The incomplete pages of her diary part 1

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Character sketch.
As usual our rn and most of the characrer are same of lrl.
Naina singh ahluwalia-main protagonist. Doctor in u.s.a fortis hospital.
Rajveer singh shikhwat-succesfull businessman of india.
Aalekh sharma-friend of raj
pooja ghai-friend of naina
ali- colleague of raj
naveen singh ahluwalia- brother of naina.
Shalini- not a doctor here naveen,s gf
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Hello this is my first fic .plz read and comment ur views are really important for me
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The incomplete pages of her diary.

First part.

Naina -mumma kehti hai jb wo hme yha bhejta hai uske sath hi wo is duniya mein ek asa insan jarrur bhejta hai jisse hm apni sari batein share krte hai .jaise unhone papa ko bheja mumma ke liye mere liye bhi koi hoga bt abhi wo kha hai ye mujhe pta nhi is liye aaj mera 16th birthday pr mumma ne mujhe tmhe gift kiya so welcome and thnx meri life mein aane ke liye or ab tmse share krungi main THE MOMENTS OF MY LIFE.



10-December 2006

m

aaj school mein simmi ne mera mjak udaya pta hai kyu kyuki usey aaj rohit ne propose kiya jbki wo mera frnd tha haha silly simmi pta nhi us pagal ko asa kyu lgta hai ki main usse jalungi.


Feb14
.Sad hu yar aaj sbko roses mile pr mujhe to kisine white bhi nhi diya, kb kb kb mujhe kb milega pooja ko bhi do miley bt mujhe ek bhi nhi and i know obviously bhaiya ki wajah se jarrur unhone sbko daraya hoga .Feb16oh god i think m in love aaj maine kisiko dekha ,ya ya real mein nhi tv pe bt kya hua .i told u he,s so smart dashing handsome or nam kya tha uska oh no name to pta hi nhi mujhe koi nhi kl puja se puch lungi usey to sare handsome ldko ke nam pta hote hai .Feb17kya yar puja bhi na nam to btaya pr dil tod diya mera .wo ek businessman hai really itne young or itne successful pr bhla wo mujhe kaise milenge .


March 25----
heyaaj maine phir usey dekha ofcorse tv pr bt m not happy kyuki aaj unki engagement thi bhot khush lg rhe the wo or wo ldki kitni beautiful thi ye puja jarrur iski juban mein koi fault hai sb kuch khtm.



June 6.------Ja rhi hu main yha se aaj sb kuch chla gya mera wo do log jo mere liye is duniya mein sbse jyada important the aaj wo mujhe chorkar chle gye .is jagah se dur jana chahti hu main bs yha se dur .i miss u mom dad aap kyu chle gye .Thats all for today i know ki ye past ke part hai bt jarruri hai slowly slowly ap sbko sb samajh aa jayegathnx to all of u mujhe incourage krne ke liye koi galti shalti ho jaye to plz maf kr dena 😲
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The incomplete pages of her diary.


After 7 year in u.s.a at fortis hospital.


Inside dr.asthana cabin.( dr.asthana a senior doctor and mentor of naina)


naina-may i come in sir.


Dr.asthana-comenaina main tmhara hi wait kr rha tha actually mujhe tmse ek important bat krni thi ya ye kehlo ki tmhare sir ko tmhari help chahiye.


Naina-common sir apko or meri help ap to bs order kriye.


Dr.a-naina u know beta ki hm saalo se yhi settle hai yha tk ki apne rishtedaro se bhi phone pe hi bat hoti hai bt tmhari aunty chahti hai ki hm india jaye or kuch din whi rhe or her wish my command so beta mujhe kuch din ke liye india jana hoga .isliye main chahta hu ki mera ek important case tm handle kro.


Naina-sure sir apne mujhe is qabil samajha m glad sir main jarrur krungi sir.


Dr.a- i know bete ki tm mana nhi krti bt phir bhi case thoda tough hai kyuki.


Naina-don,t worry sir i will handle it .


Dr.a-ok naina ye lo case ki file main chahta hu ki tm ise ache se padh lo isse tmhe bhot help mil jayegi.


Naina-ok sir abhi to meri shift khtm ho gyi hai to main isey ghar jakar study kr lungi.
Bye sir.
Dr.a-naina.

Naina- yes sir


dr.a-koi bhi problem ho u can call me any time ok
naina- sure sir.

9:00pm at naina home


naina ne case file open ki and shocked.kyuki ye whi insan hai jise usne bachpan mein dekha tha or wo sochti hai


naina thoughts-sir bilkul shi kehte hai duniya bhot choti hai hm sb khi na khi kbhi na kbhi dubara jarrur milte hai pr aaj itne saalo ke bad u achanak unhe asa dekhna ek sapne jaisa hai .



Tbhi tiya ati hai tiya naina ki friend hai or fortis mein hi nurse hai .


Tiya -ye le naina .
Naina -ye kya hai .
Tiya -pain killer hai tujhe iski jarrorat padne wali hai na to maine socha tujhe de du .


Naina-or ye nek khayal tmhare mann mein achanak kyu aya batayengi .


Tiya-wo kyuki aaj mujhe pta chla ki tere sir ne tujhe naya case diya hai .


Naina-ha to ye to achi bat hai iske liye pain killer kyu.
Tiya -kyuki meri jaan sir ne tujhe jungle ke sher ke
samne phek diya or tu bechari ab sher se kehne wali hai ki aao sher mujhe kha lo haha



naina- very funny asa kuch nhi hai samjhi tu wo ase bilkul nhi hai main dekha hai unhe .i mean tv mein.


Tiya-oho meri bholi naina jo tv pe dikhe waisa ho jarruri nhi.or wo to ekdum ravan hai ravan ek bar sir ke kehne pr main usey injection dene gye to ase chillaya jaise main koi ldki nhi bhoot hu .or isliye to sir ne tujhe bali ka bakra bnaya hai nhi nhi bali ki bakri kyuki unhe or koi bakra ya bakri mili nhi.


