Dark FF: Resisting Temptations|Part 7|15/1

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Anyone who wants to hit me for posting, please stay in your places because I have to say something. I wrote this piece of fiction on the demands on my cute Candy, nelukulood. She is an amazing person, wonderful friend and writes heart-touching and overwhelming comments. She wanted a story on this story line and I couldn't just reject her, after all who can reject cutie-pies.

And coming to all my FFs, Forced Bride will have its curtains down with one epilogue, Hold My Hand and Tujhe Bhula Diya have two chapters left in them. Marriage or revenge is ending soon and of course my TS, has just 2 shots more. So, writing one more FF won't harm me or my speed. And I give regular updates, or atleast I feel so.

PLEASE, PLEASE support this fiction as you loved all my other fictions. Love you all.

Love,
Yagya

INDEX

Sneak Peek of Part 1
Part 1
Sneak Peek of Part 2
Part 2
Sneak Peek of Part 3
Part 3
Sneak Peek of Part 4
Part 4
Sneak Peek of Part 5
Part 5
Sneak Peek of Part 6
Part 6
Sneak Peek of Part 7
Part 7

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Yagya

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Prologue:

Ragging, one of the most common crimes we see in every college. And who would love a person who rags ruthlessly? But what if that person has a heart and has never seen people suffering because of his ragging? Or what if situations turned him so harsh that he turned blind towards the sufferings of people around him?

But there is always one person in this world, who makes every evil person turn good. Make every imperfection of theirs turn into perfection.

Meet Arnav Singh Raizada, a street fighter and the most popular guy of his college, who is also infamous for ragging the freshers. He had a past which would make everyone's heart wrench but his actions will just make your eyes turn red with anger.

Meet Khushi Gupta, a fresher to the Horizon Memorial College, the same college where Arnav studies and the second name of life and boldness. One smile of hers spreads happiness to all those around her but the pains which she endured is secret to the world.

Arnav brutally rags her like any other fresher but feels touched like never before when she is hurt and cries at being ragged.What would happen when these two people who are not just two different people but two different worlds, clash? And that too in a way that sparks of hatred and love spark together, what would be the result?

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How was it?

Edited by .MereRangMein. - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

lekin mujhe un aakho mei sirf nafrat DIKHTA hai 🤣 arey dikhtiii hai 😛 mujhe toh laga tha teri hindi badi spasht hai but nahi..

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -cuteee.tigress
lekin mujhe un aakho mei sirf nafrat DIKHTA hai 🤣 arey dikhtiii hai 😛 mujhe toh laga tha teri hindi badi spasht hai but nahi..

Oh Pagal, Khushi says it okay! I thought Arnav was a guy, maybe I was wrong.

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Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.
Oh Pagal, Khushi says it okay! I thought Arnav was a guy, maybe I was wrong.

Teri toh, pagalo ki sultaan, even if he's a guy 'nafrat dikhti hai' hi hoga.

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"lekin mujhe unn aakho mei sirf nafrat dikhta hai" JUST SEE HOW WRONG HINDI IT IS!

it should be:

"lekin mujhe unn aakho mei sirf nafrat dikhti hai"

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the notebook

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi yagya,

I am definitely following this..

Nice line on banner but I feel the line has incorrect hindi.

I am not saying it's bad but I feel it's incorrect.

Sorry.

🤣

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -cuteee.tigress
"lekin mujhe unn aakho mei sirf nafrat dikhta hai" JUST SEE HOW WRONG HINDI IT IS!
it should be:

"lekin mujhe unn aakho mei sirf nafrat dikhti hai"

Hahahah! Mujeh pata nahi! I cannot change it!

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the notebook

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.
Hahahah! Mujeh pata nahi! I cannot change it!

tujhe samajh nahi raha ye

i am... shocked😲 AREY BEHEN, just say it out loud: lekin mujhe unn aakho mei sirf nafrat dikhta hai

JUST SEE HOW WRONG IT IS 😆 yeh koi foreigner ladki bolegi who doesnt know hindi properly

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -cuteee.tigress
Hi yagya,
I am definitely following this..

Nice line on banner but I feel the line has incorrect hindi.
I am not saying it's bad but I feel it's incorrect.

Sorry.

🤣

Hayye, Main Barbaad Hogay! *breaks bangles* Arre Chudiyan Kahan Hai Bhai! *Dramatically says nahi*

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