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Posted: 9 years ago
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update is here!! i am really very sorry for the delay!! whatever i could write in 1 hour i just wrote and m presenting it to u!!
due to lack of time i couldnt read it!! soo plzz ignore typo errors!! 😊
have a wonderful reading!!😃😃
remember!!
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Chapter-3

Rey was left eyes wide open after reading both of the papers!!

"ye k.ky.kya hai?"

"kyu aankhe nahin hai? Do papers hai jo kuch saal pehle aapne mujhe diye the!! But dono mein ek change hai!!! Is baar dono pe mere signatures hai aur aapke nahin!!"

"but kriya!!"
she came dangerously close to him and kept her finger on his lips!! Her eyes were red they spoke all what was stored inside her!!

"rey is baar meri bari hai!! Aur aap kuch bhi nahin kar paoge!! I swear I will take away everything from you!! Spcly those things which you snatched from me!! I hope you remember what all are they!!"

She went away from rey

"chalo agar yaad nahin hai toh mai yaad dila deti hoon!! Mera chain cheena tha aapne, meri such shanty tak cheen lit hi aapne.. aur toh aur mujhse mera pyaar bhi apne door kar diya tha and last aapne mujhse meri sabse kimti cheez actually meri jaan hi le lit hi aapne mujhse meri beti ko cheen liya tha!!" she shouted her heart out letting few tear drops roll down her cheek!!

Rey sood there numb because he knew that all his worst nightmares were to be alive!! Whatever bad he dreamt till the date was to come!!

Kriya picked her bag up and left from so called singhania mansion!

Rey sat on the sofa and picked up both of the papers!!

"div..dii...divorce dena chahti ho na!! abb kya... kya tum mujhse itna pyaar bhi nahin karti ki..ki.ki meri maj..majboori ko samjh pao!!" he said so letting tears roll down his cheek

"chalo koi baat nahin mai sajh sakta hoon ki tumhare dil pe kya guzar rahi hogi par ye..ye kya hai... cus..cust.coustody papers!! Kriya kaise ho sakti ho tum itni selfish ki mujhse meri jaan hi cheen lo!! Mai janta hoon ki maine bhi pehle yahi kiya tha ya phir shayad is se bhi bura kiya tha!! Lekin meri majboori thi mai karna nahin chahta tha lekin karna pada tha!! Tumhare liye., hamare liye, priya ke liye kiya tha maine ye sab!! Kash mai tumhe kisi tarah sach bata paoon!!"

Rey left those papers on the table and headed towards his room

"Dadyyy dadyyy!!!!! Kahan ho aap" riya said throwing her school bag on the sofa!!!!

"baby aa raha hoon" rey rushed down the staircase wiping of his dry tears

"ohooo aaj half day mein waapas kya hua?"

"wo aaj school mein annual day ki practice ho rahi thi"

"ohhh... but wait a minute you too took part in it naaa!!!"

"ofooo budhu papa!! Mujhe toh bas speech deni hai aur uske liye school mein practice thodi na karte hai"

"achaaa bachu!! Kisne kaha ki speech ke liye school mein practice nahin karte?"

"lily mam ne"

Rey's eyes were wide open hearing this name!!

"k.kis.kisne?"

"lily mam ne!! she said that go and tell you to help me preparing my speech!! Because its topic is my mom!!"

"mom!! Ok fine u go and change!! Mai aapke liye snacks leke aata hoon"

"ok byyy" she pecked rey's cheek and left for her room!!

"Robert go and get some anacks for riya baby!!!"

yes sir!! Said Robert

rey went in his room with the same fearful face which he had in the morning!!

"kya ho raha hai ye mere sath!! Pehle kriya and now lily!!"

Rey was sitting on his bed when his mind went in flashback!!

lily- look rey you have to follow whatever I say otherwise these pictures and video!! It wont take me more than a minute to make them viral!! My dear

rey- I'll do whatever you say lily!!

lily- hmmm looks you are afraid!!

Rey makes a frustrated face!!

lily- well how may I know that you are true at this pt.

Rey- I'll do whatever you say

lily- really!! Well than kiss me right now!!

Rey- wth!! Are you in senses?

lily- yeahh..

"ahhh!! Rey don't be mad and think sooo much!!! She was gone!! And remebr this world and there are many lily's in this world!!"
rey get up and leaves to the washroom!!

**********

Riya comes to the hall and her eyes go on those papers she picks them up and was trying to acknowledge about what they r for but the high standard English was making her unable to read!! Just then she saw her name on one of the paper and her smart brain gave her an idea that somewhere these papers were related to their family!!

She was about to read them further so that she could acknowledge a bit more when rey comes and sntches those papers from her

"ab.ri..riya aapne snacks kha liye?"

"no dad!! But what r these."
"ummm.. go riya uncle Robert is waiting for you!!"

"hmmm"

She leaves the hall and goes to kitchen!!

