AITBAAR - THE TRUST ON LOVE [COMPLETED] - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Swara85

It was a superb update..
I have many questiond here..bit confusing too..Eager to know what happened 8 years ago and Why was Sam angry.
They loved each other but got married to someone else..And their past was painful.
Waise I love all the kids..They are cute..
Dev is funny.
For Vivan she came to Mumbai and there she met Sam again..but then how and what led to their marriage..?
Sam seems cool and fine but Aisha..?
Anyways I enjoyed reading it and also increased my curiosity too..And i found the story gripping..so lets see aage kya hota hai.
Thanks for pm..sorry for being late..


Thanks Swara
Glad you liked it
You will get all the answers soon
Dev is sensible & matured kid
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow goldie dear>>>
its awesome and mind blowing update>>>
just loved it>>>
continue soon>>>
thanks for the pm>>>
sorry for short comment>>>
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

wow goldie dear>>>
its awesome and mind blowing update>>>
just loved it>>>
continue soon>>>
thanks for the pm>>>
sorry for short comment>>>
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Thanks Megha
glad you liked it
well I know dear no need to mention
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Hi Guys Meet SRISHTI RATHOD dead wife of Sameer

SRISHTI RATHOD : Dead wife & best friend of Sameer & Mother of Meera her Marriage with Sameer & back story will be shown in coming parts hope you all like her 😳












Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65




PART 2 A

Saying this he hugged Aisha warmly from back & went to fresh up. Aisha had tears in her eyes seeing all the Love & affection she wiped her tears and said "ab main aapki wo Aisha nahin rahi Sameer jisse aap pyar karte the wo to 8 saal pehle hi mar chuki hai aur jab bhi aap aise kareeb aate hai ye ehsaas aur bad jaata hai"

She closed her eyes to bear the pain and took a calming breath to compose herself. After a getting ready she went down stairs to start the day. She went inside the kitchen to prepare breakfast and what she saw totally surprised her Pratap was inside the kitchen struggling with vegetables.

Aisha said "Babasa aap ye kya kar rahe hai?"

Pratap said "Good Morning beta wo kya hai na tumhari Maasa ki special favorite baked Vegetables bana raha hoon"

Aisha said "par aap kyu bana rahe hai mujhe keh dete ya ..."

Cutting her short Pratap said "are beta apne jeevan saathi ko apne haath se banake khilane ka maza hi kuch aur hai .. aur wo kya hai na do chaar din se bool chaal band hai isliye ... raaz ki baat hai paneer, butter and pyar equals to biwi kush"

Aisha asked with a smile "kyu Baba sa kya hua? Maasa gussa kyu hai?"

Pratap said "wo kya hai na Sangya aur Vivan dono bina pagfere ke ghoomne chale gaye aur maine haan keh diya isliye hamari chandrmukhi Jwalamukhi bani hui hai"

Aisha giggled at Pratap and suddenly Padmani enters the kitchen glaring at Pratap and said with folding her hands "accha Bahu se meri burai kar rahe hai aur aap kya kya karte hai batau main .."

Calming Padmani a bit said "are are Shrimati ji! aap to guno ki khan hai meri itni majaal ki main aapki burai karu? Main to tumhari favorite sabji bana raha tha "

Padmani said "hey bhagwaan ! aapko fir ye bukhaar chada khana banane ka .. karte aap hai poora kitchen mujhe saaf karna padta hai aap hatiye main bana loongi"

Pratap said "are Pehelwaan!" Padmani glared him and then he corrected himself saying "sorry sorry...Bhagyavaan tum naaraz kyu hoti hoo main kuch gadbad nahin karunga"

Padmini said glaring "Accha Main Pehelwaan! ab to aaj ka nashta aur safai aap hi karenge .. chalo Aisha aaj sab inke zimme" with that she dragged Aisha out of the kitchen to the table.

Aisha was plainly amused at the lovely fight of her Mother-in-law & Father in-law. Padmini took her to the small temple she had made in the house and asked Aisha to light the Diya for the morning prayer. Aisha smiled and lit the diya did the Aarti and firstly gave Prasad to Padmani.

Padmani smiles at her and gives her keys of the entire house saying "Aisha beta! ye loo sambhaloo apna ghar aur mujhe chutti do ab main aaram karungi aur thoda hukum bhi chalaungi" winks at her.

Aisha with a hesitant voice says "Par Maasa main ..."

