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Posted: 9 years ago
superb end
beautifully penned down
kriya's confession was amazing
so happy for kriyaansh
waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww❤️❤️
wasnt this such a cuteee chappyyy☺️
Rey-kriya together finallyyy😳
aur kriya confess bhi kar liya😃
i totalllyy loveddd her confession too adorable❤️
rey helping her at d end😆😳

Rey gave her a smile: itna lamba chauda speech de diya,aur ye final words bolne ke waqt ataak gayi

Kriya bited her lip,smiled at him

Rey: okay as it is,I am so helpful,so I will help u in this,just repeat after me,alright?

Kriya nodded her head with a smile

Rey: I

Kriya: I

Rey: have

Kriya: have

Rey: fallen

Kriya: ahhaa, risen

Rey smiled: risen

Rey: in

Kriya: in

Rey: love

Kriya: love

Rey: with

Kriya: with

Rey: you

Kriya : you

Rey: dekha itna bhi mushkil nehi tha


soo cutteee the above convo😳

and naughty rey back in action😆
love d way he teases her😛
d canteen part was too good neil asking abt his bhabhiji😆
rey all happy kria n total shy mode😛
d indirect proposal of vicky to neha😳
and i loveedd d swaron part too😉
finally swayam asked sharon for a date👏

Kriya smiled at rey

Rey coming close to kriya,and kissing kriya's hand: u know,u r the god's or should I say,tumhare universejee ka greatest gift ho mere life mein!!!

Kriya gave him a smile

Rey coming more close to kriya and kissing on her cheek: I didn't say it ever,but I loved ur pranks too,u were the only one who could challenge me

Kriya's heartbeats were getting fast

Rey kissing on her other cheek: I am a fan of your singing,your dancing,the way u laugh wholeheartedly

Rey kissing on her eyes: I love your eyes,they express everything which u feel in your heart,ur rolling of eyes,ur lowering ur eyes,everything is beautiful

Kriya lowered her eyes,as she was feeling nervous

Rey: you always set up boundaries around you,thank you for allowing me to cross that boundary,for allowing me to love you,to adore you,to be with you

Kriya was feeling elated with his confession,she looked at him

Rey kissed on her forehead

Rey: you remember that day,when u were dancing in the rain,with no music,ujust the rhythm of your heart,u were like a free bird,I fell for you instantly...

He kissed her on her ear,caressing her chin,her neck with his lips

Kriya's heart was pounding so fast,that she felt it would come out

Rey seductively: I forgot to say one thing,I love the way,u bite your lips in nervousness

Kriya was about to stop rey: rey main

But she was interrupted with rey's lips on her lips

Rey allowed her sometime,to deny him,to push him,but kriya has already accepted him fully,she trusted him enough,she was also lost in rey's love...

Rey first kissed her softly,then he snaked his arms around her slender waist,pulled her more close and deepened the kiss,kriya's hands also clutched his shirt tightly...

Rey was the first one to stop the kiss,their foreheads were touching,and kriya hugged rey tightly

Kriya was finding bliss in his arms...

Kriya: I love you rey

Rey: I love you too kriya

Kriya stepped back from rey

Kriya: tum mujhe chodke to nehi jayoge na?

Rey: kabhi bhi nehi

Kriya: promise

Rey: pakkawala promise,and I am not going to ask you the same question,because I know u will not leave me

Kriya: achha,itna sure kaise?

Rey: because jaaneman,love me or hate me,but u cant ignore me

Kriya laughed and shoved rey: you know na,that you are mad

And again rey embraced kriya in his arms tightly: For you a thousand times over


and this part was damn romantic☺️

finally rey kissed kriya and promised her to not leave her forever❤️

beautifully written👏👏

gawwdd cant believe that this story got over

can u please consider writing an epilogue of sorts for this plzzz😳

in which we can know as to wat happened in the lives of all d couples

lovedd this parttt😳and the story😃



--Aishu--



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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update loved their confessions
Isse itna jaldi kyun khatam kiya I loved this story
I want to read more of your story
Waiting for your story
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg omg omg This is Just sooo sooo beautiful chapter ever I just love Each and everything of it Ria khubei Sundor Darun The confession was outstanding lovelyyy ufff that was so cute yaar they are love I can't believe it was the last chapter please write more na or start any new Story I m soo sad I love ur story so much Story was really great love it from bottom of my heart Do continue please or write something on KR I miss them so much love you ria u r a beautiful writer god bless you dear p.s - BTW where I u from Nd I m bengoli to :p
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanchita_ArSha

omg omg omg This is Just sooo sooo beautiful chapter ever I just love Each and everything of it Ria khubei Sundor Darun The confession was outstanding lovelyyy ufff that was so cute yaar they are love I can't believe it was the last chapter please write more na or start any new Story I m soo sad I love ur story so much Story was really great love it from bottom of my heart Do continue please or write something on KR I miss them so much love you ria u r a beautiful writer god bless you dear p.s - BTW where I u from Nd I m bengoli to :p


thaaank uu sooo soo much sanchita!!!!! sorry for such a late late reply,opening my com after 2months i guess,and the 1st thing i did is check into this account😊😊 thaaanks a lot to all of uuu for being always there for me and being a constant companion!!!!! u know what i myself will again read this story along with your comments,it will make meee sooo happyy again then!!!!!! i am from kolkata!!! tumio bengali,wooowww tomra khub bhalo,i will always remember u guys!!!!!!! 😃😃 are u guys still here?? i mean in this forum??
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: love-kreya

Awesome update loved their confessions
Isse itna jaldi kyun khatam kiya I loved this story
I want to read more of your story
Waiting for your story

thaaanks a lot!!!!!! actually i never even thought that i would write so long,and i would get even 1 reader,but bcoz of u guys's support only,i got the courage to write!!!!! so thaanks to all of u!!!!!!!!!😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

Awww❤️❤️

wasnt this such a cuteee chappyyy☺️
Rey-kriya together finallyyy😳
aur kriya confess bhi kar liya😃
i totalllyy loveddd her confession too adorable❤️
rey helping her at d end😆😳

Rey gave her a smile: itna lamba chauda speech de diya,aur ye final words bolne ke waqt ataak gayi

Kriya bited her lip,smiled at him

Rey: okay as it is,I am so helpful,so I will help u in this,just repeat after me,alright?

