek bhi galat lafz tere sath sath naina pr bhi asar dalega,to khud ke liye na shi raj pr naina ke liye ho ske to kl tu apne aap pr kabu rkhega.tu samajh rha hai na raj main kya keh rha hu.
raj-ha alekh main samajh rha hu,pr ye dar ye nervousness asa lg rha hai ki khi in sb mein main khi kuch galat na kr baithu.
alekh -hmm to asa krte hai tu naina se bat kr le,tm dono milkr, shayad kuch kr sako.
or alekh,raj ke cell se naina ka no.dial krne lgta hai.bt raj usse cell phone le leta hai
alekh -ye kya kiya tune, tu naina se bat kyu nhi kr rha hai kya tu ye rishta nhi chahta hai raj.
raj-mujhse jyada koi nhi samajh skta alekh ki main is rishte ko kitna chahta hu.
alekh -to phir problem kya hai, tu naina se bat kyu nhi kr rha,ho skta hai naina naveen ko samjha le.
raj-janta hu,alekh ki naina shayad naveen ko mana le,or shayad naveen apni behan ke liye or uske parents unki beti ke liye mujhe accept bhi kr le,pr main asa nhi chahta hu alekh.
raj-main,chahta hu ki wo khud mujhe jane,jisey wo apni beti ke liye chune,us insan pr unhe bharosa ho,naina ke kehne pr shayad wo mujhe apna le,pr tb kya wo mujhpe bharosa kr payenge.
alekh-or agar unhone tujhe reject kr dia tb.raj kya krega tu.
raj-pta nhi, alekh mujhe sach mein nhi pta ki main kya krunga main ye sochna bhi nhi chahta,hu alekh, bs koshish krna chahta hu,unhe btana chahta hu ki main unki beti se kitna pyar krta hu,.(and a tears falls down on his eyes)
alekh wipes the tears.-m proud of u raj,m proud of. said and hugs him.


finally the day has come,jiske,liye raj ne puri rat taiyari ki,kbhi khud naveen bna kbhi alekh ko naveen bnaya kbhi khud,mr.ahulwalia bna,to kbhi joseph ko mrs.abhluwali bnaya, pr kya pta practice kam ayegi bhi ya nhi,jitna try kiya pta nhi ek bhi line wo use kr payega ya nhi,..
subah ke 10 bje the or raj,or alekh ahluwalia mansion ke bahar khde
the
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alekh to raj-tu sach mein chahta hai ki main tere sath na jaun.


raj-ha.
alekh -mtlb tu ander akele jana chahta hai.
[COLOR=BROWN]raj-alekh to kitni bar bhi puchega or kisi bhi tarah puchega,mera jawab yhi hoga ki main nhi chahta ki tu ander mere sath jaye.

alekh irritately -pr, whi to main puch rha hu kyuuu.

raj-kyuki,mere yar main janta hu ki tu apne gusse pr control kr skta hai pr main ye bhi janta hu ki jb bat meri hoti hai to tb tera dimag km or dil jyada kam krta hai,isliye main nhi chahta ki meri wajah se tujhe koi bhi kuch kahe,wo mujhe kuch bhi khega chlega pr tujhe nhi.

alekh has tears in his eyes.

raj-ab tu rona bnd krega,.


alekh -ha ha jaa or sun,jeet ke aana.
raj-yes boss.


door bell bjane se pehle hi raj bar bar alekh ko mud kr dekh rha hota hai,ab jb manjil tk aa gya tha to uski himmat nhi thi ander jane ki,pr phir himmat krke bell bja deta hai.
ramu kaka darwaja kholte hai,or wo bhi raj ko upar se neeche tk ase dekh rhe hote hai ki,jaise raj nhi koi bhoot aya ho.
abhi to, raj ander pahocha bhi nhi tha or,usey sapne aane lge the.

ramu kaka raj ko ander leke jate hai,hall mein bilkul khamoshi hoti hai,wha koi bhi nhi hota hai,wo kehte hai na tufan se pehle wali shanti waise hi kuch,.

ramu kaka-aap yha baithiye main sbko bulakar lata hu.
raj noded.

