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MIT DEY

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Posted: 9 years ago

Its amazing...wonderful story..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

superb story..
zesty u r a brilliant writer...
very well written..
thnks 4 d pm..

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Pompomgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

Yaaar! I was left in tears after reading this! Beautiful!

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Rish_Rubles

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Posted: 9 years ago

One awesomest TS

Amazing characterization and plot, amazing concept

Finally he confessed his feelings

Great

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Aayat23

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Posted: 9 years ago

It's awesome...I just loved the way you potrayed arnav's fears then khushi's emotions...The moment Arnav realized she has broken to the extent where her thoughts crossed the path of thinking of herself so low and maybe she will never come to him which broke him too and then their confessions and coming back...that part was so beautifully written...It was wonderful dear...And please continue your other works soon...I'm new reader of yours but have read every work of yours..and totally loved them...If u can then please PM me

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Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

Wonderful story... loved the shots :)

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful story
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 9 years ago

Simply beautiful TS.
Loved it..
I loved Shashi's character in this story.

love n hugs my Gudiya.

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ARS24

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice dear
thank u for pm
loved it
read it in a go

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BVSJ

@BVSJ

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow it was such a lovely TS.I really liked it.

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