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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
nice intro
characters toh achi h reporters+lrl nice
but yr ff ke start me he itna suspense yeh achi bt nhi h kabeer ananya or baki sabki life me kya hua tha 4 saal phele
jaldi suspense kholo
sorry for late comment

love naina
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
nice part
kya pita h kabeer ne gundo ko mind blowing
ab pta chalega ki secret h kya
nexf part jaldi update karna
i m waiting

love naina
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: RNforever

nice intro
characters toh achi h reporters+lrl nice
but yr ff ke start me he itna suspense yeh achi bt nhi h kabeer ananya or baki sabki life me kya hua tha 4 saal phele
jaldi suspense kholo
sorry for late comment

love naina


Thanks naina
Its ok
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: RNforever

nice intro
characters toh achi h reporters+lrl nice
but yr ff ke start me he itna suspense yeh achi bt nhi h kabeer ananya or baki sabki life me kya hua tha 4 saal phele
jaldi suspense kholo
sorry for late comment

love naina


Sabra kro u will get to know on Sunday
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Harini wants 2 know abt Kabir.but he was angry.But she said he is her everything.he apologized,but he can never give her d luv she has 4 him.it has 2 b made clear.Hope Harini n lakshya mert n they unite.Alekh is alone.so Suhana can be with him.So kabir n Ananya r narrating their past.so d mystery is going 2 get revealed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
thanks dear...i hope so tooo...yes mystry is going to be revealed soonn...thanks for ur comment

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome blossom update
Continue soon
Suspense jaldi SE khatam Karo plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
thanks alot...every one for liking the story here is the part 3 enjoy...keep reading & keep smiling...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

*** Sirf Tere Liye***

Part 3
Flashback...
8 YEARS AGO...MUMBAI...2007...

sharma mansion...

dining hall me sabhi bathe the ki 2 loge bahut hi tej raftaar me ander aate hai...

shadhna:- are ronie...aalekh...kya hua beta aise daud kyun rahe ho...

aalekh:- good morning everyone...aunty kabeer kahan hai??

naman:- kabeer bhai to so rahe hai...

vinod:- dekho sadhna ek yeh dono hai...kitane mehanati aur samajh daar...aur ek wo humara naalayak...

sadhna:- kya aap bhi jab dekho mere bachhe ke peeche pade rehte hai...

karan:- ha papa...rehne dijiye na...bachha hai...

vinod:- bachha...20 baras ka bachha...khair main to kuchh kahunga hi nahi...tum logon ke laad se hi wo itna

bigad gaya hai...chal naman tujhe school(12 std) drop kar dunga...

nanam:- ok papa...(aalekh & ronnie ke kaan me) mujhe mere hisse ka maal mil jana chahiye...warna papa ko

bata dunga ki kal rat aap 3no bar gaye the...aur aap 3no ne drink ki thi...(winks) byee have a nice day...

ronnie:- ise kaise pata?...

karan:- kya pata hai use ronnie...

aalekh:- kuchh nahi bhaiya...wo hum kabeer ko utha kar laate hai...aur aunty humare liye bhi nasta bana do...

sadhna:- ha beta...

karan:- maa...main bhi office nikal raha hun...byee everyone...

Kabeer's ROOM...

aalekh aur ronnie...kabeer ke room me jate hai to dekhte hai ki kabeer ji bahut hi pyar se apne large bed pe kisi

rajkumar ki tarah ek pyari si smile ke sath so rahe hai...uske honthon pe muskaan thi to chehre se masumiyat

chhalak rahi thi...tabhi aalekh aage jata hai aur kabeer ko pukarta hai...

aalekh:- kabeer uth...kabeer yar uth na...kitna sota hai...uttthhh...

par kabeer to ghode bech kar so raha hai...

aalekh:- abe uth na aaj college ka first day hai...and we are already getting late...chal uth na...

ronnie:- aalekh yeh kya kar raha hai tu...humara yeh rajkumar aise thode na uthega...

aalekh:- toh...hmmm right...

