Raina...Pyaar Ka Dard Hai... Part 8/Page 21 - 04/03/16

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Hi Friends!

Its been awhile since I wrote a fiction. Lately have been busy with work and work. For past few day, I had this concept develop in my mind. Its about our beloved couple "Raina" Rajveer and Naina.

I hope you'll enjoy the story. Also feel free to leave behind any type of response...

Sincerely,
Misti


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Everything is fair in love! Is it? I don't think so!


Why? Because "love is beautiful emotion" but "sometimes it can also be selfish of greed"
or "it can be very sweet and painful experience falling in love"


Pyaar Ka Dard Hai....Meetha Meetha Pyaara Pyaara

Table of Content

Setting of Pyaar Ka Dard & Character
Sketch - Page 1

Introduction Page 1
Part 1/Page 3
Part 2/Page 5
Part 3/Page 6
Part 4/Page 10
Part 5/Page 11
Part 6/Page 15
Part 7/Page 18
Part 8/Page 21

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Setting of Pyaar Ka Dard Hai...Meetha Meetha Pyaara Pyaara based on Army people and their struggle against life.



Characters of Pyaar Ka Dard Hai...Meetha Meetha Pyaara Pyaara


Naina Singh Ahluwalia (Priyanka Bassi)... main protagonist of Pyaar Ka Dard Hai... Meetha Meetha Pyaar Pyaara... sweet (Chashni) sister of Capt. Naveen Singh Ahluwalia... best friend of Addy (regarding "Addy" will be revealed throughout the story progress)


Capt. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat (Rajeev Khandelwal)... main protagonist of Pyaar Ka Dard Hai... Meetha Meetha Pyaar Pyaara... extremely strict regarding his nation... he believe his nation come first than other relation in life... he's true soldier of his country... best friend of Capt. Naveen Singh Ahluwalia


Capt. Naveen Singh Ahluwalia (Samir Sharma)... parallel protagonist of Pyaar Ka Dard Hai... Meetha Meetha Pyaar Pyaara... his thoughts are similar as his friend Rajveer for his nation, but his only weakness is his "Chashni" but never can betray his country and if he had to choose between his country and his Chashni than he'll choose his country over his sister... he's true soldier of his nation

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Other Characters of Pyaar Ka Dard Hai... Meetha Meetha Pyaar Pyaara


Ahluwalia Parivaar/Family


Mr. Raghav Singh Ahluwalia... father of Naveen and Naina

Mrs. Meera Raghav Singh Ahluwalia... mother of Naveen and Naina


Shekhawat Parivaar/Family


Mr. Ranveer Singh Shekhawat... proud father of Rajveer and Samrat
Mrs. Priyanka Singh Shekhawat... mother of two boys Rajveer and Samrat
Samrat Singh Shekhawat (Gaurav Khanna)


Second Year Cadets of KMA


Cadet Alekh Sharma (Arjun Bijlani)
Cadet Amardeep Huda (Vikas Manaktala)
Cadet Ali Baig (Harshad Chopra)
Cadet Pooja Ghai (Ghazal Rai)
Cadet Yadhuvansh Sahni/Yudi (Kunal Karan Kapoor)
Cadet Aditya Singh Raizada


Faculty Members of KMA


Brigadier Chandok (Puneet Issar)... Principal of KMA
Maj. Nair (Deepraz Rana)... Vice Principal of KMA and parallel antagonist of Pyaar Ka Dard Hai...Meetha Meetha Pyaara Pyaara
Dr. Shalini Gupta (Aparna Tilak)
Dr. Ritu Mishra (Shweta Salve)... parallel antagonist of Pyaar Ka Dard Hai...Meetha Meetha Pyaara Pyaara...trying to woo Naveen and Rajveer together, but each time she fails in her schemes
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Hi Friends... I hope you'll enjoy the introduction...😛

Introduction of Pyaar Ka Dard Hai... Meetha Meetha Pyaara Pyaara

August 15 1995

Mrs. Ahluwalia screaming in the labour room for several hours...

finally after long struggle a tear of happiness shine in her eyes while she listen to her child crying the moment it arrive...

3hrs later

Nurse brought the bundle of joy toward Mr. Ahluwalia and stated "its a girl" Mr. Ahluwalia took his daughter in his arms and snuggle to her face. Girl kept on watching the new face and smile cutely.

Mr. Ahluwalia inquired about his wife. Nurse stated that she's doing fine and resting after long process of birth. Once they shift her into private ward than they could meet her. Nurse took the baby and went inside the room again.

2hrs later

Mrs. Ahluwalia woken up and held her daughter

Same time Mr. Ahluwalia enter inside the room with their son.

Boy of eight years old watch his parents smile and crying same time. He march toward his mom and inquirer about the new edition she's holding.

Mrs. Ahluwalia smile at her son "Naveen beta, you remember few months ago I told you that you might have bother or sister" Naveen nodding his head "well Naveen meet your sister" Naveen staring at the tiny figure wrapped in pink towel...with his small finger he tries catching her tiny hand "Mumma, she's so soft and sweet just like sugar" Mrs. Ahluwalia smiles "Mumma, can I hold my sister" he asked his Mom.