ramu kaka ander jate hue bhi raj ko mud mud kr dekh rhe hote hai or raj bhot uncomfortable feel kr rha hotahai,(ye to ramu kaka bhoot bungalow wali feeling de rhe apne raj ko)

kuch time ke bad,naveen or mr.ahluwali bahar aate hai,raj khda hota hai, uski najre bs naveen ko dekhe ja rhi hoti hai,naveen ke expressions mano abhi wo raj ka muder kr de or uska yhi expression raj ki himmat ko or tod rha tha.

mr,ahluwalia,naveen ko kuch ishara krte hai,naveen pehle to unhe look deta hai pr phir wo wha se thoda dur dining table ke pass jakar khda ho jata hai,

mr.ahluwalia,raj ke pass aate hai, or usey baithne ko kehte hai.

baithte hue bhi raj bs unke chehre ko padhne ki koshish kr rha tha,jo bilkul blank tha jaise ki situation blank thi.

mr ahluwalia-(with a very serious tone), raj
raj directly look in his eyes.

mr.ahluwalia-dekho raj mujhe ghuma phira kr bat krna pasand nhi hai isliye direct point pr aate hai.

raj-main kuch smjha nhi sir.

mr.ahluwalia -raj tm bhi ek businessman ho or main bhi to aaj main tmse ek deal krna chahta hu.

raj-kaisi deal.???

mr.ahluwalia-raj, hmari company jo contract tmhare sath kr rhi hai,usme. kafi aage badh chuke hai right.

raj ko unki bat nhi samajh aati.hai.

mr.ahluwalia-mera mtlb hai ki agar is time hmari company is contract se peeche hat jayegi to tmhari company ko bhot bada loss hoga, right

raj is shockingly looking towards him.

mr.ahluwalia-tm ye soch rhe hoge ki loss to mujhe bhi hoga,to i raj i don't care about it,market mein meri pehchan itni purani hai ki main shayd is loss ko sambhal lu pr tmhari company to abhi yha nayi hai,or is loss ka result ho skta hai ki tmhe tmhari company bechni pade.

raj didn't say anything, he,s just speechless, usne asa to socha hi nhi tha,ki.

mr.ahluwalia-don,t worry raj main asa kuch nhi krunga,pr uske liye meri ek shart hai.
raj-shart kaisi shart sir.

Mr.ahluwalia-raj main ye contract bhi complete krunga or hmari company aane wale kayi contract tmhare sath hi kregi or tm chaho to hm tmhe har profit mein 70% part denge,pr.

raj-pr kya sir(now raj become impatient)
mr.ahluwalia -pr tmhe naina se har rishta todna hoga,

raj is totally shock or usey gussa bhi bhot aata hai, bt phir usey alekh ki khi hue bat yad aati hai.

raj with so much patience -thik hai sir mujhe manjur hai.

raj ki bat sunkr mr ahluwalia shocked ho jate hai..

mr.ahluwalia-to tmhe manjur hai raj,ye contract.

raj-ha sir mujhe manjur hai pr.

mr.ahluwalia-now its, mr.ahluwalia,s turn to ask questions.

raj-pr,contract nhi naina ke sath rishta todna manjur hai mujhe.

mr.ahluwalia-mtlb,tm kehna kya chahte ho raj.

raj-sir jaisa ki apne kha, ki hm businessman hai,or business mein bhot se ase mauke aate hai jb hme sb kuch khona padta hai,pr jaise apko apni pehchan pr bharosa hai waise mujhe meri kabiliyat pr hai,isse pehle bhi maine apni mehnat se apne business ko aage badhaya[


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hai,or aaj bhi badha lunga,lekin sir, agar aap mujhe ye contract dekar,mujhse mera pyar khridna chahte hai to mera pyar bikaun nhi hai,
mr.ahluwalia-to phir tm naina se rishta Kyu todoge.


