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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: shwetaphadke

Awesm update...

Cute convo of kriya and riya...😛
Plz update soon...


thankuuu!!
yaa update is gonna be soon!!!
atleast for what i guess!!😛😛

advance mein sorry coz i really know that its not gonna be so soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: KriYaansh-ArSha

Awesome chapter :-)

thankuuu!!
Loved every bit :-D
glad you loved it!!
Kriya n Riya's convo was cute :-)
i know!!😛
feeling bad fr Rey n Kriya :-(
😭same here...
update the nxt prt soon and a long one :-)
yaaa will try!!😆😆
Thanks for the PM :-)
no thnakss allowed for the pm!!😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: KriyaanshManan

Intresting... nice update...

Continue soon n thanx for the pm 😊


thankuu for the precious comment!!
and yaa not thanks allowed for the pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: love-kreya

Hey nice start ... I loved to read this story . interesting concept .plzz continue the story and do pm me

hlo!! thanks!! glad you loved to read it!! yup i will continue and yaa will do pm to you!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: sowiee

Nice concept...

Interesting story...

Beautufully depicted the feelings of kriya reyansh and riya...
Waiting for next part to read...

Pls do continue

thanksss!!! will do update it soon!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
come on yaar
update now
waitinggg
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
helooo gyzzz!! m really ery very sorry for the delay and coming back with a short chapter once again!! plzz do forgive me if possible!! i didnt got time whole week and when i did i could write inly this!! my whole week went in school stuff!! sry once again!! now all i can say is that do enjoy the update!! 😊😊
Note: gyzzz from now on till i dont know when all my updates will be there in three colours!!

Black- present

Purple- diary

pink-past/flashback
Chapter-2


Kriya then walked on the streets of Liverpool from rey's home till the angel cake cafe managed by her newly made frnds Karen and kazia!!
she sat on one of the seats inside and broke down into tears sobbing and gulping hard!!
'mujhe yahan nahin aana chahiye tha!!' as she says this she just brake down more and lied her down sobbing harder!!
soon she heard a someone fighting on the corner seat!! she sobbed and cleared her face rubbing a handkerchief on her face!! she saw the gang sitting there
they were the children of Karen and kazia I.e., anya and Dan with their frnds sitting beside!! the whole cafe knew about Dan and Anya's new relationship and so does she!!
Kriya saw them fighting cutely about who is crct and who is not!! she smiled watching them and thought their fight to be as cute as she and ... but before she could think about rey she leaves the cafe slamming the door behind with her eyes blurred with the salty water!!
rey there went into riya's room with His eyes red he then saw here daughter sitting at a corner hugging her knees and a photo frame BTW. them held close to her heart!!
rey came upto her and saw that she was sleeping!! he slowly removed the photo frame and noticed that it was the photo frame of Kriyaansh and riya actually the newly born riya!!
he rembered about how lucky and happy those days were!! but he never knew that those days were just a few and the bad days which surrounded them were to be countless!! he slowly picked up riya from the floor and a placed her on the bed watching her dry tears!!
he felt really guilty thinking how he has been the one once again to destroy his daughters birthday!!
In the evening he took riya and her friends to the his and riya's fav place that is the beach restaurant in order to make her happy!!
riya's happiness knew no bounds but just from outside because somewhere inside she was really sad and hurt watching her mother for the first time at for how much she remembered and her father fighting and crying!!
they returned home soon as neither rey was interested in the party nor did riya!!
riya went in her room with the huge bags of gifts and rey went to his room!!

(In rey's voice from now)

she was here today but why? if she really hated me then why was she here!! maybe it was just for riya as she loves her but if she lives her then why was she not here within last four years!!
ohh rey you are damn mad its all bcoz of you that she hasn't came here!! you hurted her to such an extent that she was sent to the mental hospital!!
I just sat on the bed and gulped hard!! just then I don't know why I felt like reading it all once again!! maybe just to revive those good days at nights of the upcoming worst days as I know they would be coming!!
I took out a fat diary from the drawer and blower the layer of dust from it!! as I rember that I lastly opened this diary to write the last chapter of my life with her that too on the last day!! that was the day 4 years back right after the day Kriya left me!!

the diary looked really beautiful after all it was me who wrote it and edited it with all the pictures!!
I opened the first page of my diary and sat back taking the support of bed head extending legs on the bed under the blanket!!

the first page looked very beautiful it was full of mine and kriya's college days pictures and our most precious wedding pic which did not pay a bit to us now!!
I turned the page and saw the date mentioned above at the top!!
it was the date when I the college hunk reyaansh singhania thought of the dream girl thingie..

hey my dear diary!! advance mein sry Haan!! bcoz tum meri love diary ho... jis din mujhe aisa lage ga ki mujhe koi apne liye mil gayi hai ya phir mujhe pyaar hone lagega toh mai tumhe aage likhoonga!! apni har choti badi feeling ko Tumse share karoonga!! tab tak ke liye sry!!
muaaah!!
waiting for the day to continue with you!!
:) :)
and yaaa ssshhh!! be quiet kyunki meri ye sweet Aur cheezy side surf tum dekh sakti hoo!!

I turned a page and then saw it..it was the same date when I saw Kriya for the first time and felt something for her also known as love at first sight!! aaah actually in our case it was hate at first sight but still I felt if she was the one who could be my soulmate!!

hey my diary!!
see I am back is baar with my dream girl's face in my mind!!
I met her today!! she came like a storm of glamour and passed me with a rain.. a rain of love+hate!!


these lines were enough for me to go in flash back!!