Padmani said "dekho beta ye ghar tumhara hai mujhe pata hai tum kya sooch rahi hoo par ye tumhara haqq bhi hai zimmedaari bhi .. chalo chalke nastha karte hai tumhare Babasa ne to ab tak poore kitchen main gadar macha diya hoga"

Aisha giggles at this and both reach the dining table. Pratap is arranging the table and when Aisha sees this she starts helping but Padmini stops her saying "Aisha rehne do tum baccho ko bula laao ye main karti hoon"

Aisha nods & leaves to kids room to call them for breakfast & sees that both are sleeping she smiles and wake them up both saying "Meera Manav beta chalo utho breakfast ready hai"

Manav & Meera both wake up rubbing their eyes & both hugged her saying "Good Morning Mummy"

Aisha smiled & quickly made both of them ready for the breakfast and brings them down. Padmani had arranged the table by the time and Pratap was bringing baked vegetable he had cooked he placed the bowl on the table and then picked up the spoon & took some veg & said forwarding to Padmani saying "ab gussa thook bhi do aur chakh ke batao kaisa bana hai?"

Padmini shook her head and said "aap kab sudhrenge baccho ke saamne to sharam kariye kya kaoon main aapka"

Sameer said entering the hall "kuch nahin kar sakte Maasa bas saath main nashta kar sakte hai aur aapko pata hai na pehla nivaala Babasa aapko hi khilate hai"

Padmini smiles and takes the veg and eats it after all settle and started having breakfast suddenly Meera said to Sameer "Papa Dadu Dadi ko khilate hai to aap mummy ko kyu nahin khilate?"

Sameer said "haan good idea" before Aisha could do anything Sameer picked a spoon full of Poha and placed in Aishas mouth.

Aisha got bit embarrassed & Sameer was enjoying her state he added "Aisha! kya poora naastha mere hi haath se khana hai?"

Aisha looked at Sameer baffled and he said with a smirk "to fir aaram se baitho aur nashta karo"

Aisha sat beside him and started having breakfast giving him an unbelievable look. After that Sameer got a call from his office for a meeting so he walked out of the house.

Aisha bit later after the daily household work enters Padmini room and says "Maasa aapse kuch baat karni hai"

Padmini responds politely "haan beta bolo kya baat hai?"

Aisha said "Maasa wo Meera ke baare main baat karni thi uska time table, schedule, khaana peena use kya pasand hai kya nahin mujhe kuch nahin pata"

Padmini said "pata hai main bhi Manaav ke liye tumse baat karna chahti thi fir laga thoda time beetne doo tum settle ho jaao fir aaram se baat karenge waise Meera ko khaas kadi aur chawaal bahut pasand hai aur haan uski medicines ka table uske room main hai wo wahi follow karti hai"

Aisha said with a surprise "Medicines! kya hua hai use?"

Padmini said "use Thalassemia hai Aisha isliye hum sab uski diet ka aur uske meditations ka bahut dhyan rakhte hai baaki blood transfusions bhi hote hai ab ye sab to inherit hai kuch khaas nahin kar sakte ..." takes a pause after composing herself "khair wo sab choodo tum ye batao Manav ko kya kya pasand hai .." their chat was broken by Meera and Manav who entered the room with Dev greeting Padmani and Aisha.

Aisha took them into their room and started mingling with them specially Meera as she wanted to understand her behavior, state of mind and likes and dislikes completely. Here Meera too was not leaving Aisha for a minute as she too longed for motherly love from a very long time.

After a while Dev took leave after collecting his stuff as he has shifted to a college Hostel nearby for his studies. As soon he was about to leave he found Sameer entering the house.

Sameer said greeting him "Kaise ho Dev beta aur ye samaan?"

Dev smiled "main theek hoon uncle wo agle hafte se classes shuru hoo rahe hai so maine yahi hostel main accommodation le liya hai so shift karne ke liye saaman lene aaya tha"

Sameer said "tum yaha bhi to reh sakte hoo na ye to waise bhi ye tumhari Choti Maa kha ghar hai"

Dev said with a smile "haan jaanta hoon pareshaan karne aata rahunga na"

Sameer warmly smiled at him and said "aur koi pareshani hoo to zaroor batana"

Dev smiled and said "sure uncle and thank you"

Sameer smiled and said "Thanks kis liye?"

Dev said "aaj itne saalo main maine Choti Maa ko vakai bahut kush dekha hai jab se maine unke dekha hai wo kabhi dil se kush nahin hui jitni wo yaha hai aapne Mama Mami aur meri baat maani aur Choti Maa ko bhi convince kiya tabhi wo aaj kush hai"

Sameer smiled and said "Thanks Mujhe kehna chahiye beta warna shayad asliyat kabhi saamne nahin aati aur haan maine kahah thana ki main aapki Choti Maa ko hamesha kush rakhuga aur main apna promise kabhi nahin toodta"

Sameer hugs Dev and Dev leaves to his hostel. After a while Sameer makes a call to one of his trusted colleague to find out about the hostel and asks him to give a report after an hour.

Aisha saw him making a call and she came with a glass of water for him & asked "aap ye kisko call karke hostel ka pata lagane ke liye bol rahe the?"