raj-ha main phir bhi naina se rishta tod lunga, to sirf naina ke liye,,kyuki main ye kbhi nhi chahunga ki usey kbhi bhi koi takleef ho or jiski wajah main hu,main naina se bhot pyar krta hu,or janta huki mujhse khi jyada pyar aap log naina se krte ho,aap kbhi uska bura nhi chahoge,or main ye bhi janta hu ki naina ke liye hm mein se ek ko chun na kitna mushkil

hoga,isliye,main nhi chahta ki usey kbhi asa kuch krna pade,or rhi bat mere pyar ki to main janta hu ki wo kbhi naina ke liye km nhi hoga,ha har din badhega jarrur,


raj-ek or bat sir ye sb batein aap naina se mt khiyega kyuki usey bhot takleef hogi,
and with the last line raj moves toward the exit, bt a voice came from behind and raj just stood there.


naveen with a murderous voice -rajveer singh shikhwat, tm samajhte kya ho apne ap ko,tmhe kya lga,tm yha se ase hi chle jaoge,


or wo raj ki taraf bdhne lgta hai.
that,it raj tight his fist to punch naveen, bt again he remembered the lines of
naina,and he just stood there with his head down.


usey lgta hai ki shayd naveen usey punch krega isliye wo whi khda rehta hai, pr kafi der ho jati hai or asa kuch nhi hota,to wo sir utha kr dekhta hai and shocked.


naveen, his father, and ramu kaka also, sb wha khde hs rhe hote hai.or raj ke, chehre pr ye kya ho rha hai wala look hota hai.
naveen to raj-kyu jijaji,dar gye


kya.dad(looking towards his father) apke hone wale damad ji to, apke bete se bhi jyada bewkuf nikle.

raj,ko to abhi tk kuch samajh hi nhi aa rha hota,

naveen-kyuu,abhi tk samajh mein nhi aya, ki ye sb.

all three together -natak tha.

raj bechara na to has skta tha na ro skta tha haalat hi kuch asi thi.


raj-mtlb tmhe mtlb aap sbko,ye ye sb, mtlb mere naina,mtlb sb pta tha.
naveen -haaa


raj-kaise mtlb kisne btaya.


and then he heard a voice, not one more than one people voice together.
hmneee.


raj peeche mudkar dekhta hai to wha pooja ali,neelu alekh khde hote hai with shalini too.


sb raj ko dekh rhe hote hai or raj alekh ko ghure ja rha hota hai or alkeh khi bhi dekh rha hota hai pt not raj.


naveen situation samajh jata hai,


naveen -dekh raj isme alekh ki koi galti nhi hai,hmne hi usey kha tha ki wo tujhe kuch na btaye or ye bat usne mujhe nhi btayi thi

.
raj -to phir kisne.



naveen gave a mischievous smile to him


naveen -tujhe kya lga raj ki main andha hu,dekh nhi skta hu ko mere aas pass kya chl rha, nhi dekh skta ki meri behan kis bat se khush hai,shak to mujhe bhot pehle ho gya tha bt confirm nhi tha, isliye pooja se pucha,sbse pehle.

pooja-or mujhe to hmesha se pta tha ki naina kya sochti hai to bs bhaiya ko sb bta dia.bt phir mushkil ye thi ki tm kya sochte ho ye kaise pta kru.

neelu -or tb pooja ne mujhse kha,or maine alekh se ye bat qabool krwa li or bs case solve.

naveen -kya case solve tmhara ye dost to koi bhi help krne ko taiyar hi nhi tha kitni mehnat krni padi pta hai.


mr.ahluwalia-ab tu chup krega naveen or raj, hme maff kr do beta,hm jante hai ki hmne jo bola usse tmhe bhot takleef hue uske liye tmse mafi mangta hu raj.


raj -plz sir aap mujhe shrminda na kre apne jo kiya wo apka haq tha,or waise bhi kisine mujhse kaha tha ki jb hm kisi se bhot pyar krte hai na to uske liye bs sb kuch acha chahte hai

(indicating toward alekh)


tbhi Mrs ahluwalia bhi wha aa jati hai.
mrs.ahluwalia-dekh liya na aap dono ne maine to pehle hi kaha tha,ki raj hmari naina ke liye perfect hai.pr aap dono meri bat sune tb na.
naveen-maaa


mr.ahluwalia -shrimati ji.


