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vanility

@vanility

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Hi Dear,

I loved the story. So Arnav is regretting, what about love? Does he love her?

Will they become friends?

Just can't wait for next update.

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Beautiful update.

I can't wait to know what happened in the past.

Will wait for the next part.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#223

brilliantly written..awesome update..very interesting and intriguing...👏

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#224

oh wow a new story..yayyy

absolutely loved the first 2 chaps...

what did arnav do??? oh such a fool u r...

but dont be heart broken...khushi still loves you 😊

so apni aankhe kholo n apna charm dikhav 😃

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#225

I just happened to be looking through stuff on the forum and I saw this, thinking, "She's writing again???? Yay!!!!" I'm glad others remembered your promise 😉
As with all of your stories, I really enjoyed reading these updates. It is a different tone than your usual work, but it's good! Thanks for making me happy right before my finals week! Now I have at least one thing to look forward to next week.
I like the title/theme of this story- it's interesting. So are Shyam and Khushi somehow related in this ss?

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Very well written!! From you nothing else is expected!! I love the way the story is progressing..I am dying to read more about Shyam's character and his involvement + the reason behind Arnav and Khushi's split!

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Ram Shenoy definitely has Arnav's best interests at heart, for he did not even miss a slight pause in Arnav's otherwise perfect presentation. Infact he immediately resorted to finding out the reason. I am glad he did not push Arnav too much for the past details and helped him keep his professional and personal life apart. Because otherwise Arnav seemed all set to let go off the profit he so desperately wanted to make from the deal. Ram definitely seems to be the one to help Arnav come out of his guilt track. Besides, I get a feeling that he might be the one to let Khushi know how she acquired the job.

Khushi ko kya ho gaya hai yeh!! Although she still does wear those bright colored clothes and her very contagious smile, she is all but living in a facade. She's hurt and broken. It's as if her asli duniya has no goals or preferences for her own self. It wasn't difficult to see how easily she dodged the question of Mamiji's proposal for her wedding to NK. So then does she still have almost nonexistent feelings for Arnav in some forgotten corner of her heart!!

I still wonder how is Shyam related to her family. If he is her brother/cousin he should be helping them out because he definitely doesn't seem someone who wouldn't do that just because he is related to Arnav.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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rafiki84

@rafiki84

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

HUM BHI RES

*EDIT*

AAP wapis aye bahaar ayee rasgulla-ji 🤗

I'm late I admit but well, dair aye durust aye 😃

I'm too excited to see you back at writing, so all I'll say is, the fool is definitely ASR here, along with a little foolishness from Khushi. But! ASR looks the bigger fool here for as usual creating a mess and then pachtao-fying later -___________- GAWD! How I wish I could kick his a**!

Khushi seems disturbed with his presence ofcourse, and I get where she is coming from. Just hoping these two idiots sort this out sooner.

Also I like Mr. Shenoy 😳 Seems like a wise man😊

BTW! WHOM do you visualize while writing about Ram exactly?

Update soon and take care😊

Edited by rafiki84 - 9 years ago

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dair10arshi

@dair10arshi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#229

What did Arnav do to khushi?????
Loved the way Arnav was willing to throw away his term for just her job guarantee!
Wowie mamiji being nice to khushi 😆
Lovely update... There's this hint of mystery that piques me...
I'm so glad that u are back!

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priya

@inlovewithtvk

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#230

after this second update im curious to knw what happened betwn arnav and khushi?.. why arnav broke engagement? why khushi is not her old self? uff so many questions next update ke liye rukneka padi.. hello hi bye bye..