Mr. Ahluwalia help Naveen sit beside his mother and together they held the baby and that instant Naveen called her Chashni.

Baby Girl smile at her new name!

{Naveen age 8}

5yrs later

August 15 1999

12yrs old boy slept peacefully cuddling his sister. Around 12 in mid-light he woke up and kissed his sister's forehead.

Quietly untangle himself out of her grip and left the room.

8hrs later

Girl of 4yrs old, woke up rubbing her eyes and stared looking for her brother, but when she couldn't find him... her eyes start getting wet and ran out of her room. She went downstairs and got shock of her life...

Entire living room decorated with Mickey Mouse and Minnie Mouse balloon stating "Happy Birthday Chashni" and birthday cake kept in the middle. She went toward the cake and read "Happy Birthday Naina/Chashni" Her mom, dad and brother sang "Happy Birthday song" afterwards her Mom help her cut the cake. She feed her brother first than her parents. They also feed her too.

Naina hug her brother tightly "I love you, Bhaiyya" "I love you too, Chashni" Mr. And Mrs. Ahluwalia smile looking at their children and pray for their happiness

{Naveen age 10 and Naina age 4/5}

14yrs later

May 6th 2008

Naveen smiled reading the letter he just got and rush toward his parents. He lifted his mom and twirl her in circle shouting "Mumma, i got accepted in Kanchanjunga Military Academy. I'm so happy" "Naveen, for god sake put me down" Naveen put his mother on her feet and hugged her tightly.

Meera's eyes got happiness seeing his son's happiness, but one person stood outside the kitchen hearing everything and started crying.

Naveen saw his Chashni running away.

Naveen freed himself from his mother and ran toward his sister. Naina went inside her room and started crying more while hugging her teddy.

Naveen went inside the room and tried talking to her.

First Naina pushed him away, but after sometime broke down more in his arm while Naveen hugged her tightly.

Few minutes later

Naveen wipe his sister's tear and explained her his dream of joining Army. At first Naina didn't understand anything, but looking at her brother's smile... she understood his passion for Army and hugged him with a smile.

Naveen felt peaceful seeing his Chashni smile...

{Naveen age 21 and Naina age 13}

5yrs later

August 12 2012

"Cadets, in few days its going to be Independence Day and its our duty to make his day memorable. Each Cadets will take part in arranging the event" Principal of KMA stated

Cadets express their happiness once BC left, but one person looked upset and left without anyone noticing, but one eyes caught him.

He also left behind him.

5min later

"What's the matter, Naveen? Why aren't you happy that in three days from today is Independence Day? What's wrong?" he asked his friend

Naveen look at his friend with moist eyes "Veer tum" Veer sat beside his friend on his bed and looked at the photograph his friend held "Naveen, who is this cutie? She look so adorable" Naveen smiled at Veer.

"Veer" Naveen smiled in the memories of Chashni "She's my sister Chashni" "Chashni" Veer repeated after him and made weird expression. Naveen saw the expression and smiled "I know what you are thinking, but Veer" "Naveen woh" Veer hesitated.

"Its okay" Veer smile. Naveen sighs "Veer, since the moment I met you" both of them smile remembering that moment "I can never forget that moment, Naveen" "Same here, Veer" "How instantly we became each others best friends" both of them stated together and share tiny hug afterwards Naveen shared his problem with Veer. Veer gave Naveen a simple solution that brought smile on Naveen's face.

{Naveen age 25 and Veer age 26}

4yrs Later

October 17 2015

"Ho sun-sun pyaari-pyaari meethi-meethi boliyan.. ho..
Keh de, keh de, keh de jo gal hai soniya.. ho.." many gals gather around the bride. The girls' aunt she start singing "Ho..
Kala doriya..
Kala doriya kundi naal adta hai
Kala doriya..
Ho Kala doriya kundi naal adta hai
Munda kohi na
Munda koi na meri nazar chadhta hai
Munda koi na meri nazar chadhta hai
Haan.."

Gal in valet pink lengha/white "Listen.." she goes toward the coward and started dancing around with the music words "Shaadi wai karni wai karni
Shaadi wai karni wai karni
Shaadi wai karni
Jahan naukar chaakar hon
Credit card hon
Credit card hon, bankon mein locker hon
Credit card hon" everyone smiling at the girl. She twirls around and goes toward two elder women "Saasu woh chahiye, woh chahiye
Saasu woh chahiye, woh chahiye
Saasu woh chahiye jo seedhi saadi ho" she leave those ladies and wink at her common friends "Saal ke chheh mahine.. aaha..
Saal ke chheh mahine jo teerath jaati ho
Saal ke chheh mahine.."

Bride's aunt also came toward the girl and pull her ear "Kala doriya..
Kala doriya kundi naal adta hai
Kala doriya..
Kala doriya kundi naal adta hai
Munda kohi na
Munda koi na meri nazaron chadhta hai
Munda koi na.. ha.." after begging the aunt to leave her. She goes toward her friends who are dress like a male "Hmm...
Sasura woh chahiye, woh chahiye
Sasura woh chahiye, woh chahiye
Sasura woh chahiye jo ooncha sunta ho
Club mein saare din.. aaha..
Club mein saare din shatranj khelta ho
Sasura woh chahiye.." she leave her friends.