Sameer said "wo mera research department ka dost hai usse Dev ke hostel ki information le raha tha Dev jaha rehne waala hai wahah ki poori detail mil jaayegi thodi hi deer main .. aur tum bilkul chinta mat karo Dev ki main khud usse milne hostel jaata rahunga"

Aisha smiles and asks "aapse ek baat poochu aapne bataya kyu nahin Meera ko ye Thalassemia kaise hamare yaha to kisi ko nahin hai?











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Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66




PART 2 B

Sameer seemed to bit uneasy by the question and surprised too Aisha said breaking his trance "Sameer main kuch pooch rahi hoon aapse"

Sameer said "Haan wo Srishti ko Minor Thalassemia tha isliye.."

Cutting her short Aisha said "par Sameer uska Thalassemia to kaafi high hai Maasa bata rahi thi ki blood transfusion bhi ho chuke hai"

Sameer said giving her a mere answer "pata nahin Doctors ka kehna tha ki infection zayada ho gaya tha par ab to main bas ye chahta hoon ki wo theek ho jaaye"

Aisha nodded and their chat was broken by Maanav & Meera entering and quarrelling on something Aisha said alternating the gaze between the two and asked "kya baat hai kyu lad rahe hoo?"

Meera said with a pout "Mummy dekho na Maanav bhaiyya keh rahe hai ki app mere school nahin aaoge kyuki kal unke naye school ka first day hai isliye aap unke saath jaa rahe hoo mujhe na aapko meri saari friends se milwaana tha ki meri bhi mummy aa gayi hai"

Aisha smiled and hugged Meera saying "Main aapke saath zaroor chaungi beta"

Maanav in next moment exclaimed "To kya aap mujhe choodne nahin chaloge naye school main?"

Sameer said intervening in between "ohh Champ! Aise kaisa ho sakta hai wo kya hai na aapka aur Meera ka admission ab same school main ho gaya hai na to aapki Mummy aur papa dono kal aapko School chodne challenge "

Meera & Maanav were very happy they hugged their parents and said "Thank you Papa"

Aisha to smile at the adorable kids and said "Chalo baccho Khana kha loo" All four moved down stairs for the lunch Padmani & Aisha served the lunch to all. First Meera exclaimed "wow Mummy Kadi Chawal"

Aisha said "aapko bahut pasand hai na"

Meera cutely hugged Aisha first & relished the taste saying "mummy bahut accha hai aap ek dum dadi jaisa banate hoo" Aisha smiled at her response.

Maanav exclaimed complaining "Mummy mere liye kya banaya"

Aisha giggled "are beta aapke liye bhi banaya hai" and placed his favorite veg in his plate Maanav & Meera started eating happily seeing their favorite food.

Aisha opened the a veg bowl & put Mushroom veg in Sameer's plate he smiled at her as she still remember that what he likes. After lunch kids went to their room to play.

Sameer was flipping channels on TV particularly News channels which he liked. Aisha came inside the room after clearing the table and started arranging the clothes and Elmira.

Sameer in a bit irritated voice "Aisha ab bas bhi karo tum to saara kaam aaj hi karne ke mood main hoo"

Aisha narrowed her eyes and said "accha! Zara kamre ka haal dekhiye sab bikher ke rakha hai aadhe files shelf ki jagah Elmira main padi hai aapka kamra to baccho ke kamre se bhi buri haalat main hai"

Sameer said with a smile "Baccho ka Papa jo hoon .. waise tumhe ab tak yaad hai ki mujhe Mushrooms pasand hai"

Aisha smiles and says "yaad karne ki zaroorat usko padti hai jisko aap bhool gaye hoo ..waise aapko pasand aaya? Aapke liye pehli baar banaya maine"

Sameer smiled back and said "haan it was delicious aur thanks a lot"

Aisha said "Thanks kis liye?"

Sameer said "Meera ke liye ... bas 2 saal kit hi jab Srishti ki death ho gayi Maa kya hoti hai shayad us masoom ko nahin pata ek to wo pehle hi beemaari se jhoojh rahi hai upar se Maa ke alava koi nahin hai use sambhalne waala.. Treatment ke waqt to bahut buri haalat ho jaati hai uski" Takes a deep sigh and continues "pata nahin kitna dukh likha is maasoom ki kismat main maa ko khoya fir beemari .." his words trails of after that.

Aisha places a consoling palm on his shoulders & Sameer clears his moist eyes and pulls Aisha in his embrace saying "Aisha main jaanta hoon tum uska khayaal rakhogi par kabhi kabhi wo bahut chidchidi ho jaati hai yadi kuch ulta seedha bool de to bacchi samajh ke maaf kar dena usko"

Aisha parts from Sameer her eyes are moist too she says "please Sameer! Meera bacchi hai main nahin hoon kya aapko mujhpe bharosa nahin hai"

Sameer smiles at her and says "bharosa to bahut hai Aisha warna Dev tumse itna pyar nahin karta .. Meera ko bhi uski Maa ke pyar ki zaroorat hai"

Aisha said in a consoling voice "aur wo use zaroor milega" Sameer smiles and after a while leaves to his system and starts his work. Aisha too resumes her work & clears the room completely and also keeps a check on Maanav and Meera they too are busy in their painting & drawing showing course books and enjoying their time.

