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sara

@phoo_honey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Enthusiastic priyacherry heemasomani zarakhanarlover _amrita_ yoga123

Thanks for all the support. I am glad to have readers like you!

Edited by phoo_honey - 9 years ago

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: SGROVER_WINGET
Hey Sara
I already read this on blog
N i really loved n hate it
Loved it Kyunki ridhima was going through the pain which armaan gave yo her knowingly n she without even justifying herself was waiting for him patiently
I love patience waali ridzi
It only shows that she have faith in god faith in her love n most of all faith in herself
Hate it because of armaan n sia
Btw what's her age
I was imagining herself as 10. Or 8 years old
Coz she was doing all that hatred things with ridhima jo below 5 /6 yrs kids will dnt even dare to go against there parents
Ok
Whatever may be her age
But here i can understand her fear of losing his father because of new mother who often separates father n kids
N i very well understands Armaan's POV
Too
How he want her child to be safe n secure still he was spoiling her but atleast he spilled his beans to muskaan n i loved loved loved their conversation
Especially how muskaan makes him understand that he was wrong
N finally he confessed his love for her n sia confessed her fear of loosing him
A perfect end
I somewhere felt ke ridhima ka pov bhi agar padhne ko milta toh we readers would have known her as a person...
Anyways
Your series came to an end
N u know my favourite one
Right
Do i need to say
Nahi na
I am eagerly waiting for part 2

Thanks a lot Humera, you have been there for me from the every starting of my series...and honestly your suggestions and support made me come this far but everything has to end and so does this one. And you have already given me a new project...if you know what I mean...Now about the story it was a complete random work and honestly I didn't even likeit when I post it on blog, the concept and everything was not very impressive but I was sick, extremely sick and I had to post this one on Sunday on blog so whatever came into my mind I just pen it down...didn't even bothered to check it. So before posting I had made the changes here, which I thought might make my story better...Sia is a 7 years old girl...she is not 5 or 6 neither 10 or 8...A 7 years old girl who was born orphan...Armaan is a confused person who actually falls in love again and was determined to get Riddhima, by hook or by crook...You know me I can't write a story from 2 people's POV...it just makes me confuse and I lost the track of the stroy because everyone has a different PoOV which means a different view to a story and I am not good really good with it. I mean it's a piece of cake for you cause you're an incredible write but I beginner and it really hard for me...that why no Riddhima's view...anyways I am not very satisfied with my work although everyone is generous enough to like it and comment on it but I always feel something is missing and maybe that is Riddhima's feeling and all...

Anyways thank you for your time and suggestions and appreciation...they have always mean a lot to me

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: krazy4kash
hey

aww its over...i think i like this last one better
your writing is improving remarkably it can noticed through the series

waitng for more from you

luv
kj

Thank you very much Krazy4kash..it means a lot to me...I know it funny but even I will be missing this series...But everything has to come to an end...and thank you for the compliments they had always being a great motivation to me!

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: Ashstyle
Loved all of your OS very much, this one was also one of the best
I must say, you write very rhythmically and smooothly

LOved your last os
It was Fantastic, Amazing and if you want i will write all the synonyms of best
To explain this
Keep Writing on AR

AshStyle

Thank you very much Ashstyle. I am extremely happy that you liked it...Also thank you for compliments, I think I don't

deserve so much appreciation...You have been a great support, thank you for all the time you have given to my work! It hard to explain who much everything means to me...

