Love me or hate me,a kriyansh story Thread 2(LAST UPDATE on pg17) - Page 11

Awesome update

Finally finally finallyyy🥳

Loved the update
Beautifully written neha and kriya ka conversation
Rey ka gussa hona zayaz hai aur kitni bar woh rejection ka sikhar hoga
I hope kriya iss bar apne dil ki baat bata de hope they will unite

Eagerly waiting 4 nxt part

Originally posted by: pia.raha

guys,next update will be a little late,i have some interviews in the end of this month,so abhi dimag mein sirf wohi ghum raha hai,story ke ideas aa nehi rahe hain!!

i will start writing the next update from the next month i.e in april and will try to write and update fast,do praay for my selection in the interview and wait for me

NEW PHASE OF THEIR LIVES: A new beginning!!!!!!!!

Kriya was lying on her bed and was wearing a genuine smile,it was as if she has pressed a restart button of her life and living her life once again!!! It was as if she was stuck in a mess for so long and she has just got out of it,alive,more alive than she has ever been!!!

Kriya showered and got ready for college..While applying a little makeup and wearing earrings,she was again lost in rey's world... All the while a smile was plastered on her face!!!

Kriya was remembering all her incidents with rey-------- her hatred for rey,their fights,then their developing friendship,rey teasing her throughout,wo singing competition mein sath jaana,competition jitna!!!!!

Kriya muttering to herself: waise ek baat to manni padegi,wo humesha baakiyon se kuch aur hi tha mere liya,he was always a little different,his challenging me,his teasing me always brought out those emotions in me,which no one else could ever bring out!!!

Kriya(laughing on her own): Jhansi ki rani wohi bulate hain na mujhe humesha!! But mr.reyansh singhania,I am Jhansi ki rani only for u,u always bring out that warrior side of mine!!!

Kriya finished her make up and got herself a scarf,and she remembered the time when rey helped her with the scarf after the singing competition,it was the first time,rey touched her,and that simple touch had an everlasting impact on kriya's poor heart!!!

After that,the new year,the pub incident,kriya getting into rey's house rather breaking into rey's house!!!

Kriya muttering: kriya kitni stupid harkatein kiya hai tune!!

Rey dropping her home when she was full talli,rey selecting clothes for her,his proposal,his closeness,goa trip,that game,spending the night together,kriya wearing rey's clothes!!!!

Kriya couldn't get rid of her grin: kriya stop smiling,why r u smiling on ur own,like an idiot!!! Stop it!!! Stop this daydreaming and go to college,u have to talk to rey

Kriya: o universejee,how will I be able to propose him

Kriya: nehi nehi,neha ne bola hain na,propose nehi karna hai,sirf haan bolna hain aur confess karna hain!!! Par wo bhi to mushkil hai,aj college bunk kar du kya

Kriya scolding herself: nehi nehi face to karna hi padega,kar hi leti hu,tension kaam ho jayega

Kriya went to college with her #missionrey

Kriya was searching for rey,but couldn't find him anywhere,she was walking round the corner when she bumped into someone..

Swayam: kriya,u alright na? itni jaldi mein kahan ja rahi thi?

Kriya: wo mein rey ko

Kriya stopped talking,she wasn't feeling comfortable talking about rey in front of swayam,as she didn't knew how swayam would react

Swayam understood her dilemma and gave her a content smile: kriya its alright,u don't have to feel uncomfortable,I am way past those awkward silences between us,we are buddies as we always were,so u don't have to worry about hurting me

Kriya gave her a relieved smile: thanks yaar swayam,and I am sorry again for everything

Swayam: arey no worries,I respect ur decision and I have moved on too

Kriya: greaaat

Swayam: so u and rey,I mean tum log sath ho?

Kriya: ahmm,haan,matlab nehi,matlab abhi tak maine uuse kuch kaha nehi

Swayam: then kehdo kriya,believe me it hurts a lot if u don't get ur love,so don't lose ur chance,go get ur love,and I know rey loves u truly,anyone can see it in his eyes

Kriya was speechless to know that everyone unbderstood rey's love except her

Swayam: abhi bhi der nehi hui hai kriya,keh do uuse apne dil ki baat

Kriya smiled at swayam and gave him a tight hug!!!