Naina- chup kr tu ab jo bhi ho sir ne mujhpr bharosa kiya hai to ye case to mujhe lena hi hoga or tu meri nhi apne us john ki chinta kr hai kha khi koi or to nhi mil gyi na .


Tiya -khabardar jo mere john ko kuch kha to abhi ata hoga wo tu apni chinta kr main to chli aaj meri date hai john ke sath. Huh bhlai ka to jamana hi nhi rha .waise ab tera kya hoga kalia i mean naina main to kehti hu mt ja
next day.



At shikhwat place


someone in phone -dekhiye dr. Maine kha na ki main kisi naushikhia se apna treatment nhi karaunga.agar aap nhi kr skte to main kisi or ko appoint kr leta hu .


Dr.a-i can understand mr.raj bt koi bhi doctor start krega or hm ending process pr hai or wo meri best assistant hai apko koi problem nhi hogi.


Raj -bt dr. I told u main kisi se treatment nhi karaunga mtlb nhi thats all and he cuts the call


tbhi doorbell bjti hai ,and joseph ji darwaja kholte hai .
Joseph caretaker of raj.


Naina-hello m dr.naina mujhe dr.asthana ne mujhe yha bheja hai treatment ke liye


joseph-oh aap ander aiye main abhi raj baba ko bta kr ata hu.


Inside raj room

joseph,-baba wo koi dr. Ayi hai asthana ji ne unhe bheja hai .


Raj-to unse khiye ki jaise ayi hai waise hi chli jaye, jaiye aap.


Pr tb tk naina ander aa jati hai or raj ki batein sun kr kehti hai .


Naina-uski koi jarrurat nhi hai main khud yha aa gyi hu apko jo kehna hai mujhse khiye ,itna kehkar wo ruk jati ya khiye kho jati hai aone bachpan ki yadon mein.
Raj aawaj sun kr naina ki taraf dekhta hai bt pyar se nhi gusse se .

Raj-oh to aap hai ab aap aa hi gyi hai to khud sun lijiye mujhe ek naushikhiya se treatment nhi krani okkk ab aap ja skti hai .

Naina-apne khyalo se bahar ate hue ji apne bina mujhe jane ye kaise keh diya ki main ek naushikhiya hu.


Raj-look m not intrested to know u and ur capabilities ok.

Naina-i know dekhiye mujhe bhi koi shauk nhi hai ki main apko apni capabilities btau bt ye meri duty hai or mujhe isey nibhana hai .


Raj- phir to acha hai main patient hu or main apse treatment nhi krana chahta to aap ja skti hai main yha ke best doctor ko apoint kr lunga .