tabhi ronnie jata hai aur kabeer ki lower back (bum) pe jor se lat marta hai...aur kabeer hadbada kar uth jata

hai...

kabeer:-ahhh...kaun hai be...kis gadhe ne mujhe laat mari?...

aalekh pointing towards ronnie:- is gadhe ne...

kabeer:- abe saale ronnie ke bachhe...tune mujhe laat kyun maari...main kitna achha sapna dekh raha tha...aur tu

hai ki...

ronnie:- abe hum college ke liye late ho rahe hai...ab chal uth..

aalekh:- oh hello...by the way tu aisa dekh kya raha tha...

kabeer (cutely):- main dekh raha tha ki main na...ek bahut hi jyada extreamly hot aur sexy ladki ke sath tha...we

were dancing...and she was about to kiss me...ki is ghade ne mujhe lat mari hnnn...

aalekh:- kya baat hai waise ronnie...jo bhi ho...apna kabeer sapne bade achhe dekhta hai...(kabeer and aalekh hi

five)

ronnie:- tum log bhi na...aur tu kabeer tu sudhar ja...teri mom aur bhaiya ko tujhse kitani expectations hai...par tu

hai ki...khair...(hanth jod kar )ab chale...mahaaraj...

kabeer:- are apna sentence to pura karle...ki main chhichhorapanti karta hu...khair tu nahi samjhega...

aalekh:- achha aur wo kyun nahi samjhega...

kabeer:- ab dekh...bhagwaan ne is duniyaan me itani hot - hot ladkiyaan hum jaiso ke liye hi to banai hai...taki

hum jaise ladke...unke sath romance kar sake...time pass kar sake...nahi toh bechari in ladkiyon ka kya hoga...aur

tu to aise bol raha hai, jaise bada sariff hai...

ronnie:- ha -ha theek hai - theek hai...romace maharaj ji...kripa karke apne is singhasan se uthne ka kast

kareinge...

kabeer:- ofcrs i will be back...(left to wash room...aur ronnie aur aalekh bed par kood gaye)..

aalekh:- tujhe kya lagta hai...yeh kabhi sudhrega...

ronnie:- nhhh...waise doubt to mujhe hum dono pe bhi hai...(both laughs)

after some time kabeer ready hokar wapas aata hai...he is looking too hot in his black jacket white t- shirt and blue

jeans...with rolex watch and branded sports shoes...

kabeer:- so guys kaisa lag raha hun?..

aalekh:-tom cruis ka desi version...kash ek aad ladkiyaa..humari taraf bhi dekh le...

ronnie:- no chance..(ronnie & kabeer hi five)...

kabeer:- common...lets go...

3no jaldi me dining table pe jate hai...

kabeer :- morning mumma...(kisses on her cheek)

sadhna:- hii mera bachha...kitna sona lag raha hai...bhagwaan tujhe buri nazar se bachaye...le nasta kar...

aalekh( wishpers):- bhagwaan ladkiyon ko kabeer ki nazar se bachaaye...

sadhan:- kya kaha tune aalekh...lo tum dono bhi khao...

aalekh:- kuchh nahi aunty...kabeer jaldi kar...(3 no nasta finish karte hai...)

kabeer:- ok mumma bye...love u...(aur 3 no hi apni - apni super smart bikes par nikal jate hai..)

now we can see a very beautiful house where a girl is standing in front of temple...usne red colour ka sakwaar

kameej pehna hai...baal khule hai...dupatta gale se laga hai... she is looking like an angel...

girl:- bhagwaan ji..plzzz ha aaj mera college me first day hai...plzzz no ragging sagging...ha...kuchh aisa karna ki

mujhe mere naye college me koi problem na ho...(tabhi saome one calls her from back)...

richa:- ananya...jaldi kar...

ananya:- aaii...ok god ji...help karna ha...bye...love u...(winks at krishna bhagwan...)nupur richa kitna late kar

diya tum dono ne ha...

nupur:- anu ab jaldi kar...ab lecture mat de...

anita:- ab jaldi bhi karo beta late ho jaoge...

ananya:- ok...(aur 3no ananya ki car me chale jate hai...)...

