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Mayvs2013

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Posted: 9 years ago

#571

slowly th story is moving head

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devsum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#572

what a scene! u have created the Tae Kwando Pose exactly!

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Zania

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Posted: 9 years ago

#573

Still can't get over the fact tht ur bck n completing one of my fav stories.😃

Tks fr the lovely update.. Waitin fr d nxt one.

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aafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#574

Beautiful update. Slowly moving towards a better future with trusting each other

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#575

Oh this was lovely.

Waiting for them to have that one big discussion so that they can both move forward together.

Good to read this story after ages.

How many more chapters to go?

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tuli_jayee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#576

lovely chapter & read it without any pm.

I really like ur way of story telling & how you shape ur stories in a slow bt consistent speed. this chapter shows another step ahead in Arshi's relation.

I was wondering wht wud be Khushi's reaction. will she accept it whole heartedly or take few steps back again.

Eager to read the next chapter.

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#577

Arshi nice convo...

nice train ride. ...

NK. ... just making arnav jealous

awesome pure test

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asdfgh456

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Posted: 9 years ago

#578

I'm already a twitter follower so I'm sure you've read my many tweets saying how happy I am that you're still writing this! (Let me know if it gets a bit much lol)

So happy to see the story building. I know you said this story was a slow burn but I feel like the foundations are being made.

Feel like the chapter highlights everything I'm looking forward to/hoping will happen:
Khushi's idea of marriage, her 'sanki'/craziness with Arnav, beginning to trust each other.
Arnav's already beginning to read her better (letting her think he's sleeping) and pulling her Kurta back down was sweet. And let's not forget them basically checking each other out while sleeping! Hah!

Can't wait for the next one!

(Btw I'm @mufcgirl18 on twitter)

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#579

Nk is playing cupid

good move

who the idiot article messing around

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Ecrivain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#580

Ah as always I am late to the party but I am here anyway 😛

So i wanted them to kiss n u gave an ALMOST kiss .. 😆 ur the perfect CV to IPKKND oops Arranged Marriage here 😳

Lovely update ... this was all about 'Tum paas aye ' 😉😊 and the reactions that the other evoked with the proximity they shared 😃

I am glad Khushi is NOT a prude and is behaving like a woman whose attracted to her man 😳

I wanted to read Arnav's thoughts and u have given it ..thank you 🤗

The man is in love , he is past the phase of attraction n this is more like affection n he feels responsible n protective towards Khushi. Very well written Krani 👏

In their sleep they have acknowledged that the presence of one matters to the other n only a fab writer like u can manage it so well

Waiting for the next update.

make it soonish 😃😛