I stood there in the college at the right side staircase clicking selfies and hugging my die-heart fans or chicks who checked me out from top to bottom!!
just then the new entry to the college entered the door who was being talked by everyone in the college except me since last 6 days!!
yess...the news about Kriya ghai the winner of youth style icon and student of the year at London university was to enter our college because of her family shifting to india,and as audible she didn't wanted to live in London without her family so she came here and joined our college!!
she just stepped in the gate with a lot of mouth hanging boys following her!! she slaped the faces of all the girls just by her killer looks!!
she was rusing down the stairs from the left side stairs and I was trying get away from those cheezy chicks rushing down from the right side stairs I didn't actually noticed her coming down and was in full rage and was exhausted!! just then... Dhamm!!!
I was on the floor with my head on one of the stair and she was above me!! I met her eyes and saw the anger in them she stood up and started shouting!!
"can't you just walk properly!! idiot"
I was still on the floor looking at her thinking what's in her making her spcl from others!! actually her made my inner soft heart melt and made me think about her
she kicked me a bit and I came in senses getting up!!
"dekh ke chalna nahin aata Kya?" she shouted once again
"l am sorry!!" I said still lost a bit thinking...thinking about her.
"its OK" she said with a disgust!!
"by the way aapko lag I toh nahin kahin?"
"huh" I was confused
"han!! I mean u did hit your head with the stair!! r u OK?"
"yaaa I am OK!! thanks for your concern!!"
"concern!! whatever!!" she maid a face and went away!"


I opened my eyes coming out of the trance!! coming out of the memories!! memories of those happy days!!
I felt a bit happy!! remembering those days but i had a fear in my mind about what will the scenario of the upcoming days!! thinking this he slept hugging his diary!!

at the other side kriya stood in her hotel room holding a picture of her and rey!!

kriya' voice

"aapko kya laga tha ki aap kuch bhi karoge aur mai chup rahoongi!! no way rey kya kaha tha aapne chaar saal pehle court mein!! that i am mentally disturbed and dont have any resources to keep my daughter safe!! Mr. reyaansh singhania i am back aur is baar aap uss kriya se milenge jisko aap shayad ek percent bhi nahin jaante!! meri beti ko alag kiya tha na aapne mujhse aur keh kya rahe the ki mai use chod ke chali gayi!! sorry reyaansh singhnaia is baar baari meri hai!! mai apni beti ko waapas leke rahoongi aapse!! aur is baar aap kuch bhi nahin kar paaoge!!"

saying this a tear drop fell from her eye but she wipped it quickly!! took a lighter from the drawer and came came to the window!!
she ignited the lighter and set the picture to burn under those blue flames throwing it out of the window on the bare road in front!!
" watch out bcoz this is my time!! i swear tomorrow's morning is gonna be the worse one for you!!"

next morning...
(narrator's voice)

rey was sitting on his breakfast table with riya!!
kriya came inside the home

"Mr. Reyaansh Singhania" she shouts
rey come there with riya to the main hall
riya goes and hugs her mother!! kriya bent down and kissed her cheek asking her to go to school!!
rya picks her bag up and leave to the school!!!

"why are you here?" rey asks

kriya smirks and throws to envelope on the table
rey pick them up!! and enquires about what is inside!! kriya els him to open them and see rey took out both papers!! both of them seemed to be some court papers!! rey read them both and dropped them down on the floor with a utter shock on his face!! 😲

update over!! 😆
aah!! i love cliff hangers!! keep wondering about what the papers are about!!
lets see how many of you guess it correct!!

tata!! by by!!






Edited by vidhu1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Superb update ⭐️
Kriya and Rey's feelings beautifully depicted 😊
Riya is such a sweet and understanding girl 😊
I loved the diary and flashback part 😃
Kriya's part was portrayed very nicely, but she is really angry with Rey
God knows kya hua hoga..
And wht was in the papers?? 😲 😕
I thnk one of thm might be Riya's custody papers..or smthng like tht
And u knw what... I hate cliff hangers 😡
so update soon okkk 😛 😆
and honestly, I loved the update 😊 😊
Edited by KriYaansh-ArSha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
beautifully written!!!!

Arghhh this ilence of the past s killing me !!!!

Did u mention that jriya was sent to mental hospital ????

Y so ??

Was rey responsible for that ???

oh my god !!! Damn confusing yet interesting !!!!

But because of rey's majboori and Kriya's revenge riya will be sandwiched between them !!!! poor girl

Pls do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYaansh-ArSha

Superb update ⭐️
Kriya and Rey's feelings beautifully depicted 😊
Riya is such a sweet and understanding girl 😊
I loved the diary and flashback part 😃
Kriya's part was portrayed very nicely, but she is really angry with Rey
God knows kya hua hoga..
And wht was in the papers?? 😲 😕
I thnk one of thm might be Riya's custody papers..or smthng like tht
And u knw what... I hate cliff hangers 😡
so update soon okkk 😛 😆
and honestly, I loved the update 😊 😊



Thankuuu!!
Yaaa I know riya srsly bahut understanding hai!! I wonder myself how a five year girl can be so much understanding!! 🤣
Glad that you loved diary part!! 😃
Yaaa she is very very angry from rey!! 😡

Han!! U guesses nicely!! Keep wondering about the second one!! 😛 😆

Haww!! U hate them than m sry!!! Aur baki aane wale cliff hangers ke liye advance mein sorry!!

M really very happy that you loved the update!!! 😊

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