Raina...Pyaar Ka Dard Hai... Part 8/Page 21 - 04/03/16 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mylifereality

I always like the way u describe the emotions,of every characters,its simply superb heart touching, the bond between naveen and naina, are. Amazingly show here, and when i saw them na always think why dont god gave me a big Bro like naveen ahh such a sweet update and raj what to say about him he,is the best im every relation he have,friendship love or anything else,raj very give equality to all his relations just want to say mere liye bhi khi se le aao raj ki copy aap


I feel that emotion should be describe well to give the character a grow.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you so much 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Hey dear
I just found ur ff last nyt nd jst complicated in 1 go
It amazing dear naina n naveen reaction when they faced each other after marriage nd then raj 🤣
How raj console naina n nw naina yar
She is too tricky
Av to naveen ke accounts khali 👏

Update soon dear waiting 4 ur update nd do pm me too

Luv millee


Welcome to Pyaar Ka Dard

Its great feeling that siblings are connected after marriage. And shock knowing that his friend is his Saala too.

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Posted: 9 years ago




I know, I said that I would update over the weekend, but it was my birthday and I got sick after that. I am just typing the part. I'll update soon.

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Part 7

Entire mess filled with cadets. Cadets of each years are sitting in groups and complaining about their assignments. Huda stood up from his group and tries flirting with any newcomer female cadets.

Yudi made a bit with Aditya.

Yudi: Adi, I bet Huda is going to get slap today.

Adi: What is new in that? I ain't making many bet cause everyone know Huda is going to get slap and here come the slapping sound.

Huda's entire group laugh.. Huda held his right cheek where he got slap. He could hear Yudi saying "humara ye Huda kabhi nahin change hoga. Only chief can handle him" everyone agreed with Yudi. Huda promised himself, "whoever you are Ms. Fresher, you have messed with wrong person. And I promise to my Mummyji I'll teach you a lesson that you'll never forget. Its a Jatt promise" Huda left the mess in anger while his friends kept on laughing.

Several Hours Later

Jeep parked outside Galaxy Mall. Three of them step out of the jeep and enter inside the mall. Naina made mental notes of the items she wants to purchase.

Naina: First let's go toward the cell phone areas. Bro, you promise that you'll get me cell phone whenever you would come home and now you can buy it for me. Please.

Navin remember his promise.

Navin: Alright. Let's get your phone. Have you decide which type of phone you want?

Naina: Dummy, if I knew than I wouldn't have wait for you. Now help me find a good phone afterwards a nice laptop as well.

Naina smile at her brother. Navin just look at Rajveer. Rajveer gave him a wired expression, but he was happy seeing Naina happy.

Three of them enter inside cell phone store. Salesman showing every kind of models. Naina totally impress by Iphone 6s and Samsung Edge 6s.

Naina: Bro, which one should I get? Both of them look nice. Aap Bhi apne view do? (Naina asked her husband too).

Rajveer look at both models again and study them. He gave his view to Naina "Naina, mujhe personally Iphone 6s sounds good and the feature is great. Even I have Iphone 5 and its great." Naina thought about the Iphone 6s after listening to her husband, but she waited for her brother's response too. She look at Navin. Navin finally sighed and gave his view as well "Chashni, I agree with Veer that Iphone 6s is better quality compare too Samsung Edge 6s, but its picture quality resolution is awesome. Its your choice Chashni" Naina listen to both of them. Once again she looked at both phones and decide to buy Iphone 6s. Along with her Iphone 6s, she bought two nice cases. Both of them have flowers on it and a screen protector.

Iphone 6s -

Samsung Edge 6s -


2 Iphone 6s - Cases -



After getting her phone, they went inside the Laptop store. Buying her Laptop didn't take long. Both of her husband and brother chose best model and she was happy with it. Now they are going inside some Indian clothing store. Salesman showed different style of anarkali suits. Naina only chose five suits, one of her choice, two of her husband's choice and the other two her brother's choice.

Naina's Choice:

Rajveer's Choice # 1:

Rajveer's Choice # 2:

Navin's Choice # 1:

Navin's Choice # 2:

Navin: Now are we done, Chashni?

Naina: Not even close. We still have to get me three saris and some Pjs than one or two teddy than some household items. After we are done unless you and him need to buy stuff for yourself. I don't mind.

Navin wanted to cover his face, but smiled casually. Now they entered inside the sari store after paying for her dress with Navin's card. She strictly denies Rajveer, but Rajveer isn't happy that Navin taking charge of Naina's shopping. At least he bought the laptop without Naina knowing that he paid for it. Salesman is showing many type of saris, but Naina only chose one net sari after having approval from her hubby. Naina only both two sari instead of three.

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Navin excuse himself from PJ shopping. He forcefully send Rajveer with Naina. Navin came toward the canteen area and sat down with the bags. Rajveer and Naina enter inside the PJ store. Naina felt awkward looking at the nightwear with Rajveer. Rajveer could sense Naina's discomfort. He smile at her and wrap his right arm around her shoulder and whispered in her ear "Naina, I can understand your discomfort, but I assure you that we won't purchase anything that you don't like" Naina felt eased after listening to him. She gave a smile and selected few nightwear with Rajveer. Two of her choice and three of his choice. Also some matching undergarment as well.

