The Distance Between Us - An AR FF (Link to TDBU#2 - Page 1)

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#351

Hey Prags...

It was such a short part...

But it was indeed need to know what and who are in Armaan life in the past 7 years of being away Riddhima...

I m so much loving how Armaan has so much people in his life to love him and is scared to loose him...

Also the bonding he share with each person, it so nice and just the typical Armaan hehehe...

Never can see a human being hurt or harm when he is around them ;)

He is always so loving and caring for people who is specially close to his heart...

OMG hahaha...

It was funny how still Armaan manage to play pranks on people...

He did for Tamanna who was looking like a real clown...

N here start the chasing game...

Lolz, Armaan end up in the pool and he was trying to be smart...

But Tamanna is too smart for him that he didn't fall on his trap and left asking him to help himself...

Lolz, yeh Muski bhi na...

Can't get over with her hero well built body ;)

Than the gang moment was awesome...

Hmmm so all were really closed to each other..

Facing problems in their life and being by each other trying to over come with those which gives pain has got them strong...

Still the past incident make them shake...

Than here comes his boss who keep saying they are partners hehe...

Love how they keep saying sorry and making sure things were fine between them...

She was angry but seeing Jaanhvi, she realized why Armaan had been ignoring her calls...

So she didn't get agree but patch up with Armaan...

Everthing was awesome...

I just miss Riddhima here...

You should have shown a little point of her view in between when Armaan and Tamanna were chasing each other...

I mean Armaan use to play pranks mostly on Riddhima...

So it should remind Riddhima and make her feel more insecure...

Kyunki as u had mention in my previous comment reply...

So many relations and people who is important in Armaan life is going to come in front of Riddhima...

To make her feel more insecure but at the end Ridz would be the one who would take the first step after all right...

Everything else were just perfecttt...

Love it...

Continue soon...

take care :)

And sorry if my view hurt you ;)

Didn't mean to it was just, I thought :D

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tanya

@tanyaarora2912

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#352

Prags seriously bahut bahut bahut suspense h idhar and clearly you refuse to answers my queries in such a sweet way.

Each passing day I mean it when I say each passing day I think of one face off between the hero and his lady.

I soo want to see the reunion.

Your stry keeps on indulging me with every part.

And I m really sry for commenting this late.

I don't wanna make you wait for the efforts you put in.

Jaan is insecure , I like it. I would prefer to read that part more and how the charmer will react.

Past reveal kro yr itna wait nhi hota humse itna toh pta h tumhe.

New characters and the relationships oh my god I m in aww of them.

Pranks are the best part though.

But the insights of the past are too much to handle, you knw

I want go see more of Ridhi and Armaan.

They are the true jaans of us. I knw it is completely unfair on my part to ask this but plz chota sa scene dono ka plz na

You make me happy <3

And I hope you keep us entertaining like this.

I love each and every moment

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Mickey

@chaaipani

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#353

I just finished watching One tree hill. Its lovely and amazing.

And i was literally thing of the dmg and oth collab. Instead of armaan being close to them i was thinking of ridhima.

I love your fanfictions. Both of them.

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Mickey

@chaaipani

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#354

I absolutely love your writing style but i can't help but feel that in this ff you have been neglecting ridhima a little too much then necessary and others too. Though its your ff anad you know what you are doing am pretty sure about that.

That's just my feelings.

Apart from the ff

Also i have a question for you coz i feel you will answer honestly. Do you ever felt like if this same ff the same scenario was presented with liltle difference like instead of armaan, ridhima moved on like this. Same. People here start bashing?

Coz i started something like that long back and i felt a lil bullied so the only choice i had was to discontinue. You ever felt like that?

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DMGThings

@DMGThings

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#355

This story is on hold. Sorry, guys. I didn't clear my exams. Now, I gotta study a whole lot. Will have zero writing time. So, won't be able to update. But, rest assured, I'll be back in May with this story and ILYLTF. I hope you guys stick around till then. :)

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friends_4dream

@friends_4dream

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#356

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#357

Really loved the update

Loved sona entry in the update and her bond with armaan.

This story is one of my most favourite story

But I feel sad that now I will read the next update sooo late. But plzz give ur full focus on studies and come baxk soo

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 7 years ago

#358

No AR moment???? I miss them... Plz try to add at least one AR moment on every update

Getting fade up of this tammy..seems lyk not only ridz even im getting insecure

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DMGThings

@DMGThings

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#359

Uh ohoh! Sab waapas chale jaayenge kya?

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"Uh, everything else is all well and good, but because of this postponement, we'll have issues back at home, Dr. Keerti said, when Dr. Shashank and Abhi were in the living room. "We're all here and though the staff back home is competent enough, I don't feel right leaving them alone for so long, she said.

Dr. Shashank nodded in agreement. "You're right, Dr. Keerti. Maybe we should leave and then come back again in a couple of weeks, in time for the wedding.

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Pakeez Muqadas

@Mpakeez

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#360

First You Put It On Hold..
Fir aese Teaser Deeke Attack Deti hai..
Yai Teaser Tha Kya..
Marriage Postpone..
Koi nahi Hone dou
aur Unko Jaane dou But Please Ridhima and Gang Na jaaye..
Ok Compromise karti hoon Gang Mai Kuch Ja Sakte Hai If You want.. But sab nahi..
Tu wapass aayegi Nahi tou Teaser deke aur Tadpa ..

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