Naina -as u wish mr. Shikhawat main abhi ja rhi hu bt kl aaungi agar apka khyal badal jaye to thik hai wrna no problem.
That.s all next part
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part-3
raj se itna kehkar naina jane lgti hai
pr phir piche mudti hai or raj se
kehti hai.
Naina-mr. Shikhawat waise to ye
apki marzi hai to main isme kuch
nhi keh skti bt itna jarrur khungi ki
jaise aap ek naya doctor appoint
krenge waise hi aap mujhe ek
chance dekar dekh skte hai ,isse
apka koi loss nhi hoga ha pr shayad
mera profit jarrur ho jaye,
i mean apko ye pta chl jaye ki main
capable hu ya nhi baki apko marzi
,main chlti hu agar apka mann badal
jaye to plz call me.and she left
9:00pm at naina home-
inside naina room-
naina aaj hue bato ko soch rhi hoti
hai ki tbhi peeche se tiya aakar uske
shoulder pr tap krti hai or puchti hai
.
Tiya-to madam kaisa rha pehla din
,acha hi rha hoga tera patient itna
acha jo hai kyu.
Naina-plz yar not now abhi main
bilkul bhi mjak ke mood mein nhi
hu.
Tiya-acha to tu hoti kb hai
naina-tiyaaa
tiya- acha baba thik hai nhi krti mjak
,ab bta ki kya hua waise jitna main
janti hu us ravann ne tujhe saaf
mna kr diya hoga kyu???
Naina-ha yar bilkul shi kha tha tune
,mujhe yakeen nhi hota hai ki wo
ase hai ,maine to kuch or hi socha
tha .
Tiya-or kya socha tha tune.ki tu wha
jayegi or wo tujhe dekhega or hath
mein flower leke khega aiye naina ji
mujhe to apka hi intezar tha janmo
se .
Naina- tiya plz tu phir shuru ho gyi
pr phir bhi maine ase behave ki bhi
umeed nhi ki thi.or unka accident
kaise
tiya-ha ho skta hai pehle asa na ho
,wo kehte hai na dear pyar ache
acho ko badal deta hai .
Naina-mtlb tu kehna kya chahti hai .
Tiya-mtlb to tu tb smjhegi na jb tu
apne hospital ki duniya se bahar
akar thoda idhar udhar bhi dekhegi.
Naina-ab tu saf saf btayegi ki tera
mtlb kya hai
tiya-mtlb ye hai ki ek saal pehle hi
accident hua tha unka ek trip ke
dauran or accident ke bad doctor ne
kha ki wo chl nhi payenge ,bs phir
kya tha gf ne dil toda or sath sath
engagement bhi or phir whi purana
,ye duniya ye mehfil mere kam ki
nhi .
Naina- kyaa unki gf ne asa kiya tbhi
,tbhi wo itne rude ho gye hai yar
After some time.
Naina in her room-
zindagi bhi kitni ajeeb hoti hai kb sb
kuch mil jaye or kb sb kuch kho jaye
pta hi nhi chlta .
Next day
at raj place-
joseph-main to kehta hu baba apko
dr.sahiba se ilaj krwa lena chahiye
akhir kuch dino ki hi bat to hai .
Raj-plz ab aap mujhe gyan mt dijiye
josepeh-main gyan nhi de rha bs
itna keh rha hu ki jaise aap kisi or se
krwayega waise isse hi krwa le lekin
ab agar aap ye soch rha hai ki wo
ldki hai to main aapko ye bta du ki
har ldki ek jaise nhi hoti beta or
kaun sa wo aapko dhokha dekar chli
jayegi wo to bs apna kam kregi na
,phir bhi agar aap chahte ho to main
dusre doctor's ka no. dhoond kr lata
hu.
Raj-kafi tym tk sochne ke bad, ab
aap itna keh rhe hai to thik hai main
de deta hu usey ek chance pr sirf
apke kehne pr ok
joseph-haste hue ha ha, mere
kehne pr hi shukriya main abhi call
krta hu .aap bat kr lo.
Raj-pr main bat kyu krun.
Joseph-kyuki mana bhi apne hi kiya
tha maine nhi to bat bhi aap hi
krenge main nhi .
Or wo naina ka no. dial krte hai or raj
ko phone pass krte hai .
Naina receive the call .
Naina-hello .
Raj-aaham aham main bol rha hu .
Naina-main,main kaun sorry pr main
kisi main ko nhi janti.
Raj-main se mera mtlb tha ki main
rajveer bol rha hu .
Naina-oh to asa khiye ab mujhe
sapna thodi na ayega ki aap bol rhe
hai .waise apne call kiya jan skti hu
kyu??
Raj-ok ok maine te btane ke liye call
kiya hai ki main apko ek chance
dene ko taiyar hu to aap aaj se aa
skti hai ok ,and plz be on time
mujhe late ane wale log bilkul bhi
pasand nhi and he cuts the call.
Naina-excuse me ap mujhe koi job
de rhe hai kya ,helllo hello,
pr raj ne to call pehle hi cut kr diya
tha .
Naina khud se-huh bol to ase rhe
hai jaise mujhpar ehsaan kr rhe ho,
hey bhagwan ab aap hi mujhe
bachaiye or sir ko jldi bhej dijiye.
4:00pm at raj place.
Naina door bell bjati hai or joseph
door kholta hai .
Joseph-oh hello aiye ander aiye
baba ander hai aap whi chliye main
apke liye chai lekar ata hu.
Naina-thnk u or wo raj ke room
mein jati hai .
Good evening mr. Shikhwat
raj-oh to aa gyi aap.
Naina- ji ha and jaisa ki apne kha tha
on time to kya hm ab treatment
start kre.
Raj -sure
naina-raj ke pairo ko check krti hai
pehle or uske bad uske pairo pr
medicine lgakar puchti hai ki kya
apko kuch feel hua.
Raj-miss. Naina agar mujhe kuch
feel hi hota to definitely main apko
nhi bulate yha right .
Naina-akdu khi ka.
Raj-kuch kha apne
naina-ji nhi ,i mean ha maine kha ki
hm excercise start krte hai or phir
wo kuch moves krati hai raj se or raj
thode faces bnate bnate finish kr hi
leta hai.
After half an hour
joseph naina ke liye chai lekar ata