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Naina didn't argue and let Rajveer paid. After collecting their bags they left toward Navin and grab him as well. Now they drove toward the market where Naina purchase some fresh vegetables, spices and reminding items for the kitchen. Now they are heading toward KMA after deciding to have dinner in the mess.

2hrs Later

Naina and Rajveer were going toward the mess, but orderly come and inform Rajveer that Brigadier Chandok would like to see him.

Rajveer: Naina, please seedhe jao than turn left toward the mess. I'll just go and see BC afterwards main tumhe join kartha hoo. Kya yah theek hai?

Naina: Please don't worry about me. I'll be fine. Main apka wait karogi inside the mess.

Following Rajveer's instruction, Naina came toward the mess, she saw the entire mess filled with cadets. Looking them, Naina step backwards and breathe in deeply and told herself "Naina, don't be scared. From now on this is your home. Just step inside and find a empty table to sit on and wait for your hubby." Naina step inside the mess. Eyes were on her, she kept straight face and found empty table toward group of four cadets. She goes toward the table and sit down.

5min later

Huda goes toward the table next to them. He sit down beside the girl. He heard the girl saying, "tum kaun ho aur why are you sitting here? Please get up. Main kis ka wait kar ray ho" she told him.

Huda: Aur Iss Jatt ko tumhari wait tha. I am Huda, Amardeep Huda. Captain of this academy.

Girl: What can I do? And I am not interested in that flirts like you. I have a taste of man and you ain't closer to my prince. In fact my prince is coming and I assure you that you won't rested in peace.

Huda watch the girl get up and rush toward the person who enter inside the mess. She ran toward the person and hugged him tightly.

15min Second Later

Rajveer startle with sudden hug by Naina. He wrap his arm around Naina and look toward the direction Naina came from. He smile looking at Cadet Huda. He shook his head and freed himself from Naina. He cupped her face and asked her "kya hua?" "Main apka wait kar re thi aur that person over there just come and sit on our table and start flirting with me. He doesn't care either if I am single or married." Rajveer wipe her tears and hugged her again afterwards took her toward the table. Several eyes were on them. But Rajveer ignored them. He's with his wife and not someone that he should be ashamed. He tap Huda's shoulder "so its Captain Amardeep Huda. Am I correct" "Sirji, I am sorry. I" "Its okay, Cadet Huda. You may leave. And I hope you have done your assignments for tomorrow class."

Huda disappeared from the mess. Rajveer and Naina settle on their table. After some time his cadets come and greet him. He smiled at them "how are my best cadets and where is cadet Sharma? I haven't seen him since I have returned." "Oyee Shah, I mean Sir, even our connection got weak with him after our return. Aur Sir who's this new feature with you" "Aah Cadet Ghai, this is Naina, my wife" Rajveer look at Naina and introduce his cadets "Naina, these are my cadets, ye hai Cadet Pooja Ghai" "Nice to meet you, Ma'am" Pooja said. "ye hai Cadet Ali Baig," "hello Ma'am, its nice pleasure to meet you" Ali said "ye hai Cadet Yadhuvansh Sahni" "hi Ma'am, everyone call me, Yudi. You can also call me Yudi, Ma'am" Yudi said. Naina smile at them "Its pleasure to meet you all. I have heard about you guys. But I never knew Cadet Huda can drop extremely low. He's just a" Naina felt Rajveer palm on her hand "a great personality." Cadets smile at Naina. They knew, what she was going to say. But stop only because of her husband and their teacher. Pooja spot Navin Sir coming toward them with another handsome teacher. Pooja already named the new hottie as Amir Khan. She smiled to herself and Ali greets Navin Sir "Hello Navin Sir" "Hello Cadet Baig" Navin replied to him. "Sir, who is this person with you?" Yudi asked. Meanwhile Rajveer only smiled, but Naina looked shock. She stood up and greet the person with a hug. Leaving Navin and Rajveer confuse, along with the cadets too.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...Naina was in total mood to bankrupt Navin but thankfully Rajveer saved him little bit 😆...but was too short n who is the person Navin is hugging...curiosity Hey...plzzz try to update regularly at least once a week ...I m really excited to read ur story...n wish u belated happy birthday 😳 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
naina ne navin ko pakka bankrupt kar diya hota but raj ne bacha liya...
so sweet of raj naina ki shopping me pure help ki ...
yr naina ne raj ke saath nightwear liya ...so sweet hope jaldi RN romantic moment dekhne ko mile gay mjhe ...
huda will be huda ...naina ke saath flirt ka chance nhi chodta par ab toh teacher ki biwi h ..control cadet huda nhi toh bure faso gay...
navin ke saath kon h kahi dr.shalini toh nhi ya capt.abhimanyu lets see kon h


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Posted: 9 years ago
So basically shopping ho hi gayi.. Omg so cute dreses..

Night suit shopping.. Ishhh i m blushing..

Aaw Navin ne acha kiya bahr hi rha.. :p

wow Huda.. Betaa sir ki wife pe hi line maar di..

Bt ye Navin k saath kon aaya.. Alekh kya?

I m xcited...

Update soon dear

lots of love..
Happy Holi
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...,huda is a flirt here too & now who iz the person with navin & how does naina know him...,please continue soon nd pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mind blowing

Read ur fic after a long time.

Pl cont soon and PM me

Love and then prayer
Yogini

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