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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: saniyapatel

Awesome update,feeling very bad for Armaan use phir se shoot out k nightmare pareshaan kr rahe glad ki usne sleeping pills nhi li is se ye pata chalta hai ki vo Tammy se kitni strong bonding share krta hai use pata tha ki Tammy naaraj hogi really loved the bonding he shares with Jaan n Tammy.Armaan kahi bhi chala jaaye lekin vo Ridz ki care krna nhi chod skta kuch sec k lie hi sahi lekin Armaan jb Ridz ko touch kiya to use ye jaankr sukun to mila ki vo aaj bhi uska touch sense kr skti hai.N Armaan ka jo reason hai sb ko naa pata chale ki vohi Rev hai vo usk hisab se bilkul sahi hai is mein bhi vo sabk hi baarein mein soch raha hai ye kabhi khudk lie nhi sochatahi nahi pr ek baat hai Armaan aaj bhi apni basket k lie tadap raha hai yaar plz plz plz apse request hai CV vaale Armaan ko bahot rula chuke hai aur kitna sahega yaar ye sirf ek hi galati ki ki khud ki jaan se zyaada kisi aur ko chaha hope AR jld ek ho aur phir RM bhi to hai thanx dear such a wonderful part n pm plz update soon


Hi Saniya!

Ek toh itne lambe comment ke liye thank you! I'm so glad ki tujhe story pasand aa rahi hai.

Yes, Armaan ki Jaan aur Tamanna ke saath bohot achchi bonding hai. Jaan ke saath toh woh bada hua hai, toh obviously. Aur Tamanna ke saath bhi sab much dheere dheere story mein pata chalega. But, yes, bonding unki bohot achchi hai.

Aur Armaan Riddhima ke bina ab khush rehna seekh gaya hai. Yeh is story ki bohot important baat hai. I know ki Armaan abhi bhi usse pyaar karta hai. Of course karta hai. Woh kabhi usse pyaar karna chod nahi sakta. Lekin itne saalo mein ab woh har cheez mein usse yaad nahi karta. Ab uski life wahaan se aage badh chuki hai. Aur woh bohot khush hai.

Haan, jab usne Riddhima ko itne saalon baad dekha toh woh yaadon mein kho gaya aur usse nightmares bhi aaye uske past ke baare mein, lekin iska yeh matlab nahi hai ki itne saalon mein woh sad tha. Main nahi bol rahi ki woh hamesha khush tha, lekin apne friends ke support se ab woh khush hai.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mpakeez

I Loved The Tittle Of This Track..

Now about The Update..
God Mai Bata Nahi sakti How I Felt In that EKLUTA AR Scene..

Is Update Mai Na Chahate Huwe Bi wo Best Scene Tha..
I Know Update mai Aur Bi scene Thay But Jab AR ki Baat aati ho tou Kuch aur dikhta hai Kya..

Past relate sab Prefect Tha.. Like
How Armaan's Was Dying to find About Her After Every Nightmare..

Fir Reve ..
Waese naam Tou Unique Hai But Kuch Armaan se Hi relate rakhti. Armaan hamara Desire and Reve jo Ki Dream..
Armaan+Reve= ''Desired Dream''

what a Logic.. Wah wah

Yai Update Full Armaan Tammna Se connect tha

I Hope Atleast Tammana Ko to Pata chale Sid Is Not Married..
Yai Sid Gadha Kuch Kyu nahi Karta..

Waese i Love The Scene Jab Armaan Room se Bahar aaya Ridhima Ko dekhne ke Baad..
Finally Wo apne Liye Jeena seekh raha hai..
But I Know Nahi Ho payega..
Wo Kitni Bi Try Karle..

Lets See Tu aage Kya Leke aane wali hai..
Baki Sab Ko Reve Ke Baare mai Pata Kaese chalega..

Do You Know I Never Like Tammana In DMG..
Armaan Tammy scene Achche Hote hai.. But Tammy bilkul Bi pasand nahi..
Fir bi Mai i am Not Hating Her With Armaan In Your FF..
Aur Yai Buhat Badi baat hai... :p


chal Abhi Mai chali Kyuki isse ziyada mai nahi Likh sakti..

Tata .. Byeee..
AB ILYLTF Ka Mast aur Bada sa Update Bi de..


Pakooo! Tu bohot funny hai, yaar!

I know ki AR ka sad track chal raha hai, but I promise, hamesha nahi hoga. Bas thoda time aur de. Unko thoda settle hone de. Ek baar baat karne de. Riddhima, Sid, Tamanna aur Armaan, sab ek doosre ko dekhke bohot shocked hai. Lekin, dheere dheere sab theek ho jaayega. Tu tension na le. Sid chup chap nahi baithega. Lekin usko toh yehi lagta haina ki Tamanna ki toh Ankit se shaadi ho gayi hai. Toh woh usse batake kya karega?