hai ,naina wo leti hai or joseph ji se
raj ko medicine dene ko kehkar chli
jati hai.
Ase hi do din ho jate hai bt koi
improvement nhi ho rhi thi or isse
naina tensed thi or raj abhi bhi full
cooperate nhi kr
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Part-4
THE INCOMPLETE PAGES OF HER
DIARY.
At raj place.
Naina raj ke ghar jati hai pr raj kuch
kam mein busy hota hai ,to joseph
usey kuch time wait krne ko kehte
hai.
Naina whi baith kr raj ka kam khtm
hone ka wait krne lgti hai or kuch
soch rhi hoti hai ki tbhi jospeh ata
hai .
Joseph-kis soch mein dubi hai
dr.sahiba aap??.
Naina- kya joseph ji aap mujhe naina
bhi to keh skte hai ye dr.sahiba sun
kr to lgta hai jaise main koi 50 ki age
ki hu.
Joseph-acha agar asa hai to phir aaj
se hm apko naina kehte hai ab to
thik hai na .
Naina- ye hue na bat.
Joseph-acha to ab btaiye ki kis soch
mein dubi thi aap.jarrur apki soch ki
wajah baba hi honge.
Naina- are wah joseph ji aap to bade
smart hai ,phir aap yha kya kr rhe
hai .
Joseph-waise philhaal to main yha
aapse apki soch ki wajah puch rha
hu .
Naina- ha apne shi kha apke pyare
baba ke alawa aajkl mere pass
sochne ko kuch hai bhi to nhi.
Joseph-mtlb
Naina- mtlb ye ki 4 din to ho chuke
hai pr abhi tk kuch bhi nhi hua or
mujhe nhi lgta ki hoga bhi kyuki
mr.shikhwat cooperate hi nhi krna
chahte .to ab aap hi btaiye ki main
kya kru.
Joseph- oh to ye wajah hai waise
nachiz ke pass hr musibat ka hal
hota hai or iska bhi hai .
Naina- or wo kya .
Joseph- aap yhi chahti hai na ki
baba apki bat mane.
Naina- ji haa .
Joseph- to bs hm btate hai na unki
ek aadat hai agar wo kisi se shart
har jate hai to harane wale ki har bat
mante hai ,hm bhi to ase hi unse
apna kam nikalwate hai .
Naina- shart or unse ,or bhla wo
mujhse kyu lgayenge shart or lga
bhi li to iski kya guarantee hai ki
main jitungi hi .
Joseph-are wo hm btate hai apko
bs wo kijiye jo hm kehte hai .( or
phir joseph naina ko plan btate hai
jo )
kuh der bad raj ka door khulta hai or
raj bahar aata hai to dekhta hai ki
naina jor jor se raj ka nam leke has
rhi hoti hai .
Naina- kya keh rhe hai aap joseph ji
mr. Shikhwat or intelligent.
Joseph-ha to aapko koi shaq hai .
Naina- ji nhi,bilkul nhi,mujhe to pura
yakken hai ki apko na jarrur koi
galatfehmi ho gyi hai .mr.
Shikhawat or smart.
Naina ye bol hi rhi hoti hai ki tbhi raj
piche se bolta hai .
Raj-or apko asa kyu lgta hai.
Naina pehle to chup ho jati hai pr
phir joseph usey bolne ka ishara
krte hai .
Naina- ji ha mujhe yakeen hai or
agar aap mujhe wrong proof krna
chahte hai to mere sawalo ka jawab
deke dikhaye .
Raj-puchiye
naina-ase kaise agar nhi de paye to
,kya krenge aap
raj-waise main harta nhi hu .
Naina- or har gye to ,no no ase
maja nhi ayega ab jb bat chli hai to
shart hi lga lijiye ki aap har jayenge
raj,-thik hai ap yhi chahti hai main to
bs shanti se apko wrong proof kr
deta bt ab jb ap keh rhi hai to lgi
shart ki agar aap hari to aap kl se
bina ek word bole shanti se apne
bache hue din ka kam krengi.
Naina- ok pr agar main jeeti to.
Raj-agar aap jeeti to ap jo khengi
main krunga.
Naina-ok done to lekin ap phir soch
lijiye khi ap ye na khe ki maine koi
cheating ki.
Raj- soch liya.
Naina-ok to first question dhyan se
suniye ,1 1=3 kaise hote hai
raj kafi time tk sochta rhta hai pr
usey ans nhi ata
naina- mr .shikhawat apka time
khtm to iske sath aap ka ek sawal
pura hua or ans hai .
1 1=3 , galti se hote hai koi janbujh
kr thodi na 1 1=3 likhega ,and she
laughs or joseph bhi bt raj ka face
dekhr wo chup ho jata hai
raj-ye kaisa sawal hua .
Naina-yhi sawal hai ab aap har gye
hai to apni bat se mt palatiye .
Raj- acha thik hai pr abhi ek sawal or
baki hai uska ans to main de hi
dunga.
Naina- dekhte hai ,acha to apko
duniya ki spelling ati hai .
Raj-ha ati hai world.
Naina-are world nhi hindi wali duniya
ki spelling.
Raj- ha to usme kya hai DUNIYA.
Naina- wah wah very good acha to
ab duniye mein I ata hai na .
Raj-ha to
naina- ha to question ye hai ki
duniya mein I ho to kya krna
chahiye.
Raj ko phir ans nhi ata pr phir bhi wo
ulte sidhe jawab deta hai .
Naina- ab koi fayda nhi aap har gye
hai ,waise iska ans to simple hai
apne wo song to suna hi hoga.
Duniye mein I ho to love kr lo.(or
wo hasne lgti hai )
and raj looks her with anger and
frustration
raj- ye kya faltu ke sawal the .
Naina-isey puzzle kehte hai jisey
aap solve nhi kr ske to aap har
gye,thnk u so much joseph ji (or wo
joseph ke pass jakar unko thnx
kehne lgti hai ).
And phir .
Naina-to ab jb aap har hi gye hai to
ab apko wo krne padega jo main
khungi to main apko bta du ki ab se
main treatment ka time change kr
rhi hu .
Raj- kyaaa.
Naina-jiii or ab time hoga subah
6:am pr or wo bhi apke room mein
nhi garden mein,or aap kuch nhi
keh skte hai kyuki aap ne khud kha
tha ( itna kehkar wo jane lgti hai or
