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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
Awh!
That was emotional
Arman is one confused soul
Wants ridz n sia but cant manage a balance between the two
N I guess its common for single fathers to side with their kid everytime
Even if they are wrng
But poor ridzie
Had to go through so much
But it was a nice OS
Thanks for the PM

Thank you very much for posting a comment on my work. It means a lot to me. Especially when I get to read something in detail about my work...If you would be kind enough to let me know which one of mine OS was your favorite and which one you liked the least...I would be really glad to know your opinion...Thank you once again

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: saniashzadi
Hey dear
Lovely and cute os...you are an awesome writer
Will b waiting fr ur new nd next work
Love
Sania

Thank sania for giving my work time and commenting your views on it. I am really happy you like it. Thank you for your support and all the nice words you had posted for my work.

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice!

Thank you very much mysticriver. You have been a great support to me. You were my first reader who commented on my work and like it. I am extremely happy to have a reader like you. And since you were mine first reader I am really looking forward to know which one of my OS you liked the most and also your least favorite one from the series.

THANK YOU VERY MUCH

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Humera

@ITSABOUT_DMG

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Hey Sara

I already read this on blog

N i really loved n hate it

Loved it Kyunki ridhima was going through the pain which armaan gave yo her knowingly n she without even justifying herself was waiting for him patiently

I love patience waali ridzi

It only shows that she have faith in god faith in her love n most of all faith in herself

Hate it because of armaan n sia

Btw what's her age

I was imagining herself as 10. Or 8 years old

Coz she was doing all that hatred things with ridhima jo below 5 /6 yrs kids will dnt even dare to go against there parents

Whatever may be her age

But here i can understand her fear of losing his father because of new mother who often separates father n kids

N i very well understands Armaan's POV

Too

How he want her child to be safe n secure still he was spoiling her but atleast he spilled his beans to muskaan n i loved loved loved their conversation

Especially how muskaan makes him understand that he was wrong

N finally he confessed his love for her n sia confessed her fear of loosing him

A perfect end

I somewhere felt ke ridhima ka pov bhi agar padhne ko milta toh we readers would have known her as a person...

Anyways

Your series came to an end

N u know my favourite one

Right

Do i need to say

Nahi na

I am eagerly waiting for part 2

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Its really very nice os yaar
just love it
thanks for the pm dear
U r a very gud writer
keep it up dear

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Os.😊

The Whole os was so Beautifully explained.😊

My Favorite Os were A recondite fairy tale,A recommence love story

Please write like this.😊

__________________________________

(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

Edited by PriyaCherry - 9 years ago

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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#227

It was amazing loved it. Keep writing

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keya

@krazy4kash

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#228

hey

aww its over...i think i like this last one better

your writing is improving remarkably it can noticed through the series

waitng for more from you

luv

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Ash

@Ashstyle

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Loved all of your OS very much, this one was also one of the best

I must say, you write very rhythmically and smooothly

LOved your last os

It was Fantastic, Amazing and if you want i will write all the synonyms of best

To explain this

Keep Writing on AR

AshStyle

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tanya

@tanyaarora2912

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Why this series has come to an end.?

Can I ask u fr some more plz.?

I knw everything good comes to an end lyk DMG :(

But writers lyk u keep it alive n help us relive DMG in a new way...

This series ws unique I had already said dat...

All d OS are so very different n it is difficult to decide which I love d most!!!

Starting from a rainy dawn it ws so emotional n from a father's POV n d last line ws d best fr me.

Then comes a road to home from arjun's POV.

I want to tell u it ws d most emotional of all d OS n I can't just read it again so u cn count it as my least fav.

I don't lyk tragedies...

A Recondite fairy tale - The way u showed it feels so real. A new married couples r lyk dat. They don't knw hw to react n I love hw armaan expressed his love.

A remedy of loneliness - Sid's POV ws unexpected though but it turns out to be as beautiful as ur other wrk. The best part ws ridhima calling armaan n armaan supporting her (aww moment)...

A random walk - It ws my first choice earlier but it changed after last os ;)

A recovery from sadness- What should I say I m just loving all d stries n dis ws ridhima's POV. It ws beautifully written.

Last but nt d least a recommence love stry - I guess dis is my fav coz armaan is having a baby girl n I just love dis when there is a daughter in an FF.

The other reason ws sia n ridhima after sia ws told dat ridhima wll leave dat scene juat took my heart away...

All r my favourite...

But plz convert one of it in FF