IN Car...

nupur:- thanks anu...aaj teri wajah se humein itane bade college me admission mil paya...aur hum wahan

padheinge...

ananya:- kya yar...we are frnds so dont be formal...

richa:- yeee...

now we can see...mumbai's st. aloysis college very beautiful college...

kabeer, aalekh & ronnie...apni - apni bike pe college me enter karte hai...sabhi ladkiyon ki nazar in teeno par

hai...bcz they are the heros of college...yeh teeno bike park karke seedha canteen me jate hai...

aalekh:- hey everyone...

nikhil:- hey aalekh, kabeer ronnie...welcome back...now we all are in our 2nd year...ab to college me tum 3no ke

thaath hi kuchh aur honge...

ronnie:- ofcrs...

kabeer to the boys...who were sitting the best chairs of canteen:- abe uth...yeh meri jagah hai...(aur we sab uth jate

hai...aur kabeer aalekh aur ronnie..badi hi shaan se un chairs pe jate hai...)

kanahiyalal (canteen owner):- kyun bhai...kabeer, aalekh, ronnie...kya baat hai ab to tum logon ka pramotion ho

chuka hai...ab to udhaar chuka do...pichhle saal ka khata band karo...

aalekh:- kya kanahiyalal...wahi chik - chik...ha...chal bol...kitna udhaar baki hai hum 3no ka...aaj hi main hum

3no ka account settle karta hun...

kanhaiya lal khush ho kar:- kya baat hai...tum 3no ka ab tak ka huaa...

kabeer:- ek minut kanahiya lal...tera hishaab hafte bhar me pura ho jayega...par is saal ka naya account khol

abhi...

kanahiya laal:- kya kabeer...aalekh de raha hai na...to...

kabeer:- achha...aalekh..hum 3no ka account settle karega?...paise hai? dekh kanahiya lal...tera account next week

tak settle ho jayega... i promise u...kabeer's promise...

kanahiya lal:- theek hai...

kabeer:- chal cold drinks de...

a guy:- hey loosers...

they all turned and find not so happening vivan(vikash sethi) amar( vikash mankatla urf huda) & manav( sunny

hinduja)..they are senior to kabeer and bad boys of the college...pehle inka raaj tha college me...par jab se kabeer,

ronnie aur aalekh aaye hai...in teeno ko koi puchhta tak nahi...isliye inki in 3 no se hi nahi banti...

ronnie:- mind ur la...(kabeer stops him)

kabeer:- hey dude...looser kaun hai...yeh toh humien bahut pehle hi pata chal gaya tha...filhaal just chiil ha...main

pehle hi din suru nahi hona chahta...

other side of the college...

nupur:- wow...ananya...what a college ha...bus koi humari ragging na kare...

ananya:- chill yar main hoon na...chal class me kab se yahan bahar se hi dekh rahe hai...(aur 3no classes ki taraf

chali jati hai...

other side...

kabeer:- guys...in donkeys k muh lagne se achha hai ki hum classs me ja kar kuchh padh hi lete hai...waise bhi

sabhi ko pata hai ki is college ke heros kaun hai aur zeros kaun...

amar:- itna hi apne aap ko hero mante ho to saabit karo...

aalekh:- achha aisa kya...kya karna hoga...waise kehte hai sach ko saakshya ki jarurat nahi hoti (no need of

evidence for truth) par kya hai yeh to tum jaise loosers ko samajh aane se raha...so let us know kya karna hai...

manav;- u know ronnie & aalekh tum dono pe is kabeer ka nasha kuchh jyada hi chada hai...

amar;- aur ha...itna hi yakeen hai khud ke charm pe...to aaj jo girls as fresher aai hai...unhe pata kar dikhao...

