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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Part 1

Awesome...

Interesting...

Arnav and Khushi were engaged?

And Shyam is a good one...

Nice...

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sam88

@sam88

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

amazing chap

u always give ur best

loved it

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Ram gave the perfect advice... loved it.. waiting to know the past..

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#234

Fabulous update. Loved it. Glad that khushi started working for Mr. Ram. Hopefully now there will be more encounters between arnav and khushi !! Mr. Ram seems to be a really nice person who truly cares for arnav as he didn't take advantage of arnavs vulnerabilities when he mentioned that ram give khushi a job !! Really looking forward to the next update and hopefully some dialogue between arnav and khushi takes place !! ⭐️

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sujata5

@sujata5

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Fabulous!

I tried to get your other works but they were all removed by the time I discovered you.

I loved the beginning of this story and now I am hooked! Waiting eagerly to see how this all develops!!

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LoveArnavKhushi

@LoveArnavKhushi

Navigator

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

Where shall I start from? Hmm.. Welcome back 🤗 Not sure if you would believe, but I missed your writing a lot. I felt bad when you had mentioned in your note that you have left partially cause of silent readers and it worried me. I started thinking back about whether I had commented and liked on all your work, so far and I would confess that i was not 100% efficient on it. I had replied on few stories, but that's not enough. You are right, everyone needs at least one word or emoticon of encouragement. I am sorry for missing that from my end. I promise I will not do that ever again..

Coming back to the story.. Wow.. Starting from the name, it keeps readers captive.. Khushi & Arnav both were fools to not understand their own feelings.. My heart broke for both of them.. Khushi was right, but Arnav is feeling guilty too. That's how he is, he realizes his mistake too late.. Will Khushi give him a second chance? I am excited about knowing more on Aman's bond with Arnav, Mr. Roy & his wife, Shyam's role play & Khushi-Arnav's past.. 😉

Can you please elaborate on some rabba ve scenes if any from past or future? Waiting for Arhi magic to continue from your writing..

Waiting for update earnestly. 👏

Edited by LoveArnavKhushi - 9 years ago

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kiran0kumari

@kiran0kumari

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#237

beautiful story👏

Edited by kiran0kumari - 9 years ago

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#238

I like this Mr. and Mrs. Shenoy. (My tenth grade teacher was a Mrs. Shenoy too,, :) )

What exactly did Arnav do to her? Would love to read the past.. So much regret that he is willing to compromise with his deal? This is interesting..

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amortentia15

@amortentia15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Loved both the chapters. Your writing is flawless and I am looking forward to reading it!!😊

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coolpd93

@coolpd93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#240

Is he in guilt?...after reading i had only one question..wht did he do?...he help her..i cud sense he had done somethin bad...but what it is..as of nw i m blank..ll need few chaps to get clear picture:)
Thanq fr updatin:)