"I can't let riya know about it like this!! Mujhe use khud batana hoga!!"

riyaaa!!! Riyaaa!!!! R u home baby?" it was kriya who was calling her name standing at the main door

"mummmaaa!!" riya runs and climbs up in riya's lap!!

"riya you know what mumma appko bahut miss karti hai!!!"

"mumma phir aap hamre sath kyu nahin rehte? Aapko pata hai mujhe akele sone mein kitna dar lagta hai!! And agar mai papa ke sath sone ki koshish karu naa toh so hi nahin paati kyunki wo hamesha snore karte rehte hai!! And that too very loudly!!"

Kriya giggles a bit

"no baby abhi mumma aapke sath nahin reh sakti!! But I promis ki ek baar mai ye case"

"abbb... ek baar mumma thik ho jayengi toh hamre sath aake rahengi riya!! Aur aap na apnea bb tak snacks nahin khaye go and eat them" rey said interrupting kriya
riya leaves from there

"m sorry.. wo I didn't knew that aapne riya ko" apologized kriya

"kuch nahin bataya..i will tell her all about it myself!!" explained rey

"it will be better!!" said kriya

She said coldly and left to kitchen where riya was eating her snacks...

She and riya were enjoying their time and rey stood in a corner watching them both!!

"I just cant let this happen I have to do smthn!!i have to!!" said rey!!

Rey left ro his room and told riya to go out with kriya as kriya asked to riya about it!!

Rey sat on the bed and slid his diary out of the drawer flip flopped the starting pages and reached the page where he left from!!

Goshhh!! I cant tell you what a day it was!! I really feel that I will one day fall in <3 with her!! You know naa that tomorrow is farewell party!! We have planned all about what to do for our seniors!! It was all set!! Me and mine group were doing rehersals for our performance but then!! Slam!!! Sharon ka leg!! Wo wo twist hogaya and firstaid room ki nurse ne kaha ki shayad fracture hai!!!! And she want bed rest right now!! Hamne practice khtam ki bt still our dance looked incomplete because of the lifts!!!sharon mai aur swayam lifts karne wale the but!! I and swayam were in college at night! And then!!!! ❤️❤️❤️

I and swayam were near rehrsal hall when we heard somesong being played in rehrsal hall!!

We both headed towards the rehersal hall when we saw kriya!! Yaa the kriya ghai dancing!! We were shocked!!

She was dancing amazingly!! Looked very beautiful too!!

Dnace video- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hpK7B7y3dnE (just imagine this!! 😛😛 )

She stopped her dance and looked in the mirror with a beautiful smile carved up on her face!!

She turned back to find two boys gawking at her!!

"what!!"

"hey umm.. this is swayam!!"

"hey swayam!! Don't think I don't know who you gyzz are!! Obvio I know you both GS and ACS of our college"

"and also the leader and co leader of" rey was cut in btw.

"of D3 the team! Am I right Mr. Reyaansh Singhania!!"

"yes you are!! Miss. Kriya ?' said rey

"Kriya Ghai"

"mm kriya tum itna acha dance?"

"umm swayam actually wo kya hai mai NYDA ki student bhi thi!!"

"itna talent!! Well I should say impressive!! You dance really very very beautifully kriya!!"

Said rey

"thanks reyaansh!!"

"ummm I will be glad if you call me rey!!"

"hmmm so ok rey!!!"

"kriya!!! Abbb.b agar tumhe problem na ho toh kya tum..ummm.hamari dance team jon karogi?" asked swayam

"han wo hamari ek member Sharon ke leg mein fracture ho gaya!!" said rey

"but mai Sharon ki jagah kaise?" asked kriya!!

"plzzz" pleaded both of them

"ok" kriya cheered!!

Rey forwarded his hand

"so friends?"😃

"ya sure" 😃 they shaked hands and then kriya hugged rey!! She did the same with swayam!!

They explained her all the situation of their dance which they had to peform tomorrow and kriya agreed to replace Sharon in that dance!!

The trio practiced all those lifts till 11 and then decided to take a brake for half hour!! Swayam went out for filling a water bottle and rey was left alone with kriya in the rehersal hall!!

Kriya picked up her bottle and emptied it over her face making her look even more beautiful!!

Rey was gawking 😲 at her when swayam came and tapped rey's shoulder

"ye kya ho raha tha?"😆

"abb kuch bhi toh nahin!!"

"phir itna stammer kyu kar raha hai?"😉

"tu pagal hai!! Chup chap baith jaa!! Idiot!!"😡

"achaaa!!"😡

Swayam and rey started their running game they ran all over the rehersal hall insulting each other whereas kriya was laughing at them!!

Soon swayam came and stood behind kriya he held her shoulders and was making her in front of him so that rey can't touch him!! Kriya was working as a wall btw. Swayam and rey

Rey- "kriya hato beech mein se!!"

Swayam- "no kriya tum kahin nahin jaogi!!"

Kriya- "tum dono pagal hogaye ho kya?"

Swayam left kriya and stood on the stool at side!! Rey stepped on the stool too and they both did lost their balance at the moment!! And fell apart!! Swayam on the floor!! and rey on kriya!!!🤣

Rey spat opened his eyes when riya shaked him!!!

