Love me or hate me,a kriyansh story Thread 2(LAST UPDATE on pg17)

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HEY GUYSSS WELLCOMMMEE TO THIS NEW THREAD OF LOVE ME OR HATE ME A KRIYANSH STORY!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃

A VERYYY BIG THAAANK YOU TO EACH AND EVERY READER FOR APPRECIATING THIS STORYY SOO MUCH👏👏👏

IF THERE IS ANY NEW READER,THEN YOU CAN GO BACK TO THE 1ST THREAD AND READ THE STORY😃😃

HERE IS THE LINK: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4089470

NOW TIME TO START THREAD 2,I AM GOING TO UPDATE THE NEXT UPDATE VERY VERY SOON!!!!!!😊😊

THREAD 1 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4089470


THREAD 2:

CHAPTER 37: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4529611
(pg1)

CHAPTER 38: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4529611&TPN=5
(pg 5)

CHAPTER 39: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4529611&TPN=9
(pg 9)

CHAPTER 40: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4529611&TPN=12
(pg 12)

CHAPTER 41: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4529611&TPN=15
(PG 15)

LAST CHAPTER: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4529611&TPN=17
(PG 17)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏Congratulations for new thread 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations dii ,for the new thread !!!! 👏 👏 😃
waiting fr the update 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 777helly

👏Congratulations for new thread 👏

thaaank uu sooo much helly😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kriyansh-Arsha couldnt quote ur comment because i could see ur comment through my mobile only,not through desktop (my weird problem still exists)
but thaaanks a lot😃😃 going to update today only😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kriyanshholic couldnt quote ur comment because could see ur comment through my mobile only,not through desktop (my weird problem still exists)
thaaanks a lottt😃😃 will update today only😃
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[ NOTE: HURRAAY,THIS IS THE NEW THREAD OF THIS STORY!!!!👏 AND FRANKLY SPEAKING,WHEN I STARTED WRITING THIS STORY,I THOUGHT THAT I WILL NOT GET EVEN ONE LIKE!!!!!😳 BUT YOU GUYS LIKED IT,COMMENTED ON IT,APPRECIATED IT,HAS BEEN A PART OF THIS JOURNEY,HAVE GIVEN SUCH SUPERB COMMENTS,LOVELY SUGGESTIONS,BEEN WITH ME ALWAYS!!!! AND FOR U GUYS,I GOT THE OPPORTUNITY TO BE ON THIS NEW THREAD!!!!!! SO A BIGGG BIGGG THANK YOUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

THIS IS THE 1ST TIME A NOTE IS BEFORE THE UPDATE,BECAUSE YOU GUYS COME FIRST,AAAND I WANTED TOOO THHHANKK U GUYS FIRST!!!!!!!! 😃]

CHAPTER THIRTY SEVEN OF THEIR LIVES: LOVE IS IN THE AIR

Vicky: okay guys now change your positions,instead of sitting beside your partner,you have to sit opposite them,swayam and rey go and sit opposite sharon and kriya, aur main baithunga in khoobsurat ladkiyon ke beech

Neha: sidhe sidhe batao na,flirting karna hai

Vicky: kyun sweetheart,tumhe jaalan ho rahi hai?

Neha: o just shut up

Vicky: thik hai as a compensation,u sit beside the guys,I know ye dono mere tarah hot nehi hai,but u can manage na

Neha rolled her eyes: realllyy now!!!

Rey laughed: bhai ab chup ho jaa

They got seated according to vicky's instructions

Vicky: now question timeee!!!!!

Vicky: okkay,kriya tell me,rey ka girlfriend kaisa hoga? I mean wat should be her qualities or nature?

Rey got very interested in this answer,he put his face between both his palms,and hanging onto kriya's every word

Kriya was in a fix of wat to answer

Kriya(in her mind): kya soch rahi hai kriya,now is the time to get back at him!!!

Kriya gave a fake smile to rey and looked at vicky: actually vicky,rey itna bakbak karta hai,so her girlfriend should be some1 who is not sooo talkative,and can actually listen to him,rey's popularity matters to him a lot,so the girl must be like miss.india types and all,stylish and over the top!! And some1 who can make him shut up sometimes!!! Infact agar aisi ladki mil jaaye jo ye last kaam kar sakti hai,mein khud uuse shastangapranaam karungi!!!