Kriya: u know u r the bestesttt person of this universe!!!

Swayam patted her back: hmm,bestest,aisa koi word oxford dictionary mein nehi hai kriyu

Kriya: haaan,mere dictionary mein hai,reserved sirf tumhare liye!!

Rey saw kriya hugging swayam from a distance

Rey angrily: haan aur iske saare gaaliyan sirf mere liye hi reserved hai,unbelievable!!!

Swayam broke the hug and looking at kriya intently: ab jaa meri kriya,jee le apni zindagi

Kriya laughed: Byeee

Swayam: ya byee

Kriya went on her way,and she saw rey at a distance and he was going away,she called rey,but rey didn't stop

Meanwhile,swayam saw sharon walking in the corridoor,and trying to tie her bracelet simultaneuously

Swayam went and stood in her way

As sharon was busy tying her bracelet,she didn't saw swayam

And bang,she collided with swayam

Sharon: oops,sorry I didn't see u

Swayam: but I see u

Sharon: kya?

Swayam: maine tumhe goa mein kaha tha na,that we should get to know each other more,wo ainvayee nehi bola tha,r u free after college today?

Sharon was surprised: ya,I guess so

Swayam took the bracelet and helped her in tying the bracelet on her wrist : brilliant,then mam will u give me the honour to take you out on a date

Sharon: a date?

Swayam: yaa,on a date,na mat bolna,meri saari planning waste ho jayegi

Sharon laughed: ofcourse not,tumhari planning waste kaaru,aisa to mein nehi kar sakti,I will go out with you today

Swayam: superb,be ready then,to feel special,.to feel like a princess,because u already are...

meanwhile,

Kriya ran and catched up with him,but rey was not stopping,he was still walking

Kriya: rey,ruko mujhe tumse baat karni hai,boohot zaruri

Rey: usmein nayi baat kya hai,tumhari har baat zaroori hi hoti hai

Rey stopped walking and faced kriya: according to u,but not according to me

Rey again started walking

Kriya: o universejee,give me patience!!!

Kriya again called rey and stopped rey by holding his hand: rey sach mein,I need to talk to u,rather we need to talk

Kriya didn't wait for rey's answer and didn't give any time to ponder,she pulled him along with her to the store room

Rey: kya hain kriya? Itni kya zaroori baat hai? mujhe aur bhi kaam

Kriya hushed rey: shhh,please rey mujhe apni baat bol lene do,please beech mein kuch mat kehna,mujhe nehi lagta mein itni himmat phir se juta payungi ya nehi,sirf mujhe ekbar sunlo,fir agar tumhe chale jaana hai then jaana,jitna kaam hai karna,but hear me out please

Kriya didn't look rey in his eyes,because his eyes would have just burned her,his intensity always scared her

She turned sideways,bited her lip and continued

Kriya: rey,the 1^st day I met u,I hated u,literally u brought out that violent stride of mine,that no one didn't even know existed,u always challenged me,u always used to irritate me,but I guess u already know that I hated u,but the one thing which u don't know is,u made me feel alive, I liked fighting with u,I felt strangely comfortable with u... I had a lot of friends,but u were some1 who was different from others,who always had a little soft corner in my heart... but I always used to ignore that corner...

Rey was surprised to know that ,he had a soft corner in her heart since so long...

kriya: U remember the singing competition,u helped me with my scarf,u cared for me,that one single moment made me feel so special,so different... I have never felt that way ever before... But I again ignored that feeling,because I was scared to even give a thought about that

Rey remembered that moment,it was special for him too,but he never thought,it created a place in kriya's heart too

kriya: But u always overstepped my boundaries,u always dismissed any rules I have ever set for myself,because as it is,u never follow rules

Rey smiled hearing kriya's accusations

kriya: After that,in new year party,u asked me a question,I was so speechless and surprised,that I didn't know what to tell u,so I masked all my feelings in the name of friendship,because I was scared to love,I was scared to lose...