Aur mujhe badi khushi hui jaanke ki iss FF mein tujhe Tamanna pasand hai. Mujhe bhi woh much zyada pasand nahi thi, lwkin iss story mein maine uski personality change ki hai.

Aur Armaan apne liye jeena seekh chuka hai. Usko ab Riddhima ki zaroorat nahi hai. Itne saal ho chuke hain. Bas woh Riddhima ko ekdum achanak dekhke surprise ho gaya aur uski saari puraani feelings waapis aa gayi. Thode time mein woh khud ko sambhaal lega. Uski tension tu mat le.

Iss story mein Armaan aur Riddhima isliye saath nahi aayenge kyuki woh dono ek doosre ke bina nahi jee sakte. Woh dono iss liye saath honge kyuki woh chaahte hain.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Phoenix..

somewhat i am getting on with story... but there is bit confusion still but i guess i will figure that out myself. :P

great going... but i hope sab jaldi theek ho jaye
Jaldi Hoga kya writter sahiba...??? 😛


Tu tension mat le. Ho jaayega theek. Happy ending hai yaar.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Wandstruck.


haaye saari tension toh mujhko hi leni padegi, yahan nahi toh Paaki sai kaun ladega ? aur entertainment kaise hoga ? 🤣


LOLOLOLOLOL
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Wandstruck.

reswa...

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mera armu <3


Unres kab hoga?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

wowww armaan is reve.. that's bloody cool man

luvd how u penned down the part from armaan's pov


luving armaan tamanna bond


Thank you so much, Prizi! I'm so glad that you're liking this!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgd3

OMG!! Its raining updates here.. Me happy 🤗

The chapters were worth the wait.😊

Track 8: Loved Armaan and Janhvi and their bond. Curious to know about how they got separated in the past. The pics of Armaan's house are awesome. Armaan is a musician?! That was a surprise. Feeling sad for AR though. Both of them can be so dumb sometimes. Armaan thought she was better off without him due to his medical condition and now Ridz thinks she's not good enough for him; Knuckleheads!! They love each other so much. So close yet miles apart.

Track 9: Poor jealous Riddhima... I have never liked Tamanna in DMG or Sid for that matter but will reserve opinion on them for later in this FF. Armaan and Nikki bonding was emotional. Anjy is the best... trying to get the lovebirds together. And she is absolutely right about Armaan making an informed decision.
Armaan is a professional singer!! Wow!! Waiting to know more about Reve.

Track 10: Start of the chapter gave me goosebumps... I still remember that scene. Armaan has suffered so much, I want him to be truly n completely happy again n that can be when he has his love back. When he becomes Riddhima's Armaan again. I know many AR fans started hating Riddhima in DMG season 2, but that's CV's fault for ruining her character. The girl loved Armaan as much as he loved her. True she was never as expressive about her love as Armaan was, but she did love him. She fought with her father to go find him; preferred to die than be married to someone other than Armaan (which I don't think Armaan ever found out)
I think whatever decisions she took after being married were because of obligations to her father and Sid than her happiness.

Anyway will wait for the story to unfold. Update soon!!


Hello, hello! Thank you for such amazing comments! I'm so very happy that you like the direction I'm taking this story in.

Nothing is ever easy for Armaan & Riddhima, so obviously, they'll have to face some difficulties before they get together! I think writing this is a complete opposite of ILYLTF cause everything is so fluffy there with happy, happy AR. That's why I love this even more.

I didn't care much for Tamanna on the show, but that's mainly because we didn't have enough time to get to know her character better. She left in a couple of months only. And there wasn't much development for her on the show before that. With Sid toh I'm borderline. He was such jerk in the beginning till the time Armaan came back and he realized he shouldn't treat Riddhima that way. But I like how he and Armaan were such close friends despite everything. That was really commendable and I think it showed both their characters so well. They should have hated each other, but they were like brothers and I love that.

I agree with you regarding Riddhima. CV ruined her character. But, I'm hoping to salvage it in this one. And thank you so much for reminding me that Armaan doesn't know that she tried to kill herself the day of her wedding. That's gonna make for an interesting chapter!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tanyaarora2912

Yrrr I have to ask so much!

