FAN-FIC WIV NEW TWIST K- REVENGE ON NAINA - Page 2

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Posted: 20 years ago
#11
well i like it .i think u should continue.great job 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Here we Go...

AAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH. He just run over some one, he got back to normal state... he ran out of the car to find KRIPER lying there with bloood tricling down her face! He ran upto her!Angad(breathless,upset,worried):KRIPER...Oh God yeh maine kya kare diya...KRIPA please Otto...Kripa(now he was crying KRIPA...PLEASE.

He rushes her into City Hospital. They are running her down the corridor. Angad is sweaty, worried and tearfull, the doctor is worried and every one is tensed!

Docter(impatient, tlkin to nurse):take her to the I.C.U!

Angad(worried):Docter...woh teek to ho jaye gee?

Docter(impatient): Abhi kuch kaha nahi jak sakta... i'm very SORRY Mr Angad.

He goes into the I.C.U! Angad is left alone with guilt. He sits down on the white bench. Hours pass by, but to him they felt like days. A few mintues later a nurse comes out worried and tense. Angad gets up!

Angad(worried): Nurse...Kripa...Kripa kesi hai.

Nurse(tense):Serious...Internal bleeding hai, abhi bhi kuch kaha nahi jah sakta.

Angad sits back down(sad version of kyph playing)he has flash back of good, bad memories and the accident! He gets up, he feels helpless... he needs his dadi. He picks up his phone and rings his dadi...ring ring...

Dadi:Hello

Angad(tearfull):Dadi pleze meri bhatt suno upe foreign Ciy Hospital poch jayee.

Dadi(worried):Lekin Angad beta...tum to yahaa ane wali te na...to kya huwa.

Angad(lifts his head up and looks at the shimmering white ceiling):Dadi pleze...jaldi ayee...PLEZE!

Dadi(worried):Abhi aree hoon mai...bete

As soon as he puts the phone down, the docter comes out of the I.C.U room.

Angad(worried):Docter Kriper...Kaise hai?

Docter(looks down and looks up):Upe pehle kya suna chahte te hai...Good news Or Bad news?

........................

I know boreing but it hasn't even began...the action about to begin.

Luv ya Superstars

Amazin nd Hot!

Edited by Amazin nd hot! - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#13
continue please, main pehle bad news suno gi aur phir good news.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
plz write more i can't take the suspense plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 20 years ago
#15
continue n first the good news ofcause
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Posted: 20 years ago
#16
that good please write more i cant wait
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Posted: 20 years ago
#17
why do you think it was boring It was too good please continue don't stop make it lenghter
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Posted: 20 years ago
#18

Thankx more likein my story, i will continue it, just a few more hours, pleze.😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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This one is gonna be long, so bear with me!

Here we Go...

Docter(looks down and looks up):Upe pehle kya suna chahte te hai...Good news Or Bad news?

Scene 4

Angad(breathless):...Docter...

His voice sounded like a whisper.

Docter(professional):Miss Kripa Sharma ab hahatre se bahare hai...

Just as he said this Angad looked, Thank-You God

...par...

Angads impression changes

Angad(worried):par...kya

Docter:par...uska baiche ... baiche ko hum nahi baccha payee!

Angad, taken aback, shocked!

Angad:Baiche...Kripa ka baiche...voh pregnant thee

Docter:Ha voh ek maine, pregnant thee. I'm sorry Mr Angad

With he left Angad alone, Angad sat back on the bench and started crying, he cryed and cryed untill he heard a fammilar voice. He looks upyto see himself standing in front of him wearing a black t-shirt with black trousers and chiny white trainers.

B. Angad(sarcastic): Tum kyun roar re hoon!

Angad(tearfull):voh mera baiche ta...aur usko dheekne se pehli meine, usko mardi ya.

B.Angad(sarcastic):Kya...tumme kisene bhatt ya voh tume hara baiche hai, bhull gaye mom, Bhi, Anita aur Harshini jo tum ko dheek ye. Bhull Gaye, tum kaise jaan te hoon voh tumhara baiche ta. Face it Angad Kripa ka koye Bhorasa nahi hai, voh dullat keliye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.

Just then another Angad appeared. This one was wearing a white shirt with dark blue rusted jeans.

G. Angad:Angad voh tumehara he baiche hai, Angad tum schocho, tum ne kissi se itna mohabbhat kiye hai, tumme kya lagta hai Kripa tum hare saath aisa kar sakte hai, schoch tum ne uska safai bhi nahi suna, ho sakta hai ki yeh sab Kripa ko passane ki liye huwa hai.

B.Angad:Nahi... Angad tumme hara Mom tum se jhott nahi bholl sakte, tum ko sabhott bhi dekka gaya hai.

G.Angad:Kripa needs you Angad!

Angad bends down on the seat and put his both hands on his head and starts crying, his so confused.

B.Angad:Yeh Kripa ka saajha hai...She deserves it.

G.Angad:Kripa loves you

B.Angad:She used you

Angad gets irritated he starts shouting.

Angad:Tum log jaow, kahi joow...please please chale jaow.

Just then he felt a soft sweet hand on his head. It was dadi!

Dadi(worried):Angad beta kya huwa tum chella re hai kyun aur yaha hospital mein mujhe bhulla ye kyun..

Angad starts crying and dadi sit by him, he tells her the whole story so far.

Dadi:Yeh bahott bora huwa, Kripa ko hum deechk sakte hai.

Angad:Pata nahi

Dadi goes in while Angad sits back out side somehow he couldn't face her just yet.

Scene 5

Dadi enters, into a small room with a few chairs and a table with medcine on and the mechinary. There was a bed, on the bed was lying a bueatiful girl. She had a white mask all over her face, only her eyes, nose and mouth wasshowing which had an oxygen mask over it. Dadi goes upto Kripa who was awke and sat by her holding her hand.

Dadi:Kripa beta...ghab raow mahatt tum jhall de teek ho jaow ghi.

Kripa(her voice brocken):Dadi, mera chera ko kya huwa.

Dadi:Docter ne kaha ke tum hara chera pe tora daag hai, par ye daag meet jaye ye ge beta tum chinta mut karo.

Kriper:aur mera biache.

Before dadi could answer Angad walked in. Dadi got up.

Dadi:Kripa tum teek ho jaow gi, meh abhi ghar jaakar tum hare liye choclate cake leker a ti hoon.

Kripa:Thankx Dadi

Dadi(tlkin to Angad):Beta tum bhi kahi nahi jahana, tumme bhi kanna hai.

Dadi goes. Angad walks up to Kripa. His eyes are tearfull and his voice is soft.

Angad:Kripa...tum

Kriper(angry):meh teek to hoon na, tumme kya farak parta hai, tumm ne toh mujhe mara hai, Angad tum ek jhott ho Angad, kya samaghed te hoon.

Anhad:Kriper meh...

Kriper:Hai tum ne mere baiche koh mara heh. Tumm ne uss masoom ko mara hai jessene iss dhuniya me kadam bhi nahi raka.

Angad:You no wat Kripa...tum pe koi barosa nahi hai, mujhe to lag ta hai ki ye baiche mere bhi nahi hee.

Kripa:Angad...just get lost.

At that mintue his phone rang it was Naina aunty.

I will continue it later, i didn't get to fit all of it in.

Luv ya Superstars

Amazin and Hot!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#20
please continue why did you have to kill the baby

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