joseph ko phir thnx bolti hai pr phir
piche mudti hai or raj se kehti hai )
naina-to mr . Shikhawat kl milte hai
subah 6:00 bje or ha late mt
hoiyega mujhe late aane wale log
bilkul bhi pasand nhi ok bye
Naina chli gyi pr raj abhi bhi shocked
tha or joseph ko ghure ja rha tha
joseph -oh are lgta hai mera khana
jal rha hai main abhi aya,and fara
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Part-5
THE INCOMPLETE PAGES OF
HER DIARY
raj naina se bet har jata hai jiske
bad usey naina ki bat manni
padti hai ,usey garden mein
acha bhi lgta hai bt he doesn't
show it to her.
Naina joseph ki help se raj ko
garden mein walk krane koshish
krti hai ,bt jaise hi raj ko time
milta hai wo phir se back off
krne lgta hai par naina bhi har
manne wali thodi na hai.
One day at naina home.
After her shift naina ghar ati hai
tiya whi ghar pr hi tv dekh rhi
hoti,naina pehle change krne
jati hai or phir wapas ati hai
tiya-hey aaj itni jldi apne
patient ke pass nhi gyi kya ???
Naina-btaya tha na tujhe ki time
change kr diya hai .
Tiya-ha wo mujhe dhyan nhi rha
waise aaj tu apna cell ghar pr hi
bhul gyi,or tere ghar se call bhi
aya tha maine pick kiya or keh
diya ki jb tu ayegi call kr legi to
tu ab bat kr le.
Naina-acha koi nhi main bat kr
lungi .
Tiya-tu phir bat nhi kregi main
janti hu ,tu asa kyu krti hai kitni
achi family hai teri ,kya tu ab
wha kbhi nhi jayegi.
Naina-asa nhi hai yar ,main
chahu bhi to us shehar se bhag
nhi skti,mana ki us shehar ne
mere mom dad ko chinn liya par
us shehar main unse judi
yadein hai ,mere bachpan ki
yadein hai ,
main to bs isliye bat nhi krti
kyuki agar kiya to badi maa
mujhe ghar ane ko khengi or
km se km abhi to main nhi ja
skti hu
tiya-acha baba ab senti mt ho
,jb tera mann ho tb kr lena.
Naina-waise tu ye kya dekh rhi
hai .
Tiya-are tera dhyan to gya pta
hai bhot achi movie hai aa na tu
bhi dekh.
Naina-nhi nhi thik hai tu dekh ,
lekin tbhi naina movie mein
kuch dekhti hai and she gives a
mischievous smile.
Tiya-kya hua tu itna smile kyu
kr rhi .
Naina- kuch nhi bs kuch soch
rhi hu actually soch liya
next day
naina raj ke ghar call krke
joseph se kehti hai ki aaj wo raj
ko khi bahar le jana chahti hai ,
pehle to asusual raj mana krta
hai ,bt phir usey jana hi pdta hai
.
Naina take him to a place jo
charo or se khula hota hai jiske
ek end par stairs hoti hai or
dusre end pr khaii hoti hai ,
naina joseph ko car se kuch
lekar ane ko kehti hai .or wo raj
ko stairs tk lekar ati hai.
Pr tbhi uska cell ring krta hai or
wo raj ko whi chorrkar cell pr
bat krne lgti hai or thodi der
mein wo bat krte krte khaii ki
taraf jane lgti hai
raj ko lgta hai ki naina khaii pr
dhyan nhi de rhi hai or wo aage
badhti ja rhi hai ,raj uska nam
lekar rokne ki koshish krta hai
pr wo dur thi ,or joseph bhi wha
nhi tha ,raj stairs ke neeche
hota hai or wheel chair ke sath
wo upar nhi chadd pa rha hota
hai,
wo naina ko bulane ki koshish
krta hai pr wo phir bhi nhi sunti.
Naina bhut aage ja chuki hoti
hai ,khaii mein uska ek pair jane
hi wala hota hai ki tbhi usey raj
ki awaj sunai deti hai,wo peeche
mudkar dekhti hai to raj stairs
ke upar hota hai or whi gir gya
hota hai,tbhi joseph bhi aa jata
hai wo raj ke pass jata hai,or
naina bhi .
Jaise hi naina raj ke pass jati hai
raj chillane lgta hai.
Raj-r u mad,lgta hai apko apki
jan pyari nhi hai ya phir lgta hai
ki apko bhi patient bnne ka bhot
shauk hai.
Naina-jan to pyari hai bhot pyari
hai ,kyuki jindar rhungi tbhi to
dusro ki jan bacha paungi.
Pr kya hai na ki kbhi kbhi patient
ko thik krne ke liye ek dr ko bhi
patient bnna hi padta hai .
Raj-aap kehna kya chahti hai.
Naina-yhi ki dekhiye apne aap
ko aap jo ki chl nhi skte apke
khyal se wo is waqt in seedhiyo
ke upar tk aa gye kaise.
Tb raj apne aap ko dekhta hai or
wakayi wo seedhiyo ke upar tha
usne ye mehsoos hi nhi kiya kb
usne chlne ki koshish kri or kb
wo chahte do kadam hi pr chl kr
aage aya tha or gir gya.
Naina- vishwas nhi ho rha na
,par yhi sach hai ki aap chl skte
hai aap bhot pehle hi chl skte
the lekin aap khud chlna hi nhi
chahte ,kyuki aapne is duniya
ke liye or duniya ke logo ke liye
apne dil mein jo nafrar pal rkhi
thi wo nafrat apko chlne nhi
dena chahti thi.
Main ye nhi kehti ki aap apni
nafrat ko bhul jaiye,nhi rkhiye
apni nafrat ko apne dil mein pr
aap jisse nafrat krte hai usey ye
ehsas dilane ke liye apko uske
samne jana hoga. Apni nafrat ka
ehsas dilana hai to km se km
exist to kriye,
log jane to shi ki aap hai or jb
wo janenge na ki ap hai to unhe
fark bhi padega wrna bnd kamre
mein rehne wala insan jiye ya
mare usse kisi ko koi fark nhi
padta.
Naina-joseph ji ghar le jaiye
inhe mera time khtm ho gya or
mujhe jana hoga.
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At Shikhawat place.@@@
Raj ko bar bar naina ki khi hue
batein yad aa rhi thi or na