(kabeer raises his one eye brow)..i mean unhe dance hi kara kar dikha do maan jayeinge...

kabeer:- ladkiya...oh really...

amar:- really...

kabeer:- done...

ronnie:- kabeer pagal ho gaya hai...jute padeinge...

kabeer:- trust me guys...

vivan:- ok hum tumhe batayeinge ki tumhe kinke sath dance karna hai...

ronnie & aalekh:- kya...

vivan:- kyun dar gaye...

kabeer:- ohk no problem...par shart lagi hai to kuchh to different hona chahiye na...agar hum 3no jeete ya phir

main hi jeeta to kya milega...

manav:- 10000 rs ki shart lagi...

aalekh:- abe paiso ki shart bachhe lagate hai...tum logo ki bum me agar dum hai...to kuchh daring karke dikhao...

ronnie:- ofcrs humien kuchh to different chahiye boss...

vivan:- ohk done...

kabeer:- agar hum jeete to tum 3 no aapas me date pe jaaoge...

manav vivan & amar (Shocked):- kyaaa...

aalekh:- aur ha...itana hi nahi...apni date ki romantic pics click karke...FB Instagram, twitter aur whats app pe

post bhi karoge...

manav:- no way...

ronnie:- are manav bhai aage to sunn lo... sath me status bhi update karna padega...

kabeer:- aur status hoga ki... wonder ful evening with #my beloved

aalekh:- aur 10000 nahi balki 30000 ki shart bhi hum 3 hai na...

amar:- done...

vivan:- par agar hum jeete to...?

aalekh:- to jitne bhi din college me raheinge...hum 3no tum 3no ko daily salute karienge...

kabeer & ronnie:- kyaaa...pagal hai kya...(alekh winks )

amar, manav & vivan :- done...(left)

ronnie:- abe aalekh...pagal ho gaya hai...aur tu kabeer kya kareinge ab...pata nahi kin balaao ko patane ko

boleinge...

aalekh:- abe patana nahi hai...sirf dance karna hai unke sath...wo bhi khusi khusi...aur dosti thats it...

kabeer :- halwa hai...?

aalekh:- abe tu hi to aage - aage bol raha tha...tab to bada confident tha...ab kya hua ha...

kabeer:- koi baat nahi dekhte hai...aur waise bhi hum sab itane bure bhi nahi hai...

parking lot...

vivan:- un logon ko to keh diya...but we all know that ki kabeer kisi bhi ladki ko pata sakta hai...humien koi aisi

ladki dhundhni hogi...jo kabeer se 4 kadam aage ho...

manav:- exactly warna humien...

amar;- chill bros...maine aisi shart rakhi hi isliye kyuki mujhe pata hai we...aisa kuchh nahi kar payeinge...kyuki

mujhe wo ladki mil gayi hai...even ladki nahi ladkiyaa...

manav;- kya par kab aur kahan?...

amar:- actually wo...abhi kuchh der pehle...

an hour ago...
amar college me aa hi raha tha ki dekhta hai ki ananya apni car park kar rahi hai...aur sath me nupur aur richa

bhi the...amar bade hi style se jata hai hai aur anaya ke hanth pe apna hanth rakh deta hai aur rub karta hai...jisse

ananya ke sath baki dono ka bhi gussa satve aasmaan par tha...

ananya;- excuse me...what u just did?...

amar( cheap tarah se ):- excused miss... by the way i m amar...can we have freindship...aap sab fresher lag rahi hai

aur main hu...

richa:- bloody cheap & ghatiyaa insaan...we know...

nupur:- & we are not interested in any kind of friendship...(pointing her finger towrds him)got it...

all three girls turn to go...but ananya stops...and turned towards amar...thinks something and slapped him hard

across his face...and amar was stunned...

ananya:- aur yeh raha...mujhe chhune ka nateeja...

amar:- you...(and all girls left)

back to current time...

vivan:- oh to yeh baat hai...

manav:- humien bhi to bata ki kaun hai yeh bala...

amar;- chal...

yeh 3no fools pure college me ananya & frnds ko dhundhte hai...par finally kuchh der bad inhe wo teeno dikh hi jati

hai...

