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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#661

I'm so glad that you posted. :)
Khushi thinks that it's something related to Anjali or Arnav's family. But she doesn't know the truth.
Hoping that the tough times are going to bring these two together.
I don't like shyam at all.

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Ecrivain

@Ecrivain

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#662

Dammit all to hell ...i cant believe u updated n I am so late in commenting 😲😭🤢

IDK enjoyed the short update that marked the CHANGE in the equation of Arhi now. So there is trouble awaiting to test the new found trust that Arhi have for each other, Wonderful n bring it on.

Also I loved how u used the hands holding, leaving, catching n letting go for emphasising the way Arhi have found n will head to each other. 👏

Brilliant update n also i feel Arhi have an entwined past ??? will we get to the past now that Shashi will finally get to meet n talk to Arnav 😊

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#663

Loved both the updates!

Cant waut to read more

Is bauji dead? I really hope arnav is there for her excited for the next track

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#664

Wouldn't complain if you update such frequent updates even if short...thanks girl for keeping it up with writing this beautiful piece of work!

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jayjaysrao

@jayjaysrao

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#665

Lovely lovely lovely updates, 😊😊slow and steady win the race. Looks Arnav will be with Khushi now in her time of distress. Love budding in his heart, not realising it. Ooo we want to see a change in Arnav coming out from his shell and also in Khushi who till now is naive cause of Arnav's attitude. Can't wait to read the next update. 'K' your writing is superb. Keep it up.👍🏼👍🏼

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#666

Hello Krani dear.
Sorry was not able to read parts 57 & 58 sooner. Been busy. So so glad you are finally back and back in action.
Loved both the chapters. Waa keenly waiting to see what pans out with this first major step as husband and wife. So theydo become closer ...only during deep sleep...but its the start of a trust and truce between them.
Waiting anxiously for more updates. Hope any upcoming crisis only draws them closer.
Love
Siamesecat

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asdfgh456

@asdfgh456

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#667

Atleast subconsciously they know that they trust each other, just need a repeat of that when they're awake! I'm hoping that Arnav steps up to the plate and is supportive. I'll be honest and say I don't remember if there is any scenes showing Khushi and her dads relationship in this story so i'm assuming he's like he was in the show and the relationship is the same so feeling so sad for Khushi atm!

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slgirl

@slgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#668

That was a short update but hey, I am not complaining 😊

This is the time for Arnav to earn her forgiveness and I am sure he will redeem himself by being the pillar of support for "His wife" 😳.

Love your writting K and I can't get enough of it. So please be kind and update soon!

Hugs

Slgirl/ForArhi (have 2 accounts 😆)

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reshamc

@reshamc

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#669

I read your post on Twitter saying you have received less of feedback with the recent updates.

On my part, I am sorry for that happening. I mostly always read your updates within 3-4 hours of posting. But you will find me replying very scarcely. Going forward, I will try to change this habit of mine. 😊

Now what I really want to say is - Take as much time as you want to write. But do not ever discontinue this story!!

I just re-visited this story from the beginning. And kudos to you for the splendid journey👏👏 From throwing Khushi out of his room to sharing a bed with her - the graph of Arnav has been a pleasure to read.

I had totally forgotten NK's part in this story. But it was great to read his parts again. I loved how NK made Arnav realize that he wants Khushi to laugh freely with him. Hope to see that happen some time in future :)

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happypeace

@happypeace

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Posted: 9 years ago

#670

You're back! Loved both the updates. Both of them are now trying to bridge the gap between them... I hope that khushi's father is okay and makes recovery if he's sick.. Loved how arnav responded with I know to anjali! Let's hope he keeps his word and some more..

Eagerly awaiting the next update Kay :D