chahte hue bhi wo sochne par
majbur tha ki kya naina ne shi
kha tha shayad ha .
Joseph-kya soch rhe ho raj yhi
na ki us ldki ne jo tmhari kuch
lgti bhi nhi ,tmhe itna kuch bola
diya.
Pr usne galat nhi bola.
Raj-ye aap kya keh rhe hai.
Joseph-sach hi to keh rha hu
main ,wo soch jo apka har apna
apse kehna chahte tha pr keh
nhi paya pr aaj ek anjan ne keh
diya,or sach yhi hai baba ki ap
bhag rhe hai is duniya se or or
yha ke logo se,par kyu ,jo bhi
hua usme apki kya galti thi.jiski
saja aap apne aap ko or har us
insan ko de rhe hai jo aap se
pyar krta hai apki fikr krta hai.
At fortis-
jo bhi kuch der pehle hua or jo
bhi naina ne raj se kha tha wo
sari batein uske dimag mein
abhi tk chl rhi thi or usi dhun
mein wo chli ja rhi thi ki tbhi wo
kisi se takrayi.or bina dekhe
usne kha.
Naina-sorry maine dekha nhi
(pr
tbhi wo shocked)sir aap ,
Dr.A-good morning naina or ye
tm itni jldi main kha ja rhi thi.
Naina-sorry sir mera dhyan khi
or tha par aap yha ,i mean aap
to kuch din bad aane wala tha.
Dr.a-ha aane to kuch din bad hi
wala tha pr u know na bete,ki
hm doctor's se duty to dur reh
skti hai pr hm apni duty se nhi
,to bs main bhi aa gya.
Or btao tm kaisi ho or tmhara
case,i know ki tmne ache se
handle kiya hoga by the way ab
kaisa hai wo.
Naina-maine koshish ki sir and
wo ab thik hai .
Dr.a-thnx beta i know ki tmhe
bhot problems hue bt ab main
aa gya hu na to ab main sb
sambhal lunga or tm bs apna
kam pe dhyan de skti ho.
Naina-she gives a weak smile
and says, sure sir.
Uske bad wo raj se nhi mili
kyuki wo case ab uska nhi tha or
wo kuch kehti bhi to kyu afterall
he,s just a patient for her .
After3 weeks
23-dec at fortis ,
naina dr.a ke cabin pe knock krti
hai.
Dr.a-come in.
Nainaander ati hai bt dekhti hai
ki ander koi baitha hai jiska back
naina ki taraf hota hai.
Naina-oh sorry to disturb u sir.
Mujhe bs ye mr.murti ki file
apko deni thi.
[ki tbhi wo insan jisa back naina
ki taraf hota hai wo turn krta hai
,and he,s none other than our
raj,naina is shocked to see raj
there,and they have an eyelock
tbhi dr.a bolte hai and dono
apne world se bahar ate hai.
Dr.a-oh naina meet ur
patient,and tumhe ye jankar
khushi hogi ki ab ye kafi better
ho chuke hai .
Naina-good to know sir,(raj ko
dekhte hue )congratulations.
Raj-thnx
dr.a-come na sit with us .
Naina-thnk u sir actually mujhe
round ke liye jana hai.
Dr.a-ah ok koi bat nhi u can go.
And naina chli jati hai and thodi
der bad after her round
.
Naina ek nurse ke sath chlkar
aa rhi hoti hai and wo usey
insturction de rhi hoto hai ki
tbhi wo nurse naina se hi takra
jati hai or sari files jo uske or
naina ke hath mein hoti hai wo
gir jati hai.
Naina-dhyan kha hai tmhara
mariya(mariya-nurse name)
(mariya kuch bolne hi wali hoti
hai ki tbhi kisi or ki awaj ati hai.)
Raj-whi jha aapka dhyan nhi hai
.(tb naina aage dekhti hai jha raj
khda hota hai with the help of a
walking stick)
Naina-aap abhi tk yha hai i
mean aap gye nhi.
Raj-(aage badhte hue )meri ek
aadat hai agar mera koi kam
adhura hota hai to main usey
pura kiye bina nhi jata.
Naina-(nurse ko jane ka ishara
krte hue)
kam kaisa kam.
(Nurse to muh bnakar chli jati
hai ofcorse itna handsome
bnda samne khda ho or naina
usey jane ko kehti hai .)
Raj-aap(remember raj
expression on red saree scene)
naina-jii
raj-ahh i mean ki mujhe apse
kuch kehna tha.
Naina-kya???
Raj-thnx bhi or sorry bhi.
Naina-or wo kyu
raj-sorry mere rude behaviour
ke liye or thnx mujhe mere life
ki importance samjhane ke liye.
Naina-no need ye to mera farz
tha koi bhi hota main yhi krti
(jhuti khi ki)
raj-ho skta hai bt jo bhi apne
mere liye kiya uske liye thnx
word km hai bat phir bhi agar
life mein apko jarrurat pade to
aap mujhe jarrur yad kriyega .bs
itna hi kehna tha.
Naina -To ab .
Raj-to ab ,mtlb (naina se bat
krne mein kho gye hai lgta hai)
naina-mera mtlb tha bol diya
sorry or thnk u ab or bhi kuch
kehna hai .
Raj-haa
naina-kya.
Raj-wo mujhe kehna tha ki,i
mean time ho gya na to i have
to go.
Naina -aap ja rhe hai .
Raj-ha wo kafi time se business
nhi sambhala to ab jana hoga ,u
know
naina-oh haa well best of luck
for u future.
Raj-thnx.
To ab main chlta hu bye,or itna
kehkr wo chla jata hai.
Naina whi kdhi hokar usey dekh
rhi hoti hai ki tbhi wo peeche
mudta hai and pass a million
dollar smile ,to her,
she also gives smile to him
and then he,s disappeared to
the corridor.
(with a hope she says ,may be
this is not the end )
at night naina,s home -
naina on the phone .
Naina -hello badi maa kaisi ho
aap .
Badi maa-to akhir tujhe apni
badi maa ki yad aa hi gyi.
Naina-asa kyu keh rhe ho aap
main to hmesha hi apko yad krti
hu.
Badi maa-jhut mt bol naina agar
tu mujhe yad krti to tu wha na
hoti yha hoti mere pass.
Naina-asa nhi hai badi maa ,aap
janti ho ki main wha kyu
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naina-asa nhi hai badi maa aap