mrs.ahluwalia-chup kro ab aap dono ab jo krna hai main karungi,naveen tu abhi naina ko phone lga, main usey ye khuskhabri abhi deti hu.

naveen -good idea maa.

raj-nhi naveen, plz naina ko abhi phone mt lgao.

all together -pr kyu.

raj (shyly)-wo,wo main,usey pehle u know,


.
Mrs.ahluwalia-ohhh to tum usey pehle btana chahte ho asa bolo na



naveen -are pr abhi kyu nhi,main bhi to thodi class lagau madam ki ab wo apne bhai se batein jo chupane lgi hai.


Mr.ahluwalia -naveen raj ne kaha na, ki wo khud btayega to tu uski love story ki jagah apni pr dhyan de, khi asa na ho ki shalini ko koi or mil jaye or tu kuwara hi reh jaye,waise bhi tere jaise gadhe ko achi ldkia har bar nhi milegi.

naveen -daddd,


raj-thnk u sir.


mr.ahluwalia-raj,tm abhi bhi hme sir hi khaoge, ab tm hmare bete ho raj, to. Hme whi bulao jo naveen or naina bulate hai.
raj-ji sir

mr.ahluwalia -hain.

raj-i mean bade papa.


pooja or neelu-is bat pe to party bnti hai
.
alekh-bilkul, bnti hai kyu raj.


mrs.ahluwalia-chlo phir aaj to party ho hi jaye,.



and all enjoyed the moment together, raj bhot khush tha, aaj or alekh raj ke liye, naveen naina ke liye, mr
and mrs
ahluwalia apni beti ke liye or pooja ali neelu apne dosto ke liye.
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night at naina place.
naina apne room mein baithi kuch likh rhi hoti hai.
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Dear diary.



i know i know. tm bhot naraj hogi ki aajkl main tmse batein nhi share krti, pr kya kru kuch hota hi nhi hai, apne dil ki har bat raj ko jo bta deti hu.




tmhe yad, jb mere 16th birthday pr maa ne tmhe mujhe gift kiya tha to, kya kaha tha.
unhone kha tha, ki ek din meri jindagi mein koi asa ayega jiske samne main bilkul ek khuli kitab ki tarah houngi,apne dil ki har bat, apni jindagi ka hr lamha, jindagi ke kitab ke har panne ko padhne ka haq main usey dungi,or jb tk wo insan meri jindagi mein nhi ayega tb tk. main tmse apni har bat kahungi.


,pr pta hai main aksar socha krti thi ki agar wo insan meri jindagi mein nhi aya to,or ek din jb tmhare panne bhi bhar jate to,main kya krti,



tm mere liye sirf ek kagaj ki diary nhi thi,maa papa ke jane ke bad tm mere liye ek jaria thi,meri bat un tk pahochane ki.
mujhe lgta ki jo bhi main tmme likhungi,tmse kahungi wo maaa papa tk pahochegi,or is tarah wo meri har mushkil,har khushi ke bare mein jan payenge,

pr kuch saalo se lgta tha ki jb tm bhi khtm ho jaogi to kya hoga.


bt papa hmesha shi kehte the, he,s right mom is an angel,dekho na aaj unhone raj ko bhej diya hai mere pass,,.


ha ha janti hu ab tm kahogi ki abhi tm adhuri ho,puri kaha hue,pr, my dear diary un panno ko maine kuch khas dino ke liye rkha hai.


ha khas din,wo khas din jb pehli bar mere hath mein raj ke nam ki mehandi lgegi,jb pehli bar mujhpr raj ke pyar ka rang chadega,jb mere hatho mein uske nam ki anguthi hogi,



jb pehli bar wo meri mang mein apne nam ki sindoor sajayega,jb pehli bar wo apne nam ka mangalsutra mujhe pehnaye,wo din jb main,naina singh ahluwalia se, mrs.naina rajveer singh shikhawat bn jaugi.



main us har lamhe ko tmhare sath ya ye khu ki tmhare jariye, maa papa ke sath batna chahti hu unka ashirwad chahti hu,jo main janti hu ki hmesha, mere sath hai.
pr kuch batein asi hoti hai jo main raj se bhi share nhi kr skti, kuch batein jo shayd main apni parchai kobhi nhi bta skti pr tm khi na khi wo janti ho,bs umeed hai ki sb kuch thik ho jayega jo ho rha hai wo.




