Arshi TS : Undone [COMPLETED] (28/10)

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Oh my gosh, I was nearly in tears seeing how Khushi felt.

Finally he realised his Khushi and his mother cannot be the same, Khushi is so different.

Now life itself seems like a dream each day, his baby, Khushi and their beautiful life.

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Natasha08

@Natasha08

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

a beautiful and sweet os

really loved it

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

First when i read this am like what the...why the hell arnav taking advantage of khushi's this venerable state...bt after reading the whole am like pheww thats not the case what am thinking..😆

It was his past which pull him back to xpress what he feels for khushi.. in the process of saving his heart..he hurt khushi alot..bt glad that with tym he realised wht wrong he was doing to his love his wife..or its better to say his life...

Bt seriously beautiful ts shivi...the way u potrayed arshi emotions just amazing...

Lovely ending with arshi nd thier littlw bundle of joy..

Loved it👏

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Nice TS. Glad that Arnav saved it before it was too late. Thanks for the PM :)

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shreya

@Willy_Wonka.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Fabulous one! Me loved it<3

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Moumita

@_Oorja_

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Beautiful like your every work. I always wonder how you understand such nuance of a couple's relation without being in one?? Anyway I always look forward for your writing ...

thank you for such beautiful story.