I never said it aloud,but u dancing with another girl,u flirting with other girls always made me jealous,but I couldn't express my feelings to u ever,infact time and again, I have hurted u,lied to u that I don't feel the same for u,u confessed ur feelings so many times,tried to make me realize me so many times,but I always overlooked that,I always lied to myself and to u,because u were like a forbidden fruit!!! U are so different from me,our perspectives,our way of thinking are so much different that I didn't want to step into this dangerous territory...

Rey was mesmerized with kriya's confession

kriya: U like to try new things,u like adventures,u get bored of doing same things,and and I thought,u will also get bored of me,and I didn't wanted to fall for u so deep that tumhare jaane ke baad,mein jeena hi bhul jaayu...

I never wanted to hurt u,I just wanted to save myself... Par mujhe samaj aa gayi hai,that I am doing no good to anyone,denying my feelings... aur mujhse aur ye tension liya nehi jaata,so I am not going to deny my feelings anymore

Kriya faced rey with a determined face: rey,I want to tell u,that I I I

Rey gave her a smile: itna lamba chauda speech de diya,aur ye final words bolne ke waqt ataak gayi

Kriya bited her lip,smiled at him

Rey: okay as it is,I am so helpful,so I will help u in this,just repeat after me,alright?

Kriya nodded her head with a smile

Rey: I

Kriya: I

Rey: have

Kriya: have

Rey: fallen

Kriya: ahhaa, risen

Rey smiled: risen

Rey: in

Kriya: in

Rey: love

Kriya: love

Rey: with

Kriya: with

Rey: you

Kriya : you

Rey: dekha itna bhi mushkil nehi tha

Kriya gave him a big smile

Rey took kriya in his arms,and kriya was also feeling safe in his arms

Rey: pagli,mein tujhse bore hunga,ye socha bhi kaise,tu janti bhi hai tu kitni baadi entertainment package hai mera

Kriya shoved him

Rey: arey ab maar mat meri Jhansi ki raani,entertainment package to hai par exclusively mera,aur kisi ka copyright nehi hai!!!

Kriya smiled

Rey: I know we are different,par our love,its so strong that it will dissolve all our differences

Kriya: tumhe ek secret batau?

Rey: kya?

Kriya: I like it when we bicker,when u tease,it feels like everything is normal,warna lagta hai sab kuch gaalat ho raha hai is jaahan mein

Rey smiled: ab mein tumhe kuch bolu?

Kriya: ya

Rey: I am loving u in my arms,par agar koi aa jaye abhi,fir mujhe blame mat karna

Kriya realized their positions and tried to put some distance between them immediately,but rey was holding her from her waist

Kriya: rey,kya kar rahe ho? Chodo mujhe

Rey: arey,mein to mazaak kar raha tha,meri baahon mein hi raho,achha lag raha hai

Kriya: rey chup kaaro,agar koi sach mein aa gaya,to kya sochega

Rey: soch na kya hai,hum log adults hai

Kriya: o shut up rey,chodo,mujhe neha se milna hai

Rey: arey mil lena jaaneman,pehle mujhe ek kiss to deti jaayo

Kriya's eyes got big: pagal ho gaye ho kya,chodo mujhe please,koi bhi aa sakta hai,and I am getting late

Rey pouted: thik hai jayo,mere siwayein sab log zyada important hain na

Rey released and faked anger

Kriya laughed: rey stop it!!,I will meet u afterwars,alright,please smile

Rey: thik hai itni sweetly confession kiya hai,isliye jaane de raha hu

Kriya laughed: byeee

Rey: byee

Kriya: o ek aur baat reh gayi

Rey: ab kya?

Kriya: ye

Kriya hurriedly gave a peck on his cheeks and ran away

Kriya stopped at the door,turned back: Love you

Kriya ran away

Rey was smiling continuously and was touching the spot on his cheeks where kriya pecked him: I love u too kriya, a lott!!!