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ki tbhi door pe knock hota hai or diary neeche gir jati hai.




door open hota hai,or ek ldka or ek ldki ander aatr hai,ldka ander jakar ek ldke ke shoulder pr hath rkhta hai,or wo ldka turn krta hai wo ldka koi or nhi raj hota hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rainu

Hy dea... awesome update...Raj Naina are so in love... aalekh was as usual hilarious... becharey Raj ki toh band baj gayi... wondering what will he do to appease naveen n family...




thnk u dear,yes they are deeply in love, and rai is the best to sbne man hi jana,hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
yaar story me koi new twist aanewala hai kya i mean jab bhi kisi story me sab kuchh ekdum achchha aur smooth chal raha hota ki suddenly sab change ho jata hai raina ki shaadi me parshani na aaye
thanks for pm keep smiling keep writing
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I read all the parts in one go
wonderful story and very nice concept
I really loved it
But mujhe ye nahi samajh aata ki raina ki life mein hi sabse zyada twist kyu aate ho😒
Hope aane waale updates mein unke saath kuch gadbad na ho
I liked it so much
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Wow dude I was dead scared for Raj... but finally every thing came out well...alluwalia family is really hilarious I must say... Naina ws very emotional, donno what secret she is speaking about... hope the mystery unfolds n dey don't end up being separated again..
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THE INCOMPLETE PAGES OF HER DIARY..
PART-52
Recap-naina ki family, raj or naina ke rishte ke liye agree krte hai with lots of shock and surprises,bt finally sb kuch thik ho jata hai raj,ye bat naina ko khud btane ko kehta hai,
idhar naina apni,diary mein apni feeling likh rhi hoti hai, ki. wo apni bat puri nhi kr,pati hai ki tbhi knock hota hai.
diary table se neeche gir jati hai. door open hota hai ek ldka or ek ldki ander aate hai, room mein koi khda hota hai jiski back, undono ki taraf hoti hai, ldka us person ke shoulder pr hath rhkta hai or uske turn hote hi hm dekhte hai ki wo or koi nhi raj hota hai.ab aage.
raj turn hota hai,usey dekhta hai bt phir, wo usi direction mein turn krke kuch dhoondne lgta hai.
kya dhoond rha hai tu, (alekh asked him, yes the other person is alekh)
raj usey ignore krta hai or apna sara dhyan phir se kuch dhoondne mein lga deta hai,
raj maine pucha kya dhoond rha hai, (bt before he complete raj shows him a diary)
ye,ye diary naina ki hai, (asked alekh and raj noded.) naina,diary likhti thi???
girl from behind give the ans behalf of raj
tia-ha naina, diary likhti thi aaj se nhi bhot pehle se, (both alekh and raj looked at her)
alekh then again asked to raj,.
kya,likha hai isme, kuch(bt before he complete raj cuts in middle)
adhuri hai,bilkul hmari kahani jaise,(alekh and tia both looked shockingly at him)
bhot kuch likhna chahti, hai wo isme apni feelings, hamara future pr pta nhi (and with that line raj hugged alekh)
alekh patted his shoulder,..
main usey khona nhi chahta alekh, nhi khona chahta main usey,.said raj to him.
pr,main kuch nhi kr pa rha itna bewas kbhi mehsus nhi kiya maine khud ko jitna aaj kr rha Hu,(frustration clearly shown in his eyes)
alekh, broke the hug and let him sit,.
alekh-raj meri taraf dekh,(raj looks at him) tu asa kyu soch rha hai, ki teri ye kahani adhuri hi rhegi.tu ye kyu nhi dekh rha ki bhagwan bhi yhi chahta hai ki tum dono sath raho,wrna tu hi soch ki wo hme yha kyu bhejta,usi waqt jb wo mushkil mein thi,
alekh ki baton se raj convince to tha,.
alekh-agar usey tm dono ko dur hi krna hota to hm yha kbhi nhi hote, naina ke sath wo sb hota or hme pta bhi nhi chlta(alekh each and every word remind him something painfull)
alekh -hmara yha ana uski marzi thi kyuki wo bhi yhi chahta tha ki tu usey bacha le, tum dono sath raho,samjha tu, to ye sb ulti seedhi batein apne dimag se nikal de, or bs bharosa rkh apne pyar pe,.
raj noded.
alekh-sir kya hila rha hai kuch bolega bhi, chl acha thik hai bol mt pr smile to kr wrna teri wp jhansi ki rani ko jb pta,chlega na to wo meri class lagayegi.
raj give a weak smile to him bt, again he lost in a deep thought.

