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@.LadyHitler.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Fantastic update!
I'm loving this Ram Shenoy! He is one observant, intelligent, and a sensible person! Nothing needs to be told to him!
So he considers Arnav like a son! Good! Arnav definitely needs such person's guidance now!
What did Khushi become?? :'(
Its better i wait for you to reveal about Shyam-Khushi's relation :|

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#182

LOVED D UPDATE...

DIE WITH CURIOSITY 2 KNOW WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN ARSHI IN D PAST...

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...

THANKS 4 D PM.

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Directional.

@Directional.

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#183

I love the way the story has been framed.. A good shyam, torture on khushi is over and i absolutely love a guilty arnav..

Loved both the chapters.. The ending was very nice where arnav punches the wall and thinks what he did to khushi.. I liked the change in khushi, her confidence was just wow.. Waiting eagerly to know the past that has been mentioned a few times..

Ur writing touches me to the core of my heart.. It's very mature and very pleasing.. I can never get tired of praising ur work and will always crave for more..

Waiting eagerly 4 the next update.. 😊

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Arshi2503

@Arshi2503

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Nice story I like the concept.
What did Arnav do to Khushi?
Ram Shenoy observed guilt and regret in Arnav's
eyes .Aman being a good friend of ASR didn't know
any thing about this face off of Arshi?
Waiting yaar for the story to unfold
Thanks for the pm

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#185

I suck and speculation and prophecy... So I am going to let you tell your tale in your own way and hope and pray you tell it soon and put me out of my misery... I can't wait for it to continue...

I like/love Mr. Ram Shenoy. A very perspective gentleman indeed.

Whatever the wrong Arnav had committed cannot be attuned by recommending her for a job. What is gonna happen when she finds out? The skeletons in the closet has a way of coming out at the bad possible time.

A Fool after chapter 2 is looking like a a riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma. 👏

Since everyone had already established the fact this chapter was superb, I too concur. A wonderful read.

BTW, I loved your notes as much as I loved the update. 😆

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: ranogill
very interesting..but khushi will be heart broken if she find out that this job she got on arnav's recommendation ...i love the way whole family love her...a totally different scenario from ipk ..yet so close

I felt exactly how your comment states when I read this Chapter.

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Nice , amazing update. This update makes the story all the more interesting. What is the story behind Khushi's broken engagement & Shyam's involvement in it? Lots of questions currently going on in my mind. So, would be waiting to read few more chapters

Another thing is really wanted to know - who the Fool is here ???

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#188

awesome update
arnav is trying to repent,
what he did with khushi in past.
Mr. Ram is such a sweet person
and loved how is he trying to understand arnav personally.
continue sooon

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Wat Arnav did ?

Mystery ??
Loved the update..

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#190

Thank you for pm.😃

I loved the update dear.👏

I am liking Shenoy because he is considering Arnav as his son. He can act as a catalyst in bringing Arnav-Khushi together. In a small instance, he understood Khushi's value in Arnav's life. Though Arnav is shrewd in business, but to get Khushi that job, Arnav was willing to let go his terms in contract. This shows that Arnav is truly repenting & wants to rectify his follies.

Poor Khushi.😭 Her heart has been crushed by Arnav. Once happy Khushi has become silent & sad... It will be heart breaking for Khushi if she comes to know that she got this job because of Arnav.

Please update quickly... Your story is too gripping dear...👏