Kriya ran and hugged neha: neha,I am in lovee!! I have confessed to rey,all about my feelings,and I am officially committed now!!!!!!!!! Yuppeee!!!!!!!!!

Neha was also jumping in enjoyment with kriya: woooww,kriyaa,I am soo soo happy for u,u totally deserve this happiness,and u guys look perfect!!!!!!!

Kriya and neha was chattering and entered the canteen,kriya was grinning nonstop,they sat along with the whole group... only rey was not present...

Kriya was getting shy also,her eyes were also searching for rey...

Neha teasing kriya: kriya,apna dhyan humari taraf bhi do,boyfriend mil gaya,to friend ko bhul gayi

Kriya was getting shy: shut up neha

Neha: le aa gtaya tera hero

Rey entered the canteen and called the canteen manager: bhaiyya,aj jisko jo khaana hai,jo peena hai,sab free mein de do,mere taraf se party!!!!!!

Kriya rolled her eyes,and was hiding her blushing: show off!!!

Vicky: arey,kya baat hai bhai? Koi good news hai kya?

Rey: good news ye hai,that I got the GIRL!!!!

Kriya was blushing furiously!!!

Neel: Matlab humari bhaaabi!!! Kaun hain wo?

Rey eyeing kriya: yehi hain,isi table par

Kriya's cheeks were blushing red

Neeel: kya baat kar raha hai,fir to mein hi find out karunga aapni bhaabi ko

Neel was looking at every girl with his investigating eyes!!!

Neel: visakha tu?

Visakha: mein kisi ki bhaabhi nehi hu,bhag yaha se

Neel: ya thought so,then simmi tu ya rinnni bhi nehi ho sakti,kyunki simmi to mere sath hi thi,aur rinni to simmi ke sath thi,chain reaction hai bilkul

Neel: sharon tu hain kya?

Sharon laughing: pagal hai kya, rey ke bachpan se itne secrets jaanti hu,ke girlfriend hone se problem ho jayegi rey ko

Neel: fir to,do hi ladki bachi, kriya and neha

Neel: rey ke sath humesha jodidaar to kriya hi hoti hai,fir kriya tum?

Kriya was blushing and getting shy: mujhe library jaana hai

Kriya ran away from canteen while everyone was hooting for her!!!

Neel: ahaaa kya baat hai!!! matlab kriya is our bhaabhijee,neha sirf neha hain

Vicky: abbey ,neha bhi bhaabi hi hai,bas rey ki girlfriend nehi hai

Neha's eyes got big with vicky's indirect proposal,she rolled her eyes,and was hiding her smile

Vicky: haseee to phaaseee

Swayam: sharon,I think its time for our date

Sharon smiled at swayam: its time for our love

Meanwhile,rey found kriya sitting rather hiding in fireexit

Rey: to madame yaha ho?

Kriya: tum,tum yaha?

Rey: ab tum to bhaag gayi,ab akeli ladki bhaag jaye,achha nehi lagta,is liye sath mein socha ki mein bhi bhaag jayu

Kriya smiled at rey

Rey coming close to kriya,and kissing kriya's hand: u know,u r the god's or should I say,tumhare universejee ka greatest gift ho mere life mein!!!

Kriya gave him a smile

Rey coming more close to kriya and kissing on her cheek: I didn't say it ever,but I loved ur pranks too,u were the only one who could challenge me

Kriya's heartbeats were getting fast

Rey kissing on her other cheek: I am a fan of your singing,your dancing,the way u laugh wholeheartedly

Rey kissing on her eyes: I love your eyes,they express everything which u feel in your heart,ur rolling of eyes,ur lowering ur eyes,everything is beautiful

Kriya lowered her eyes,as she was feeling nervous

Rey: you always set up boundaries around you,thank you for allowing me to cross that boundary,for allowing me to love you,to adore you,to be with you

Kriya was feeling elated with his confession,she looked at him

Rey kissed on her forehead

Rey: you remember that day,when u were dancing in the rain,with no music,ujust the rhythm of your heart,u were like a free bird,I fell for you instantly...

