FAN-FIC WIV NEW TWIST K- REVENGE ON NAINA - Page 4

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Posted: 20 years ago
#31

arey yaar suapnse mei chod diya kyu kunch tho bolo na

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Posted: 20 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: deepey

nayi don't kill my angad, Kill naina, mishty, kartik, u have a lot of choices.

I agree,. awesome.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#33

Ok guys i've made ya wait, all the scenes you have just read were only a part of the beginning!

Here we Go...

At that mintue his phone rang it was Naina.

Angad(tearfull,depressed): Hello...kaun.

Naina(sturborn):Angad, yeh sub kya hai, tum kaha ho, jhante ho, ki ajj tumm hara aur abhijeet sawar ki saath ek duet the,ajj tumm ne yeh bhi miss kardi ya. Akere tum kya chahti hoon, upne career koh agha barrana ya use daba karna.

Angad(irritated):Mum meh abb mood meh nahi hoon,

Naina realizes somthing is bothering Angad, she changes the tone of her voice.

Naina(camly): Kya huwa Angad tum itne tense kyun ho.

Angad:Maine Kripa ka accident kardiya hai

Naina(shocked):Wot...tumne kripa ka accident kardiya, kaise ka ha ho tum abb, meh abbhi poch te hoon.

Angad(not bothered):City Hospital

With out saying bye, he hangs up!

Scene 6

Naina slams her phone on the table, she is sitting right oppisite Kartic, who is fiddling with a cubix. Naina has an irritaed expression on her face, Kartic, Anita and Harshini notice this.

Anita:Kya huwa masi...uape itni gusa kyun hai.

Naina:KRIPA...janne kab isss ladki ke chapter baond hoge.

Kartic(intressted):Kyun, abb kya huwa

Naina(looking in discust):Angad ne uske accident karli, voh uape hospitall meh hai.

Kartic stares at his mother for a second and then comes up with the most discusting idea...

Kartic(with a evil smile):Uape haod, Kripa ka chapter boand nahi karte hai...

Naina:Matlab

Kartic:Usse mar do

Harshini drops her phone in suprise. Anita has her sly expression on, on her face.

Naina:Kartic...yeh tum kya kehre ho

Kartic:Meri plan suno.

With that, all three listened to Kartic with great intrest.

Scene 7

Naina and the gang, walk into the cooridor, where Dadi and Angad were waiting patiently. Naina puts a worried expression on her face,

Naina:Angad beta, yeh sab kya huwa, Kripa bete kaise hai.

Angad:Mum voh samle waile kamre meh hai(he does a gesture with his hand)uape hoad jahke dechk legiya, par voh abb ek ghare neede meh hai.

Anita, Harshini and Kartic go into see while Naina waits outside talking to Angad. A few mintues later all three come out.

Anita(to Angad):Bhi, muhje laggta hai ki uape ne bil khol sooya nahi kal raat,uape ko ghar jahke araam karna chaye.

Kartic:Anita teek kehre hai, uape bhi dardi.

Angad:Meh ghar nahi jah re hi.

Anita:Teek hai bhi, par hammre saath hospital ki cafe meh ayye, uape breakfast bhi nahi kaye. I'm right na.

Kartic:Uape bhi hummare saath chaleye dadi.

Naina:Haa mujhe lagta hai, ki tum duono ko janna chahye.

Angad hesitated so did Dadi but then they agreed leaving Naina alone.

Naina:Meh Kripa koh dehkar ayti hoon.

Scene 8

Naina enters Kripas room, Kripa is lying there with an oxygen mask over her face, you cant's see much of her face because of the mask. Naina slowly walks upto Kripa..................................

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Posted: 20 years ago
#34
Will this be the end of Kripa........
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Posted: 20 years ago
#35
arggg!! I cannot w8! surely it is not the end... it is da story of them too!! 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
#36
continue yaar. can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 20 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: JinK

kill angad if u want😆

not a bad idea!!!u wannna join me to kill him!!😉😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
#38
I'll get back 2 u on dat 1

luv Angad 2 much 2 kill him😕😕😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
#39

My story isn't gonna finish dat quick, theres so much more like i said this is just part of the beggining!

😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
#40
OMG!!! Naina 😡. Pls continue. Ur doing a fab job

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