Bride's aunt "Haaye main sadke jaawan kudiye" girl in pink lengha goes toward the bride and dance around her "Nandi badi mile
Haan mile jo nandi badi mile
Haan mile ji nandi badi mile
Giftein bhijwati ho
Paach ek saal mein aaha..
Paach ek saal mein jo maike aati ho
Paach ek saal mein.."

Many people attending the wedding, only kept watching the girl in pink lengha. One eyes kept on watching her with admire while another eyes watch her with lustful thirst...

"Hey.. Kala doriya..
Kala doriya kundi naal adta hai
Kala doriya..
Kala doriya kundi naal adta hai
Munda kohi na
Munda koi na meri nazaron chadhta hai
Munda koi na.." Bride's aunt dance on the stage with Bride's friend. Both of them share their views suddenly the girl in pink start thinking and sang the next sets of words "Aye listen to me
This is my final requirement. ok.." those words caught not everyone, but including her mother's attention too. She watched her daughter with smile "Haan..
Dulha woh laina, woh laina
Dulha woh laina, woh laina
Dulha woh laina
Jo dikhta solid ho
Lafda proof ho aaha..
Lafda proof ho
Asli unmarried ho
Dulha woh laina" girls mother go toward her and kissed her forehead. She smiles at her mother cutely, while her mother whisper her name softly "Naina"

Naina smiles "What a thaath yaar" bride's aunt also kiss her forehead. Everyone stare at her twirling her hips "Dil aisa husband chaahe
Jo mere naaz uthaaye
Kahin line aur na maare
Bas mujh pe tann mann waare
Mujhe world ka tour karaye
Naye naye gehane dilwaaye
Love mein fire si ho
Thoda shaayar vaayar bhi ho
Ghar thoda bohat saja le
Khana shana bhi paka le
Kabhi saut nahi woh laaye
Ek do bachche hi chaahe" older guy come onto the dance floor. Everyone staring at him while Naina share her views through the song "Husband woh chahiye, woh chahiye
Husband woh chahiye, woh chahiye
Husband woh chahiye
Jo hansta rehta ho
Har din band sa aaha..
Har din band sa jo bajta rehta ho
Husband woh chahiye." Meera goes toward Naina. Naina hide herself in her mother's arm "Arre pa pa pa pa pa pa pa pa pa
Pa pa pa pa pa pa pa pa pa
Purr...

Kala doriya..
Ho Kala doriya kundi naal adta hai
Kala doriya
Ho Kala doriya kundi naal adta hai
Munda kohi na
Munda koi na meri nazaro chadhta hai
Munda koi na..

Ho... o.. oye..
Aaho.. hey aaho..
Aaho.. hey aaho.." many people dancing around Naina and her mother. Suddenly that older guy came toward Naina and her mother. He wink at Naina before sharing his thoughts "Hey kudiye baawari
Kudiye baawari thoda dheeraj tu dhar le
Dulha paayegi..
Dulha paayegi jaisa tujhko chahiye
Dulha paayegi.." Naina freed herself from her mother and stare at the guy... trying to understand him "Hu ha ha ha..
Main to jogi hoon, jogi hoon
Main to jogi hoon
Sansar chhod baitha
Main to jogi hoon..
Main to jogi hoon
Sansar chhod baitha
Nai to main tujhse..
Nai to main tujhse fauran shaadi karta
Nai to main tujhse." Bride's aunt got mad and started bashing him "Oye oye baal safed hain tere
Kuchh to sharam kar dadaji" he wink at the bride's aunt and goes toward Naina "Baal safed hain par dil ka solid hoon
Lafda proof hoon
Lafda proof hoon, ab tak unmarried hoon
Lafda proof hoon..

Aaho.. Aaho.. Aaho.. Aaho..
Thoda shayar bhi main hoon
Thoda disco visko bhi kar loon
Tere dil ka doonga band baja
Ab tu mujhko husband bana.." he goes running up the stair and return coming down as handsome young guy "Hamein dekh yaar zamana
Gaayega bas gana
Hamein dekh yaar zamana
Gaayega bas gana...
Kya.. kya.. kya.. kya.. O..." Naina goes toward him on the stairs and held onto his arm "Ek haseena, ek deewana
Ek haseena, ek deewana
Ek haseena, ek deewana
Ek haseena, ek deewana" Naina and the guy finish the dance with tiny salsa...

Everyone burst out clapping their hands.

{Naina's age 21}

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superb yr
i loved it
raj naina r back love the new concept of ur fic
plz cont soon
thanks for pm n do pm whenever u update
n plz update frequently...
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Wow superb. Plz pm me wen u update
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awesome title...
nice concept...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...
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Nice concept cont soon n pm me
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Thank you to each person for supporting me and pressing the "like button"... its kind of difficult starting a new adventure. 😳

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