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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Welcome back!!!

Very interesting

So Shyam and Anjali are still married

Hmm waiting to find out more

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Pari

@-.Pari.-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

I think the Jashn just doubled by your come back 😃 So happy to see you back!!! So a huge 🤗 welcome back to my favourite writer 😳 And also a huge 🤗 Thank you for coming back!

As usual your are back with a bang 😊 and also something very different 😳 with a lot of mystery to the story 😆

Love the concept!!!! Even I was very sad when I saw Khushi forgiving Arnav so easily! Now we will get to see how he repents.

I just loved how you described their pain 👏

And the story has an awesome and different twist too when compared with the actual storyline.

Khushi hugged Shyam back 😲 Why do I have a feeling they are related ... Are they? Are they like siblings?

Cant wait to see how the story unfolds 😊

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Welcome back! And what a comeback!! Loved this setting and I am up for some angst!! Also since ipk ek jhashan is on rolls, let's celebrate the double happiness of having u back!!!

Eager for next update!

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

😛 🤗

Oye WELCOME BACK,Gudiya...

Arre...mere Arhi ke aane se bahaar aayi..

aur tere aane se uss bahaar pe nikhaar aaya..

I can't agree more...

Khushi forgave Arnav too easily..

no proper repentance n redemption on the part of him..

AN ABRUPT ENDING..

Kuch nahin ...bohat kuch adhoora reh gya tha..

I m expecting too much,Saiyu..

If Snakwa/Creepwa is no more the bad guy..

May I dream of...

I hope u remember .. 😳

Now coming to ur SS..

an awesome start.. I must say..

No other details..no other persons..

Just my Arhi..

facing each other.. yet avoiding eye contact..

I m witing for story to be reveled..

pls continue soon !!!!

@lazyleaves..

thank u so much for both the links 😊

Edited by pakpearl - 9 years ago

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Saiyu aur angst? Stocking up kleenex, just in case . 😭

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niharika111

@niharika111

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Looking forward to a story after a really long time! Keep them coming! :)

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

I was wanting to read dis update since long but was not able to as was too busy but finally managed to read it now mf ahhh this is such a mind-blowing one,,like too many things to get enlightened with d future updates nd too many misunderstandings to get clear up in future nd Wat I love abt dis update is shyam nd khushi sharing a good bond,, like not Dat cheap one shyam is nd khushi is close to him nd anjali knows everything abt them coz even after broken engagement khushi came to RM,,so something different has happened nd arnav as alwaz misunderstood her,,like really such a big business man but cannot detect a true person,, bang on update,, dats Wat I call a superb come back 🤗

I am much eager to knw d whole story now nd Wat I love d most is d title of d story,,It's unique with such a good inner meaning nd dat proverb, oh how true it is..!

In love with the story already ❤️

Waiting for the next chapter now 😊

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barsana

@barsana

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

i am reading your work for the first time and i am hooked...

Kushi has come shantivan...so they r not married,shyam is a good guy

so am eager to know what misunderstanding they had...too many questions...😆

by the way will be waiting...what day do you update?

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Removed.

No, I do not have a blog.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 9 years ago

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Res

I'm already liking Mr. Ram Shenoy and his as of now invisible wife. I think they're going to be an important part of what is going to happen henceforth in Arnav and Khushi's life. At least Ram's part I'm sure of. He's a truly respectableperson and very very observant especially considering that from the small pause Arnav made he knew there was something distracting him and it took him just a glance to know Khushi meant more to Arnav than just an ex-employee and that his interest in her was more than just a normal attraction to a beautiful girl.

He thinks about Arnav as a boy? 😆

Arnav Singh Raizada was all about making extreme profit out of this deal but enter Khushi and he was willing to sign the deal on the opponent's terms just to get Khushi the job? He is just so full of guilt!

At least Ram was sensible and decided to keep their business deal out of this one and I'm glad Arnav has a father like figure in Ram's form who reaches out to him in spite of not being encouraged. I love how you've shaped his character.

I hope Khushi doesn't find out how she landed this job. She is so happy about finding this job all by herself in a MNC. With whatever he did, he has already killed the life in her leaving her with just regrets and if she gets to know this, she's only going to be hurt more! Happy and bubbly Khushi bitiya is now dark and cloudy

Shyam aur Guptas ke relation ke baare mein toh main kuch bolugi hi nahi!

Edited by asrcraze - 9 years ago