Rey was narrowing his eyes at kriya,and it was kriya's time to arch her eyebrows playfully

Vicky: neha,rey ka answer kya tha?

Neha: well it mostly matches with her answer,slight differences here and there...

Kriya was shocked,because she expected him to give different type of answer: what??

Neha: ya kriya,tum itni shocked kyun ho?

Vicky: haan tumhe to khush hona chahie that ur answer matches

Kriya: ya ofcourse

Rey was smirking

Rey (in his mind): I am good at this games kriya,I always knew that u will say something along these lines,to get back at me,but darling its not so easy!!!

Kriya(in her mind): rey ne ye jawab kaise diya... rey ko kya aise over the top girls pasand hai,fir wo mujhse kyun... was its just a prank,was it just his infatuation,maine to ye ultapulta jawab aise hi diya,par rey to iise tarah ki ladki chahta hai

Kriya was a little disheartened and angry to know rey's choice

Rey(in his mind): u look so cute when u get jealous kriya,I love it,by the way maine jawab mein sab sach hi bola hai...haan maine thoda tadka de diya tha,but baatein sach thi,mujhe aise ladki hi pasand hai

Kriya(fuming,in her mind): agar aise hi ladki chahie thi,to mujhse itna romantic romantic kyun hota hai

Neha: next question,swayam ye bolo sharon ko kaise ladke pasand hai?

Swayam laughing: sharon ko to hrithik ki jaisi body, salman jaise popular,shahid jaisa cute aur srk jaisi romantic ladka chahie-------------- aisa mein pehle sochta tha,but I think the bus trip has made me got to know her in a better way,so my answer would be that sharon wants a guy who will pamper her,always be sweet to her,and will love her a lot

Vicky: wah swayam kya baat hai,thank god sharon meri partner nehi hai kyun ki main tera pehla jawab hi bolta!!! But u r right man,she said that she wants a guy who is sweet,cute,will love her endlessly,and will never scold her even if is she is at fault...kya demands hai madam ke!!! sharon aise ladki is universe mein nehi milenge,tere liye dusre planet jaaduuu ka intezaam kaaru??

sharon: o just shut up vicky

Vicky: okay chalo next question

Kriya: vicky,mujhe aur nehi khelna,I am very tired

vicky: par

Swayam: its okkay vicky, game ko tie kar dete hai

Vicky: okay then both the couples win the gameee!!!!!! Congraaats team swaron and team kriyansh!!!!!

kriya rolled her eyes,sharon blushed,swayam laughed

Rey: thaaanks buddy!!

Rey(whispering to vicky): by the way,I like this name kriyansh

Vicky: mere jaise smart logon ke sath rahega fir aise ache ache naam sun payega

rey laughed and went inside the hotel with vicky

everyone entered their hotel rooms

kriya freshened up and changed into her night wears... neha freshened up,and while changing into her night wears

neha: o no!!!

kriya: kya hua?

neha: arey I left my mobile outside only!! Jaha hum baithe the,o god I should rush there

kriya: ruk mein bhi aati hu

neha: nehi yaar,tune already change kar liya hai,mein jaldi jaake leke aati hu

neha ran off...

In the corridor,two guys were watching neha running outside

Guy 1: mission ka 1st step complete

Guy2: target ab akeli hogi,so its attack time

Guy 1: par aur ek sipahi bhi to rehti hai

Guy2: ab Queen tak pohoch na hai,fir thodi bohut sipahi ka to risk lena hi padega

Guy 1: Sahi hai,tu Queen ke pass ja,mein yaha bhagti hue sipahi ka khayal rakhta hu

Guy 2 gave thumbs up to Guy 1,And they went on to accomplish their mission

[as u guys have already guessed,Guy 1 is vicky,Guy2 is Rey]

[EARLIER,After the game,vicky secretively took neha's phone,so that neha go to search her phone,and rey could corner kriya... rey and vicky were friends for so long,that when rey gave signs to vickythat he wants totalk to kriya,vicky got the hint and so vicky targeted neha ]

Meanwhile,in kriya's room

kriya: kitni bhulakkar hai

visakha: haan neha to no.1 bhulakkar hai,neways,mein nehane jaati hu

kriya: itne raat ko?