janti hai ki main wha kyu.
Badi maa-ha ha janti hu ,janti hu
ki tu yha kyu nhi ana chahti.par
ek bat bta naina kya sirf wo hi
tere apne the kya hm tere liye
kuch nhi,kya hm tujhse pyar nhi
krte.
Naina-aap asa kyu keh rhi ho
aap janti hai ki main aap sb se
kitna pyar krti hu par.
Badi maa-main kuch nhi sunna
chahti hu.ek bat tu sun le ab is
bar tujhe yha ana hi hoga ,is bar
hm apni anniversary tb hi
manayenge agar tu ayi.or agar
tu nhi ayi na to ye soch lena ki
teri koi badi maa nhi hai wo bhi
mar gyi(and badi maa
disconnected the call.)
next day at fortis cafeteria -
tiya-kya hua hai tujhe aaj naina
ke naino mein mujhe khushi ki
jagah pareshani kyu dikhayi de
rhi.
Naina-(smile)and says tujhse
kuch nhi chip skta na .
Tiya-to ase hi thodi na mein teri
best wali frnd hu acha chl bta
ab kya hua.
Naina- wo kl ghar se call aya
tha.
Tiya-to
naina-ghar ane ko kha .
Tiya-to problem kya hai chli ja
akhir tera ghar hai tere log hai.
Naina-pagal hai ase kaise
achanak se chli jaun or jo itna
kam hai yha uska kya.
Tiya-to iska mtlb tu nhi jayegi.
Naina-jana to padega
anniversary se kuch din pehle
jane ki koshish krungi pr abhi
nhi.
(pr naina ko nhi pta hota hai ki
koi inki batein sun rha hota
hai)
after some time .
Naina ek pateint ko check kr rhi
hoti hai ki tbhi ek wardboy wha
ata hai .
Wardboy-dr.naina apko
dr.asthana ne apne cabin mein
bulaya hai .
Naina-ok main abhi ati hu.
Inside dr.asthana cabin-
naina-sir apne mujhe bulaya.
Dr.a-ha naina (with an serious
expression on his face)
kitne saal se janti ho tm mujhe .
Mere liye tm meri ek assistant
ek student se khi jyada ho.
Beti mana hai maine tumhe.
Par lgta hai ki tmne mujhe sir
ek teacher smjha.
Naina-ye aap kya keh rhe ho sir
.
Dr.a-sach to keh rha hu main
bete isliye to tmne mujhse apni
problem share nhi ki tmhe apne
ghar jana hai.
Naina-sir wo to main bs apko
pareshan nhi krna chahti thi
(and she thinks tiya ne bataya
hoga)
dr.a-tiya ne mujhe kuch nhi
btaya(naina shocked sir mann ki
batein sunn lete hai very smart)
wo to maine cafeteria mein tm
dono ki batein sunn li thi.
Naina-sorry sir main aage se
apse kuch nhi chipaungi.
Dr.a-its ok waise maine tmhe
yha ye btane ke liye bulaya hai
ki doon ke ek hospital mein
maine tmhara temporary
transfer krwa diya hai or wha ke
ek doctor ko yha bula liya gya
hai.
To ab tmhe apni duties ki
tension nhi honi chahiye kyuki
tm koi chutti pr nhi ja rhi.
Wha tm apne family ke sath bhi
rhogi or apne kam ke sath bhi.
Naina-(with a big smile )thank
you so much sir.
Dr.a-hmm ab ye thnx bad mein
bolna go and pack ur bags .aaj
rat ki flight hai enjoy .
Naina-yes sir ,i mean thnk u sir
,u r great and she left with
hurry.
At naina home -
tiya-to finally home call.
Naina-(pass a smile )
tiya-m so happy for u ,itns
saalo ke bad tu apni famiy ke
pass ja rhi hai .
But i really miss u yar main to
akeli ho jaungi .
Naina-don,t worry hmesha ke
liye nhi ja rhi hu jldi aa jaungi
and miss u too alot.
Tiya-acha ab rulayegi kya chl
teri flight ka time ho gya .
.
Ater say bye to everyone naina
goes to flight.
In flight -
ye kuch palo ka safar waisa hi
hai jaise bachpan se ab tk ka
safar mano jaise phir se mine ja
rhi hu main uss naina se jisey
whi chorr ayi thi kuch saal
pehle.
8 hours later.
Hatho mein apna bag liye naina
airport se bahar ayi .
Or kho gyi apne khyalo mein ya
us jagah mein ye shayad us
jagah ka hi jadu tha jo usey le
aya tha.
Apne khyalo ki duniya se
nikalkar, she call for a taxi kyuki
usne ghar pr kisiko btaya hi nhi
tha ki tbhi.
Uske samne se kuch log band
bjate hue aa rhe the or music
tha.
(phoolo ka taro ka sbka kehna
hai )
naina ko kuch samajh nhi aya or
wo log uski hi taraf aa rhe the ki
tbhi peeche se usey kisi ki awaj
sunayi di or wo bhi yhi song ga
rha tha ,and he,(guess
what)naveen.and naina shocked
with happiness or wo smile krte
hue usey dekh rhi thi.
Naveen-phoolo ka taro ka sbka
kehna hai .
Ek hajaro mein meri behna hai
(or wo ye lyrics gate hue naina
ke pass aya or laughs then.)
naveen and naina together -sari
umar hamey sang rehna hai.
(and both start laughs and then
naveen hugs naina )
after some time thet
separated.
Naveen-kaisi hai tu.
Naina-kaisi dikh rhi hu .
Naveen-ahhh (naina ko
dekhte hue ) baki sb to thik hai
thodi moti ho gyi hai .
Naina -(she gives a angry wala
look) bhaiyaa
naveen ran away from there
and the race between tom and
zerry start.
Naina-acha bs bs ab main thk
gyi hu .
Naveen-ha ha main bhi to ghar
chle.
Naina-ha.
Tb naveen uska saman car mein
rkhta hai or dono baithte hai
and start the journey from
airport to home.
Car mein baithe baithe naina
bahar dekh rhi hoti hai .
Naina-kitna kuch badal gya hai
na bhaiya yha pr phir bhi sb
kuch waisa hi hai.
Naveen-ha badal to gya hai pr
ab tu aa gyi na phir se pehle
jaisa kr dena.
