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Awesome concept *
really like it :-D
would love to read more :-D
continue soon and plz pm me when u update :-)

Awsome concept waiting what will happen?????.

Originally posted by: enhance

<font color="#cc00cc">Like the concept!</font>

<font color="#cc00cc">Aisi kya baat hogayee dono ke beech mein, would like to read on.</font>

<font color="#cc00cc">Do continue.</font>

Thanks for liking the concept!! 😊 😊
Yup will do continue

Originally posted by: nikitashaKR

Awesome concept I am already read youre all stories on Facebook page they all are great
And this one also amazing plz continue it :-)

Thanks for reading and appreciating them and yaa I will do continue this story!!

Originally posted by: KriyaanshManan

Hey dear...

Awesome concept...

Do continue soon... Would love to read more n yes pm when u update next time 😊

Hola!!
Thanks...ya I will continue soon!!
Yup will do PM you when I update it next time!!

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Hello sis,

Interesting concept... Want to know why she left her daughter with her husband... Though the man seem to look a nice person as his daughter says, so why did the MU happened... And why she took so drastic step..

Hmm honestly I dont really read emotional stories with heart break and broken relationships due to my personal problems.. I try to avoid... but just for you I will try to follow and comment whenever possible.

Do continue.. I hope it will be emotional and pure. I want a happy reunion soon actually I'm more interested in the story about how they fell in love.. Lol,

Best of luck with this great concept... Looking forward as its very promising... Keep it up sistu!

Take care..

Urs,

MN bhaiyu

Hello bhaiyu!!
Yup that's the secret!" 😉 truly telling iska answer toh mujhe bhi nahin pata!! I haven't decided it yet!!

Ohooo mere emotional bhaiyu!! Its OK if u don't wanna read it as it should surely not hurt you!! But before you think that you are not gonna read it then let me tell you that its never gonna be a really emotional story except of few parts!! 3/4 of the story is humorous, cute and yaa love!!

Hahaaa actually everyone's interested in that part only!! 😆

Thanks for the wishes!! But let me tell you that story is really promising but mera bharosa nahin hai m not at all promising regarding the updates!! 🤣 🤣

U tooo take care
-urs dhamkane wali sista

Originally posted by: vidhu1

Hello bhaiyu!!
Yup that's the secret!" 😉 truly telling iska answer toh mujhe bhi nahin pata!! I haven't decided it yet!!

LOL 😆 good!

Ohooo mere emotional bhaiyu!! Its OK if u don't wanna read it as it should surely not hurt you!! But before you think that you are not gonna read it then let me tell you that its never gonna be a really emotional story except of few parts!! 3/4 of the story is humorous, cute and yaa love!!

Oh thank god!! its cute humorous and love story.. 😳😳

Hahaaa actually everyone's interested in that part only!! 😆yuppie!! 😉

Thanks for the wishes!! But let me tell you that story is really promising but mera bharosa nahin hai m not at all promising regarding the updates!! 🤣 🤣 haha ok no problem, 😳😳

U tooo take care

-urs dhamkane wali sista

Hey!! I am here with the update!!
I am surprised by the reviews in this forum!!
They were less yet the reviews were really warm!! I really thank all of you to cmnt and appreciate the concept!! Now coming to update!!

Here you goo...

Chapetr - 1 ❤️

I was in the supermarket looking for some stuffs but just then I felt her I felt her presence for the first time after 4 years maybe she was back!!
a wind blew my coat and I turned back to see what it was!! my heart said it was her
"Kriya!!" was only I could sigh
"papa!! mili Kya?" I turned back as my little princess riya called me pulling my pants!!
"yup!! here it is" I smaller and then led her to the gateway!! I could feel someone peeping on us but was not sure and didn't wanted to create a seen too!!