Visakha: haan yaar,mere ko nahane se hi raat ki neend aati hai

Kriya; okay chal tu ja

Visakha entered bathroom,and kriya started putting her clothes in her bag,her back was towards the door of the hotel room

Someone entered their room,and closed the door

Kriya thinking it to be neha

Kriya: mil gaya phone? now lets go to bed re,I am hell tired!!

The person: tum to badi fastforward nikli!!!

Kriya was so shocked to hear his voice,that her eyes were almost bulging out of her socket

She abruptly stood up and faced the person

Kriya: REY!!!!

Rey smirking: the one and only!!

Kriya(WHISPERING,FURIOUSLY): ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND???? TUM ITNI RAAT KO YAHA KYA KAR RAHE HO!!!

Rey: tumse milne aur tumse baat karne

Kriya(WHISPERING): REY KYA BAKWAS HAI!! DEKHO ABHI PLEASE JAYO,VISAKHA BATHROOM MEIN HI HAI,AGAR WO BAHAR AA GAYI,YA NEHA WAPAS AA GAYI,I AM DEAD,JAYOO REY!! KAL BAAT KAR LENGE

Rey: nehi nehi,kisi mahapurush ne kaha tha,"kal kare so aj kar,aj kare so abhi"

Suddenly the sound from visakha's bathroom came,she was coming out of the bathroom

Kriya: hay rabba!!!

Kriya pushed rey behind the curtains and rushed to the bathroom door and stoopped visakha from coming out

Visakha: kya hua kriya? Tu mujhe block kar ke kyun khadi hai

Kriya: wo wo visakha,tere hair pe sands hain,tu ekbar shampoo karle

Visakha: arey maine to already shampoo ki hai

Kriya: to kya hua? Firse ekbar karle,aise sona nehi chahie u know

Visakha: kya bol rahi hai? mein kal firse karlungi

Kriya: NEHI NEHI!!! Kal kaare so aj kar ,aj kaare so abhi!!!

visakha: wat!! kisne bola?

kriya: wo re... i mean kisi na kabhi kaha tha,please tu kar le,nehi to mere ko neend nehi aayegi

Visakha: kya!! Kriya tu bilkul pagal ho gayi hai!!! neways,okay fine, will go and wash my hair again for ur sake!!!
kriya: thanks

Visakha(muttering): sab ka dimag kharab ho gaya hai

Kriya: o universeejee!!! Bacha lo mujhe!!!

She again rushed off to find rey

Kriya: rey please jaayo tum,koi bhi aa jayega,aur dekh lega

rey: mere line bohot achha copy kiya,matlab tum mere saare baatein dhyan se sunti ho

kriya: shut up rey,go nowww!!!!!!!

Rey: oye baatcutter,itne baakbak mein tumne ek baat kya notice kiya hai

Kriya(whispering): kya??

Rey: niche jo tumne mere dream girl ki description di thi na,wo tumne khud ka description hi diya tha

Kriya: wat nonsense!!

Rey: haan see,let me explain,tumne kya kaha tha

"rey itna bakbak karta hai,so her girlfriend should be some1 who is not sooo talkative,and can actually listen to him" u know wat jab mein tumhe compliment deta hu na,and when u get nervous,tum kuch baat hi nehi karti sirf blush karti ho,and u just listen to me...

2nd tumne kya kaha tha "rey's popularity matters to him a lot,so the girl must be like miss.india types and all,stylish and over the top!!" misss.india to bohot choti cheez hai,u r so beautiful,ke saari galaxy bhi sharma jaaye,ur innocence and ur smile is ur style which no one can copy,aur rahi over the top ki,then u r on the top only,u r out of this world!!!

And the last thing, "some1 who can make him shut up sometimes!!! " ye to tumhare siwaye koi ho hi nehi sakta,afterall tum ek hi piece ho,jo meri baatein cut kar deti hai,my sweet little baatcutter!!!

Kriya was mesmerized by her words,she was lost in his eyes,his words

Rey came close to her: waise night wears mein tum bohot ... lag rahi ho

Kriya's eyes got biggg: YOU!!!!!!!!

