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Kishmish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#591

Welcome back Krani ... have really missed you and AM ... 😆

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Arshi67

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Posted: 9 years ago

#592

Both allow themselves to be soothed by the other, albeit one of them subconsciously. The delicacy with which you wrote of the way he disentangles himself, and that consideration about her feelings of trust, was beautiful. It makes you want to believe that she will be able to fulfil her dream of "being herself" with her husband eventually. It's this finesse with which you write that's so captivating. The two months vanish in an instant :)

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mrignayani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#593

Sweet, but too short for the long wait!!!!!!!

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mrignayani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Can't have enough of your Arshi!!!!!!

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limoncello

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Posted: 9 years ago

#595

Aaahhh! One word...NIRVANA!!!

I feel calm. I feel rested. I feel my breathing even out. It's that feeling you get after hot yoga...where all your muscles are loose, all the knots in your body are ironed out and you just feel...relaxed!

I so needed this. Thank you, K.

Edited by limoncello - 9 years ago

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imran78

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Posted: 9 years ago

#596

Wonderful update...

They are slowly, with tiny steps coming closer. Not only physically but emotionally as well.

Eagerly waiting for the next update

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anu1017

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Posted: 9 years ago

#597

That was such an amazing update!!!

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IamSwapnali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#598

that was awesome! you have put so much efforts to describe all that happened (and did not happen).. It came across well how important it is for Arnav to have Khushi trust him..

Eagerly waiting for next parts..

Can you give us an estimate about how many chapters this FF will have?

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arshilife2cheer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#599

Niceee ... 😊

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Penny

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Posted: 9 years ago

#600

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Often people might have told you about your writings. How you explain every emotion in depth and the raw detailing that comes out often leaves us wanting for more. A feet you accomplish very easily considering your not a professional writer. :)

The simple incidence like sleeping on the same bed as your husband might not be anything of a concern for almost all couples because somewhere you establish that as a part and parcel of the marriage bond, but our beloved Arshi are anything but that. Even for an arrange marriage some sort of understanding needs to pass between the couple, but for that to be established the couple needs to adapt to each other and also bring in the said conscious understanding. The whole starting dealing with that very same thing has been brought out by you so beautifully, that I wish to applaud your for the same!! For being able to bring it out so perfectly :)👏👏👏

I awww'd the rest of the update. Both arnav and khushi's emotions and arnav's seen of calmness seeing his wife finally relaxing and seeing that finally their relationship is moving forward. Hayeee. I loved the upate for that very thing :)

Eeekkss. Can't wait for me. Please is bari 2 mahine mat lagadena for the update!!!

Edited by penny25 - 9 years ago