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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: RNforever

very well written ...
raj naveen...naveen naina bonding is fabulous...
keep updating

love Arti



Hi Arti

Yup, there bonding is awesome. Just wondering how would Naveen react 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: fym23

Nice story, read all parts in one go. Thanks for pm. Plz continue




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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Hey u pen too good,

I am reading ur write about KAYA and now RAINA
2 of my fav pair and reading about them is WOW.
PM me when u update




Welcome over here! They are also my favourte tooo.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Komalbubly

Very nice dear ...

Waiting for next ...
And thanks for pm ...




Glad you like it



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

Amazing

Pl cont soon and do PM me when u update the next.

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Surely will 😳



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just updating now

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Originally posted by: drshabnam3

Nice update...waiting for next one...plzz do pm me when u update...😊



Thanks! Absolute ill message yu when I update



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nid246

I just love this story!! its amazing
Thanks for pm me this story also
And plz update soon




Welcome to Pyaar Ka Dard Hai

Surely will update soon



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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am thankful to everyone. Thank you so much for encouraging me and please forgive any of my mistake.

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Part 4

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Raj saw his wife in his shirt.

He gasp!

His feet automatically took him directly toward her.

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Naina saw him coming closer.

She look behind herself, only finding the washroom, avoid looking directly toward his eyes, but her gaze were on his action indirectly through mirror reflection.

**

Raj found himself near to her. He automatically hold her by her shoulders. He turn her around and showed her their reflection (in the mirror). He whispered in her ear, "Naina, I have never notice my shirt glowing before. Your naturally beauty is making my other shirts jealous of my black shirt. What should I do? I want to wear my black shirt now. Please can you remove it or should I help myself." Raj wink at Naina.

Naina gasp.

She lower her head automatically, feeling shy.

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Both of them felt blissful in each others' arm. Feeling of being embrace in his arm gave Naina a satisfaction of protection. Feeling of having her against his body gave him sudden desire to dissolve inside her forever. He lift her up, carry her toward the bed and gently place her down on the bed. He lay beside her on other side. He clasp their palm together before rolling on top of her. Slowly leaning into her and switch off the lamp. Moonlight witness their soul becoming one forever.

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Repetitive sound of knocking brought Naina out of her thoughts. She gasp emphatically and realize that she's still inside the washroom. She heard voice asking, "if she's alright", she replied back "I am alright. I'll just be out in few minutes". Slowly Naina compose her beating heart and convince herself to be normal and don't think too much about her dream. She just had. About them consummating their marriage on their first night. Again knocking sound disturb her. She breathe in and breathe out before opening the door.

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Once bathroom door open. Raj step inside after she step outside. He was exactly near the door. Also had notice her wearing his shirt over her nighty. Cold water smoothing down his desire. He just wanted to grab her (after seeing her in his shirt) and taking their marriage to next level. He compose his erotic thoughts and complete his shower.

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Naina sat up straight hearing the water stopping. Her anxiety began booming up. It got more uncontrollable, feeling him settle beside her on the bed. Having him side by side, made her relive her dream constantly. She close her eyes and held onto her palm tightly. Raj felt her discomfort.

He sighed.

Looking at her. He brought his palm closer to her face. He could hear rhythm of her breathing. He cleared his throat and got her attention toward him. She looked at him with fear. He withdraw his palm from her face and held both of her palm. They look into each others' eyes.

(Man kyon aise bahake hai
Tan kyon aise dahake hai haay
Dil kyon aise dhadake hain
Shole kaise bhadaken hain
Nas nas mein aag bahe
Ye kya ho raha hai
Ye kya ho raha)

After some time, they snapped out of the stare. Raj finally broke the silence between them, "Naina, I clearly understand your hesitation. Its natural feeling. Please don't torture yourself and fall ill" he gently caressing her palm. Slowly, her anxious mellowing down. She heard him saying, "I know, currently we are strangers. Gradually after adjusting to changes happening around us and our relationship. Automatically, our heart would guide us to next level in consummating our marriage. Also some intimacy is common between newly married couple. It would help us understand one another better." Raj wipe tiny drop escaping from Naina's eyes and saw smile curving on her face. Rajveer felt half weight lifted off his chest. He smiled watching Naina laying down on her back and snuggling inside the blanket. Raj, slowly leaning toward her face (Naina didn't show any worries and closed her eyes) and kissed her forehead afterwards laid on his side falling into deep slumber.

15min later

Naina open her eyes. Turning her head slowly toward her husband. She admires him for some time and felt pure affection toward him and gradually trust is building from her side. She roll on her left side (facing Rajveer) and slept peacefully admiring her husband.

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Night fades away. Sun rising up slowly in the sky. By seven in the morning, Raj and Naina are ready to leave for railway station. If they go by bus, it would take them 3hrs 45min and if they go by train, it would take them at lest 2hrs 57min. It was difficult for Rajveer and his family to depart. It was emotional farewell for everyone. This incident made Rajveer realize the importance of his family for him and his importance for his family. Small drop of tear escape from his mother's eyes. He remove his mother's tear and once again embrace his mother. He left home with smile on his face. Naina once again take blessing from her Sasurji and Saas too "Naina, please take care of yourself and Veer. Promise me" "I will, Maa" Naina assured her Saas.Samrat drove his Bro and his Bhabhi toward railway station. Throughout journey toward the railway station was quiet.

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Six in training cadet stood outside KMA recalling their first time stepping inside this building as individuals. At that time they were bunch of confused, disoriented, unorganized people and today they are united as one. It wasn't possible, if they hadn't meet their favourite teachers' among the rest. Because of them and their guidance, they are stepping into new journey of their second year. They already know, its going to be more difficult than before. But they have to remain together and focus on their goal of becoming perfect soldiers of their country and make their teachers' proud of them.

Before stepping inside KMA they greeted one another pleasantly forgetting their past rivalries. Starting a new journey of togetherness.

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Six cadets enter inside the mess and settle on their usual place. Their nosey voice echoing inside Suriji ear. He felt blissful listening to them. They were first six made place in his heart after his previous three cadets and now they are captains themselves. In fact two of them are teaching here.

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Naveen just entered his quarter and settle on the sofa. Today was hectic for him. Also he was missing his pal and mostly worried about his sister. She hasn't called him once after her marriage. He tried calling home several times, but currently some technical issues develop with telephone network in Nainital. Gently rubbing his temple to release some tension, same time knocking sound disturb his peaceful atmosphere. He open the door and found his favourite six cadets, smiling at him.

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10hrs 57min

Journey to Ambala was only 2hrs 57min by train. Reminding 8hrs took them to reach KMA ( Kanchanjunga Military Academy). "Finally, I am home" Raj told himself. His eyes sparkle with happiness.


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To Be Continued.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
nice part but don't u think its small ...
i m mean ek toh regular update nhi karti upar se itna chota part plz yr try to update long one...


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