I with my princess came out and went to the car I opened the door for her,then kept the seat belt and sat on my seat as I was putting my seat belt I saw a girl running from there...she wore the same dress..the dress which was specially designed only n only for Kriya
I came out running and looked here and there
I kept my hands on head and cried her name
in no more time riya came to me and hugged me
"papa!! wo mumma ki dress mein thi naa"
I couldn't bear anymore because was not even sure of her presence...maybe not sure that I could even face her after what happened between us 4 years back
I took riya home in the next half hour with a silent drive
riya was just of five years but was able to sense the tension on my face and pain in my heart neither she spoke a word nor did I
as we entered our home my eyes went wide in shock!!
"mumma" riya exclaimed in joy and hugged Kriya
"aapko mai yaad hoon!!" Kriya hugged her with a lone tear escaping her eye
" aap ko mai yaad hoon"
"offo!! mumma ye Kya pooch rahe ho aap mai aapko kaise bhool sakti hoon" exclaimed riya breaking the hug
"aao mai aapko ek cheez dikhati hoon"
riya held kriya's hand tightly and dragged her inside a room
what Kriya saw there made her numb
the walls of the room were covered with different photo frames all were with kriya's pictures alone,some with rey and some with rey and riya
Kriya couldn't control herself and tears started following through her eyes
I came inside after digesting the utter shock that yes she was here after a wait of four long years
as I entered the room I could see her lost in all those beautiful pictures!!
'Kriya!' I said with guilt in my voice
'I am here to meet riya'
she bent down upto riya's level and took out a box rapped in pink paper!!
'happy birthday riya' she said with few more tears rolling down her cheeks
'isme Kya hai mumma?'
'riya aap apne room mein jakar dekho' said rey
riya in a minute understood what her father was trying to say and headed to her room with no argument
rey headed towards Kriya but she stepped back
'I came here to wish my daughter!! by reyaansh!!' she tried to be as cold as she could while speaking the line but hurt was evidentially visible in her voice and eyes!!
she bent her eyes down witnessing that he was looking at her eyes and trying to understand the turmoil going on in her mind!! I didn't mattered how much she hated him now as still her heart could feel his each and every emotion of his heart even after 4 years!!
she rubbed her face and cleaned the tears on her cheeks!! she stopped crying and was about to leave the room when she stopped at the door when she heard his words!!
'ek baar phir jaa rahi hoo!! mujhe Aur riya ko chod kar'
he was in tears his face and eyes were totally red!! he turned towards her her back was facing him but still both easily recognized that the other was crying!!
'mai janta hoon galti meri thi par ek baar!! bas ek baar mujhe explain karne ka mauka toh do!!'
'mai yahhan apni beto ko bday wish karne aayi thi and that's it!!'
'pyaar karti ho mujhse?'
Kriya gulped hard and answered in a heavy voice 'no not at all' with tears streaming down her face!!
she just left the room running out wiping her tears when rey came from back, held her hands and pinned her to the wall
'peechle 4 saalo se ek hi ans. kyu deti ho?' he asked her with an aggressive and arrogant look
'peechle 4 saalo se ek hi question kyu poochte ho?'
'kyunki har baar tum wahi jawab deti ho Jo sach nahin hota' he said beating his right hand on the wall
she closed her eyes and answered him pushing back!!
'I said I hate you and can never love you back' keeping her hand on her mouth she left the place crying!!
rey broke at the moment
'I am sorry Kriya!! I am sorry!! bas ek baar meri baat toh sun lo bas ek baar!!

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Sooo how was it? Sry for the mistakes if any coz I wrote this chapter approx 1 month ago that too in the bus while travelling with my family!!

Well gyzz
Note: gyzzz it will be a great pleasure for me if you recomend this story to some of your other IF readers bcoz getting so less audience i cant continue writing!! sry but if you recomend it to others i would surely update it frequently coz parts upto 5 are already wtitten!! if dont get audience here then i would continue the story on FB whenever i plug in there rather than IF
Sry if I was rude!! 😊 😊

Hmm... sistu... It was amazing.. and I completely imagined it. That little gal was cute, and that kriya was so much crying.. 😆