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#235

NIce os yaar

Armann utilized Ridhimma. Thats bad

Anyways all is well that ends well

So finally they are together and happy and Sia too undersood and accepted

Nice one

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: tanyaarora2912
Why this series has come to an end.?
Can I ask u fr some more plz.?
I knw everything good comes to an end lyk DMG :(
But writers lyk u keep it alive n help us relive DMG in a new way...
This series ws unique I had already said dat...
All d OS are so very different n it is difficult to decide which I love d most!!!
Starting from a rainy dawn it ws so emotional n from a father's POV n d last line ws d best fr me.
Then comes a road to home from arjun's POV.
I want to tell u it ws d most emotional of all d OS n I can't just read it again so u cn count it as my least fav.
I don't lyk tragedies...
A Recondite fairy tale - The way u showed it feels so real. A new married couples r lyk dat. They don't knw hw to react n I love hw armaan expressed his love.
A remedy of loneliness - Sid's POV ws unexpected though but it turns out to be as beautiful as ur other wrk. The best part ws ridhima calling armaan n armaan supporting her (aww moment)...
A random walk - It ws my first choice earlier but it changed after last os ;)
A recovery from sadness- What should I say I m just loving all d stries n dis ws ridhima's POV. It ws beautifully written.
Last but nt d least a recommence love stry - I guess dis is my fav coz armaan is having a baby girl n I just love dis when there is a daughter in an FF.
The other reason ws sia n ridhima after sia ws told dat ridhima wll leave dat scene juat took my heart away...
All r my favourite...
But plz convert one of it in FF

I don't know how to start and where to start from, your comment is so lovely...it's so amazing that my mind is actually blank andi have no idea what to say...I can't even thank enough for this. You have been so generous to write down about my work from the very beginning...that incredible...I know you had to a lot of time of your to write down everything in detail that to from the first OS of mine and letting me know which one you like the most anf you least favorite one...I don't know whether you understand but it means a lot to me...your views are the most important part of the series and I am glad you participated.

Back to the thank you, Thank you for all th support and love and time and comments and likes on my work...they were extremely motivating and had encourage me to write down the 7 complete OS just like I had planned to but you have been a great contribution. I am so fortunate to have a reader like you and

About your request of turning one into FF..Please let me know which one of my work you would like to read in a FF form...I will be happy to know that...

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: ragvir92
NIce os yaar
Armann utilized Ridhimma. Thats bad
Anyways all is well that ends well
So finally they are together and happy and Sia too undersood and accepted
Nice one

I know Armaan was a real bad person...and I didn't wanted to came out like that...like a real mean and horrible human but then I thought maybe the story might be better this way...anywyas thank you for all the support and time and comments you have given on my work...it means a lot to me

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Humera

@ITSABOUT_DMG

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#238

I mean it's a piece of cake for you cause you're an incredible write but I beginner and it really hard for me...that why no Riddhima's view..

Ok this words dissapointed me yaar 😔

U don't even comes under a beginner

Beginners can't come up with huge awesome concept

U'r series have been a huge successful yaar

How can u consider yourself a beginner

It's not abt a beginner or a successful writer it's all about the story

The concept

The dialogues

N you did amazingly well in all of your series

N i told u earlier never underestimate your work

Never stress yourself

What i pointed is just that it would have turned more beautiful

That's it

But anyways

You r an amazing writer

Like i said before n i will keep on saying that u r the BEST

Take care n dnt stress yourself

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#239

armaan is such a bas***d, i m sorry but he is, how could he do this 2 ridhz
wat kind of person is he first usne ridhz ke father ki bimaari ka fayda uthaya to sleep with her then bloody jerk change her pills n make her pregnant n marry her n treat her like a shit
this is so wrong how can he treat a girl like that n his daughter is hurting herself n blaming ridhz then too he is humiliating her scolding her didn't let her speak
y the hell is he do that?? i know in today's world too this kind of people r here who do the sane thing to girls whatever armaan do with ridhz his every deed is not justified but i m happy abt one thing that whatever he do atleast he marry her though to torture her more but
his daughter is more mature then him
she listening to him at last admit her mistake n accept ridhz as a mother
yaar 2 ya 4 slap marti ridhz armaan ko to mza ata but still happy that atlast he feel guilty n confess
loved it

hahaha i m sorry i guess i overeacted but its ur fault again as u make me feel that by ur brilliant writing
i always got so involved in ur story that i always imagining it in front of my eyes
again the concept is mind blowing n very well written each word is perfect
its is shown perfectly
can't wait to read more work of urs