amar:- wo dekh wo rahi 3no...

manav:- wow...kya ladkiyaan hai yar...beauty beauty...

vivan:- oh chal dekhte hai...

ananya, richa aur nupur canteen me coffe pee rahe the ki...yeh teeno ate hai...amar peeche khada hai...

vivan:- hey beuties...m vivan...3 year...(all looks him and amar too...and understand every thing...ki yeh teeno hi

cheapo hai)

nupur;-kitane saal se ho...

vivan:- matalab...

richa:- she means...ki tum 3no senior citizen is college me kitane saal se ho...

manav;- what...

ananya:- ab tum 3no apne aap ko aaine me dekh lo aur beauty nahi balki beti kehene ki aadat daal lo(all laughs at

this even other students too...aur yeh teeno loosers ko gussa aa raha hai..)...waise aapne jabab nahi diya aap loge

kitane saal se ho is college me..

a boy:- pichhle 5 saal se...log sirf 3 saal me bacholers karte hai par yeh 3no 5 saal se kar rahe hai...

ananya:- veryyy good...keep it up..ha...mere bachoo ke bhi seniors aap hi rahoge...aur unka khayal jarur rakhna...

(all 3 girls laugh and left)...

amar to that boy:- bahut hasi aa rahi thi na tujhe...uuu...(and he punched that poor boy)

after the class...

apne 3no hero canteen me baithe ki tabhi vivan aata hai...

vivan:- tum teeno ko shart to yaad hai na...

aalekh:- ofcrs...par tu bata to ki ladki kaun hai...(tabhi apni 3no heroins canteen ki taraf aa rahi hoti hai...apni

class lekar...

amar:- ladki nahi ladkiyaan...wo dekho wo 3 jo canteen ki taraf aa rahi hai...ubhe nachana hai...(tabhi all the

lover boys turned and saw the most beautiful site of their life...)

aalekh ki nazar nupur pe gayi...to wahi nupur bhi un teeno ko dekh rahi thi...wahi ronnie ne richa ko bahut hi

khubsurat paya...to apne kabeer ka dil to teeno pe hi aa gaya...par na jane kya socha aur ananya ki taraf cute si

smile di...nupur, richa & ananya bhi in teeno ko dekh rahi thi...amar ko apna plan flop hota dikha to usne kaha...

amar:- hi girls yeh teeno...(kabeer ne amar ke muh pe apna hanth rakhte hue...aage badhkar ananya ki taraf hanth

badha kar kaha )

kabeer:- hi...i m kabeer...kabeer sharma...nam to suna hi hoga (n he winks)...

ronnie to richa:- hii...i m ronnie singh...

aalekh to nupur;- and i m aalekh khanna...

na jane kyun par richa aur nupur ne...apne hanth aage badha kar smile ke sath naam bataya aur shake hand bhi

kiya...par ananya bina kuchh kahe waha se chali gayi...aur uske peeche nupur aur richa bhi...

vivan:- kya baat hai kabeer...tera charm khatam ho gaya kya...kahin...chal salute karne ko taiyaar ho ja...wo aise

waisi ladki nahi...jo tere chakkar me aa jaye...

kabeer:- abhi din khatam nahi hua hai...mr vivan...

manav;- 2 ghante baad aaj ka din khatam ho jayega...kya kar lega tu...

kabeer (with determined smile on his face):-dekhta jaa...

end of part 3
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Edited by rkchandni - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
hi
the up is really good
so finally the story started with the flashback
so its the first day of their college Kabir friends Alekh and ronnie both came to wake him up
Kabir being the flirt guy was lost in his dream world but poor guy before he could kiss his dream girl got a kick on his bum from Ronnie hehe
here Annaya along with her friends nupur and Riccha also went to the same college where Kabir and his friends too are there as their senior
but yaar the shart wow its superb interesting
Vivan amar and manav the evil guys placed such a shart before kabir
me waiting how they are going to win it
All the best my kabir
please cont soon and pm me

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