He winked at her and ran off

Kriya threw a pillow towards him but he already ran off to his room laughing

Kriya's cheeks were red due to embarrassment and blushing...

Meanwhile,in the beach

Neha was searching her mobile

Vicky: mera charm tumhe yaha taak kheech laya?

Neha: TUM!!! Tum vikram-betal ki tarah mere saar pe kyun baithe hue ho? Neways,yaha mein tumhare charm se nehi,apne mobile ke charm se aayi ho!!!

Vicky: neha yaar,apni cheezon ka khayal rakhna chahie na,kya pata kab kaun si cheez chori ho jaaye?

Neha: thanks for your concern,ab bakwas karna bandh karro,aur mera phone dhundo

Vicky: dhundne ki zaroorat kya hain?

Neha: kya matlab?

Vicky: arey jo cheez mere paas hi hai,uuse mein dhundu kyun?

Neha: tumhare pass??TUMHARE PASS MERA PHONE HAI,FIR ITNI DER TAK BATAYA KYUN NEHI?

Vicky: tumne poocha hi nehi

Neha: arghhh!!!!!! Now give me back my phone

Vicky: wo to de dunga lekin ek shaart hai

Neha(suspiciously): kya?

Vicky: aise maat dekho yaar,.mein shareef bachha hu,aisi waisi baat thodi kahunga

Neha sighed: ab bologe!!

Vicky: haan to shaart ye hai,ke wapas jaate waqt bhi tumhe mere sath baithna hoga

Neha: WHAT!!! NO WAYS!!! AATE WAQT KYA KAAM, PARESHAAN KIYA THA!!!

Vicky: fir apna mobile bhi bhool jayo,ye bhi wapas jaake hi milega

Neha: O GOD!!!! FINEEE!!! NOW GIVE ME BACK MY PHONE!!

Vicky: bhulogi to nehi?

Neha: vicky!!! Phoneee abhi!!!

Vicky: as u say madame!!

Neha went to her room,where kriya was standing and smiling

Neha: ab tujhe kya hua?

Kriya: ahhmm,kuch bhi to nehi

Neha(muttering): aj sab itne aajeeb kyun behave kar rahe hai

Rey found vicky in the corridor,

Vicky: baat kar li?

Rey: yes buddy,baat to maine bata di

Vicky: good

Rey: waise tu kab baat karega?

Vicky: kisse?

Rey: well main bhi notice kar raha hu,neha ko tu kuch zyada hi notice kar raha hai

Vicky: hatt aisa kuch nehi hai,haaan par ye sahi hai,ke ladki achhi hai

Rey: samaj gaya,matlab tera bhi wicket down

Vicky laughed:wicket down hone mein abhi waqt hai,abhi to bas field pe land kiya hai

Rey: sahi hai boss!!!

Rey hifived vicky

Meanwhile,in sharon's room

Sharon was in deep thinking

Sharon(in her mind): Swayam,u r sweet,u pamper me,u take care of me,I don't know whether u like me or not,but I do like you,the way u talk,the way u treat me,I find it really sweet,and genuine... I will fulfill ur dream date swayam,I will plan for you,and will confess my feelings for you,I never thought that sharon raiprakash will make preperations for some1,will plan a date for some1,and will take the 1st step,but swayam you are special,and I am feeling genuinely happy for the 1st time!!!! Swayam Shikhawat get ready,because Sharon RaiPrakash is planning a date for you...

Sharon(smiling): I think I am in love...

Rey(with a smile on his face): I am head over heels in love with her yaar

Vicky: Looks like, Love is in the air...



NOTE: Guys,a help required,is there any way to download videos drom official sites? Like i want to download a video of pyar tune kya kiya from zing official site,but dont know the way to do so... so if any of u know,do mention in the comment...

And ofcourse hope i lived upto your expectations,and u guys like this update also,will be waiting for the lovely comment of yours!!!!!!😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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for downloading videos this might help bt not sure...
check it out
Edited by Kriyaansh-holic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res
will comment once I read whole story
sorry mai 5 months ke baad wapas aaye so yaaa
will give my comment soon

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