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soniachammu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#291

Der ayae durusth ayae

Lovely the way both people's thoughts are narrated

Khushi thinking not.to trouble arnav any further and arnav thinking no matter what he does she doesnt open up to him

Both of them are stubborn kind

Maybe this storm will bring them together as people getting to know each other

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chinu

@nooli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#292

Very nice story...
loved it
please pm me for the updates

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#293

loved the update as always

waiting for next 😊

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Radhika S.

@radhika_BG

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Posted: 9 years ago

#294

You finished the update at such crucial point di...not fair at all...!!!!

They are progressing in their relationship steadily... It's soo good to see khushi taking step ahead and asking him to be with her.

Arnav is loosing it...he is slowly falling for her...caring for her...!!!!

Loved the update.

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pravallika

@pravallika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#295

Hey K :-)

I'm back here after reading all the 55 chapters again in one go.. and I'm speechless after reading the story once again.. what an amazing story you have weaved with these two awesome characters...

I didn't feel connected when I started reading this story after a long hiatus. ... so, I've started reading this and fell in love with this magical story all over again, if that is even possible.

Two souls are forced into this sacred bond because of the deal done years back by their grandparents without their consent.. and you have beautifully described the journey of them from strangers to friends so far...

I loved reading every bit of their journey K.. you made me feel all the emotions of the characters with your writing.. arnav has now realised his attraction for kushi but had not yet realised his love and kushi on the other hand is in the same boat.. atlast with this chapter they have made a little improvement of planning to sleep on the same bed...

But I've a question from the beginning of this story K.. Does arnav and kushi knows about the deal made by the grandfathers??? What is that clause which arnav's grandfather was speaking to his nani??? There are so many things which you haven't revealed yet... who is this sharma??? Why is he so much interested in arnav's personal life? ?? Is it shyam who is behind all this??? ( you mentioned that he is the antagonist in character sketch ) waiting for the revelations K :-)

And when i read it all , I've not felt this story a slow paced one at any given point.. it has got its own, perfect pace and you wouldn't have done justice to this story even if it was slightly fast paced than the current one..

Coming to the latest chapter, i loved the way kushi doesn't want to worry arnav with her fears as he is already stressed and how arnav was thinking that he can never earn her forgiveness. . Feeling bad for arnav..

Waiting for the next update dear :-)

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#296

Why did you stop there.

But glad that she come to him. He was waiting for her.

Glad slowly they are taking steps towards each other.

Felt like crying knowing Khushi's past. She was just a child when she face hard reality of her life. Losing parents is like losing earth and heaven same time. Little girl afraid of storm lose everything in her life, how could she forget this horrible night. Wish she share her pain with him.

He is too facing problems, hope they trust each other. Life will be more easy then.

Marvellous update dear. Will be waiting impatiently for next part.

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Iqra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#297

That's what, which turns their relationship dynamics finally

khushi first step toward Arnav.

Arnav already taken that step when he decided to earn her forgiveness. From this i hope they start understanding each other and accept each other with their flaws and imperfections.

Arrange Marriage is all about taking small and steady steps toward your partner with understanding and compromise from both sides, with this trust comes between two people

looking forward how you take their marriage from this. your writing is magical K, i m thankful to you for your comeback

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#298

Awee last line took the show ..:)...I soo wanted arnav and khushi to come close before returning back to India..hope they talk communicate openly ..sharing everything at ease with eachother

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#299

Oh poor thing.. For khushi to come and ask arnav to sleep with her, she must be terrified..

I hope this wil b a new beginning for her. A chance to open up to him..

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amaypranay

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Posted: 9 years ago

#300

Loving every bit... Your writing makes it great!

Both are progressing slowly.. Just when Arnav thought he's losing Hope.. Hope stands right at his Door... Fantastic build up .. Looking forward to their New Years Night!

Edited by amaypranay - 9 years ago