And both gave smile to each
other
naina ko uske bachpan ke
flashsh dikhte hai wha ki har
jagah par.
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Naina ko uske bachpan ke
flashes dikh rhe hote hai .
Nagme hai kisse hai.
Shikwe hai ,batein hai .
(usey dikhta hai ki wo kaise gir
jati hai or uske papa daud kr
usey utha lete hai.)
batein bhul jati hai ,yadein yad
ati hai (wo dekhti hai ki kaise
uski mumma usey dat deti hai
to uske papa usey manane ke
liye chocolates lekar ate hai.)
duniya mein hum sarein,yadon
ke hai marein.(wo dekh rhi hoti
hai us naina ko jo bhot khush
hai kyuki uske pass wo do log
hai jisey wo sbse jyada pyar krti
hai,)
kuch khusiya,thode gum.(wo
dekhti hai ek jagah wo naina
khdi hoti hai jo muskura rhi hoti
hai.to dusri jagah wo naina jo
udas hai
ye hmse.,inse ham.
Yadein oh yadein.
Flashback end.
Naveen or naina ghar pahochte
hai,dono ander ate hai ki tbhi
koi unhe rok lete hai.
Badi maa-ruk ja whi tu ander
nhi ayegin
naina-badi maa.
Badi maa-ase kaise ander ane
dungi tujhe itne saalo ke bad
ayi hai ,pehle to main apni beti
ki najar utarungi.
After the process sb ander ate
hai.
Naina meets everyone,then
naveen says
naveen-tujhe kya lga tu hme
nhi btayegi to hme pta nhi
chlega ki tu aa rhi hai ,tiya ne
hme sb bta diya .
Naina-tiya ki bacchi mera sara
surprise khrab kr diya.
Badi maa- surprise to tune hme
de hi diya yha aakar ,main tujhe
bta nhi skti ki kitni khush hu.
Naveen father and naina,s bade
papa says.
Bade papa-ha ha yha pr sb jante
hai ki ap kitni khush hai,itni
khush hai ki inhone subah se 10
bar se tera room check
krwaya,12 bar tere favourite
khane bnane ke instruction
diye.
Badi maa-ha to khush nhi hongi
kya or aa to ase keh rhe hai
jaise aapne to kuch kiya hi nhi.
Bade papa- are are sb bta dena
pr abhi usko aaram krne do thak
gyi hogi bechari or tm ho ki.
Naveen-ha naina chl tera room
bilkul waise hi hai jaise tujhse
pasand tha.
Pr naina apne room mein jane
se pehle apne parents ke room
mein jati hai door kholti hai to
wha pr uske parents ki ek badi
si photo lgi hoti hai ,pass mein
hi pot mein roses rkhe hote hai
jo fresh hote hai ,tbhi bdi maa
ati hai.
Naina-badi maa ye roses .
Badi maa-ha beta usey bhot
pasand the na (she means
naina mom) sujit hmesha laya
krta tha uske liye.
(Sujit naina dad)
dono ka room aah bhi waise hi
jaise tb th kuch bhi nhi badla
tere jane ke bad har roj yha ati
thi ki unse teri batein krti thi pr
ab tu aa gyi hai na to tu khud
aana yha.
Naina- ha badi maa ab main aa
gyi hu na ab main khud maa ke
liye roses lekar aaungi ,.
Badi maa ye kehkar chli jati hai
pr naina kuch der whi rukna
chahti thi.
Naina- (to he parents pic) janti
hu apne mujhe bhot miss kiya
main bhi aap dono ko bhot miss
krti hu or janti hu ki aap dono
hmesha mere sath ho ,mere
pass ho duaa ki tarah ,
sorry mumma sorry papa maine
sbko bhot pareshan kiya na pr ,i
promise main sbka khyal
rkhungi ab ,jaise aap dono rkhte
the or wo whi so jati hai .
Isi tarah kuch din ho jate hai
naina ke ane se sb bhot khush
hote hai or naina bhi sbke sath
bhot khush rehti hai ab usey
lgta hai ki uska yha ane ka faisla
galat nhi tha.
After some days at ahluwali,s
house.
Badi maa on phone-ha ha main
bilkul aaungi aap chinta mt
kijiye wo bhi ayenge.
Naina-kisse bat kr rhi thi aap or
kha jana hai apko.
Badi maa-sirf mujhe nhi tujhe
bhi ana hai ,aaj mrs.mehra ne
party rkhi hai to hm whi
jayenge.
Nam sunte naina makes a face
and says-oh no.(look toward
naveen and gave a plz help me
wala look)
naveen-mom naina apke sath
nhi ja skti.
Badi maa-kyu nhi skti hai .
Naveen-wo,wo kyuki naina to
aaj mere sath jayegi na or main
apse pehle hi usey bta chuka
hu.
Badi maa-to kya hua tere sath
wo kbhi or chli jayegi aaj to wo
mere sath jayegi.
Then naveen,s father
interrupted
bade papa-are jane do dono ko
waise bhi mrs. Mehra ki party
main naina kya kregi .main chlta
hu na .
Tm dono jao and winks to both
naveen and naina.
Badi maa kuch bole uske pehle
hi dono farar.
Naveen - chl naina ready hoke
aaja wrna hm late ho jayenge.
Naina-pr bhaiya hm jayenge kha
apne to bahana bnaya tha na.
Naveen-oye buddhu bahana tha
pr sacha tha ,
ek new hotel khula hai or aaj
uski inogration party hai jiska
invitation mujhe bhi aya hai to
hm whi chlenge,
or isi bahane main ye bhi dekh
lunga ki agar teri shadi hogi to
ye hotel kaisa rhega .
Naina-ha ha very funny saf saf
boliye na ki ye dekhne ja rhe hai
ki apki or bhabhi ki shadi jb hogi
to functions ke liye hotel kaisa
rhega.
Naveen-naina ki bacchi bhot
bolti hai chl jake ready ho ja
wrna maa aa jayeni or tujhe le
jayengi whi mrs .mehra ki party
mein phir soch lena tera kya
hoga aaj to teri shadi pakka kra
ke hi ayengi.
Naina-nhi nhi bhaiya main abhi
ati hu .
And after half an hour both left
to the hotel.

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