Kriya nodded her head with a smile

Rey: I

Kriya: I

Rey: have

Kriya: have

Rey: fallen

Kriya: ahhaa, risen

Rey smiled: risen

Rey: in

Kriya: in

Rey: love

Kriya: love

Rey: with

Kriya: with

Rey: you

Kriya : you

Rey: dekha itna bhi mushkil nehi tha


soo cutteee the above convo😳

and naughty rey back in action😆
love d way he teases her😛
d canteen part was too good neil asking abt his bhabhiji😆
rey all happy kria n total shy mode😛
d indirect proposal of vicky to neha😳
and i loveedd d swaron part too😉
finally swayam asked sharon for a date👏

Kriya smiled at rey

Rey coming close to kriya,and kissing kriya's hand: u know,u r the god's or should I say,tumhare universejee ka greatest gift ho mere life mein!!!

Kriya gave him a smile

Rey coming more close to kriya and kissing on her cheek: I didn't say it ever,but I loved ur pranks too,u were the only one who could challenge me

Kriya's heartbeats were getting fast

Rey kissing on her other cheek: I am a fan of your singing,your dancing,the way u laugh wholeheartedly

Rey kissing on her eyes: I love your eyes,they express everything which u feel in your heart,ur rolling of eyes,ur lowering ur eyes,everything is beautiful

Kriya lowered her eyes,as she was feeling nervous

Rey: you always set up boundaries around you,thank you for allowing me to cross that boundary,for allowing me to love you,to adore you,to be with you

Kriya was feeling elated with his confession,she looked at him

Rey kissed on her forehead

Rey: you remember that day,when u were dancing in the rain,with no music,ujust the rhythm of your heart,u were like a free bird,I fell for you instantly...

He kissed her on her ear,caressing her chin,her neck with his lips

Kriya's heart was pounding so fast,that she felt it would come out

Rey seductively: I forgot to say one thing,I love the way,u bite your lips in nervousness

Kriya was about to stop rey: rey main

But she was interrupted with rey's lips on her lips

Rey allowed her sometime,to deny him,to push him,but kriya has already accepted him fully,she trusted him enough,she was also lost in rey's love...

Rey first kissed her softly,then he snaked his arms around her slender waist,pulled her more close and deepened the kiss,kriya's hands also clutched his shirt tightly...

Rey was the first one to stop the kiss,their foreheads were touching,and kriya hugged rey tightly

Kriya was finding bliss in his arms...

Kriya: I love you rey

Rey: I love you too kriya

Kriya stepped back from rey

Kriya: tum mujhe chodke to nehi jayoge na?

Rey: kabhi bhi nehi

Kriya: promise

Rey: pakkawala promise,and I am not going to ask you the same question,because I know u will not leave me

Kriya: achha,itna sure kaise?

Rey: because jaaneman,love me or hate me,but u cant ignore me

Kriya laughed and shoved rey: you know na,that you are mad

And again rey embraced kriya in his arms tightly: For you a thousand times over


and this part was damn romantic☺️

finally rey kissed kriya and promised her to not leave her forever❤️

beautifully written👏👏

gawwdd cant believe that this story got over

can u please consider writing an epilogue of sorts for this plzzz😳

in which we can know as to wat happened in the lives of all d couples

lovedd this parttt😳and the story😃



--Aishu--



thaaank uu sooo soo much aishu!!!!! sorry for such a late late reply,opening my com after 2months i guess,and the 1st thing i did is check into this account😊😊 thaaanks a lot to all of uuu for being always there for me and being a constant companion!!!!! u know what i myself will again read this story along with your comments,it will make meee sooo happyy again then!!!!!! o gawd i never thought that i will get even a single reader seriously!!! i am soo happyy!!!!i will always remember u guys!!!!!!! 😃😃 are u guys still here?? i mean in this forum?? u know what i miss writing story and ur comments!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deepasubhash

superb end
beautifully penned down
kriya's confession was amazing
so happy for kriyaansh
waiting 4 nxt part

thaaanks a lot deepa!!!!!! loved ur comment a lot!!!!!!😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shivi_17

Aweaone ..

Loved d way u described their feelings ...

Cute confession..

Loved d whole update ...

Do pm me if u write something in future
And all the best wid ur job...

shivi thaaank uu sooo soo much!!!!! sorry for such a late late reply,opening my com after 2months i guess,and the 1st thing i did is check into this account😊😊 thaaanks a lot to all of uuu for being always there for me and being a constant companion!!!!! u know what i myself will again read this story along with your comments,it will make meee sooo happyy again then!!!!!! i will always remember u guys!!!!!!! 😃😃 are u guys still here?? i mean in this forum??
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Posted: 9 years ago
please unreserve kar dena,waiting for ur comment😊😊😊

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