flashback
4. days back.

night at raj place.

raj bhot khush tha ho bhi kyu na finally naina ki family ko koi problem nhi thi,ab undono ke beech koi mushkil nhi thi,bt at the same time wo confuse bhi tha ki naina ko bataye to bataye kaise.

raj to himself-kya raj, wha to bade pride ke sath bol diya ki naveen ye bat naina ko main btaunga or, ab, ab kya hua.

and and and there he saw,the cupid of his life, his cellphone,yes his cellphone abhi tk jitni bhi batein hue thnx to the cupid, so raj is raj,sometimes he behave so dumb. that a child would think better than him.

so finally mr.rajveer singh shikhawat grab his phone and, going to dial her number.

bt before he pressed the numbers, a voice came from behind.

khabardar jo usey hath bhi lagaya(raj slightly turn his head to see the person, who he knows very well)

kya hai, tu itni rat ko yha kya kr rha hai kbhi apne ghar pe bhi reh Liya kr, or ye isey kyu le aya (pointed to the other person,)

wo sb to apun tujhe bad mein btata hai pr tu pehle, ye bta ki tu ye krne ja rha tha..asked alekh with a smirk on his face.

kya krne mtlb ab kya phone bhi tujhse puch kr krunga,said raj with the same smirk.

alekh-apun ko pta tha, bola tha na maine (to the other person) ki ye ase hi kuch krega,, kyu ali.

ali noded only ab apne boss ke samne to kuch bolne se rha.

raj-ha to naina ko to isse(bt alekh cuts him in middle.)

alekh-ha ha wo to hm sb jante hai ki, naina ko,pr tu nhi janta kya, ki har ldki ki ek khwaish hoti hai ki uske liye bhi kuch special ho, kyu ali bata na jara isey, ki tune kaise propose kiya tha pooja ko.

ali is a totally shy person, to he started trembling -wo hm hm,hmne to unko,.

alekh-tu rehn de ali,or raj tu, yar kuch to asa krne ko chahiye na ki kl ko tu apne bacho ke bacho ko bta ske ki tune unki grandma ko kaise propose kiya tha.

raj-haan ek minute, mere bacche kaha hai or unke bacche kha se aaye.

alekh -are aaj nhi,hai kl to honge na.

raj-(finally agreed to him) ha bat to tu shi kr rha hai pr ab main kru kya.

alekh-ab ye bhi main btaun.

raj-kya mtlb wasie to bada senior, senior krta hai aaj jb puch rha hu to bhav kha rha hai.

alekh -huh,abhi tk to kr bhi deta pr ab to pakka nhi krunga,ja krle khud se.chl ali.

raj runs immediately and stopped.

raj-are mere bhai mere yar dekh tu to janta hai ki tere bina to main kuch kr hi nhi skta,help kr de plz,

alekh looked anywhere bt not at him.

raj-plzzz.

alekh -ok, ab tu itna bol rha hai to kr deta hu tu bhi kya yad rkhega ki kis bade dilwale se pala pada hai.

raj -nautanki.

alekh -kuch kaha.

raj-nahi nahi kuch nhi,. pr tu krega kya.

alekh-wo sb tu mujhpr chhor de.

alekh whisper something into ali ears, and ali left the place immidiately, and came after two minutes.

kam ho gya asked alekh to ali.