"daddy ufff where were you lost!!"

"neeche chalo dinner karna hai ya nahin? Aur ye? Ye diary? Dikhao!!"

She snatched the diary!! And was about to open!!

When rey snatched it and said her to go down stammering very badly!!

"ahaa!! Dad getting naughty naughty!!"😆😆

Rey giggles and goes down too!!



Edited by vidhu1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i dont know how was it!!! jutta chappals are welcome but plz dont throw rotten tomatoes wo bahut gande hote hain!!! 😛😛😆
Edited by vidhu1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Superb update ⭐️ 👏
I always thought tht Rey ki majboori rahi hogi
Hope Kriya also understands 😊
Who is this Lily now?? 😕
she was blackmailing Rey 😲 ...and asked him to kiss her 😲 😲
She was really not in senses 😡 🤢
Don't tell me she is the reason behind 😡 ..."suffocating silences" 😆
If yes, thn I won't spare her fr giving soo much pain to my KriYaansh 😡 and also little Riya 😭
And agar 'Twist' ki maani jaay, thn I guess Riya's Lily ma'am is tht 'Lily' only 😛
which means more problems fr Rey
Loved the little mother-daughter moment 😊
Diary part is always refreshing to read 😊
it was very cute 😊
I love Rey and Riya's bond, "ahaa! Dad getting naughty naughty" 😆... so cute 😊
update the nxt part soon dear 😊
waiting😃
P.S. : juta, chappal nahi... tumhare liye dher sare chockies dear😛 😆
Edited by KriYaansh-ArSha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Nice flashbacks was amazing
I hope rey kriya se aaj bhi pyar krta ho aur ushe apni zindegi main wapas laye they are incomplete without each other
Yaar this gone be very interesting what will happen nxt
Plzz update the nxt prt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: KriYaansh-ArSha

Superb update ⭐️ 👏

Tysm!! ❤️
I always thought tht Rey ki majboori rahi hogi
yess!!
Hope Kriya also understands 😊
hmmm i hope sooo too!! but ye toh hoga zaroor otherwise ye silence toh silence hi reh jayenge!!
Who is this Lily now?? 😕
story ki one of the antagonist!!
she was blackmailing Rey 😲 ...and asked him to kiss her 😲 😲
😛😛 😈 she is a devil!!
She was really not in senses 😡 🤢

exactly!!! how can she!!! 😡😡🤢
Don't tell me she is the reason behind 😡 ..."suffocating silences" 😆
dear question to wo pucho jiska answer mujhe pata ho!! 😆😆
If yes, thn I won't spare her fr giving soo much pain to my KriYaansh 😡 and also little Riya 😭
same here!! agar aisa hua toh mai use maza zaroor chkhaungi!! 🤣
And agar 'Twist' ki maani jaay, thn I guess Riya's Lily ma'am is tht 'Lily' only 😛
sahi pakde hain!!
which means more problems fr Rey
😭
Loved the little mother-daughter moment 😊
even me tooo!!😃😃
Diary part is always refreshing to read 😊
that is why i included it!! otherwise the story would have been filled with pure aggression and that wont be right for you all i guess!!! all readers would have been bored + my story would have been flop+ i wont be continuing the story!!
it was very cute 😊

ty!!!☺️
I love Rey and Riya's bond, "ahaa! Dad getting naughty naughty" 😆... so cute 😊
🤣🤣
update the nxt part soon dear 😊
waiting😃
sure!!!!
P.S. : juta, chappal nahi... tumhare liye dher sare chockies dear😛 😆


ohhh well thanku!!! tumhare liye chocolate cake!!! itne sweet cmnt ke liye tysm!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: love-kreya

Nice flashbacks was amazing
I hope rey kriya se aaj bhi pyar krta ho aur ushe apni zindegi main wapas laye they are incomplete without each other
Yaar this gone be very interesting what will happen nxt
Plzz update the nxt prt soon


tysm dear!!!
yup even i hope so too!! they r incomplete!! kriya and reyansh dont look nice seprate they are best as kriya=reyansh= kriyansh ❤️

hehehe!! maybe!! i will try my best!! 😆😆
yup will do it as soon as i get time!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Eeepso expected
Bt what was the reason behind it

N lilly is the culprit somwhere

Eeepso FB n rey- Riya were so cute :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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whn will u update the nxt dear??😃
I can't wait 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYaansh-ArSha

whn will u update the nxt dear??😃
I can't wait 😳



M sry dear!! On not getting sufficient response I might not continue it!!
But don't worry coz I will promote it once again!! If it gets sufficient readers then I will update its next part after my FA which will end next week! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidhu1



M sry dear!! On not getting sufficient response I might not continue it!!
But don't worry coz I will promote it once again!! If it gets sufficient readers then I will update its next part after my FA which will end next week! 😊

Its okk... I understand :) Actually, most of the KR fans r not tht highly active 😔

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