Aisha is contended to see both kids gelling well with each other. She comes back to the room and relaxes for a while and sees that Sameer is missing. She rests her head on the head rest of the bed and closes her eyes when suddenly Sameer appears in the room with two cups of coffee in a tray.

He places the cups on the table and Aisha's eyes flew open and when she sees him with coffee mugs she voices "are aapne kyu banayi main bana leti na"

Sameer says "kyu main nahin bana sakta tum thoda tired lag rahi ho coffee pee loo fresh ho jaaogi aur Babasa kehte hai na ki apne jeevan saathi ko apne haath se bana ke khilane ka maza hi kuch aur hai"

Aisha smiles widely and takes a sip from the cup and says "waise aap na kabhi kabhi is coffee ki tarah zayada hi sweet ho jate hai"

Sameer says "are cheeni zyada ho gayi kya?" he snatched the cup from Aisha & sips from the side where Aisha was sipping her coffee and says in a naughty way "vakai meethi hai"

Aisha lowers her gaze and tries to move away from the room but Sameer pulls her back holding her wrist "Aisha ruko" his pull made her landed straight into his arms. Aisha wasn't ready for that and she started shivering lightly in his embrace.

Sameer voiced gently "Aisha idhar dekho"his voice made her more anxious she didn't dare to look into his eyes and face them. Sameer held her chin and made her look into his eyes but Aisha was still not looking at him.

Sameer said again in a strong voice "meri Aisha to mujhse nazre chura ke baat nahin karti kya baat hai please batao mujhe kya cheez pareshaan kar rahi hai tumhe? Tum to hamesha chai main 2 chammach shakkar leti thi na maine utni hi daali thi ... fir bhi tumhe zayada lag rahi hai ... kya kadvahat ki itni aadat ho gayi ki methaas acchi nahin lagi?"

Aisha said wiggling a bit "Sameer please! chodiye aisa kuch nahin hai aur wo Aisha jisse aap pyar karte the wo to aapse alag hote hi mar gayi thi ye jo aapke saamne khadi hai ye to ek aisi Aisha hai jise main khud nahin jaanti" saying this tears started flowing her cheeks.

Sameer wiped her tears and said "Kyu tume apne ander ki Aisha ko marne diya dekho apne aapko Aisha tum kaise ho gayi hoo ..ek dum bejaan ... jis Aisha ki aankho main main apne liye pyar aur saari Zindigi dekhta tha uski aankho main aaj sirf darr aur dard dikhta hai .. jo mere paas aate hi khil jaati aaj mujhse darr rahi hai kaanp rahi hai..

main nahin poochunga tumhare saath kya hua tha ya tumne alag hone ka faisla kis liye kiya par jab aaj hum saath hai to main tumhari aankho main kushi kyu nahin dekh raha jo honi chahiye .. humne ek doosre ko apne saare acchayi buraayi ke saath apnaya hai na to fir aisa kyu kar rahi hoo kyu tumhe hamare pyar pe bharosa nahin hai"

Aisha said"nahin Sameer mujhe aap par poora bharosa par khud par aur apni kismat par nahin hai"

Sameer now in more determined tone "Kyu Aisha jis Aisha par main bharosa karta hoon use khud pe kyu bharosa nahin hai?"

Suddenly their chat was broken by a knock on the room & it was Pratap he could sense the strong storm brewing between them & said "Aisha beta zara mere liye bhi coffee le aaogi"

Aisha composed herself and nodded with a weak smile & went down stairs to fetch a coffee for Pratap.

After Aisha left Pratap said "Sameer tumne baat ki usse kuch bataya usne"

Sameer said in a worried tone "nahin Babasa par maine jo mehsoos kiya hai I hope wo galat ho kuch bahut bada hua hai warna Aisha aise kabhi nahin thi"

Pratap thought for a while & said "theek hai Sangya ko apne honeymoon aane do hum usse baat karenge shayad wo behtar samajh paaye is darr ko tum dono ki kushhaal zindigi ke liye zaroori hai beta" Sameer nodded and Pratap went to kitchen to fetch his coffee.













So how was it guys please drop in your comments as I write for you guys so please do let me know all your bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love you all


Regards Goldie 😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb
Continue soon
Thank for pm


Thanks Rinku
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awesome. interesting. Thanks for pm.
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Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome. interesting. Thanks for pm.


Thanks Unisha 😊

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