First whats the equation between tammana and armaan?
And do jaan and tammana knw about ridhima coz u wrote earlier they knw the stry but nt the name
But mujhe laga ki shayad tammana ko pta h ye part pad ke
And who are Shailee Di, Jiju & Vedika they?
Armaan and ridhima finally.
They steal the show no matter what
Yes you cn call be biased.
How much I loved that scene I cant even write.
Reve's reason ws absolutely awesome ya you made me remember hanna montana arghhh childhood days!
Bringing smile to my face.
I absolutely love jaan and armaan and rahul.
Tammana ke liye jo ridhima ki feeling h wo same meri bhi h . I m nt clear about her.
So plz plz plz reveal the secret about the relation they share.
I am in awe of this.
This journey or concept is so so so cool.
I love it each day.


Taniii babyyy! Hi!

I love ki you love this! I'm so happy! Yay!

More about Armaan and Tamanna will be revealed as the story progresses. I like the mystery. :p

Also, Jaan and Tamanna don't know anything. They only know that Armaan was in love with a girl, but they had a messy break up because of xyz reasons (they don't know the reasons also). Armaan told them that both him and his girlfriend made mistakes, but not anything else. So, they don't know about the shootout also. Or the amnesia. Or Riddhima's wedding. But, because they love Armaan, they hate his ex. When Armaan first came to New York, he was a mess. It was Jaan and Rahul's support that made him better again. So, Jaan has seen his suffering first hand. Tamanna wasn't there through the entire healing process, but she knew Armaan from the hospital and she's had enough second hand experience through Jaan and Rahul to hate the ex.

Rahul also despised Riddhima for a long time before Armaan and him had a talk and Armaan explained to him everything that happened. After that, Rahul understood better, but he still doesn't like Riddhima much.

And, of course, more to unfold as the story continues! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Awesome update prags
Love it
I dont know why these two just have a mature cinversation
I mean like seriously dont they understand each other anymore
Pehle toh bina kuch bole
Dono ek dusre ke dard samajh jaate hai aur ab
I really feel Ridz should take the first step
Kyunki har baar usne Armaan koh jaane dete hai
Aur itna cold behavior
Is she out of her damn mind
Jitna tadpa , aur tadpaye ho Armaan koh
Khud koh, woh kam hai kiya

Mujhe toh Ridz pe bohot gussa aa rahi hai
Khud toh bataenge nehi, sehente rahenge aur apne saath saath Arnaan koh bhi dukh de rahi hai
Aur na kissi aur koh batane denge yeh
Na Armaan se puchenge
Ufff kiya kare is ladki ka

Jo yeh sochti hai
Samajhte hai woh har baar sahi hona laazim nehi haina

Sahi hai
Armaan ke life mein bohot log hai lekin
Ridz ki jhaga kabhi koi nehi le paaenge

It was beautiful part lekin
Ab yeh koan aagaye
Dont tell me another person who is important to him
Aise toh Ridz kabhi kuch nehi bolenge bas hurt karti rahenge khud koh aur Armaan koh

Muski ne ton sochliya usse kiya karna hai
Ab Sid kiya beite beite tamasha dekh raha hai
Cant he just say that he is not her husband
Uff Siddd kuch kar tu
Kamina pan se baahar aakhe tohda hero wale harkat karo
Tamanna bhi hai
Usko apna ke Ridz koh majbur karde woh Armaan se baat karke sab clear kare

I know bohot emotional reunioun hoga AR ke jab sab clear hojaenge
Waiting for thattt part
Continue super soon
Tc
Love it
N nice song


Rihoo! Itna lamba comment? Thank you!

I know ki sabko Ridz pe gussa aa raha hai kyuki woh hamesha Armaan ke saath aise behave karti hai. I think ki Ridz ko hamesha lagta tha ki she loves Armaan more than he loves her aur uska itna experience bhi haina, toh sometimes she felt she's just another girlfriend for him. Isliye woh uske saath itna cold behave karti hai - to hurt him before he can hurt her. Uski yeh insecurity iss FF mein aur explore karenge. Aur woh usse kaise overcome karegi woh bhi.

Actually, Armaan ki life mein itni saari important ladies hone ka yahi reason hai. Chaahe uski life mein kitne bhi log ho, Ridz alag hai. Usko yahi realize karaana haina. Isliye iss story mein Armaan ki life mein aur bhi zyada important log hone waale hain. Ridz ko sabke baare mein bhoolke Armaan se baat karni hai. Aur woh karegi. Pakka. Iss baar Armaan nahi, Riddhima ka first step hoga.

Abhi Sid kuch nahi bol raha kyuki Ridz ne usse manaa kiya hai. Aur Ridz uske liye bohot important hai. Woh usse hurt nahi karna chaahta. Isliye kuch nahi bolega. Lekin jaise uski aur Tamanna ki story aage badhegi, Sid Tamanna ko air Tamanna Armaan ko bata hi degi ki Sid aur Riddhima married nahi hai. Agar aise nahi toh kisi aur tarah se, Armaan ko thode time mein pata chal jaayega ki Riddhima ab married nahi hai. Promise!