He kissed her on her ear,caressing her chin,her neck with his lips

Kriya's heart was pounding so fast,that she felt it would come out

Rey seductively: I forgot to say one thing,I love the way,u bite your lips in nervousness

Kriya was about to stop rey: rey main

But she was interrupted with rey's lips on her lips

Rey allowed her sometime,to deny him,to push him,but kriya has already accepted him fully,she trusted him enough,she was also lost in rey's love...

Rey first kissed her softly,then he snaked his arms around her slender waist,pulled her more close and deepened the kiss,kriya's hands also clutched his shirt tightly...

Rey was the first one to stop the kiss,their foreheads were touching,and kriya hugged rey tightly

Kriya was finding bliss in his arms...

Kriya: I love you rey

Rey: I love you too kriya

Kriya stepped back from rey

Kriya: tum mujhe chodke to nehi jayoge na?

Rey: kabhi bhi nehi

Kriya: promise

Rey: pakkawala promise,and I am not going to ask you the same question,because I know u will not leave me

Kriya: achha,itna sure kaise?

Rey: because jaaneman,love me or hate me,but u cant ignore me

Kriya laughed and shoved rey: you know na,that you are mad

And again rey embraced kriya in his arms tightly: For you a thousand times over

NOTE: THIS IS THE BIGGEST UPDATE AND BIGGEST NOTE I HAVE EVER WRITTEN,BUT AS THIS IS THE LAST ONE,SO I THOUGHT JO BHI LIKHNA HAI,ISIBAAR MEIN LIKH DUNGI... And here we come to end of this story,a journey of kriyansh love story right from their hate to their love... And in this journey,along with kriyansh,swaron,viha and other characters, there has been YOU GUYS,MY READERS,MY FRIENDS who have been with me,who have waited for me,who have given me ideas,who have appreciated my work,who have given such lovely comments,that I get motivated!!!! Because of ONLY AND ONLY YOU GUYS,THIS STORY REACHED THREAD 2...

I never in my wildest dreams,I thought that I will get readers,infact I thought I will not get even a single like and will abort the story,but there were u guys,who liked my writing!!!!!!!! SO A BIGG BIGGG THAANK YOUUU AND JAADU KI JHAAAPII TO ALL OF YOU!!!!!!!

MAINE LONG UPDATE DENE MEIN KOI KANJOOSI NEHI KI,SO AAP LOG BHI COMMENT DETE WAQT KOI KANJOOSI MAAT KARNA PLEASEEE,THIS IS MY LAST CHANCE TO GETT YOUR LONG,LOVELY COMMENTS,SO PLEASE I WILL WAIT FOR THE COMMENT OF YOU GUYS!!!!!!! LAMBI LAMBI COMMENT KARNA!!! FORGIVE ME,AS I COULDN'T REPLY TO UR COMMENTS FOR THE EARLIER UPDATE,BUT I AM GFOING TO GIVE REPLIES FOR SURE,DFOR THE EARLIER UPDATES ALSO. I JUST THOUGHT KI PEHLE UPDATE KHATAM KARDU,ISLIYE REPLY NEHI DIYA... KAL SE REPLY CHAAALU... THAANK YOU AGAIIN,HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS UPDATE!!!!!!! AND THE LAST LINE IS FROM A BOOK "KITE RUNNER" I LOVED THIS LINE THERE,SO USED IT HERE...

P.S: IF ANYONE WISH TO WRITE THIS STORY IN A DIFFERENT WAY,OR WANT TO WRITE THE POST LOVE STORY OF KRIYANSH,THEN YOU ARE FREE TO DO SO,I DON'T HAVE ANY COPYRIGHT😊😊😊

AND I THINK I GOT A JOB,100% SURE NEHI HU,BUT LAGTA HAI HO JAYEGA😊😊

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Love the last update
Cute confession
Sweet and cute
Can't wait to read more of your stories

amazing

Aweaone ..

Loved d way u described their feelings ...

Cute confession..

Loved d whole update ...

Do pm me if u write something in future
And all the best wid ur job...