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BVSJ

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

Wow ... dear it was lovely updates..
read all parts in one go ..
the way you write ..i can feel the live storm around me with lightening bringing its presence after seconds.
dear its really wonderful to see u back after so many years and the updates are really of worth the wait.

The flashbacks in the update are very well time written..

The way you are writing about their relation taking step by step to get close is really amazing ..
its really worrying me reading How Arnav is going through so many crises and trouble son business front plus the media issues to are creating worry teh same time.
i just hope he get a way through all this soon

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Deepthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

You know I started reading this ff when you are on break , everyone was telling about this ff so I thought lets see whats special about it, and I found myself reading 49 chapters in a go!
Now when you came back I went again and read all the chapters to connect with new chapters as I forgot few tiny details
And sigh !It was the same magical feeling when I first read this ff ,

We normally read some good ffs here ..but only few ffs will have a special place in your heart that you can read them again and again and again! And arranged marriage is definitely one the few for me even though it hasn't been completed yet!
Well that's it what else I can say about the chapters

Thank you so much for coming back krani , hope everything in your life is settled, take care.

Edited by sarunian143 - 9 years ago

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arshilife2cheer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Awesome update. ...😊

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29priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#314

I read ur story at one go...its so wonderful and well written...I absolutely adore the way u write the parts...and I could literally imagine the scenes...and the last few updates are my fav...I already read it two times...I reallly want u to conti soon...eagerly waiting for the next part...

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sonal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#315

Awesome update...

Will khushi share her fears with arnav????

I know we will not get any action but hand holding and eye lock milega...

Eagerly waiting for next part...

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Aimer_vous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#316

Amazing Update.👏

I hope she can trust him in her fears,but it takes time to build up that level among minds.

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Onlooker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#317

I am so so glad that you are back to writing. Hope all is well with you. I have always admired you, your stories and you as a person. I am very much pleased to know that you have overcome the unexpected hurdles that life hurled at you.,,Atta girl..

And a very big thank you for attempting a closure of this story..the slow build up was agonizingly slow and a torture to read..at the same time, I would re-read the updates a hundred times because each update was worth savoring. I was afraid if I missed your subtleties.

And I read the 5 updates in a go and as many readers must have informed you, your magical fingers has not disappointed us..it is weaving a mesmerising tale. It is like they both are rewinding the past few hours and their past and coming to terms with it. Oh! for Kushi to make that request..the mortification, the embarrassment and the helplessness that she must have felt!! Arnav is so concerned about Kushi that he wanted to skip all other formalities and go for CT scan. And that pull they have towards each other, it is growing strong and steady..:) Looking forward to the next update..