Reunion toh obviously emotional hone waala hai. I can't to reach that part. I hope ki jaise maine socha hai waisa ho!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mpakeez

What Was This..
I Mean how Can Do This..
Tune actually KRPKAB is mai Ghussa Diya..
I swear Jab Yai Story teri Mind mai aayi thi Tab yai Dono ke Character Ka Naamo Nishaan Nahi Tha..

Maate Prago Really Tera KRPKAB ka Fever Abhi bi barabar hai..
but i like it ...

Ok Enough Of Bak bak..
I really Hate Tammana Character Without Her Fault.. Mere Armaan Ka Ghalat Impression Padh raha hai Ab Agar Sirf Ridhima Hoti tou chalta but Yaar Puri Gang.. Yai Tou Too Much hai..
Ridhima Ka dimaag pehle se Kharaab hai But Nikki ko kyu lag raha hai Ki Kuch hai Armaan and Tammy ke Beech..
I Hate It and Hate It..

But fir Bi scene bada cute tha Especially Jab Rohan aaya aur Fir Armaan Tammy Ko apni Bahoun (ewww Soonch ke Hi marne ko mann karta hai) mai utha ke le gaya..
Ridhima Hamesha Rude rahegi..
Bichaara ROhan Wo Bi Confuse ho gaya..
Pehle tou Ridhima Rude hoti hai Fir Explaination Deti hai..
Prago Yaar Why You want Me to Hate Her More.. Mujhe Ridhima se Nafrat nahi karni..

My Poor Armaan Adat Hai Usko Iske Tuant sunne Ke..
But You Saw Changed Armaan fir Kyu Sunn raha hai

aur Jab Sona Aayi.. That was Best Thing In Update..
Aila Armaan ka Crush.. He Actually Blushed.. Achcha hai Buhat achcha.. Blush Karte waqt Cute lagta hai Aur Bi..
Waese bi Aaj Kal Real Mai Karan Aur Bi cute Lag raha hai waese

ok ab Aage..
Jab Sona Niks se Milli Mai Shock Ho gayi pehle.. Because Upar Summary Ma Mujhe Laga Tune likha Jab Niks chali gayi Sona Armaan ko sambhaal rahi thi..
I was Arre yai Dono aik Dusre Ko jaante kaese hai fir..
Actually Summary mai likha yahi tha Mai Ghalat Presume Kiya.. Mujhe Laga Niks ke jaane ke Baad Sona Ki Entry Huwi..
Lekin fir Dubara Summary padhi tou smjh aaya..

And Rahul KISS wala Kissa Buhat Funny tha..
Chalo AR na Sahi Rahul and Muski Ki rail Gadi Tou chale Kam se Kam..

And Yaar Armaan Ko Kya Kya Bana diya 7 years Ki Distance mai..
Multi Talented Tou hai Hi aur Cute Bi..

But Yai Last mai Kon aayaa..
I think Jaan and Sona maise Koi Hoga..
But tera Bharosa nahi Koi aur Character Ghussa degi
So, Chalo wait karte hai next Update tak..

And thank You clear Karne ke liye Ki Dev and Sona kyu aaye story mai..
Warna Itne saare character aik saath I can't Handle..

Aur Yaar baki sab Ko theekh hai But Yai Shanky, Padma Mom and Nani kaha Hai.. Sab Gayab Ho gaye kya Story se..

Aur abhi mai thak Gayi Likhte likhte..
Tou mai chali..
Bye ..
Love you Prago..
Waiting for next update..


Hahahahaha. Actually na, jab mujhe idea aaya tha, main Sona aur Dev ke alawa koi doosra couple use karne waali thi. But fir mujhe laga ki inn dono ki story aur AR ki story bohot similar hai, toh yeh dono better hai. I mean, yeh dono hi bohot saari misunderstanding ki wajah se alag hue. Aur itne saal tak alag rahe. Toh, Devakshi best hai AR ki help karne ke liye. :)

Dekh. Tu itna gussa ho rahi hai toh bata deti hu. Armaan aur Tamanna ka kuch romantic angle nahi hai. 3-4 chapter mein woh clear ho jaayega. Tu uski tension mat le.

Aur I know, Riddhima hamesha ki tarah rude thi aur Armaan usse achche se sunaa sakta tha, lekin woh uske ghar mein guest hai, isliye woh kuch scene nahi create karna chaahta.

Rahul aur Muskaan ki story bhi aage badhegi aur AR ki bhi. Of course, saath mein Sid Tamanna ki bhi. Tu tension mat le. Bas those chapters dede. 20th tak sab misunderstanding clear ho jaayegi.

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