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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Awesome chapter..

One thing is clear...

Shyam is related to Khushi..

Then..y did Arnav misunderstood her..

I m trying to weave many a stories😆..

He has hurt Khushi but not beyond repair..

KKG can find positivity in everything..

he did the biggest favour of all. He shook me up from a crippling slumber and woke me to the reality of my life.

Ram seems to be a very interesting character..

(I m imagining Ram Kapoor n his wife,Gautami here 😊)..

I always like office romance..

But here..Khushi no more works in Arnav's office..

Moreover,they r not on talking terms..perhaps..

But.. as we know..

Where there is a will,there is a way..

I've complete trust in u,Saiyu..

U r gonna rock it..

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Ram Shenoy , I like this elderly man who has guts to tell his point on ASR'S face .

What did Arnav do to khushi ? Shyam must be definitely khushi's brother (mostly illegitimate ) , Arnav must have misunderstood their relationship and denied marrying khushi . Now he is repenting for acting in haste and destroying dreams of a wonderful girl named khushi .

Well this is my guess about the plot 😆

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Edwarding

@Edwarding

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#243

love it...waiting for the next update

ps..accept my request

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#244

Welcome back!
It's so nice to c u back!
I read 2 chappy n I'm v confused!!!
Yeh Kya haal banaya hai aapne mera?
Added u as a buddy! Plz accept Oran's pm me!
Spl thanks to lazy.. She mailed is and wrote about ur comeback!

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Removed.

No, I do not have a blog.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 9 years ago

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Meee

This ASR is more like the one from the show! Arrogant Singh Raizada... He only sees what he wants to see and understands what he wants to... how much ever the reality says otherwise... In spite of what Lavanya (she seems to be a good character 😉) told him, he wasn't ready to believe Khushi's intentions were good...

While in the show he was fighting her because she was brave enough to speak her mind and was not scared of him... Here he found the reason he wanted to and stuck to it... He could have asked them about it? But no, he has to jump to conclusions!

Not one for dramatics and yet he waited to humiliate her publicly? Not fair...

With what he did in his ignorance, he not only hurt and humiliated her, but her entire family who did not deserve such a worse punishment even if Khushi were at fault and that too publicly... No doubt he's so full of guilt and Khushi wants absolutely nothing to do with him.

I'm eager to see how this terrace scene would turn out...I'm sure they're hugging and its not anything like the show... and if they are innocent why meet chup chup ke?

Tells us pleeej

Edited by asrcraze - 9 years ago

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Wow.. Saiyu you at taking us closer to the story and I am really intrigued. I can't wait for the next chapter, already. Ram sounds.like a total father figure for Arnav as he has mentioned. So, I have started liking him too and I loved that he dint miss personal and professional life. He has found the balance and Arnav's balance is toppled due to Khushi's presence..

So, even I am wondering will Khushi get to know Arnav's hand in she getting her job. What did Arnav do? Why has it made her that lifeless.. And Arnav is buried under heaps of guilt.. waiting to see how the story unfolds..! Sorry for being so late!!

On Chapter 3:

Sorry saiyu, I posted my comment and lmao, I saw you had updated the next one! So here, I will comment on this one too...

So, the whole past is out and how! Damn, he is so ruthless.. But wasn't this How, our ASR was? Downright ruthless and arrogant.. So that flavour of the show is still there and I am happy at that! Now I really want to know what is the relation between Shyam and Khushi... And whatever be Arnav's justifications, it was unfair on his part to have ditched her like that... So on the terrace what did happen? Did ASR know the truth or did he misinterpret their relation yet again?

I liked how you have given certain scenes from the show.. with the jashn here, this little bits of flashbacks did make me nostalgic... now is this story more from Arnav's POV than from Khushi's? As usual waiting for the next chapter saiyu..

And I am early!!! 😆

Edited by Sadh123 - 9 years ago

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#248

Res

*Edited*

Pinch me Haww i just reserved on first page.
Love the update.
Sue this Arnav. Idiot he have been so unreasonable tighting all his imagined demons alone and Khushi is at the end to suffer.

I just want to hit his head duffer a person even if he is acting he cannot stay in his role 24/7 there comes several moments when mask get slipped off.

Silly him crushed poor soulds heart brutally i can imagine what he must have done in party. He himself is surprised despite his nasty behaviour how could she harbour feelings for him.

Continue soon Saiyyu I am in love with ur stories.
cant wait to read more.

Edited by srahs - 9 years ago

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Tiramisu_coffee

@Tiramisu_coffee

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#249

I m going to sound like an ingrateful ogre but I just can't resist saying ME WANT MORE!! lol! Loved this update! Why must he dig himself this deep of a grave, only you and DM jane Well, m going to have to nag you (with cute emojis n all to soften the rude demands) until there's part B, I guess !!