haaa, ali replied, ye lijiye, handed. something to him.

raj-koi,mujhe bhi kuch btayega ki ho kya rha hai.

alekh -btate hai na thoda thnd rkh.

alekh dialled a number and said something and then handed it to raj.

kya abhi to keh rha tha ki phone pe na btaun or khud hi call kr dia.said raj.

alekh -pehle bat to kr le phir krna teri bakwas.

raj give him a look.

raj-hello.

hello.sir main tia.,said tia

(raj gave a shock look to alekh) isse kya bat kru.

tia on the other side -hello hello raj sir.

raj-ha, main sun rha hu.

tia-ohh alekh ne mujhe sb kuch bta dia, hai don't worry main bhi apki help krungi.

raj is totally confused now -kya bta dia.kaise help.

tia-naina or apke barein mein,waise to mujhe sb pta tha bs ye proposal wali bat nhi pta thi,bt ab jb aap usey propose krne ja rhe ho to main to apke sath hu,completely.

raj-thnx tia.

tia-ok pr ek problem hai main abhi wha hu nhi ek camp ke liye hmeb bahar jana pada to main kl sham tk pahochungi.,bt good news ye hai ki hmare ghar ki ek spare key hm ghar ke bahar carpet ke neeche chupa kr rkhte hai,to apko wha se mil jayegi, naina subah hi chli jati hai or rat ko 9 bje tk aati hai to apke pass kafi tym hoga preparation krne ke liye or tb tk hm bhi




wha pahoch jayenge.

now slowly slowly raj understand the idea of alekh so he just passed a smile to him,. and cut the call.after saying good bye and thnx to her.

alekh-to ab aya kuch akl mein.

raj-hmmm,to flight book kr le.

alekh -wo sb ho gya hai. maine or ali ne sari taiayari kr di hai.

raj is really feel very lucky to have a friend like alekh and ali.too.

alekh -ab ase kya dekh rha hai main alekh hu naina nhi.

raj-janta hu tere jaise dusra piece bna hi nhi hoga,

and both laughed together and ali joined them.

raj-tu chlega na mere sath.

alekh -(ahhh pretend to think.)( raj made a face) aaj tk kbhi tuje akele jane diya hai jo ab jane dunga,

raj hugged him tightly,-thnx yar thnk u so much.

alekh -ab marega kya or waise bhi ye sb mamle mein mujhe tujpe itna sa bhi bharosa nhi hai to jana padega hi,akhir tere baccho ke baccho ka sawal hai.

raj -hain .

after that raj or alekh USA pahoch jate hai ,pahochte pahochte sham ho jati hai ,raj se to patience hi nhi rkha ja rha tha uska bs chlta to ud ke pahoch jata (hehe ud ke hi to pahocha tha)

wo log naina ke ghar jate hai jaise ki tia ne kaha tha ,unhe key leni hoti hai,pr late hone ki wajah se ye sb krne ki jarrorat nhi thi kyuki,tia already pahoch chuki thi or raj or alekh ka wait kr rhi thi,.

tia on the entrance door pacing left and right ,when she saw them.

aa gye aap log ,itna late kr dia ,ab to hmare pass jyada time bhi nhi hai.chliye jldi..

alekh or raj ander aate hai .

apne jo bhi kaha tha wo sara saman aa chuka hai or wo maine naina ke room mein rkhwa dia hai.

raj-thnx tia ,sorry hmari wajah se tmhe itni pareshani uthani padi.

tia-pareshani kaisi ,naina meri dost hai or uske liye kuch bhi.

raj passed a smile to her -ab jldi se ,sari taiyari kr leta hu.(and started going upward to her room.)

alekh and tia both together -ha chlo.

raj to both-ek min ek min kaha chlo.

both-taiyari krne.

raj-no thnx ,wo to main krunga or wo bhi akele.

alekh -pr wr kuch nhi alekh ,tm dono yhi raho main ye sb akele krna chahta hu bs jb naina aye to usey kuch der ke liye sambhal lena ,wrna mera pura plan chaupat ho jayega.

alekh and tia together -yess boss .



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